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~Nothing To Chance~

He’d left nothing to chance. At least he hoped he hadn’t. And he was good at planning, so this was sure to go off without a hitch. Ever since Tara had cajoled them all into taking part in her current festival of the week, St. Valentine’s Day.

“Come on, it will be fun,” she had encouraged her dubious team.

“Look, we’re used to you playing around with Christmas, and I don’t even mind the bunnies and chicks at Easter, though the live ducklings were a bit much last year. But Valentine’s Day, Tara? Is nothing sacred to you?” he had been the first to protest, but as usual to no avail.

Tara had compromised. “Okay, we won’t do everything I planned, but we will do…this one. Yes, this looks like fun!” She had grinned up at them all from her perch at the computer with such enthusiasm that no one had the heart to discourage her. “This is an ancient Valentine’s Day custom. And it’s easy to do. You have to claim the first person of the opposite sex that you see on Valentine’s Day for your Valentine.”

“And that would entail?”

“Oh, I don’t know, taking him, or her, out to lunch, doing absolutely everything together all day and then something special in the evening. Come on, this should be lots of fun.”

“I’ve never wished you were in a committed relationship more than I do right now.” He forgot who said that, but it was the general consensus of the day.

Of course they had all grumbled and flatly refused to participate…which is why he was perched out here in the freezing cold before the sun had even risen waiting for the first glimpse of…
the one he wanted to claim for his Valentine.

He’d flatly denied having any part of the foolishness when Tara had first mentioned the idea. It was his habit, a cloak he was most familiar wearing, denial. But his mind had started racing with ideas, the proverbial door having swung back open, giving him yet one more opportunity to step through and change their relationship. So here he was, his palms sweating despite the chill in the air, his heart racing to the point of being painful, waiting for his first glimpse of Sue, hoping he had finally left nothing to chance.

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I'll be back after school! smile.gif
Jill
biggrin.gif Yeah!!!!! I'll be here after school!!!!! bounching.gif


Jill
Restie
bouncing fire.gif ANOTHER STORY!!!!! bounching.gif

Can't wait for more!!!!!!


popcorn.gif Restie
serendipity
Yes, I've been waiting for you Flip!

Am sooooo looking forward to your story...

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gracie
Jolan
bounching.gif can't you skip class for once??? we need you here now bounching.gif
TinaLynne
Probably not the best idea for the teacher to skip class! laugh.gif I'm so excited to see this here, flip! bounching.gif
Ivory
Oh, good. I am ready and anxious to read what is next.
bigfan
Yea, Flip. Valentine isn't Valentine without a fanfic from you!!!
jellybean
Is school finished yet?


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How bout now???


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Now???

Note to Flip's students: Guys for heavens' sake please please please don't get detention. We are anxiously awaiting her return...
Mirjam
Whoohoo, a Flip story!!!! And what about school? ohmy.gif School is highly overrated, Flip! Get back soon please!!!
marlo29
I knew you'd come to your senses, Flip, and give us a valentine story tongue.gif

Waiting for school to be over waiting.gif
Jolan
QUOTE(TinaLynne @ Feb 1 2006, 03:43 PM)
Probably not the best idea for the teacher to skip class! laugh.gif I'm so excited to see this here, flip! bounching.gif

Hey...this is another generation...kids get smarter and work have to work on their own more than I had to do when I was in class...tongue.gif

besides, don't they have computers in a classroom...I know here they do...can't you tell the kidlets what to do and sneak back behind a computer and post some more whistling.gif"
suesfan
Flip, I'm thrilled that you have joined the Valentine Challenge!!

Great start - you have Jack motivated!! Can't wait for your next post!!!

Joy
duckfan
So when I asked if you were going to write a Valentine's story and you told me "no" were you in denial too?
flip
QUOTE(duckfan @ Feb 1 2006, 01:28 PM)
So when I asked if you were going to write a Valentine's story and you told me "no" were you in denial too?

