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My Knight In Shining Armor

“You like my mirror, child?”

Sue smiled at Tara’s eccentric maiden aunt. “It is unusual,” she agreed, looking once more at the numerous gilded cherubs that gaudily crowded around the antique glass, smoky with age.

“It’s been in my family for generations. Since the Middle Ages in fact. My many times great grandfather had it made for his daughters for Valentine’s Day.”

“They celebrated Valentine’s Day that long ago?” Lucy asked in amazement.

“Oh my yes. In the Middle Ages St. Valentine was a most popular saint and they had many interesting customs surrounding the day. They took it very seriously – not like the frivolity you see today.” Miss Williams wrinkled her nose in distaste and the three women visiting her shared amused glances.

“What kind of customs, Auntie Gert?” Tara asked encouragingly. She loved her father’s great aunt with all her heart and was very pleased to be able to show her off to her two friends. They had spent an enjoyable evening this St. Valentine’s Eve sharing good food, stories and laughter. Tara had never seen her aunt so animated. The extra company had done her good and she was glad she had followed her impulse and invited Lucy and Sue along on the visit.

“Well, let me think now. Ah, here’s one that many young women would do well to implement nowadays. It would simplify the whole courtship procedure immeasurably. Not that there is much of a courtship nowadays, the way girls flit about from man to man and vice versa,” Aunt Gertie muttered under her breath. “Well, now, seeing as you young ladies have yet to find your knight in shining armor, you might like to give this a try. Tara dear, bring me a bowl from the kitchen. Any one will do – a clean one, mind.” As Tara hastened to do her bidding Aunt Gertie turned to Lucy and Sue. “While she’s gone I want you to write out the name of every eligible young man you know.” She reached for a writing tablet and began expertly tearing hearts out of the paper. “One name to a heart. Then fold them up and put them in the bowl. Here’s Tara now.”

Obediently the three women bent over their task and thoughtfully scribbled down names.

“No jokesters now, mind. You could saddle your friend with a n’er do well for life,” Aunt Gertie warned. Tara promptly crumpled up three of the names she had written. “Now, toss them all into the bowl and swirl them around. That’s right. Tara, you pick first. Then Lucy. Then Sue.” Each woman selected a heart and took a quick peek.

Tara flushed with excitement. “Now what, Auntie?”

“Now, you sleep with that scrap of paper under your pillow tonight and on the morrow, St. Valentine’s day, if you’re brave enough, you pin that name on your sleeve and where it there for a week. Then see what happens.”

“Is that where the saying, wearing your heart on your sleeve comes from?” Lucy asked, her eyes alight with excitement.

Auntie Gertie nodded her head, but something outside the living room window caught her eye. “Can you hear that?” she fretted, “Ice on the roof. It’s freezing rain again. You girls can’t possibly travel home in this weather there’s nothing for it but for you to spend the night.” The old lady seemed unaccountably delighted at the prospect of extended visitors. Seeing the protests beginning to form on more than one pretty face she thumped her cane imperiously. “I won’t hear a single excuse. I have plenty of room and will enjoy seeing your fresh faces over breakfast tomorrow morning. Tara, you take Lucy and Sue upstairs and let them each pick a room and chose some nightclothes for them from the hall closet. When you’ve changed come back down here and I’ll tell you all a bedtime story.”

* * *

“Your Aunt Gertrude is something else,” Lucy said with admiration. “That’s what my Grams is going to be like if she ever lives to be a hundred a four.”

“Is she really that old?” Sue asked, shimmying into a delectable frothy white nightgown that definitely belonged to another time period.

“Don’t forget your cap,” Tara teased, slipping the sheer lace onto her head and tying a bow under her chin while Lucy and Sue giggled some more. “And Aunt Gertie has the birth certificate to prove it. Okay – all ready?”

“We look like something out of the middle Ages,” Lucy joked, prancing around her white robe. “I’m Princess Lucy and you two are my ladies in waiting.”

“No fair,” Sue pretended to be miffed. “You chose the best role for yourself. I want to be a princess too.” Her pretty pout was ruined by the comical wrinkling of her nose as she tried not to laugh.

“Children, children. We can all be ladies of the manor tonight. Come one, Aunt Gert must be getting tired. She’ll want to see us all decked out in our finery before she goes to bed.”

* * *

“But you don’t really believe that do you?” Sue asked skeptically. Tara and Lucy’s rapt perusal of the Valentine Mirror as Gertrude Williams called it, worried her.

