Hey i just wanted to try this challenge and here i am..Hope you like it !!!!

sorry i have made a mistake it is option 3 and not option 4 i am extremly sorry !!!


Spring cleaning …….

March 21 2006

Spring is one of the four seasons of the year it comes once a year… especially in spring we have spring cleaning …it’s a time in a year to clean out all the unnecessary things in the attics, basements etc …especially closets …spring usually starts from mid march and ends in may …..
one important thing that people like to do in spring time also that makes it their favorite time of the year is playing pranks on the 1st of April that is also know as Aprils fools day ….

It was a beautiful day outside in Washington in DC where birds were chirping in the sky and the sun shining ever so brightly ….

Some people disliked the smell of spring the beautiful hues and colors of the beautiful flowers …but one woman loved spring her second favorite time of the year …

Susan Thomas looked outside her window beside her desk she was looking at the playground across the street from the bureau … where Young women along with their children in the park enjoying the spring air with their loved ones...the smell of blooming flowers in spring …

Jack Hudson the team leader looked over to his partner sue Thomas the love of his life they have been dating secretly without the knowledge of anyone in the pen for over 8 months and they where still in the blissful stage of the relationship that was blossoming like the flowers that blossom in spring …..

There was blinking on sues computer that pulled her out of the day dream …she got an pop up screen of an instant message she clicked on it …

Hi darling

Day dreaming sweetheart is not in the job description in the FBI ….thinking of a certain special agent…..that happens to be jack Hudson that is the best kisser in the world …..

I love you …
I missed having you in my arms ….yesterday ….

JK

Once she read the message she chuckled a little and looked over to see jack who had a silly grin on his face …she started to type …when she clicked send there was a pop up box of an instant message on jack's computer

It's good start, suejack05!!!!

I love to see this two love birds and I am very curious what Sue wrote Jack...

Can't wait for more!!!


Restie

Looking forward to reading more

great start ,

has Luce left the unit?, can't imagine how she hasn't noticed they're dating


or does she have other rthings on her mind????

cath

Coudn't have said it better. Great start!

LOL maybe she is too busy with another agent "

Good start

What did the message say??

I can't believe they've gotten away with dating secretly for over 8 months with Lucy around! I can tell already that I'm going to enjoy this one! Please post again soon!

this is really good!!!

you will find out soon .....would you like to guess!!!!

"Get back to work ... people out there are waiting for your contribution to making the world a better place ... your last written piece of work left too much to the imagination and we need lots of information if we are to successfully complete this challenge ..."

YHM you make me laugh but you inspire me to write

thank you ..... when ever i read all your feed back you guys inspire me to write more !!! thank you!!!!!



Jack clicked open the pop up icon on his computer ….and read ….

Hi lazy bones

If there ever comes a day where we can’t be together keep me in your heart, I‘ll stay there forever ….

I missed you too ….. Can’t wait for Saturday ….spring cleaning…would you like me to help you with that …….

I love you ….

p.s. Jack what ever you do don’t look up……

Jack as soon as he read that he looked up to sue to ask what she meant by that he was shocked to see the surprise visitor that had come into the bullpen ……

By the time jack sent a message back to sue the visitor came up to his desk as he pressed send ….

Sue checked her message as she kept her eyes on jack and the person that entered the bullpen that was headed towards jack’s desk …..

Suzie pie

Pleaseeeeeee help me out here ………… here she comes…. sue come here NOWWWW……..

SAVE ME!!!!!!

Jk

thanks for taking the time to reading what i wrote!!!!

who's the visitor??? Allie??? Lucy??? who???

I don't like the A-word, and it definately isn't Lucy - Jack wouldn't have begged Sue to rescue him...... I'm thinking more like....Randy?

but Randy isn't a she ....maybe it is Eleanor..

I vote for Eleanor

Sue, help him... maybe you could kiss him right there


Restie

Poor Jack! Allie or Eleanor?? Either way is pretty bad

so here is the next post !!!!