I think I told you I wasn't planning on it - and I wasn't. I have another story I'm supposed to be writing, but I seem to be finding ways of avoiding it. tongue.gif So sorry if I mislead you... huh.gif

And I know I'm a bit earlier than after school. My son got sick and I brought him home - so.....

here ya go!

~*~*~*~*~*

Sue reluctantly opened her eyes to Levi’s insistent nudges, dread sweeping through her body as soon as her mind registered the date. Wishing she could call in sick and just hide out, she groaned and sat up, knowing she couldn’t do something that dishonest. Tara’s silly notion of claiming the first person of the opposite sex seen on Valentine’s Day had run rampant through the Hoover building, spreading more quickly than a fire through a dry forest.

Sighing, she stood and reached mechanically for her jogging suit, knowing that Levi needed to go out. Maybe, if she were lucky, she’d fall in the park, sprain her ankle, and avoid the need to go to work. Shaking her head, she mentally berated herself, squared her shoulders and headed for the front door, bumping into Lucy in the hall.

“What are you doing up?” Sue questioned, glancing at her watch. “You don’t ever get up this early.”

Lucy shrugged noncommittally, “I thought I’d head in early today, get some work done before all the chaos begins.”

Sue eyed her warily. “You aren’t planning on coercing Jack into doing anything are you?”

“Who, me?” Lucy asked, feigning innocence. “Why do you ask that?”

“Because you couldn’t talk me into getting there early to do the same for him, that’s why. I know your devious, match-making mind. I saw the possibilities explode across your eyes the day Tara mentioned this horrible idea. And I know you can’t stand sitting back and doing nothing. Well, if you go ahead with your plan, I’ll turn him down,” she stated emphatically, crossing her arms stubbornly.

“What! Are you crazy? Never mind, I know you are,” Lucy said, staring at her friend as if she didn’t know her. “Half the women at the Hoover Building are dying to be Jack Hudson’s Valentine and you’re telling me you’d turn him down?”

“Lucy, I don’t want to be his pity Valentine. I’ve been on the pity end of dates enough and it’s no fun. If he doesn’t want me on his own, then I don’t want to be his Valentine.”

“Sweetie, I’m sure that it’s not that he doesn’t want you. We’ve all seen the way he watches you when you aren’t looking,” she rushed on, seeing Sue begin to turn away. “He’s just so, ugh!” she said, stomping her foot, searching for the right words.

“I believe the word is uninterested,” Sue filled in, holding up her hand when her roommate started to protest. “Lucy, I admit, when I decided to stay in DC, I thought things would change for us, but as the days and weeks have passed, I’m beginning to see that they won’t. I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t disappointed,” she admitted, a lone tear escaping and trailing down her face, “but I’m working on accepting that fact and being content with my life. I’m glad I chose to stay regardless of how things did or didn’t work out with Jack.”

“I’m glad you stayed too,” Lucy answered before enveloping her friend in a hug. “And I’m still holding out hope,” she added once she stepped back. “I know Jack hasn’t made a move toward you, but he hasn’t toward anyone else either and that says a lot!”

“Or maybe he’s just doing a better job at keeping his private life exactly that...private.”

Lucy snorted, her face contorting comically. “Yeah, and water isn’t wet, the sun isn’t hot, and he’s not smitten with you.”

It was Sue’s turn to roll her eyes, which she did while clipping the leash to Levi’s collar. “I’m taking Levi for a walk. I’ll see you at work, Luce,” she called over her shoulder as she quietly closed the door behind her.
jellybean
Oooohhhhh bounching.gif I'm gonna like this story. I can feel it in my bones.

If this is a before the end of school post I probably should give it up for today and get some sleep before the sun comes up (in about an hour and a half). I look forward to more tomorrow Flip.
Jill
biggrin.gif I love Sue's outlook! You are soooooooooo wrong, girl, and deep inside, you know it!!!

Jill
suesfan
Sue, watch your step as you go out the building! Jack will be standing in front of your door and you might walk into him!!!

