hudson4thomas
Jan 19 2006, 11:37 AM
Ok is here a snippet, there will be more later
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" Bobby stood frozen, unsure of whether to ask Tara to marry him or whether to answer the damn phone.
"Damn" Bobby cursed aloud as he walked over to the phone. He picked it up and said between gritted teeth, "Manning".
"Bobby....Darling i have a small problem and so do you....." The woman on the other end of the line paused unsure of how to go on
treenie
Jan 19 2006, 11:39 AM
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! no small problems . . . esp. IF its the kind that grows and in 9 months makes its presense known. Shouldn't of answered the phone Manning
Restie
Jan 19 2006, 11:54 AM
It was really snippet...
I hope no little Manning isn't on his way to this world!!!!!!
No Darcy Manning!!!!!!!!!
Restie
hudson4thomas
Jan 19 2006, 01:55 PM
hmmm now theres a thought hmmm goes off to comtemplate changing the story slightly Darcy Manning now that does have a ring to it.... good idea restie i hadnt thought of doing that
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suesfan
Jan 19 2006, 04:05 PM
That was a beautiful proposal from Jack and a beautiful ring!! I wonder what the rest of the inscription will say??
Bobby, have you not ever heard of voice mail???? Who's calling him Darling and what problem is she talking about???
Joy
marlo29
Jan 19 2006, 04:40 PM
First ... a little Manning with the wrong Mrs Manning would be a problem ... don't listen to whoever suggested that !!!
After all, it could be his mother !!!
Second ... Jack and Sue ... could we get the rest of the inscription, pretty please?
Restie
Jan 20 2006, 04:06 AM
suejack05
Jan 20 2006, 05:11 AM
QUOTE(Restie @ Jan 20 2006, 12:06 PM)
i am with restie its a bad idea ...........omg they could have double weddings....
Kav
Jan 20 2006, 06:05 AM

YOu weren't thinking what they are all thinking, surely? It's his mum, right? Or his kind old auntie? Or the dottering lady down the hall?????
kav
hudson4thomas
Jan 20 2006, 07:54 AM
hehehehehe
i was gonna rewrite this but i just didnt have the heart to do it to you all afterall youve all been soo nice so without further ado here ya go
hmmmm we need a cackling smilie
"I err i dont know how to say this son but it seems that you have given me the wrong gift".
Bobby frowned "Mom it's for you" he was puzzled now.
"Robert Manning i thought you learnt a long time ago that you can't marry your mom...Now im telling you this engagement ring isnt meant for me" at this point Bobby's mom burst into a fit of laughter.
Bobby stood there shocked. if his mom had Tara's ring then the earring were in his pocket. "Oh no" he groaned covering hi sface with his hand.
"Dont worry son" said his dad having taken over the phone call as his wife was in fits of laughter still. "Do you want me to drop the ring to you tommorrow morning?"
"Dad i need it now i was about to do it when you rang" Bobby groaned
"Oh well in that case give me ten minutes and i'll have it there so you can propose to the lucky lady...... Is it Tara?"
Bobby laughed, "How did you know"
"Well you do talk about her alot and your mom said it was probably her" his dad chuckled.
"I'll see you in ten dad... Bye love ya" Bobby hung up the phone now all he had to do was find a away to keep Tara occupied for ten minutes or so. He grinned at the thought that popped into his head.
hudson4thomas
Jan 20 2006, 07:55 AM
QUOTE(Kav @ Jan 20 2006, 11:05 AM)

YOu weren't thinking what they are all thinking, surely? It's his mum, right? Or his kind old auntie? Or the dottering lady down the hall?????
kav
hehe actually kav i was but just couldnt do it to you all lolololol
Jill
Jan 20 2006, 08:08 AM
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Bobby hung up the phone now all he had to do was find a away to keep Tara occupied for ten minutes or so. He grinned at the thought that popped into his head.

Well all I can say is that it had better not be Pin the Tail on the Donkey....although it would be fitting.
Jill
Restie
Jan 20 2006, 08:12 AM
hudson4thomas
Jan 20 2006, 09:03 AM
QUOTE(Jill @ Jan 20 2006, 01:08 PM)
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Bobby hung up the phone now all he had to do was find a away to keep Tara occupied for ten minutes or so. He grinned at the thought that popped into his head.

