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Kav
QUOTE(JBTLSMD @ Dec 30 2005, 06:12 PM)
What I love about these holiday challenges is that they're so funny!

Although Bear knapping may be a little sad, it's not that serious.

mad.gif And don't forget -- traumatic to the bear. I hope they have a trauma unit ready with lots of hunney and hugs at the end of this!

kav :whistle:
Kav
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"My Dating Disasters Diversion Kit."
rolleyes.gif Where can I sign up for one of those?

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"The Band Aids?"

"And the ice pack?"

"Both for dating injuries."

"Ones you get or ones you cause?" Myles asked.

"Either," Tara replied, unfazed.
rofl2.gif Oh I so need one of those kits -- but do they make them with Winnie the Pooh bandaids instead? blink.gif

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"No way.  We are all in this together, and remember the only romance I'm getting this year is coming vicariously through you two.  Now, spill it sister."
Yeah you tell her Lucy -- we want to hear how romantic Bobby is!
wub.gif

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"Crash, you are setting some awfully high standards for the rest of us," Jack told him.
Yep he sure does. melting.gif


Oreo you continue to astound me!

kav
Kav
QUOTE(Oreolover @ Dec 30 2005, 07:51 PM)

Tara, who was busy opening the box looked up. "That's it! Instead of 9 ladies dancing. You have Lucy going dancing at 9:00! Brilliant!"


thumbsup.gif I don't know how you come up with this stuff but it is truly amazing!!!!

kav
Kav
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Rolling with laughter, he couldn't respond.  Jack, also double over, was finally able to answer.  "Don't you get it?"

"No," Tara said, climbing down.

"What number are we on?"

"Ten lords a leaping," Sue answered.

"But it was perfect," Bobby finally managed.  "One Lord Leland leaping ten times."
rofl2.gif rofl2.gif rofl2.gif After I cleaned up the oatmeal that somehow found its way all over the monitor and half the keyboard (with the help of Elsie and Simba) I think I can finally reply. Um...I do believe we can confirm our growing suspicions...you are... wacko.gif ...in the nicest way, of course. However, can I just point out that some of us like little fur bearing creatures and I for one used to live in a rather drafty apartment that field mice used to winter in. I would catch them in have-a-heart traps and then cart them on the bus (unbenowst to my fellow travellers) to a public farm we have close by and let them go in the toasty warm barn biggrin.gif ) so I am grateful that no mice were harmed in this story...

kav
Kav
QUOTE(Oreolover @ Dec 30 2005, 10:59 PM)

He brought his lips to hers and kissed her with such intensity, Tara could hardly keep her knees from giving way. The kiss exploded and Tara could feel that Bobby loved her - all of her - from every clutzy mistep to every sultry look - from fuzzy pens to puppies - from agent to woman. Any last inch of her heart she'd been holding back, she gave to him in that instant.

alternating between fainting.gif and adulation smilie.gif I'm just going to grovel around here on the floor until I finish the rest of the story.

kav
Kav
First off did I miss it? Did she get Koal Boy bear back? ohmy.gif

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He snickered on his way down the steps.  Tara didn't like Suzanne.  She said the woman made a habit of pretending Tara didn't exist. Bobby had to admit that it was true.  He remembered Tara ranting about it. "She could at least have the decency to see me as a threat or worthy competition.  She just dismisses me entirely."
rofl2.gif Isn't that just like Tara? This she-devil is hitting on her guy and she's indignant because she's not perceived as enough of a threat!!!

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"Hey, mister, I'm trying to maneuver here."

"Me too," he teased, but removed his hand. "Truthfully, where are we going?"
melting.gif wub.gif wub2.gif I can't wait to find out what Tara has in store for Bobby!!!!

kav -- oh and you can have your thread back now, Oreo, I'm done with it. blushing.gif
Kiekeboe
It's christmas eve bounching.gif

Now it's Tara's turn to kidnap Bobby biggrin.gif
ickleails
rofl2.gif rofl2.gif rofl2.gif you talent astounds me.......
Oreolover
QUOTE(Kav @ Dec 31 2005, 09:40 AM)
Um...I do believe we can confirm our growing suspicions...you are... wacko.gif ...in the nicest way, of course.