Joy
Sairs
I'm looking forward to more.

Sairs
bigfan
I sure hope he's standing outside her door...and I sure hope Sue doesn't think Lucy got to him first.
Nishita
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! A new Flip story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bouncing fire.gif bouncing fire.gif bounching.gif bounching.gif bounching.gif

Nishita biggrin.gif
webgoof
wouldn't Levi be her valentine then? angelnot.gif whistling.gif"
flip
Web, have you hacked into my computer??? unsure.gif tongue.gif

*~*~*~*~*~

She stepped into the cold, dark morning and took a deep cleansing breath. She’d give Levi his time to romp in the snow, but then he was going to have to keep up with her as she did some laps around the park. She had to do something to fight off the dread threatening to choke her and intended to run until she was too tired to care.

Several minutes later, she was enjoying the solitude of the park and the gradual brightening of the day. Her feet beat out a steady rhythm as her mind let go of the stresses the day promised. Levi ran beside her, his tail wagging, his breath visible in the chilled air.

It wasn’t until her 5th lap that she noticed the second set of footprints alongside hers. Holding tighter to Levi’s leash, she rounded the blind curve and stopped in her tracks, glancing around before bending and picking up the single red rose lying across the path. Bringing it to her nose, she took a deep breath, enjoying its deep fragrance and velvety softness. Levi’s exuberant leap jolted her out of her momentary distraction, knocking her backwards into a pair of strong arms. Scrambling away, her heart racing madly, she turned, surprised.

“Jack! What are you doing here?”

Giving her a half smile, he scrunched up his eyebrows. “Would you believe it if I told you this was a chance encounter?”

Sue’s hands settled on her hips as she drew in some air, her erratic breathing having nothing to do with the distance she had run. Pursing her lips she shook her head. “Try again.”

He motioned to the rose clutched in her hand, “Read the card.”

“Huh?” she asked, confused. “Oh!” she said, startled, not having yet connected the rose with Jack’s presence. When she saw his grimace at the realization, she hurriedly looked down, noticing for the first time the beautifully scripted gift card attached to the stem of the rose. Fingering the small tag, she noted her name before turning it over and reading “Be My Valentine.” Lifting her eyes to his, she searched for something to say but came up woefully short.

“Well,” he asked, beginning to feel more than awkward. “Sue? The question isn’t that hard. Yes or no?”

“Did Lucy call you this morning?” she finally questioned.

“Lucy? No, why? And that wasn’t an answer, it was a question.”

“So Lucy didn’t put you up to this?”

“No, Lucy did not put me up to this.”

“I saw you tell Tara and Bobby and several other people on various occasions that you weren’t going to be a part of the Valentine madness. What changed your mind?”

Jack shifted his stance, shoving his hands in his coat pocket, and observed her guarded expression. “Did you really think I’d announce to everyone that I was going to go along with one of Tara’s nutty whims? Bobby and Lucy would have both worn themselves out long before the big day ever arrived. I couldn’t do that to them,” he said with a small laugh. Seeing the slight thaw in her gaze, he stepped closer and shrugged, “Besides, I couldn’t stand the thought of someone else claiming you for their Valentine. It just didn’t sit well with me,” he finished, giving her one of his infamous, infuriating shrugs.

“Oh, so you don’t want me but you also don’t want somebody else to have me,” she surmised, disappointment snuffing out the small flame of hope that had flickered to life at his presence.

He drew a deep breath, his eyes locking with hers. “I never said I didn’t want you.”

Her breath caught at the combination of his intense stare and his words before a logical explanation flitted across her mind. “I didn’t mean want as in ‘want’, Jack. I meant as your Valentine.”

“Like I said, I never said I didn’t want you...as my Valentine or any other way. The card in your hand proves just the opposite. Why else would I get up before the sun is even up and sit in the freezing cold, just so I could catch a glimpse of you? I had to be sure I saw you first and that nobody else saw me before you did.”