“I’d give practically anything if it were true,” Lucy sighed wistfully.

“There’s no such thing as magic,” Sue said firmly, trying to quell the unidentifiable stirring she felt in her bosom. “It’s not possible to see your future by looking into the past…at least not this way.”

Aunt Gertrude had retired for the evening after she had entertained her three guests with a superstitious story about the mirror that dated back to the Middle Ages and the knights of yore. “Back when men were strong and brave and true.” The old lady had winked knowingly at them. “Isn’t that every girl’s dream – to have a knight in shining armor?”

“That was the plan,” Lucy acknowledged somewhat sourly.

“And it still can be,” Aunt Gertrude said with conviction. “When the time is right. I find it most providential that you three have been stranded at my doorstep on St. Valentine’s Eve. Mind what I said. Each of you give it a good polish on Valentine’s Day and see what you spy…Use a nice soft cloth and some elbow grease and you just may be surprised at what you see…”

And no matter how Lucy and Tara had begged, Aunt Gertie wouldn’t tell them any more.

Lucy walked back and forth in front of the mirror, watching her distorted refection in the antique, smoky glass. She laughed as her reflection shimmered. “It sure looks like there’s something inside there – this mirror has more depth than any I’ve ever seen.”

“Of course it does. It’s ancient; they don’t make them like that any more. Honestly, we’re not twelve year olds on a sleep over pulling out the ouja board. We’re grown women and you two are acting like you’ve been cast under a spell. Here I’ll show you.” Sue marched up to the mirror and began to give it a vigorous rub.

“Stop! It’s not time!” Tara cried, pulling her friend away. “You’re not supposed to do that until Valentine’s Day. You’ll jinx it or us if you do it earlier.”

“Oh for pity’s sake. Nothing happened. Nothing’s going to happen.” Sue exclaimed in exasperation.

“Right, time for bed before we get into an argument. I say we meet back here first thing in the morning and each give polishing the mirror a try. Until then…” Lucy zipped her lips. “Agreed?”

“Agreed.”

* * *

Moving stealthily and quietly in the darkened hallway she made her way down the stairs, her white gown billowing about her bare feet. Once in the hallway below she practically floated into the formal living room and came to a halt in front of the Valentine mirror.

It must be too dark to see my reflection, she thought when the mirror gaped emptily back at her. Well, I’m down here; I might as well get it over with. Pulling her hand back inside the voluminous sleeve of her white nightie she reached out and began to carefully polish one small corner of the mirror.

Suddenly her stomach lurched, her head felt light and her whole body felt an unbearable pressure for a split second before she collapsed onto the ground gasping for breath. Her hands clutched the springy grass and she bent her head low trying to stay the waves of nausea that had suddenly assailed her.

“Grass?” she exclaimed in surprise and looked up quickly, startled to see that men dressed in armor surrounded her.

“What manner of witch might you be, then?” one asked menacingly.


She looked about, bewildered. It was dark and most of the men had heavy facial hair.

Were they speaking to me? Where am I? What do I do? What do I do? Sue hugged herself and stumbled back a step, falling ungracefully in a pile of billowing nightgown.

Grubby hands reached for her, causing her to scream in terror. “No! Leave me alone!” She felt something solid behind her. A large stone. Huddling into herself, she sat against it, eyes wide.

The assorted men in various states of dress stood looking at her. Some with feral glints. Others with puzzlement. Still others with concern. Behind them, a large bonfire raged, its light flickering off the knights’ armor.

Sue’s heart pounded harder. Why didn’t I wait till morning? I am lost, Father. It’s dark and I can’t see and I’m scared. She clenched her eyes closed against hot tears.

A cold, wet nose touched her hand. Blindly, she grabbed for the coarse fur, pulling the animal close, burying her face in its hair. The pair sat like that for several long moments until she felt the animal bark.

She peeked up to see the men part, allowing one man through. He carried a small tallow candle in a metal shield. One gesture from him sent all the company back to the comfort of the bonfire. All save one.

Like a dark colossus, the single knight stood, his back to the fire. Sue watched him, trying to read his body language. Strength. Confidence. Vigilance as he stood guard over his leader.

The animal in her grasp wiggled free, drawing her attention to the approaching man. As he neared, the candlelight revealed his features causing her to gasp…

***

lalala whistle.gif
Jill
bounching.gif bounching.gif bounching.gif Where's that cartwheeling smiley when you need one???

Whoo hoo!!! A Trecebo Valentine tale!!! Got my seat. hide.gif ...sort of!