Kav, you've found me out. Thank you all for your kind words. I am humbled. Here's the rest of Christmas eve.

Saturday, December 24 - Christmas Eve- Part 2

Almost two hours later, with snow falling softly around them, they arrived at their destination. Tara pulled up in front of the Deep Creek Inn, a beautiful mansion, which was nestled in a small community in Maryland.

"So, what do you think?"

"Amazing," he said, as they got out of the car.

Tara opened the trunk and reached for her bag, but Bobby placed his hand on her wrist. "Luv, I have a confession to make before we go inside."

"What is it?"

"Tara I don't think I can spend the night with you in a place like this and keep the promise I made to you - to us. Understand? Every day it gets harder."

Tara's face bloomed a pretty shade of pink. "Oh, we're not staying the night. You'd have to make Christmas reservations a year in advance. Sherry, the owner, is a friend of mine and she said we could come for the afternoon and evening. This is just a change of clothes for each of us for dinner."

Bobby exhaled the breath he'd been holding. Hefting both bags onto his shoulder, he said, "Then, lets get going."

Sherry immediately enveloped Tara in a hug. "Thank you for letting us come," Tara told her friend."

"I'm just so glad you took me up on my offer," Sherry said. "I've been wanting to meet this guy for months."

Tara introduced Bobby. "I've heard so much about you," Sherry explained.

"All good I hope."

"Most of it," she said with a twinkle in her eye. "You two can put your things in my quarters. I have a lunch for the two of you already set up in there. Tara, you already no the schedule of events for the evening. Participate in whatever things you want. Now, go have some fun."

Tara led Bobby to Sherry's quarters. Obviously. Bobby thought, she'd been here before. He wondered if this was what Tara sometimes referred to as her weekend get-away. Even before they had ever dated, Bobby noticed she'd often talk about going there after a particularly tough case and would always come back refreshed. Sherry could certainly pamper a person.

After a delicious lunch in Sherry's suite, Bobby and Tara decided to take a walk outside. Sherry stopped them at the door. "Tara, the horses and sleigh, and of course, the driver, Hank, will meet you out front. Since our last little sledding experience went downhill," she giggled at her own joke, "I wanted to treat you to this." She squeezed Tara's hand affectionately. "You'll be back in time to dress for dinner."

Tara felt like they had stepped back in time as she watched the breath of the large Belgian horses billow into the air. "It looks like a scene from a Currier and Ives print," she told Bobby.

After helping her into the sleigh, Bobby climbed in beside her and tucked the fur blanket over both of them.

"Are you two all tucked in back there?" the driver asked.

Bobby nodded and immediately they were whisked away through a snowy meadow. Tara giggled as the driver picked up speed and Bobby drew her closer. As they approached the woods, it had grown darker. The driver stopped the sleigh and lit the lamps fitted to the sides of the sleigh. The ambiance the warm glow created made Tara shiver.

"Are you cold?" Bobby asked. The snowfall had picked up and Bobby couldn't help but notice. "I can ask him to take us back."

"No way. I don't want to miss a minute of this."

"Then I guess I have no choice but to use my favorite way to warm you up." Slipping his hand onto her neck, he pulled her towards him. He ran he finger of his other hand along her cheek and across her lips, then followed the same path with his tongue. "Warm yet?"

"Getting there."

He brushed her lips with a hint of a kiss, then deepened it. "Warm?"

"Very. Thanks."

"Any time. And I mean ANY time."

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After dressing for dinner, Tara and Bobby joined the other guests in the dining room. Sherry had a table for two , complete with candlelight and white roses, set for them in the corner.

Bobby loved the beef tenderloin tips with wild mushrooms and Tara found the rich, dark chocolate torte as sweet as Bobby's kisses - almost.

"After dinner, they are having a Candlelight and Carols hour in the music room," Tara told him.

"Candlelight and Carols like we have Down Under on Christmas Eve?"

"I'm not sure if it's just like it, but it was one of the reasons we came. I wanted you to have a taste of home if you wanted to."

She could tell he was touched. "Thank you."

"After that, there's a midnight service at the church. I know it'll put us back really late, but I wanted to go if it's okay with you. The creche was today's picture."