“Oh,” Sue murmured, giving him a crestfallen look. “You aren’t the first male I’ve seen today. I guess you’ll have to talk with him before I can say yes to you with a clear conscience.”

“Really,” Jack asked, a knot forming in his stomach. “Did Polka Dot Boy get to you before me?”

Sue tried to hide her smile at Jack’s nickname for Jeremy Polk, an agent on another team. She’d heard through the grapevine that he wanted to be the first person she saw when making it in to work on Valentine’s Day. Evidently he’d heard the same rumor. “No,” she said, shaking her head. “You don’t need to talk to Jeremy.”

“Then who?”

“Levi,” she said seriously, turning to her dog. “His was the first male face I saw today.”

Rolling his eyes, he shifted his attention to the golden retriever. “Levi, would you mind it too terribly much if Sue was my Valentine today? We’ll let you tag along,” he added with a wink. “And if you’re not too disruptive, there will be some good snacks on the down low if you know what I mean.”

Levi pranced back a couple of steps before snorting and sitting down. He gave a couple of barks and looked between the two humans staring his way.

Jack gently touched Sue’s shoulder, gaining her attention. “Well? What did he say?”

“He said that would be fine. He really has no use for this particular holiday.”

“He said all that with two barks?”

“And a snort,” she said as if that made all the difference in the world.

“Of course, can’t forget the snort,” he laughed. “Come on,” he said, taking her arm in his, “it’s cold out here. The first thing on our agenda is a hot cup of coffee and I know just the place.”
webgoof
QUOTE(flip @ Feb 1 2006, 06:35 PM)
Web, have you hacked into my computer??? unsure.gif tongue.gif

I'll never tell!!! angelnot.gif

QUOTE


“He said all that with two barks?”

“And a snort,” she said as if that made all the difference in the world.


laugh.gif This is fun!!! band.gif
TinaLynne
Such a romantic way to 'lay his claim' so to speak...tongue.gif wub.gif
GA fan
Hooray, a Flip Valentine's Day story! Lovin' the beginning so far... biggrin.gif

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Jill
biggrin.gif I love how Sue forced the issue a bit, making him admit a little more than I think he was prepared to do!

Love it, Flip!
Keep it going. bounching.gif

Where's a snorting smiley?

Jill
suesfan
Jack really did give more away than I thought he would during the first encounter of the day!!

Polka Dot Boy!! I love it!!!

Joy
alaskanfan
IPB Image WAHOO!

Will Flip fuzzies abound in this Valentine Tale? I'm sure that is a RESOUNDING yes and I can hardly wait...



IPB Image to the QUEEN of Fuzzies!

Thanks, Flip....cannot wait for some more...hurry!
duckfan
Well I'm rather relieved because I thought for sure Jack would break his ankle or get a phone call or something else to make him miss her!

Hope your son is better and that this doesn't become a family bonding experience!
christyb
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That was perfect! I hope their whole day is full of this much chemistry! I love it!
terie
Yes!!!! I was hoping you would do a Valentine story!
thanks,
Terie
marielynnette
dance.gif Flips writing a story!!!
Sue'sJack
Well Flip you flipped me yet again... tongue.gif
you are one mysterious person... you posted soooooooooooooooooo much and I had no clue that you r writing.... well thx a LOT missy...... Great stuff carry on... I know you will NOT disappoint me yet the PG13 did.... unsure.gif ARE U sure u didn't make a mistake.... in the rating.... tongue.gif
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Restie
I am so glad, Sue didn't say him no rolleyes.gif rolleyes.gif rolleyes.gif

Now bouncing fire.gif We are waiting for their breakfast!!!! bounching.gif


rolleyes.gif Restie
Mirjam
Glad you decided against your previous statement of denial on this Challenge, Flip! I'm loving the story already. I especially liked the way Jack disclosed he listens to rumours!!! Polka Dot Boy?!!!!! rofl.gif Can't wait for the moment when Sue will tell him 'No' for today...and for every other day for that matter!!!
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flip
Jack took another sip of his coffee, using the time to quietly observe his companion. She was adorably ruffled and utterly enchanting for such an early hour and obviously uncomfortable. Reaching across the table, he touched her hand lightly, letting his fingers linger slightly longer than usual before pulling them away. “What’s wrong, Sue?”