Jill
kidbrother2
QUOTE(trecebo @ Jan 9 2006, 12:45 PM)
My Knight In Shining Armor


She peeked up to see the men part, allowing one man through.  He carried a small tallow candle in a metal shield.  One gesture from him sent all the company back to the comfort of the bonfire.  All save one.

Like a dark colossus, the single knight stood, his back to the fire.  Sue watched him, trying to read his body language.  Strength. Confidence. Vigilance as he stood guard over his leader.

The animal in her grasp wiggled free, drawing her attention to the approaching man.  As he neared, the candlelight revealed his features causing her to gasp…

***

lalala  :whistle:

bounching.gif Trec! Your writing! bounching.gif

Is it Sir Jack?

Is it? bounching.gif
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webgoof
QUOTE(Jill @ Jan 9 2006, 10:58 AM)
bounching.gif bounching.gif bounching.gif Where's that cartwheeling smiley when you need one???

Whoo hoo!!! A Trecebo Valentine tale!!! Got my seat. hide.gif ...sort of!

Jill

what she said!!!

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lalala :whistle:
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suesfan
Trece, I'm so excited that you are doing the Valentine Challenge!!!

Is this our Sir Jack already?? Please, please, please!!!

Joy
English_Chick
causing her to gasp ... why?????????????? who was it??????????????

please please please please please please please tell us!!!!! bounching.gif bounching.gif bounching.gif bounching.gif bounching.gif

(sorry - had a lot of coffee today, am a little hyperactive now!!)
Katinka
tongue.gif Time travel Trecebo-style! thumbsup.gif

Katinka
Bell
who is it???
Sir Jack? Sir Bob? Sir Lealand?
Howie???

laugh.gif I'll wait for more!
ickleails
oh Trecebo. OH TRECEBO, OH TRECEBO, OH TRECEBO


where thou art you????
AgentHudson
QUOTE(English_Chick @ Jan 9 2006, 06:30 PM)
causing her to gasp ... why?????????????? who was it??????????????

please please please please please please please tell us!!!!! bounching.gif bounching.gif bounching.gif bounching.gif bounching.gif

(sorry - had a lot of coffee today, am a little hyperactive now!!)

Ditto!


Trece - COME BACK!!! waiting.gif


Sure EC - blame it on the coffee... rofl2.gif


AH
Sairs
I'm hooked, now who is coming towards our poor damsel in distress?

Sairs
Becka
Could it be? Sir Jack, her knight in shining armor??!! bounching.gif
Matalyn
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QUOTE (Jill @ Jan 9 2006, 10:58 AM)
  Where's that cartwheeling smiley when you need one???

Whoo hoo!!! A Trecebo Valentine tale!!! Got my seat.  ...sort of!

Jill 



YEEEAAAH Trecebo!!!! I love this time period!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Now where's the next post! thumbsup.gif thumbsup.gif thumbsup.gif

Matalyn
trecebo
Elsewhere...

“Sire! The mirror has been used!” The aide came running into the great hall. Skidding to a stop, he dropped to a kneeling position before the head of the room, sides heaving from his sprint.

Silence fell. The only sound was the sibilant breathing of the man dressed in royal blue robes with a red sigil over his left breast. “What ssssay you? Risssse.”

The aide did as he was bidden, keeping his face averted. “The glass, m’lord. A woman has come through the glass.”

Yellowish eyes narrowed beneath the dark blue hood. “A woman? Where issss sssshe? Bring her at oncssssse."

Even in the firelight of the hall, observers could see the aide pale at the command.

“Well?” The lord leaned forward, his robes slithering with the motion. “I am waiting.”

“M…M’lord, she is not here. The glass directed her elsewhere.”

“Sssssss!” An iron stein clanged loudly as it bounced off the wall closest to the unfortunate aide.

“Our spy has indicated she is located among the ranks of your enemy, Lord John. It seems she simply appeared out of the night.”

“Ssssso, the promisssssed one came through the glassssss mirror but arrived in the camp of my greatesssst enemy?” Fury raged as shadows closed in around the master of the castle. “How hassss thissss happened?”

“I…do not know, sire. Only that your spy said she appeared and was scared. At last glance, Lord John was heading out to converse with her.” With that the aide bowed his head and waited. The bearer of bad news often did not survive the delivery.

The lord rose, his robes hissing as he trod the hard stone floor of the great hall. Without a second glance, he passed the prone aide. Frozen with rictus, the unfortunate man fell over, his face still in death.