"There's no place I'd rather be on Christmas Eve, dinkum."

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Sherry passed at candles to each of the guests who had chosen to gather for the Candles and Carols hour, lit one, and turned off the rest of the lights. They took turns lighting the candles off one another as she began to play the first song on the piano.
Tara turned to Bobby to light her own candle. Their eyes met and Tara felt a surge of something deeper than she'd ever known.

Later, Sherry persuaded Bobby to teach them the Australian version of the 12 Days of Christmas. "I hope I'll remember all the words." Soon he had everyone joining him. The final chorus had everyone laughing as they tried to recollect everything. Bobby's voice rang out clearly.

On the TWELFTH day of Christmas,
My true love sent to me,
Twelve possums playing,
Eleven lizards leaping,
Ten wombats washing,
Nine crocs a-snoozing?
Eight dingos dancing,
Seven emus laying,
Six sharks a-surfing,
Five kangaroos,
Four lyrebirds,
Three wet galahs,
Two snakes on skis,
And a kookaburra in a gum tree.


Like a masterful story teller, the next songs Sherry chose slowed the pace and set scene for the final carol by candlelight "Silent Night." In the flicker of the candles dotting the room and with Tara by his side, Bobby thought the song had never sounded more beautiful.

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Crammed into the pews of the small church, Bobby was mesmerized by the glow on Tara's face as she watched the birth story of Jesus unfold. When one of the performers sang "Mary Did You Know," tears slid down her cheek. It amazed how something he'd heard so many times, became new again when he saw it through her eyes.

When the service concluded, Bobby and Tara were both startled by the amount of snow which had accumulated in the last hour or so. "Tara, I'm not so sure we should even try to make it back."

"There aren't any rooms left at the inn," she said, then had to laugh at the irony of what she'd said.

"Maybe we can sleep in the barn. I wouldn't mind a roll in the hay with you."

"I'm pretty sure Sherry would let us sleep on her floor, but can we at least try to get back? Your Christmas gift is at home."

"It'll still be there tomorrow, luv. It isn't worth the risk."

"But I wanted to give it to you tonight."

"You could tell me what it is."

"Nice try, Koala Boy."

Sherry happily agreed to let them stay. When the snow had started piling up, she'd been hoping they would. "Tara, you can sleep with me and we'll open the sofa and make up the bed for Bobby. I warn you, though, I get awfully early on Christmas morning to play Santa for all the guests and see to breakfast."

Lying in the hard hide-a-bed Tara and Sherry had made for him, Bobby lay awake trying to find a new way to ask Tara to marry him. He'd had it all planned back in D.C., but now things had changed. At least he still had the ring.
suesfan
Oreo, the last two posts were just wonderful!! I love Tara's surprise of the Deep Creek Inn and everything that goes with it!!! The sleigh ride and the Candlelight and Carols were magical!! I love the Australian version of 12 Days of Christmas!!

And, now we are waiting patiently(??) for Bobby to ask Tara to marry him! I wonder how he will do it??

Joy
Sairs
Lovely posts as usual.

I was a little worried when Deep Creek popped up, because I used that location, the lake, in my last story and it wasn't exactly the place for happy memories for Bobby and Tara.

At least in your story Deep Creek they had a fabulous time and I can't wait for Bobby's proposal! biggrin.gif

Take care,

Sairs
Kav
rofl2.gif I've never heard that Australian version of the twelve days of Christmas!

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"Tara I don't think I can spend the night with you in a place like this and keep the promise I made to you - to us. Understand? Every day it gets harder."

Tara's face bloomed a pretty shade of pink
How fast can we marry those two? blushing.gif

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"There aren't any rooms left at the inn," she said, then had to laugh at the irony of what she'd said.

"Maybe we can sleep in the barn. I wouldn't mind a roll in the hay with you."
That Bobby -- I just don't know how Tara can resist all that charm! melting.gif instead of being in a permanent puddled state.

bounching.gif And I just knew he was going to propose!!!! I can't wait for the romantic moment kissing.gif , but I'm stumped as to what Tara's Christmas gift is going to be!

kav
Kiekeboe
Bobby is going to find a great way to propose to Tara melting.gif
Oreolover
Sairs, there really is a Deep Creek Inn? I usually do research and only use real place, but I didn't have time so I made that up. Maybe it was lurking in the back on mind from your story.smile.gif See the effect you have on me.