Her eyes widened, startled at his observation. “Noth...nothing is wrong,” she answered. “Why do you think so?”

“You are unusually quiet. Are you nervous?”

Again her expressive eyes gave her away. He studied the way she worried her bottom lip before finally shrugging helplessly.

“I never meant for my question this morning to be so hard on you. Is the thought of being mine, um, my Valentine and spending the better part of the day with me really that disturbing?” He meant the question to be lighthearted, but instinctively knew it hadn’t come across that way.

“No!” she answered emphatically, rushing to reassure him. “The thought is not unpleasant at all. It’s just...I’m not very, um, experienced in these kinds of situations. I’m not really sure how to act or what’s expected,” she tried to explain.

Jack moved his cup out of the way and settled his elbow on the table, using it as a prop for his head. “What do you mean how to act? You’ve been on dates before. I know you have because I’ve had to witness some of them,” he mumbled, unaware he had voiced his thoughts.

“Is...is that what this is? A date? Or is this two friends, partners, having coffee before heading into work? That’s what I mean. I don’t know where I am with you at this point.”

He reached across the table and took her hand in his, covering it with his other. “Obviously I need to work on my communication skills,” he tried to joke, grimacing when his words fell flat. Giving her hand a squeeze, he abandoned any hope of keeping things light and plunged forward. “I know I’ve given you no advance warning, that I’ve taken you completely by surprise, but when I decided to give this, give us, a try, I wanted to do it right. My showing up at such an early hour was planned. I planned to claim you as my Valentine and wanted nothing to stand in my way. So I view not only this,” he said indicating their surroundings, “as a date, but the entire day as one. I hope you don’t find the idea distasteful.”

She couldn’t hold his gaze any longer, dropping her eyes to where his hands still held one of hers. This was the moment she’d secretly longed for and now that it was upon her, she wasn’t sure what to do. Closing her eyes briefly, she frantically tried to collect her fractured thoughts and form a coherent reply. Looking back up into his unfathomable eyes, she felt her cheeks heat up as she smiled shyly his way. “I don’t find the idea distasteful. Far from it,” she added honestly. “I’m glad you sought me out. Honestly, I can’t imagine spending the day with anyone else.”

”Good,” he smiled with satisfaction, leaning back in relief. “I’ve got the whole day planned,” he continued, delighted with himself. Checking his watch, he grimaced, “And unfortunately it includes getting some work done. I’ll walk you back to your apartment and wait for you there.”

“Jack,” she began in protest only to have him hold up his hand to stop her.

“We spend the day together, remember? I’m driving you to work, no arguments.”

She laughed and gathered her jacket, reaching under the table to rouse Levi. “I wouldn’t dare argue with you, Jack. Whatever gave you that idea?”

“Come on, You,” he said, tucking her hand in the crook of his arm and leading her outside. “Let me get you out of here before lightning strikes.”

She pretended hurt at his comment but couldn’t keep the twinkle out of her eyes. Jack moved to wrap his arm around her shoulder, pulling her close and giving her a wink. “I think this is going to be a great day,” he predicted, giving her a warm look. “I guess what they say is true,” he continued mysteriously.

“What who says about what?” she questioned, her curiosity getting the better of her.

“I don’t know who said it, but the saying about the early bird getting the worm. I got up early and...”

She stopped and crossed her arms, giving him the most ferocious frown she could muster. “Did you just call me a worm, Hudson?”

