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Jolan
~ Author’s note: Any bolded words within a conversation indicates ASL. Words written in italics are characters thoughts.

I quote a number of scenes from actual episodes in this story, and all credit for those belongs, as always, to the Johnson brothers.

Ps: There might be a quoted scene that looks familiar, but I asked for the writers permission first. ~


Thank you, Jolan



Spring is a time to clean out the closets and remove all the items that have not been used in ages. Out with the old and in with the new, they say. Sometimes that saying can be used with people....people who have declined to act on their feelings and leave the other person frustrated and at a loss for how to proceed. Case in point, Jack and his unwillingness to pursue a relationship with Sue.

Sue had been offered a position in New York and had considered taking it, hoping that this would have been the push Jack needed to make his move.

It had been three weeks since she declined the offer. His words when he caught her in the hallway; still fresh in her mind. And still........nothing more from Jack other than a few more longing glances and a couple dinner meetings.

Maybe this is why Sue considered the offer of a date with the new agent from SOG who took an instant liking to her. He had sent her several emails and a dozen yellow roses. Brian Walker was at least taking an interest in her.


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“What are you smiling about?” Lucy said as she threw a wrapped paper at Sue. “Is there something going on that you ain’t telling me?”

“Nope, nothing. Why would there be?” Sue shrugged. “Besides, there is no way I could keep something hidden from you anyways.”

Jack looked up from his paperwork, watching the scene that happened in front of him eagerly.

“Then why are you smiling? I saw your face glowing when you read something on your computer screen.” Lucy walked towards her desktop, noticing that Sue was desperately trying to erase something.

“No reason.” Sue dreadfully tried to shut down the screen, but instead of closing, she minimized it.
ickleails
Jealous Jack is rearing his ugly but soooo cute head once again it appears.... rolleyes.gif
marielynnette
bounching.gif I'm so excited! It's been ages since you've written a story! And this, being a J/S one is sure to be wonderful!

Who is this Brian guy and why is Jack still hedging on a romance with Sue?
I'm counting on you to fix this, Jolan!
Don't make me come after you! gunman.gif
suesfan
Jolan, I'm so excited that you are writing a story for the challenge!!!

Jack still hasn't made a move?? Doesn't he realize that someone else could sweep her off her feet???

Brian sounds very interesting - a dozen yellow roses!!! The boy means business!!!

I'm glad you have called this a J/S story or I would probably be more worried than I am!! But, I know for sure that it's going to be a gloriously delicious ride getting to the J/S part and beyond!!! I can't wait!!!

Joy
flip
This ought to be interesting. Maybe this Brian dude will get Jack back on track with Sue!
Becka
A jealous Jack equates to a Jack that admits his love for Sue.. hopefully!

What a great start!! Can't wait for more smile.gif
kidbrother2
You posted! Finally! Which means you must have finished. ... I must go find my poking stick... eyepoke.gif sp's abound! rofl.gif
Kav
I'm sure that this Brian Walker guy is very nice and all but...um...he's not Jack so, well...he's not Jack huh.gif Need I say more?

kav
okie
Hey! I found one of your stories!! Cool! Can't wait to see what you've got in store here. You're off to a good start. wub.gif
webgoof
QUOTE(Kav @ Mar 8 2006, 06:27 PM)
I'm sure that this Brian Walker guy is very nice and all but...um...he's not Jack so, well...he's not Jack huh.gif Need I say more?

kav

nope, no need! biggrin.gif
chelseasoph
Looking forward to how this pans out - hopefully Brian will spur Jack in to action...

Soph
tosca
hey you have my attention......I saw the J/S and PG17 under your title! That's enough for me!! wink.gif
MelissaT
I'm estactic that you're writing a new story, Jo! And a J/S one to boot. But what's this Brian business doing here then? dry.gif

popcorn.gif Eagerly waiting your new post.
Restie
What is there?!?!? Love letter from Brian?! Luce, maybe you could cry what is it aloud!!!! tongue.gif I would love to see Jack's reaction.


rolleyes.gif Restie
suejack05
i was like -----> ohmy.gif oh may jack wake up or sue goes bye bye !!!!!



can't wait for more!!!! popcorn.gif popcorn.gif
jellybean
I think I'm gonna enjoy this challenge biggrin.gif
yannick in my heart
ohhhhhhh i can't wait to see how Jack is going to react, i don't think he's going to like it tongue.gif keep it up
Rosa17
Waiting to see Jack's response to this smile.gif
MissMusketeer
What's it say? Everybody get out your nets and glove cause questions will be flying.
Jolan
Lucy grabbed the mouse out of Sue’s hand and opened the file. “Then what is this?” After Lucy skimmed the page she motioned to Tara. “Come and read this.”