Sunday, December 25- Christmas - Part 1

"Tara, don't shoot. I'm coming in!" Bobby yelled from outside Sherry's bedroom. He'd learned not to sneak up on his little spitfire. A strange surrounding, a sleepy agent, and a loaded gun could be lethal combination. Definitely not the sort of bang he wanted to start the day with.

He rounded the corner with a breakfast tray laden with Christmas goodies, and spotted Tara propped up in the large Victorian bed like a princess in a castle. Sherry had loaned her a lacy white gown with a plunging neckline. Bobby's eyes dropped to the exposed creamy flesh appreciatively. Quickly, she had the covers nearly pulled up to her neck.

"Merry Christmas, luv," he said as he placed the breakfast tray in front of her.

"Where did you get all this?" she asked spying the two fresh juice glasses, succulent slabs of ham, huge, syrupy cinnamon rolls, and cheese topped vegetable fritatas. "And don't even try to tell me you made it yourself."

He chucked. "Sherry arranged it. She thought we could share breakfast in bed."

"I knew there was a reason I liked her."

"Why didn't you tell me that the two of you went to high school together?" he asked, passing Tara a china plate.

"I guess I didn't even think of it. Does that mean you two have been swapping stories since dawn?"

"Don't blame her. It's my irristible charm." He flashed Tara a dimpled grin.

Tara grinned and shook her head. "So what did Sherry tell you?"

"Not much I didn't already know." He held up a piece of the cinnamon roll for Tara to take a bite of. "This is the only way to have a Christmas morning."

"What's that? Cinnamon rolls?"

"They are good alright. But I meant waking up in bed with the woman of my dreams."

"Oh," Tara replied. Then, making a joke to cover up the way his words made he feel exposed, she quickly added. "I'm glad I rate above the ham."

"What did you and Sherry talk about? I heard the two of you giggling for a good hour after you went to bed?

"You irisistible charm, of course, dear."

They finished the breakfast making small talk wondering if Jack and Sue had made it to Sue's parents' home in Ohio yet and if Lucy had had a good time with Danny last night. Tara shared with Bobby that she'd overheard Myles making plans to spend at least part of the day with Louisa.

When they had finished, Bobby lifted the tray from the bed and set it on the floor. "Now, close your eyes. I have a surprise for you." He watched her close them and started out the room. "No peeking," he reminded her.

She listened to his footsteps leave the room and then return. She heard a swish as he deposited something on the bed. "Can I open my eyes, yet?"

"Yes."

Tara couldn't believe the silk cranberry dress he'd placed on the bed. She could tell it was floor length immediately. The top was off the shoulder and the skirt had a layer of gauzey cranberry over the satin skirt. "It's beautiful. But what is it for."

"Sherry is letting you borrow it. She said you two were the same size. Go get dressed to the hilt. She said to borrow anything you need. When you're done, I'll be waiting for you in the living room."

"But where are we going?"

"That's my surprise for the day."

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When she walked into the bathroom, Tara gasped. The room sparkled in candlelight. A note on the vanity caught her attention.

My Tara,

I want you to enjoy every minute of today, so relax in the bath knowing you are loved.

Always yours,
Bobby


She filled the slipper foot bath tub and sunk into the bubbles. If she closed her eyes, she could almost imagine she had her own chamber maid ready to wash her back if she asked. "I'm sure Bobby would do the honors if I asked," she told herself. She had to bite her lip to keep from smiling too much at the thought.

Half an hour later, she emerged from the tub. She took her time slathering on lotion, primping and getting dressed. For once, even her hair had cooperated. The dress fit her curves perfectly and the off the shoulder drape left a little, but not too much, skin to be alluring. Doing a final check in the mirror, she knew she was going to be able to knock Bobby over with a feather.

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Bobby had put on a CD of Christmas carols while he waited for Tara. Too nervous to sit, he paced around the room. Since he had showered before she woke, it was easy for him to get dressed in the living room. Thankfully, Tara had packed two shirts with his dinner attire. Sherry would not have had anything suitable for him to wear.