At the back of the crowd, a slender, dark headed man eased into the shadows, stealthily following the dark lord.

***

I am working on the next parts but tonight is tres busy. I might not be able to post again till tomolly....
suesfan
Trece, this is really intriguing!!! Who is this?? And, how do they know about the mirror???

I can't wait for more!!!

Joy
Becka
Tomorrow then.. can't wait!!

Who is that in the shadows?? unsure.gif
This can't be good. Apparently it isn't in Sue's favor to be there? We shall soon see..
webgoof
Sir John?! dry.gif

HMMMMMMMM......
kidbrother2
John sounds like a snake, literally! unsure.gif
Jill
hide.gif I think I'll wait right here. That man hisses wayyyyyyyyy toooooooooo much!!!

Jill
talifiney
Oo. What a very different approach taken.

I can't wait.
Kav
unsure.gif Well you just snuck this one in here while I was at work, didn't you? dry.gif
This is me bounching.gif all excited, trying to contain my squealing in the very quiet college library. Must remember to maintain the librarian decorum at all cost... bounching.gif Oops, that one just snuck out!

I'm so excited. And I have fleeting ideas that are ping ponging inside my head...I can't decide which way this is going to go...but maybe I have an inkling...maybe not....

Can't wait to find out.

kav
Katinka
WHOA ... blink.gif (Sorry, that's about all my tired brain can muster right now, it's 1:40 AM here.)

Katinka
JesusFreak718
Well lookee what I happened to stumble across...a Tracebo Valentines fanfic!! bounching.gif Now if that doesn't just make someone's day! Trece, I can always count on you to have amazingly unique stories - and this one is no exception. I'm thrilled to see what you do with this!
trecebo
Warning! Don't say I didn't warn you...

***

“Mage!” The dark lord hissed the name aloud.

A bald man with an unruly mustache and beard appeared from behind a shelf. He half bowed to his master, purple robes swaying. “Yes, m’lord?”

“Can you tell me why the prophecssssied vissssitor of the mirror did not land here, where the glassss resssidessss?”

Coughing, the magician bowed again. “I believe I can, Lord Corabarra. It seems the White Lady put a counter spell on the glass when she last touched it.” Upon seeing the glare of his master, he bowed lower. “It is one of the High Magic, m’lord. I…I cannae counter it.”

Lord Corabarra moved to sit in his mage’s chair. Idly tracing the mystic runes carved into the arms of the chair, he looked pensive before speaking. “If we…retrieve the woman, can you complete the prophecsssy?”

“I believe I can, m’lord. Although, she landed not here, if she is the foretold then the prophecy can be fulfilled.” The magician looked at the master though beetled brows.

The tracing stopped. “IF ssssshe issss the foretold? And how will we know?”

“There is a sign. She will be carrying a small piece of parchment with a name upon it. It will be in this shape.” He made a sign with his fingers.

“Yessssss. Gooood.” Yellow eyes glinted with malice. “Inform our ssssspy within Lord John’sssss rankssss to make hasssste and capture the woman. I want her here, tonight!”

The magician picked up a small mirrored bowl and blew upon its surface. Closing his eyes, he concentrated on the spy, softly calling a name. “Zan. Zan. Zan.” He stiffened slightly and cocked his head, as if listening to a voice in his head. “Yes. The master wishes to make himself known to the young lady. Make haste.” Another pause and a nod. Opening his eyes, the mage focused on his master. “He has heard and will obey.”

Dark laughter filled the room, drawing shadows to the dark lord and snuffing out all light in his presence.

Out in the hallway, the slender man paused only a moment before dashing toward the secret passages. I must warn Lord John.
Jill
hide.gif I think I will stay here just a weeeeeeee bbbbiiiittt longer!!!

And whoever is running to warn Lord John...I hope you have on your PF Flyers!!!

Jill
kidbrother2
I'm not that small Jill. Think I'll dive behind here. :hide:
Restie
This story looks really adventurous hide.gif I hope the spy will manage to warn Lord John in time... Sue is in danger!!!!

btw who is Lord John... Jack? wub.gif

Please!!!!!!!

rolleyes.gif Restie
Katinka
I think in the light of the morning (okay mid-day, It's my day off and I slept late) this still applies: WHOA!

Hey KB2! Is it okay if I join you? :hide:

Katinka
ickleails
:hide: this seems like a safe place to wait out until we get another post from Trecebo................or maybe here hide.gif
webgoof
A double spy?! ACK!! :hide:
suesfan
This is very, very scary!! How delicious!!!