SPRING IS AT HAND

With the smell of spring
there’s new promises that bring
a hope of tomorrow
a new day waiting to be born;
New life at its start
a small beating heart
waiting to carry someone new
through time - joyous, happy,
but also blue

Everything, awaiting, the future’s at hand
what is it holding in for our land?
Politics, sport, the weather report
Time is being counted down
and now, l my friend, why the frown?
You will also be one
of the millions to see
Spring’s promises and what it holds
for you and for me

Love you

xxx



As Lucy read the last line out loud, Tara asked “Who did you get this from?”

“Yeah, who?” Jack piped up.

All eyes drifted off to Jack. “Why are you interested all of a sudden? You had your time, three years to be exact, now it’s someone else’s turn.” Lucy commented as she looked at Jack. She shook her head in disbelief. “ARGH, I don’t get men, why are they always interested in something when it is already taken?”

Bobby walked over to Jack‘s desk, trying to help his friend “Maybe because it’s more fun. The harder it is to hunt for your prey, the more exciting it gets.”

Tara couldn‘t believe what she was hearing. “Is that how you guys think? You animals!”

“Yep sheila, that’s us. And I know some women love that ...” he winked, making Tara all flustered in the process.

“Is that what you’re doing Jack?” Sue gaped at him.

“No, not at all” Bobby slapped Jack in the back of his head. “Ouch, what was that for?”

“Gee, I don’t know. Maybe because you‘re an idiot.”

Myles took the trophy he received after he promoted Randy to a group of elderly people and slammed it on his desk. “Don’t we have anything better to do. I know I have tons of paperwork on my desk that needs to be finished before we go home.”

“WHAT?” they said in unison.

Myles shrugged. “I had to do something to get your attention.”

“Once a piker always a piker ain‘t ya Myles”

“Whatever! Your use of Australian slang, never ceases to befuddle the English language. I'm not a party pooper, I'm simply stating the obvious.“

Raising an eyebrow, the team glanced at each other before looking back to Myles.

“It's springtime, people.......love is in the air......” He took a sip from his coffee “and to quote my less than articulate partner, Yes, Jack you are an idiot!”
marielynnette
QUOTE(Jolan @ Mar 9 2006, 05:07 PM)

“It's springtime, people.......love is in the air......” He took a sip from his coffee “and to quote my less than articulate partner, Yes, Jack you are an idiot!”

Gotta love Myles............he's boorish, but he sure hits the nail right on the head!!
suesfan
QUOTE(Jolan @ Mar 9 2006, 11:07 PM)
“It's springtime, people.......love is in the air......” He took a sip from his coffee “and to quote my less than articulate partner, Yes, Jack you are an idiot!”

Myles always knows how to bring everything together, doesn't he??

Yes, Jack, I would have to agree!! You only get upset when you think Sue is going to either leave or if she starts dating someone!! It's happened so many times, you'd think you would have caught on by now!!!

Joy
Mirjam
Hey, you started a new story! Great start!!! I loved Lucy's outburst towards Jack...we all know he deserved it. But maybe....just maybe this is a reason for him to take the next step.....
yhm
Spring = new beginnings, whether or not it's the second time around. Go for it, Jack ...
okie
Way to go Myles! laugh.gif (I think he has some of the best lines sometimes.)

And take a hint, Jack. Move it or lose it, buddy! dry.gif
tosca
It's about time that the team starts stating things in "simple terms" to Jack....he seems to be a bit "slow in the head" (or maybe heart) when it comes to certain things! Get your act together Mr. Hudson!@!
Colby14
QUOTE(tosca @ Mar 10 2006, 02:17 AM)
It's about time that the team starts stating things in "simple terms" to Jack....he seems to be a bit "slow in the head" (or maybe heart) when it comes to certain things! Get your act together Mr. Hudson!@!

ditto.gif
lilsmoochiegirl
I agree with Myles Jack is an idiot!
suejack05
QUOTE(Jolan @ Mar 10 2006, 02:07 AM)
“It's springtime, people.......love is in the air......” He took a sip from his coffee “and to quote my less than articulate partner, Yes, Jack you are an idiot!”

clapping.gif myles you said it ......


jack get your head start !!!!!!!!! dry.gif



can't wait for more!!!!!! happy.gif
Restie
I don't like the guy who sent this e-mail to Sue (maybe it could be Jack... secretly, I hope), but if it wasn't Jack... I hope he will realise soon how important is Sue for him and start to fight for her love!

bouncing fire.gif Can't wait for it!


rolleyes.gif Restie
ickleails
Jack, Jack, Jack. when you are turtle boy you are going to miss the good times.....

and i love the aussie slang and myles comments, so in charater
okie
Okay, I'm going to come leaping to Jack's defense here. cool.gif I agree he's a little slow in the heart, but come on! Think about it. He's loved and lost so many times before with all those other women, and he really, really, really, really, really, really cares about Sue. He probably hasn't made a move on her yet because he'd rather have Sue in his fantasies then make a move on her and screw the whole thing up. Maybe he'd rather just be friends and colleagues with her then to have his heart broken again.... I dunno. Just a thought. wub.gif unsure.gif

Poor Jack. I'd be more than happy to console him.... wubb.gif
jellybean
QUOTE(Jolan @ Mar 9 2006, 11:07 PM)
Bobby slapped Jack in the back of his head. “Ouch, what was that for?”