He patted his pocket for the fifteenth time and took a deep breath to calm himself. He fingered the single white rose Sherry had pilfered for him. It wasn't corsage, but he knew it would be more than adequate.

"Bobby?" Tara called as she entered the room.

He spun and his jaw dropped when he saw her. "You-- look stunning," he finally managed. Taking her hand, he pressed a kiss to the back of it. Deep inside, he knew if he kissed any other part of her right now, they'd never get out of the suite.

"You look rather handsome yourself," she admitted, admiring the dark suit, white shirt, and uncharacteristically toned down tie she selected yesterday. A white rose was pinned to his lapel and she noticed a second long stemmed on in his hand. "Is that for me?"

'Yes. Sorry," he stumbled. "Are you ready to go?"

"I don't have any kind of wrap to go with this, Bobby. I'll have to just wear my coat."

"No coats needed," he said, taking her hand in his. "Just bring your smile."
Kav
melting.gif Oh I do believe Bobby's mind has been working overtime during the night and he's found a way to improvise, has he? And he's setting the scene? I can't wait... wub.gif
suesfan
What a beautiful set up so far!! A romantic breakfast in bed, a slow luxurious bath, a beautiful dress, a white rose!!

I can't wait for you to continue!!!

Joy
marlo29
Catching up has never been so much fun. The bearnapping was priceless, so was the new meaning of the twelve days of Christmas ... I like the Australian version as well. I could just imagine Bobby singing it.

Sleigh ride so romantic, and now they are stuck together. Bobby, use your overactive imagination and I'm sure you'll find that perfect moment to propose.

Oreo ... so sweet your little girl skated for the first time this Christmas.
Kav
waiting.gif waiting.gif Still waiting here, missy...and about Koala Boy Bear -- he's okay, isn't he? Not too traumatized? Back with all his stuffing? wacko.gif

kav
marlo29
Kav,

I think Tara forgot about Koala Bear, her attention on Koala Boy, and for the life of him I don't think Bobby even remember where he left the little fellow

And Tara ... you're right, Bobby wouldn't mind washing your back !
Oreolover
Sunday, December 25- Christmas- Part 2

Bobby led Tara up the winding staircase to the third floor. No one else was around, Tara immediately noticed. With her hand crooked in his arm, he led her down the hall to a large set of double doors. He pushed one in and held it open for her to enter.

For one of the first times in her life, she was speechless.

"Sherry said no one was using the ballroom today so I could have it for an hour or two," Bobby said softly.

Tara surveyed the room. Without decorations, the room would have been beautiful, but with the enormous Christmas tree lit at one end, the chandaleer sparkling overhead, and the candles decking each table at the sides surrounded by white rose floral arrangements, she found herself awestruck.

"They had a wedding reception here last night, but they aren't cleaning up until this afternoon. Tara say something."

"It's beautiful," she said simply. "It's absolutely beautiful."

"Wait, I forgot something." Bobby darted to a nearby table and propped a piece of poster board up behind a CD boom box. It read, "Welcome to Prom."

Tara covered her mouth with her hands. Bobby pulled them away and held them in his own. "No one as wonderful as you should miss their prom." A tear started to trail down her cheek and he wiped it away with his thumb. "Don't you dare start that," he teased, kissing the place on her cheek where the tear had fallen. "Would you care to dance, Miss Williams?"

"I'd love to."

Bobby pushed play and one of the waltzes they'd learned a couple of weeks ago began. He swept Tara into his arms.

She loved the feel of his strong arms moving her across the floor even if he held her a little closer than what would be considered proper. This waltz was one of her favorites and she could feel the silk skirt swirl about her ankles. She closed her eyes and allowed herself to soak in the moment completely.

Bobby looked down at her and smiled. “Are you enjoying yourself?” he whispered.

A little embarrassed, she opened her eyes and met his gaze. “Yes, very much.”

“Good.”

They glided toward the ten foot tall Christmas tree bearing a stunning array of mirrored glass ornaments . The candlelight caught the glass beads and baubles and the tree shimmered. “Have you ever seen anything as beautiful as that tree?” Tara asked.