“What? No! That’s not what I meant, Sue. I meant that there are certain merits to getting up early, and I just discovered one of them. I, in no way, meant to infer that you were a worm, or worm-like in any way. You aren’t. You are beautiful, vibrant, and incredibly sexy first thing in the morning and I’m umph,” he stopped when her finger found its way to his lips, stopping his words.

“You’re forgiven,” she smiled, sliding her arm back in his, “And oh so easy,” she added with a wink.

He knew he’d been had and couldn’t wait for more!
serendipity
Three posts and I'm in love with this story.

I'm glad both of them are being so expressive...

This looks like a breakthrough Valentine's Day!


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gracie
Ivory
Sue may not feel sure she knows how to respond to this new development in their relationship, but she seems to be doing just fine to me. wink.gif
Restie
Sue, I think it's important to know where are you with him... I think it's great you asked him and I am sure you are more than contented with his answer tongue.gif

I love the way you stopped his words... I think you should do it more often wub.gif wub.gif


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Jill
QUOTE
I don’t know who said it, but the saying about the early bird getting the worm. I got up early and...”

She stopped and crossed her arms, giving him the most ferocious frown she could muster. “Did you just call me a worm, Hudson?”

“What? No! That’s not what I meant, Sue. I meant that there are certain merits to getting up early, and I just discovered one of them. I, in no way, meant to infer that you were a worm, or worm-like in any way. You aren’t. You are beautiful, vibrant, and incredibly sexy first thing in the morning and I’m umph,” he stopped when her finger found its way to his lips, stopping his words.

“You’re forgiven,” she smiled, sliding her arm back in his, “And oh so easy,” she added with a wink.

He knew he’d been had and couldn’t wait for more!


rolleyes.gif Jack......this is going to be one very interesting day...especially if you keep putting your foot in your mouth, only to take it out and reveal a little more of what's really inside that handsome head of yours!!!

Sue...you're sharp in the morning, girl! Zinged him with another one, didn't you!!! biggrin.gif
christyb
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It's a date! It's a date! It's a date!
lilsmoochiegirl
YaY! Just what I need in the morning!
webgoof
QUOTE(Jill @ Feb 2 2006, 08:27 AM)
QUOTE
I don’t know who said it, but the saying about the early bird getting the worm. I got up early and...”

She stopped and crossed her arms, giving him the most ferocious frown she could muster. “Did you just call me a worm, Hudson?”

“What? No! That’s not what I meant, Sue. I meant that there are certain merits to getting up early, and I just discovered one of them. I, in no way, meant to infer that you were a worm, or worm-like in any way. You aren’t. You are beautiful, vibrant, and incredibly sexy first thing in the morning and I’m umph,” he stopped when her finger found its way to his lips, stopping his words.

“You’re forgiven,” she smiled, sliding her arm back in his, “And oh so easy,” she added with a wink.

He knew he’d been had and couldn’t wait for more!


rolleyes.gif Jack......this is going to be one very interesting day...especially if you keep putting your foot in your mouth, only to take it out and reveal a little more of what's really inside that handsome head of yours!!!

Sue...you're sharp in the morning, girl! Zinged him with another one, didn't you!!! biggrin.gif

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suesfan
You know what they say - "Today is the first day of the rest of your life." Why do I get the feeling that their lives will never be the same after today???

Joy
Kiekeboe
yyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssss!!! bounching.gif
jellybean
biggrin.gif That's all, just biggrin.gif and the day is still young (at least in fanfic land)
Mirjam
QUOTE(suesfan @ Feb 2 2006, 03:47 PM)
You know what they say - "Today is the first day of the rest of your life." Why do I get the feeling that their lives will never be the same after today???

Joy

ditto.gif What she said!
justme_jp3
Oh, Flip... I'd heard through the grapevine that this was coming, and I'm sad that I missed it until now! Hope your son didn't/doesn't have what I had! UGH! But the good part is that I got to read so much in one sitting!!! I'm loving this already... but then, when you're writing, I usually do!! smile.gif
marlo29
This day will be memorable for years to come !!!!
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