“Gee, I don’t know. Maybe because you‘re an idiot.”


rofl.gif I really enjoyed that.

By my calculations Myles isn't the only one piking out in that office*cough Jack cough cough*
Kav
Well I'm enjoying the banter at Jack's expense but Sue still hasn't said anything.... huh.gif

kav
Becka
I couldn't agree more with Myles.. hopefully some serious action will be taken now that Sue is 'prey' blink.gif
Bell
Jolan, I love your Jacks, I just kept on watching them and took forever to read the posts... melting.gif
so, can I ditto everyone? I really think someone should push agent Hudson to the right direction.
kidbrother2
waiting.gif Did you really think, she'd be available forever Jack? shakes head.gif
MissMusketeer
Great job so far, I LOVE IT! Too funny.
ozzie
What a great start, can't wait for more biggrin.gif

wub.gif wub.gif
Jolan
“Come on Sue, you're killing me here.” Lucy beamed. “Who sent you this?”

“Don't make me check your inbox for the email address.” Tara pushed Lucy aside and her hand made a move towards the computer mouse. “Keep in mind that no computer is safe when I get my way with it.”

“NO!” Sue pushed the button on her computer tower till it shut down. “Can't a girl have some privacy around here.”

“We're investigators, what do you expect?” Bobby chuckled from his desk, "Do you forget where you work?" he gestured with outstretched arms, “The walls have eyes and ears! No secret is safe around here!”

Myles stood and crossed the room, “Take Jack! Every person working here knows his true feelings. We all wait with baited breath for him to make his move.”

Jack shifted uncomfortably in his chair. “Didn't you say something about having work to do?”

“C'mon, Sparky!" Bobby laughed, “It doesn't take a genius to figure it out. You sit there all day and stare at the poor girl. You keep waiting and she's eventually gonna look to greener pastures!”

Sue glanced at Jack and frowned. It was true what Bobby said. How long was she expected to wait? She grabbed her purse and headed towards the door, “I'll be at lunch if anyone cares!”

Levi took the bunny in his mouth and he happily trotted after his mistress. His tail wagging in a fast motion.
marielynnette
Here's your chance, Sparky! Go after her! wink.gif
learningtosign
jack, get off your butt and go after them


laugh.gif

cath
ickleails
Sparky move your slow bones and go after the woman you love...
suesfan
Okay, Jack, how much more incentive do you need?? She's going to lunch alone, so get out of your chair and go after her!!! You're losing ground already to whomever is writing these emails!!

Jolan, I am thoroughly enjoying this!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Joy
Colby14
I'm really liking this Jolan biggrin.gif
Jolan
Jumping out of his chair, Jack hit his knee against the desk; wincing in pain as he limped after her. “Sue, wait!”

Seeing Levi heading down the stairs, Jack followed. Holding the railing tight as he made his way down. “She isn’t gonna make it easy for me, is she?” He grumbled.

As Jack finally reached the first floor he checked the hallway for any sign of Sue and Levi. Not seeing either one of them he walked towards the cafeteria. He didn’t even notice Diana Grove who frantically waved her hand at him to gain his attention.

“Jack, why don’t you come and sit here?” She spoke up as she motioned to the empty chair next to her.

“Huh? Oh hi!” Jack raised his hand and waved in a small gesture. He really wasn’t paying any attention to whom he said hi to. It could’ve been the queen of England and he wouldn’t have noticed.

Diana shifted in her chair to face her co-workers again. “Looks like we have a man on a mission. I wonder what he is up to.”

Do you still need to ask?” Marie raised her eyebrow at the curly blonde in front her. “I think he’s trying to find his partner. You know Sue. The pretty blonde with the hearing dog.”

“Maybe,” Diana shrugged. “It’s almost like he’s hunting for his prey. See how his eyes are riveting the area without even blinking. He looks like an eagle trying to find a mouse.”

Scanning the area, Marie pointed her index finger to a spot underneath an Oak tree. “There she is she’s sitting at a table outside, talking to a guy. And I think Jack just found what he was looking for!“

She took a bite of her sandwich. Her mouth still full, she spoke up. “What does she have that I don’t?” When she noticed that Diana tried to say something, Marie intercepted. “Don’t you dare answer that!” She sputtered and crumbles of bread flew out of her mouth.

Diana laughed at Marie. “How would you know what I was gonna say? Anyways, all we can do is dream. This man’s heart is already taken by Miss Thomas!“

Both women leaned back in their chairs; sighing and wishing that some day they’d find their prince charming.
marielynnette
That's right, ladies! Jack has found what he's been looking for.....now if he would just realize it!!
Colby14
I wonder who Sue is talking to
suejack05
2 points for the ladies ...the answer is correct !!!!


can't wait for more!!!
learningtosign
yeah, he's found her, just needs to do something constructive to keep her

men, especialy this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

cath
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