Bobby glanced down at her and said in his best accent, “Sure. I’m looking at it.”

For an hour, Bobby held her in his arms, whispering endearments, making her feel like she was indeed a princess at the ball. Looking up into his handsome face, she was sure she wouldn't need to loose a shoe to keep this prince.

He stopped her in front of the tree kissed her long and gently. "Present time," he whispered. He bent over and retrieved a squared package.

"But Bobby, I told you that your gift is at home."

He pressed a finger to her lips. "Just open it, luv."

She carefully removed the paper and pulled out the ornament inside. The crystal bell read, "Our first Christmas Together -2005."

"Thank you, Bobby. I love it."

"Wait a minute. Let me see that," he said, taking it from her hand. "There's something wrong with this."

"What? I don't see anything."

He placed it on the nearest table. "Well, you see to have a first Christmas, you have to have a second, a third, a fourth...," he said, dropping his knee in front of her before continuing, "....and a thirtieth and a fortieth. He pulled the ring from his jacket pocket and Tara gasped. "I love you with all of my heart and soul. Will you spend every Christmas with me for the rest of your life?"

Scarcely able to breathe, Tara nodded. "Every single one," she managed.

He slipped the ring on her finger, stood, and kissed her, pouring all of their tomorrows into the expression of love.

Finally, he pulled back and saw the tears in the corners of his eyes were mirrored in her own. "So what did you get me?"

Playfully, she slugged his arm. "I guess I might as well tell you. I got you two tickets to see your mum in Australia in February."

"Tara, that's great! I always wanted to take Jack to Australia," he smiled mischieviously. She slugged him again. "This could be a painful marriage if you keep doing that. So you think I should take you?"

"That was kind of the idea." Her eyes twinkled at the thought.

"Well, is it going to be as my fiance or as my bride?"

"Bride."

Bobby let out a whoop he'd been holding in for days. "This is the best Christmas ever!"

"Uh, Bobby, by the way, where's my bear?"
Oreolover
That's it folks. Thank you all for reading. It has been one of the funnest and dumbest things I've ever done at Christmas. Someone needs to shoot me if I try to do this again at Christmas next year. Oh, nevermind, I think my husband will do that for you. smile.gif

Thank you all again for the feedback. I have loved all of it. Merry Christmas to all of you and may your New Year be filled with excellent fanfiction. kissing.gif
suesfan
Oreo, what a beautiful proposal!! Bobby can certainly think fast on his feet!!!

Yes, Bobby, where is Tara's bear?? If you were to do a sequel, we could find out for sure!!!

Joy

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU AND YOURS!!!
marlo29
QUOTE(Oreolover @ Dec 31 2005, 06:49 PM)
That's it folks.  Thank you all for reading. It has been one of the funnest and dumbest things I've ever done at Christmas. Someone needs to shoot me if I try to do this again at Christmas next year.  Oh, nevermind, I think my husband will do that for you. smile.gif


Heard that before ...rofl2.gif

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Thank you all again for the feedback.  I have loved all of it.  Merry Christmas to all of you and may your New Year be filled with excellent fanfiction.  kissing.gif

Thanks for the story Oreo ... It was beautiful ...and funny ...and charming ...and so romantic !!!

Happy New Year !!!
Kav
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"No one as wonderful as you should miss their prom."
wub.gif I hate to say it people, but Bobby far outshines Jack in the romance department!

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Wait a minute. Let me see that," he said, taking it from her hand. "There's something wrong with this."

"What? I don't see anything."

He placed it on the nearest table. "Well, you see to have a first Christmas, you have to have a second, a third, a fourth...," he said, dropping his knee in front of her before continuing, "....and a thirtieth and a fortieth. He pulled the ring from his jacket pocket and Tara gasped. "I love you with all of my heart and soul. Will you spend every Christmas with me for the rest of your life?"

