Please use this thread to post any questions or comments you may have regarding the Valentine's Day Challenge 2006...

Kav!!! I am AMAZED by your prowess! All four starters were so entralling that I was positivly crushed when they ended!


I am looking forward to some serous and

to Kav.......... and

Where do you get these ideas?????????????


Wonderful job!!!!! I'm certain there will be cupid and arrows and hearts and love all over the place......in this world and wherever that mirror takes them!

Can't wait to see what happens when the stories start to come. It's gonna be great!!!!

Jill

I have a question, I want to write in first person...can I change it in Kav's intros?
turn he==>I?

I tried to read what I wrote without changing it and it was quite confusing...

For the first person - First person is fine on one condition.... you would need to stay in first person POV for the story as would be in a novel or any other fanfic. I have read a number of novels in the First Person - starting with Moby Dick "Call me Ismael..." and so forth. It can be a very powerful and interesting way to tell a story... Of course others speak, but only the narrator's perspective is given. You may only change the POV, not the storyline or the setup. If you feel comfortable in that medium - I say go for it!!

regards,

Jen

Hey I can't find a story that I read a little while ago. It involved a team challenge in the bullpen to see who could best demonstrate different kinds of kisses with Lucy as the judge and J/S, B/T competing. The ultimate winner was D and Donna. I loved this story so if anyone could help me find it I would really appreciate it. Thanks

I believe that was a Christmas Challenge story. Check the thread by Oreolover in that forum.

Just a quick note to the authors, please refrain from submitting links to your stories in the Challenges until after the contest is over and the votes have been posted. The forum is not visible to visitors until then, so the links won't work.

Thanks!!
Janet, Admin

OK this i kinda urgent seeing as i have less that five hours to submit a story. The Mahunt beginning....if I dont change the wording can I stick in a ****** you the readers will no that the scene has switched to somehwere else although the wording will still be the same.

Does this make sense?

it will look like this for example

She groaned, blocking her mind to the painful memories. It seemed that wherever she went over the holidays eligible men, or the lack thereof, were the hot topic of conversation. She couldn’t even site lack of eligibility as her reasonable excuse. Didn’t she work in a building primarily staffed by men – many of them unattached and available? Only not, it seemed, to her.

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She stared at herself in the mirror as she applied a last coat of lipstick. So what exactly had she been doing wrong all these years…

This particular intro scene was written and presented as one scene. Other than allowing a change to first person, we made the decision at the beginning of the competition that there would be no changes allowed. I'm sorry, but we can't change that ruling now.

Thanks.....actually i'm kina glad you said that....i did have agood idea but not really enogh time to wrote it andif you had said i was allowed to do that I dint think I would have a done a very good job in the time allowed. Thanks