Well all I can say is that it had better not be Pin the Tail on the Donkey....although it would be fitting.
Jill
hmm pin the tail on the donkey now that has *sits thinking of the word i want lol* anyway it's a good idea
treenie
Jan 20 2006, 10:27 AM
Hmm, how is he going to explain the bending down . .. i know tieing her show for her . . . foot massage? although she doesn't have to stand for those. Hmm
Would like to know how Bobby would preoccuply Tara for the next few mintues
hudson4thomas
Jan 20 2006, 11:12 AM
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hmm pin the tail on the donkey now that has *sits thinking of the word i want lol* anyway it's a good idea
Ahhh i remember now the word is potential lolol dont ask lol im crazy *chuffed coz i remember the word i wnated...contemplating the next part*
suesfan
Jan 20 2006, 02:52 PM
Actually, I think I would have liked to see Bobby's face when he proposed and then gave Tara earrings!!!
Joy
hudson4thomas
Jan 21 2006, 10:41 AM
sorry i havent posted anymore yet... was gonna post some more last night but we had a blasted power-cut. will post some more shortly.
michelle.
Bell
Jan 21 2006, 11:36 AM

Bobby....
you had us worried there for a moment!
marielynnette
Jan 22 2006, 01:27 AM
I don't know, Joy. I think earrings would have been a 'cute' gift! Think of it as a promise of things to come! ...........a foreplay of the future!!!
Okay,........it's late. And I'm making no sense. Except............hmm, I bet I know what Bobby has planned for the next ten minutes or so!!!
hudson4thomas
Jan 22 2006, 05:55 AM
okay im still working on this chapter. posts may be short for a bit due to a bum arm. damn power-cuts. but any how heres a snippet, sorry youve had to wait so long.
he walked over to Tara and held her hands in his. He stared into her eyes and leaned in. what he saw in her eyes made him gasp he saw all the love he felt for her reflected straight back at him. their lips met and they felt the electricity surge through their bodies, from their lips to their toes. the only coherent thought bobby had was
dad had better hurry up coz i dont think i can stop at a kissis this what you were thinking marie hehe
marielynnette
Jan 22 2006, 09:01 AM
Unless he's the original minute man, he'd better hold off on that one!
hudson4thomas
Jan 22 2006, 09:36 AM
here's a bit more...enjoy
Bobby pulled back and gasped for air. He instantly felt the cool air hit his chest and looked down in wonder. Now when did that happen! Half of the buttons of his shirt were undone. He looked at Tara and grinned noting that her blouse had definatly been undone as well as she was busy doing them up. Bobby did the buttons of his shirt up and had just finished the last button when there was a knock at the door.
"Be right back luv" he told Tara and went to answer the door.
Hmmmm undecided as to whether to make Darcy be at the door let me know what you think should I or should'nt I?
marielynnette
Jan 22 2006, 09:47 AM
It can be Darcy. Let her see first hand what she threw away! I think Bobby will know exactly how to handle Miss D'Angelo! His heart now belongs to Tara......
treenie
Jan 22 2006, 10:46 AM
IT could be her; Tara could show the confidence she has in their relationship, but standing strong; of course letting the fear in after she leaves so Bobby could comfort her. Or Darcy could show up after he proposes and by then its too late. He has claimed the one he loves

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Sairs
Jan 22 2006, 04:34 PM
Lovely posts!

I giggled at the thought of Bobby proposing with a pair of earrings!

At least his mother saved the day by phoning!
It could be Darcy at the door... then she could see what true love is, but I'd rather it be Bobby's dad so that we can have a lovely proposal!
Looking forward to more,
Sairs
Restie
Jan 23 2006, 04:58 AM
I said... he won't have any problem to "entertain" her
Now... we want to read about his proposal!!!!
Restie
terie
Jan 23 2006, 04:53 PM
Great job,
looking forward to more,
thanks,
Terie
Kav
Jan 25 2006, 08:25 PM

Sairs -- bite your tongue -- Darcy at the door? I think not!!!!
kav
hudson4thomas
Jan 26 2006, 06:53 PM
Hi guys well what can i say the ******* ******* of a rooter decided to act up leaving me with no internet for two days.

all is good now and i will put next part up tomorrow.
Jill
Jan 28 2006, 01:46 AM

That's not much fun!
Well, is it tomorrow yet, where you are?
Jill
hudson4thomas
Jan 28 2006, 09:14 AM
sorry bout the wait. heres next part.
"Darcy! what are you doing here?!?" Bobby asked in shock. he was glad he had decided to go outside when he answered the door. this would take some explaining.
"Bobby i came back... I love you" she said smiling.
"I'm sorry Darce there's no easy way to say this...but I dont love you, I love Tara I all ways have done.. I'm really sorry." He said quietly.
He watched as the tears fell silently down her cheeks "I'm happy for you both Bobby I really hope it works out." with that she turned and walked to her car. As she drove off his parents arrived.
Sorry its not much. but busted arm means i can only use one hand to type and its taking some getting used to
Jill
Jan 28 2006, 10:10 AM

You broke your arm?????
OH NO!