The team looked up and saw Eleanor rippendorf walk into the bullpen...and head straight for jack’s desk ….but this was the new and improved Eleanor .She now had blonde hair just like Sue’s ….

This was the first time since the bachelor auction that Eleanor made an appearance in the bullpen. All thinking that she might be here for jack this time around that bought grins all over the bullpen.Everyone sniffed a chuckle…at how she looked …

“Well if it isn’t Eleanor rippendorf how are you.” Myles was the first one to greet Eleanor as the team shot him looks …he chooses to ignore them ….

“Well I am good how are you guys the finest team in the FBI.”Eleanor asked as she kept looking at jack who was forcing a smile on his handsome face ….she saw at the corner of her eye the blonde woman moving closer to jack’s desk as she just kept repeating to herself that “I am going to win this time and not the goody too shoes sue Thomas”

Bobby felt like laughing as he saw her see sue head towards jack’s desk and settle near to jack at the edge of the desk so she could see what brought Eleanor here in the pen.....But he had to suppress the laughter that threatened to turn itself on any time now…

“So Eleanor what brings you here to our domain?” Lucy asked as she moved closer to Sue’s desk

LOL, I was right

yeah Eleanor, what brings you here ...

Eleanor?????? I can't even begin to imagine her with blond....

Poor Eleanor...many have tried, but few still remain....

A blonde Eleanor?!

*shudders*

waiting to see where your story takes us

Can't wait for more! Love it so far, Sue save Jack!

poor Jack, not Eleanor.............think he might need his gun

It's hard to believe that Eleanor went to dye her hair blonde just to get Jack! Although not entirely impossible! Can't wait for more!

Blonde? How'd she get in there in the first place? Don't they need clearance?

I think she already has clearance.. She's some friend of the director or something..

I have a question... did Sue get rid of Jack's messages or is Lucy going to find them?

Eleanor with blonde is

here is more !!!!!


“Well since the fun raiser went so well the last time the sponsors would like for you participate in the spring funfair if that is okay with you I already asked Mr. Garret and he approved of this.” after a little pause she continued .”The shooting will take place tomorrow if you don’t mind...There will be bids placed on you gentleman like the last time but there will be some festive activities like kissing competition, dance etc...So what do you say?”Eleanor explained as she kept on glancing to jack and giving him mixed signals with winks…that everyone noticed …but kept it to themselves not wanting to make Eleanor feel bad by laughing their heads off…

Jack looked at sue... She had a mischievous grin on her face …she then turned her attention to jack she winked at him...And turned back towards Eleanor ….

“I wanted to ask weather you are free for lunch and if you could accompany me to “le Bistro “for lunch my treat. “Asked Eleanor as she looked at jack with her eyes on him while twirling her blonde curls to look cute ….just like sue did at times but much sexier….

But before jack could answer bobby stepped in…

Bobby better be bailing his buddy out ...

you know bobby !!!!

if Bobby isn't gonna help, i think jack might just need to shoot him and eleanor


or sue could come in and give him a kiss (Jack not bobby) that should set everyone straight

cath

Somehow I think Bobby is going to pull a trick on Jack to get him in trouble ..

you will find out soon !!!!! promise nothing dangerous !!!

here is what happened and this is the last post for today!!!


But before jack could answer bobby stepped in…

“Off course sparky has time he has all the time in the world so he will be meeting you there ...” bobby answered with a smirked on his face ….

“Bobby is right he would love for you to have lunch with you isn’t that right sparky.”Sue said as she looked from jack to Eleanor to bobby and then back to jack …..Jack gave her a look that said he will deal with her later....”ohh ooh I blow it “she thought ….

“Yeah that would be lovely I will meet you there at 12:45.”Jack said to Eleanor as he forced a smile ….