Joy
serendipity
This is riveting stuff!

Great start.


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gracie
Bell
Thanks for the warning but I'll just stay here :hide:
trecebo
You can come out now...the dark lord is somewhere else at this time...

***

His eyes. She recognized his eyes. A bright smile lit her face and she rushed forward only to be met with the point of a sword.

“Hold fast, woman. You dinnae have leave to approach His Majesty.” It was the lone knight who spoke.

Sue only caught a few words in the weak light but majesty was one. She backed off, dropping into a curtsey. “Your…Majesty?” She kept eye contact and watched as the man signaled for the sword to be lowered.

The man referred to as His Majesty moved to stand beside her. Setting the candle shield on the rock, he turned to face her, eyes searching. A flicker of his hand and the knight spoke as he moved closer as well.

“Name, woman.”

Sue looked from one man to another, confused. The light brown mustache and goatee on the knight was well kept and she could see him moving his mouth but he was still too far from the light. Glancing back at the …King?, she decided to take matters into her own hands for the moment.

“Majesty,” she began tentatively, “My name is Susan Anne Thomas. And…I know you.”

Both men looked startled. The sword came back up as the knight closed in. “What say you?”

She looked at the other man beseechingly. “Please, Majesty.” She reached out a hand.

Hazel eyes locked with hers only for a second before he leaned forward, letting her touch the side of his temple. A blinding white light enveloped the pair before they both fell prone to the ground.

***


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Katinka
blink.gif Huh?

I'm thinking not King Jack, this guy had hazel eyes, not brown. But who then? And where are they? And when?

Katinka
kidbrother2
ACK! Sue apparently this is a look, but don't touch trip! yikes.gif
suejack05
okay who is this hazel eyes guy its not jack is it ...............
Jill
hide.gif And you said we could come out. I don't think so. Blinding white lights and falling to the ground are not my kind of fuzzy!!! Not that you said fuzzy.....but still.......... unsure.gif

Jill
webgoof
QUOTE(Jill @ Jan 10 2006, 12:21 PM)
hide.gif And you said we could come out. I don't think so. Blinding white lights and falling to the ground are not my kind of fuzzy!!! Not that you said fuzzy.....but still.......... unsure.gif

Jill

ok, Jill, this is getting scarey! If you keep saying what I wanted to........ wacko.gif yikes.gif
suesfan
Trece, who is this majesty?? Hazel eyes?? I'm lost!! I think the knight must be Jack though!!

What is with this blinding white light?? Is Kb right? No touching???

Joy
Bell
(gulp) what happened?? why? how?
so many questions...
ickleails
hunney still hiding hide.gif
marlo29
Harming the King cannot be seen as a good thing ... hide.gif
Becka
Unless Jack is a hazel-eyed knight, I'm a little worried about what this white light did to them blink.gif
Pelican
ahh.. a place to put this where it won't be misunderstood or.....

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The pair sat like that for several long moments until she felt the animal bark.


Very good comment.. as well as the eye contact. You can feel the vibrations of an animal barking or growling.

Love the story so far.. but nervous about where this is going. This looks to be full of laughs and angst. Will be back for more.
Kav
Ssssso I've read that lasssst posssst twicccce and I can't ssseeem to get the ssss's out of my brain from the previousssss posssst. Hang on a minute. blink.gif

Okay -- that's better. laugh.gif

Every time I read it I have a different idea. I'm starting a score card just to see if at any time I had eve a flash of your genious. cool.gif

and what about the slender man who is running to warn King John...and I had a thought about King John...only dang -- I think it's debunk. I think I am going to have to fill up a whole little writing pad of possibly theories.

Can't wait for more.

kav
JesusFreak718
All I can say is WOW Trece. Excellent stuff. This Lord Carabarra person is super scary. Who's off to warn Lord John? Is this King Jack? What's up with this blinding white light? Ack, too many questions I fear. How big is that couch? I think I want to hide behind one too. :hide: No room left? Well I guess I'll settle for a chair. hide.gif
lilsmoochiegirl
Excellent job!
marielynnette
:group hug: I need a hug. The chair and the couch are both being used, and I'm getting really scared out here by myself!
MelissaT
QUOTE(marielynnette @ Jan 11 2006, 02:44 PM)
:group hug: I need a hug. The chair and the couch are both being used, and I'm getting really scared out here by myself!

Here, Marie. :group hug: I need the company too. I'm too big to fit the coffee table.

Jack, The King?? The plot thickens... hide.gif
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