Hope you're not in pain!
And we'll take posts in any way, shape or form.
Now.....where's a cartwheeling smiley? Darcy's gone!!!!
Jill
suesfan
Jan 28 2006, 10:24 AM
I just caught up again!!
You broke your arm?? How did you do that - tripped over Bobby's foot when he went down on one knee in front of Tara??? I hope you are not feeling a lot of pain!! I'm sending 'feel better' confetti your way!!!
I'm glad you got rid of Darcy - we don't want her kind around here!!! Now Bobby's parents are here with the ring and he can get on with it!!!
I hope they don't want to stay and watch!!!
Joy
hudson4thomas
Jan 28 2006, 10:28 AM
thanks guys docs say its fractured i blame the cats and the power cut lol
Sairs
Jan 28 2006, 06:14 PM
Hope you're arm is better soon!
I can't believe I was right with it being Darcy at the door! At least she now knows that there is no room in Bobby's life for her and we can all move on with Bobby, Tara and a certain little ring that's winging its way towards Tara!

Take care,
Sairs
hudson4thomas
Jan 28 2006, 07:46 PM
okay this is just a quick post. cant sleep and the pain killers i took are making me slightly drowzy, so if this doesnt make any sense blame the tablets as they had weird effects on me last time aswell but whats a girl to do lol.
"Dad!" Bobby ran to the car and hugged his father as he got out.
"Here ya go son" he said as he handed his son the box.
Bobby smiled as he opened the box and saw Tara's ring sat comfortably in it. "Thanks dad". Bobby got the box with his mom's earrings in out of his pocket and handed it to his dad.
His dad checked the box and smiled at his son. This man had come such a long way from the little boy he had first met that was untrusting of men, never knowing whether they would out on him and his mom like his biological father had. "She'll love these son and good luck. you've become a fine man."
Bobby wiped at the tear crawling down his cheek and smiled at his dad saying thankyou. The two men hugged and said there goodbyes.
Ok i read through to see if it made sense and it does to me lol but if it doesnt then just point out what needs correcting and ill do it lol
Kav
Jan 28 2006, 08:46 PM
I can't believe it was Darcy either. Thank goodness she went away graciously. And now that he has the ring....
And sorry about your arm. It must take forever to type up your posts. You are a real trooper!!!!
kav
hudson4thomas
Jan 28 2006, 09:01 PM
kav to be honest its either sit here and be bored at stupid o clock in the morning lol or read fanfics and then when im caught up sit and be bored again lol or i can add more to this. its not too bad once you get used to the one hand thing thou lol. the joys of not being able to sleep lol.
suesfan
Jan 28 2006, 10:39 PM
Now Bobby has the ring - he can do this properly!!!
Joy
Jill
Jan 29 2006, 12:23 AM

Great job! He has the ring. Now it's one-hand time.....you type with one hand, he takes the ring in one hand and slips it onto Tara's one hand...one finger on her one hand, and we're good to go!
Jill
hudson4thomas
Jan 29 2006, 06:55 AM
okay done the proposal enjoy 
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Bobby walked into his house and smiled when he saw Tara still sat on the sofa.
"Sorry bout that luv" he said cheerfully.
Tara smiled at him and said "It's ok"
Bobby went over to her and pulled into a standing position. He smiled at her as he got down on one knee. He still had hold of her hand. "Tara I love you so much, I always have and I always will. Will you do me the honour of becoming my wife?"

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suejack05
Jan 29 2006, 01:15 PM
do i hear a YES coming along......................................
marlo29
Jan 29 2006, 01:21 PM
Bobby, you're on a row ...you have the right girl, the right jewelry, the right words ...
Now Tara ... give the guy the right answer
Jill
Jan 29 2006, 01:38 PM

Yes.......the answer is YES!!!
suesfan
Jan 29 2006, 01:38 PM
QUOTE(marlo29 @ Jan 29 2006, 06:21 PM)
Bobby, you're on a row ...you have the right girl, the right jewelry, the right words ...
Now Tara ... give the guy the right answer
I have to DITTO that!!!
Joy
hudson4thomas
Jan 29 2006, 04:34 PM
hmmmmmm whats the right answer again yes or no 
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Sairs
Jan 29 2006, 04:50 PM
I'm hanging around for the right answer! Come on Tara say "YES!"
Sairs
treenie
Jan 29 2006, 05:15 PM
How about a throwing herself into his arms, tears of joy running down her face as she kissing him a yes?
hudson4thomas
Jan 29 2006, 07:53 PM
will probably post more tomorrow now...cats throwing up oh the joys
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