Loved it, Rosa! You did a fantastic job!

Rosa, that was just wonderful! You captured the magic of Christmas (and in this case, the magic of Dewberry) in a very sweet way!

Merry christmas (I think I know what I'll be doing - rereading this story and many more!)


Ho! Ho! Ho!

Great job I'm sad to see it's over though! I loved it Ican't wait for a sequal, or am I hoping to much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just got caught up Rosa. That was such a fabulous little tale. I'm just melting inside! Thanks for treating us with your writing. I absolutely love how you slowly brought Jack and Sue together with the help of your little elf Dewberry who's just the greatest!

Wow! Great Story

Nishita

Rosa, I just got back from a trip and am valiantly trying to catch up on your Christmas Challenge!

I still have a ways to go, but just had to post and let you know what a great story this is!! I love the team and the way they banter and tease each other!!

Jack and Sue - slow on the uptake, as usual!! Dewberry - you're going to have to give them a swift kick!! And, Levi will help!!

Will be back to post again when I catch up!!

Joy

Wow! That was magical Rosa!

Rosa that was so wonderful and a magical ending

I've missed a few days and I got to read 6 posts in one go, so brilliant!!! Love a happy ending

wow....what a lovely story...i really enjoyed it!!!

Rosa...great story...again, loved the elf.

Sequel? well I am thinking about it, I think that it kinds of leans towards the possibility of one and I have a few ideas but might try to finish my story in wip first.

Thanks for all the wonderful feedback everyone

What a wonderful ending to a fabulous Christmas story! Dewberry managed her happy ending!

Sairs

Great! Rosa, I enjoyed every second..good job!

I'm late but I just wanted to tell you it was amazing. I loved the way you tied it all together

Well, Rosa, I finally caught up and what a wonderful ride it was!!

Your Dewberry is priceless!! Naughty at times, but oh so effective!!

I would try to quote, but I would have to quote the whole story - wonderful, romantic, exciting, heart-stopping, fuzzy, etc., etc.!!!

Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us, and making Christmas an even more heart-warming place to be!!!

Joy

Love that ending...only it's really the beginning, right?

kav

sweet, jack redoing a bad memory for sue
kissing after taking a spill on the ice cute
definately just the beginning.