“Okay then .I will be seeing you then ...Bye...have a good day everyone …I know I am going to have a wonderful day ...”she said as she walked out of the bullpen …when she did …bobby brusted laughing ..But jack pushed his chair back and stood up angrily …

“Well crash enjoying yourself.” jack muttered to bobby …

“Certainly am enjoying myself …thanks Sheila I really need the laugh.”Replied bobby as he had a goofy grin on his face that matched Sue’s as they both looked at jack innocently.

“Thomas conference room 2 NOW.” jack said before rushing out of the bullpen irately as sue follows him out the doorway as well….

(feedback is always welcome )

I'm not sure whether to or so I'll just wait and see.

kav

methinks Sue and Bobby are in the mire here

she'll have to work very, very hard to make up for this............

good excuse for some kissing perhaps???

cath

Sounds a very good excuse for and make up time

Oh, let him go to lunch.... Besides, if there is to be a kissing contest, Jack might want to start practising, right? What better way to start that with Sue, in the Conference room!!! Hm, on second though......DON'T let him practise on Eleanor!!!

Can't wait for the next part...What will happen at the lunch???

If I were Jack I probably would have decked Bobby for that one. But since we're here to have fun, I say let the kissing begin in conference room 2. Jack can always do a payback later or in another story. For some reason the only thing I can think of with Spring Cleaning is throwing out the trash and the only thing that comes to mind is Eleanor. Sorry Eleanor Can't wait to see what's next suejack

well here is the next part!!


Jack reached the conference room first and sue was right behind him when he took her by the hand and pulled her in the room with him before locking the door …
Jack turned to sue and crossed his arms across his chest as he looked at her waiting for an explanation for what happened in the bullpen with Eleanor ….

“So you want to explain what happened in there.”Jack finally asked sue whose focus was his lips as he spoke... “

“Uhh ...It was nothing really.”Sue answered with an innocent grin on her face
while trying to look at jack …

“Nothing you say then tell me why you my own girlfriend agreed for me to have lunch with Eleanor of all people.”Jack asked sue as he stepped forward to sue...

“Well I really want you to tell her that you and I are a couple and cause if you don’t then she might want you all to her self like I do you I am really sorry sweetie its ….”Sue muttered to jack she spoke so softly that jack almost didn’t hear her.

Jack started to chuckle so she did want him all for her self …sue looked at him with eyes slowly starting to water …..He stepped closer and took her by the arm and brought her closer to him… he lent on the table for support as he wrapped his arms around Sue’s waist and pulled her tightly toward him …

“She has no rights over me whereas for you missy you have every right and I will make it clear to Eleanor that I am your special agent and not hers is that okay.” Jack replied with a smirk on his face …Sue’s hand went up and smacked jack on his arm.

“He what was that for.”

“Oh nothing a thank you I guess.” sue answered with a mischievous grin that formed on her beautiful face …

“Well a thank you is suppose to be with a kiss and not a smack on the arm darlin.”He was silenced by sue who placed her lips over his...Jack stood up and pulled sue closer feeling she was not close enough with out breaking the kiss …she deepened the kiss as her hands went up to his neck …he gentle broke the kiss and placed his forehead against hers for some air …as so many times before…then again he tugged at her lower lip ..His hands tangled in her hair, tugging her head back gently so he had better access to her mouth. His kiss was possessive and tender, edged with a bit of desperation until she clung to him, and it still wasn’t enough. He settled her closer to him; close enough so that she was wrapped around him….just then there was a knock on the door as he pulled gently away from sue his arms still around here he took one hand and signed “door” to her …

woohoo as bobby would say


i think sue should go for lunch with them, make it very obvious that he is off limits

holding hands, kissing n all that..............



cath

Nice little fuzz moment there

Don't you just love fuzzies

yes i do

You know, Eleanor invited Jack, she never said Jack needed to come alone " " "

And Jack being the gentleman he always is ... he could even bring a date for Eleanor ... say Randy or Howie !!!

Maybe I will just sit and wait ... and shut my mouth (more like my fingers) ...

Like the way you think Marlo!!!

He could take the whole team along as 'moral support' that would get Bobby back...

Soph