Just when I think no one can possibly come up with another original proposal WHAM you hit me right between the eyes with this one. blink.gif

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"Uh, Bobby, by the way, where's my bear?"
ohmy.gif Oreo -- I'm going to have nightmares tonight now! And I don't have a hubby who can chase them away!!! hide.gif that will be me cowering in my darkened bedroom imagining all the horrors that could befall a poor lost and frightened stuffed bear far away from his mummy! ack! I say. Ack! I demand satisfaction in an epilogue...but don't worry, I won't make you do it until the New Year! rofl2.gif

thank you.gif This was outstanding.gif and I'll give you a couple of days off for good behaviour and so your children can enjoy your company for a bit and then -- back here with another story, okay???? thumbsup.gif

kav
ickleails
thank you.gif THAT WAS BREATH TAKING..THE PROPOSAL WAS AMAZING, SO SWEET AND TENDER wub.gif YOU COULD REALLY FEEL THE LOVE IN THE AIR kissing.gif .....

I SO HOPE TO READ MORE FROM YOU SOON AND PERHAPS TO LEARN WHERE THE BEAR IS.....????
Bell
Oreo, I will most definitely convince you to do it again next year! forget next year, I think the February 14th comes earlier!! laugh.gif

It was amazing, perfect ending to a wonderful story!
Kiekeboe
thank you.gif

The sweet, loving ending to it's own story! wub.gif

Happy new year!
Mirjam
Wow - what a fantastic way to propose: the setting, the gift, the words...... melting.gif Couldn't be more perfect!!!!!

Happy new year!!!
Feh-Ku
thank you.gif that was soooo awesome!!! I sure that not only me but everybody would love it if you made a sequel to this!! bounching.gif
justme_jp3
clapping.gif Bravo!! clapping.gif What a great story from start to finish! I think you captured Bobby and Tara sooo well here! And the creativity of each day's activities - WOW! Such a wonderful read... thank you.gif very much for sharing!!!
Sairs
Oreo,

That was a superb story. thumbsup.gif It had action, drama, humour and of course romance! wub.gif It was a wonderful combination that kept me hanging for the next part and the ending was beautiful, Bobby's proposal was perfect. biggrin.gif

I'm really looking forward to your next story.

Take care,

Sairs

thank you.gif
Kav
Ahem -- I do believe you've had about 24 hours off, right? So, what about starting that sequel everyone's clamouring for...you could entitled it "The Search for Koala Boy Bear" because for all we know he's cold.gif outside in the cold somewhere or hide.gif stuck underneath some dusty furniture or wacko.gif gagged with duct tape or sigh.gif forlornly at being left all alone for so long or crying.gif for his momma! And just out of curiosity -- do your children let you near their bears? ohmy.gif

kav rofl2.gif (who's having way too much fun on your thread which is another reason you should start another one so that I have something else to comment on!)
Oreolover
Kav, you'll have to bear with me. Things have been a little grizzly around here and I need to hibernate a little after driving back from Minnesota at 3:00 am yesterday. tongue.gif I so have a bear sequel-ish thing planned if I can claw my way out of the Christmas aftermath.
christyb
Wonderful, wonderful! I have just had time to finish reading this after returning from being gone for 10 days. I loved every bit of it! The advent calendar thing was a great idea! I look forward to a sequel!
Matalyn
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“Bobby Manning! Gingerbread women are NOT anatomically correct. Take those off right now.”


rofl.gif rofl.gif rofl.gif I can see this happening!

This is really cute Lorna! I can't believe I haven't read it yet! Now, back to reading!
Matalyn
Well good grief! I was just gonna read it all and then post all the highlights I like, but this is just TOOOOOOOOOO sweet! I had to post this! I can defintely see Tara coming up with this idea! rofl.gif rofl.gif rofl.gif

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“Sure, with Tara help of course, and Tara made us deliver tins of them to our snitches.”
Matalyn
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Lorna!

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Tara followed his gaze. He’d stopped them in front of the nursery. Inside, three newborns lay swaddled in striped blankets. Bobby pressed his face closer to the glass. “The calendar picture today was a dove. I know this is a little far fetched, but a dove represents peace, and these little ankle biters are the closest thing I could think of to perfect peace.”


I'm still tryin' to catch up, my two year old has gone bezerk!

This was the most beautiful scene!!!!!!!
Villagespirit
I know that I am very late reading this, but I had to say I just loved it. I love Christmas, and Cookies and all the romance. wub.gif

Dianna
hfce
LolLolLolLol.gif One of the funniest and romantic stories I have read on this board.



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