I'm kinda glad I read the angsty part as past tense.

kav

interesting question...
thanks for the flashback, it cleared some of my fears!

Thank goodness Sue's all right. I think Jack's really sweet to be so protective of her. I mean, we can never know what's going to happen, right SueJack05?

missy you are in big trouble!!!

if you don't post then i won't post!! "

so were is that sweet little girl ?!? we know and love?!!?

Where are you suejack05, please post soon!

Just caught up, waiting patiently for some more

waiting for more but not very patiently



cath

Caught up. Love the fuzzies. Love jealous Jack. Love the flashback - although I don't love what happened, I just love how it helped clear some things up for us readers and all.

sorry about that but i will be posting tomorrow the last part to this story as the time is nearing but spring is not finished i intend to do a continuation!!i am really sorry you had to wait for a long time!! hopefully tomorrow will bwe the last part !! if anyone wants a continuation os this story feel free to PM me and till me that you want a continuation !!!

I kind of glad I didn't have to live through that flashback and got the whole story all at once!!

Jealous Jack is incredibly cute!!! Showing his gun was a totally macho thing to do!!!

Suejack, it goes without saying, a continuation is definitely in order!!!

Joy

I think a continuation is definately in order this story is great i love it.

The votes are in, a continuation is required.

Karen

sorry for the delay !! i took my own sweet tme writing this part !!!
hope you like it and hope it ain't to mushy.....never wrote a scene like this.... with out further adieu here is the last post but it doesn't end here...... hints have been dropped for the sequel here...how the sequel will be ...find out ...??

Enjoy!!


Jack opened his apartment door……his hands were on Sue’s eyes…..with Levi trailing behind…..

5 minutes earlier……

“Sue Hun I really need for you to close your eyes it’s a surprise. Would you mind?”Jack asked with a sheepish looking grin on his face …

“Sure but please don’t let me hit a wall.”Sue answered with a wicked grin…..jack placed one of his hand on Sue’s eyes and the other pulled her to him tightly…..he opened the door……

Once sue and jack were inside he slowly removed his hand as he did she gasped….

“oh god jack its beautiful….is this all for me…”sue looked around the apartment was lit in candles and soft scent of wild flowers…..with rose petals on the floor ….it was breath taking….

“Yes it is…”jack answered as she turned to face him….once again she turned around and looked at her surroundings …..What she didn’t notice was that jack was bent down and now on one knee her hand still in his……..

When sue turned around she was stunned …her hand automatically went to her mouth with a gasp as tears started to trail down her cheek…..

“sue since the day you walked into the bullpen demanding a transfer …I knew that you were the one …and it took me longer for me to admit my feelings to you…sue I love you, i need you…i want to come home to you…to wake up in the morning with you in my arms….to not have a reason to kiss you anywhere whether in public or in the bullpen…I want people to know that you are mine and will always be mine…..you are my heart my soul, my everything.... M-A-R-R-Y M-E. .”Jack signed the last part as sue just stood there stunned …..

With out hesitation sue wrapped her arms around jack and through the tears she whispered….

“YES” the answer was music to jack’s ears…..she met him half way …and within a second they were locked in a passionate embrace….jack pulled on sue and closed his mouth with hers…..he placed his hands on her waist as she placed hers on the nape of his neck …..Jack pulled her closer...he couldn’t get enough of her….Sue’s hands moved up his chest …the suit jacket he was wearing came off as Sue’s hands roamed up his shoulders and slid the jacket off….her hands then started to make their way down his chest unbuttoning his shirt buttons one by one ….jack felt sue reach for his belt…Alarm bells went off in jack’s head as he gently pulled away…with her in his arms….as he pulled away she had a confused look on her face…


“Sue we have to stop before we regret doing…“Jack said huskily ….

Sue’s face blushed a deep red color…she knew what she wanted and she also knew that he was the one…the one with whom she is going to spend the rest of her life with…

“Jack I want you ...I need you …”sue said her voice shaking with emotion….as she drew her hands to his chest….

“Sue I though you wanted to wait till marriage.” jack asked with a confused look on his face with a goofy smile that was forming……

“Yes I did but jack. You are the “one”…and i love you so much and I want to show you how much you mean to me. You are my everything. I may not be experienced in this but jack I want you I want you to be my first and my last….”She said with a smile as a blush creped on her cheeks …she lowered her head as she found something interesting to watch not wanting to face jack…..jack felt unconditional love for her at the moment ……he loved her even more at the moment …..He lifted her chin as he tilted his head to meet her eyes…

“I would be honored to be your first and your last…sue I love you so much…”that were the last words he said as passion enveloped them both and jack carried sue to his bedroom without breaking the kiss with the passion with in both of them that was the beginning of a new life …... with Levi near the fireplace in his own doggy world …


Everything Was Right In The World At This Very Second……..But for How Long…???

~~Fade Out~~1

Awww that was lovely And it was not too mushy

Good job, suejack, except the last line. I don't want anything sweet, I want you to go erase it ...

That was great suejack05, i loved the last scene

can't wait for a sequel!

loved it, can't wait for the sequel

cath

YHm i learnt from the best !! that includes you !!! you will see what i mean in the next story?!?

That was beautiful, Suejack!! Not too mushy in the least!!!

Yhm, I agree with Suejack, I wouldn't complain - she's evidently been reading your stories too much!!!

Can't wait for the sequel!!!

Joy

Very nice ending SJ05, not too mushy for my liking.

Like the rest, can't wait for the sequel!

I just got caught up. And wow!!! I am really looking forward to your sequal. Where will that be posted?

I really enjoyed this fanfic. You did a great job.


Good Job



Mallory

very romantic...except for those last few words... I hope to see the sequel somewhere after the challenge is done...

Great!!! Jack finally asked her and she said "YES" !!!!! and the end of your story!!!!

Thank you for this funny, lovely story!!!!


Restie

THat was a great story....very well done.

sweet.
jack and sue are engaged! yay!

Great story.



Hope ~