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yhm
Hi, ladies, this little thing popped into my head while I was doing something else so I thought I'd put it here.

I'm dedicating this to everyone who's ever taken the trouble to read and comment to my stuff ... you know who you are! tongue.gif

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SPRING CLEANING


Sunday was supposed to be an easy day. It usually was for them; shopping, going to the park, taking care of the laundry, getting their cars washed, the simple everyday things that a couple did. But today was different. Today, they decided to clean out one of their bedrooms.

**********

Perhaps you’d care to explain what this is?” he asked, laughing at a mangled lump of unidentifiable origin.

She stared at it blankly for a moment before she burst out laughing. “So that’s where it went. That is … was … an old slipper. It was wet from the rain when I had to go out to rescue the paper and then I left them out to dry. I never saw this one again and I always wondered where it went.”

“You never thought to check your closet for one missing slipper?”

“No. I had the other one to keep me company.”

He grinned, reaching over to pull her head in for a kiss. “That’s what I love about you: that eternal optimistic Pollyanna spirit.”

“How else could I put up with you?” she retorted, kissing him back.

***********

Rest came an hour later. She made them a pitcher of iced tea and a tray of sandwiches. They surveyed the three piles of things before them. There was a huge pile of items ‘Beyond Salvation’.

“So we trash those?” he asked for confirmation.

She nodded.

“I’ll take them to the dump.”

“You know,” she said slowly, “not everything is beyond salvation though. I just don’t need these things anymore. Not that I don’t want them.”

He smiled. And quickly turned her attention to a smaller pile of ‘Good but not wanted’. He knew her well enough to know she was capable of replacing everything.

“This is sad, isn’t it? To be good but not wanted?”

He eyed her, wondering if there was a deeper meaning to her words. Her thoughts seemed to be far away, but she didn’t appear sad so he let it pass.

The last pile was the pile of ‘Treasures’. He was secretly thrilled to note that his first gift to her was in the pile. It was old and well worn and obviously well loved. But she’d put it in this pile. It did his heart a world of good.

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I don’t know how all of this is going to fit!” she wailed. “I never knew I had so much stuff and there's still another cupboard to clear.”

He grinned. “So we go through the lot again and cull … ruthlessly.”

“Ruthlessly? I never knew you had it in you to be ruthless!”

“Oh, I can be. My pursuit of you was pretty ruthless … eventually.”

She giggled. “That wasn’t ruthless; that was a piece of cake. I was waiting for you the whole time.”

“Oh, really?”

“Hmmm … but I’m glad you see yourself as ruthless. Imagine what it might be like if you’d decided you were slow and steady?”

**********

Now you’ve done it!” he growled, making a grab for her. “Now you’ve gone and made me upset. I need to be consoled … comforted … ”

He was.

**********

Getting everything to the dump alone took two trips. The trips could’ve been completed in under an hour but they made a stop to check in on a special store and then they were side tracked after parking the car.

By the time they had packed the ‘Treasures’ into his car, it was close to dinner time. They called it a day, showered quickly at her apartment and took the boxes to his home, opting to stroll to the nearby café for dinner.

**********

Choosing what to keep and throw had always been her problem, she confessed over dinner. She wanted to keep everything because they reminded her of little pieces of her life. Throwing things out was like slamming the door to little pockets of life.

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Letting go is never easy,” he said, understanding. “But sometimes, it’s because you need the space for something even better when it comes along. It happens to all of us as we grow and change and seek different things.”

**********

Even for you,” she said, looking horrified.

“What about me?” he asked, frowning in concern.

“I’ve been so wrapped up about clearing my things I never asked about yours! Or helped you with yours! I’m so sorry.”

He smiled and took her hand to kiss it.

“I’ve been throwing stuff out … gradually over the months. Don’t worry about me. I never had that much to begin with. I’m not a hoarder, unlike some people.”

She swatted him, grinning.

**********

As she helped him carry her boxes into his apartment, she gasped at the transformation. Gone was the familiar green and brown colour scheme of his living room. In its place was blue, white and shots of gold.

“Surprised?”

“Yes!” She put the boxes down and threw herself into his arms. “You redecorated while we were at my place!”

“Yep. I had the men in over the last couple of weekends.”

“That’s why you didn’t ever want to do anything here. You incredible man! It’s gorgeous. I love it!”

**********

Now do you want to see the bedroom?” He wiggled his eyebrows suggestively.

“Yes!”

He laughed at her excitement. He took her hand and pulled her up the short flight of stairs.

“Close your eyes,” he said.

She obeyed, trusting him completely. When she felt the tap on her shoulder, she opened her eyes.

**********

Instantly, her eyes filled with tears and then she smiled.

The smile was worth the world to him.

They’d discussed their ideas and colour schemes and each had made suggestions, rejections and eventually arrived at certain compromises. Here, before her, was the actualisation of their plans. He had kept his bed, as agreed, but the walls had been repainted and the furniture had been stripped and repainted in lighter shades.

She recognised the furnishings from a catalogue she had spotted and squealed over. She’d rejected the set as too expensive. He’d quietly bought the lot.

And here it was: her dream bedroom. And she had him to share it with.

**********

Never, never let anyone tell you you’re not a sentimental romantic,” she said, grabbing him once more. “You’re spoiling me!”

“I should do this more often. It seems to bring out the vixen in you,” he laughed.

She wrinkled her nose at him. “You can spoil me all you want.”

After kissing him thoroughly and going though every change in the room making suitably loving comments, she sighed deeply.

**********

Getting married is more fun than I thought,” she said happily.

“You ever thought it might not be fun?” He looked hurt.

She rolled her eyes at him but she was suddenly serious.

“I had my worries … you, me, learning to live together and deal with the day to day aspects of life … I had my moments. It’s two separate lives coming together and two sets of needs, and I know I have more needs than you do.”

He thought hard. “That’s true. You want me to reconsider this whole thing?”

She threw a cushion at him. “Don’t you dare. I’ve cleaned out my apartment … my closets … I couldn’t bear to think I have nowhere to stay.”

“Oh, so you’re just moving in … I’m really just getting a flatmate … ”

She laughed. “No, darling, you’re getting a wife … in a week. It’s too late for you to run.”

Jack pulled her against him.

“Who says I’m running, Sue Hudson-to-be?”


THE END
Mirjam
melting.gif That was precious! First I wondered who the couple was, but with the mention of his first gift to her, old and well worn, I just knew it had to be Jack and Sue (and the hockey sweater!).

Very clever, using the first letters of the challenge! You know, there are 3 more challenges out there? whistling.gif"
learningtosign
oooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh what a beautiful post, loved the memories of the hockey jersey


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cath
Restie
That was wonderful spring cleaning... cleaning which augurs something new and wonderful... the best reason for the cleaning tongue.gif

Nice, lovely and touching story!!!!

thank you.gif thank you.gif thank you.gif FOR SHARING IT WITH US!!!


rolleyes.gif Restie
Kav
QUOTE(yhm @ Apr 5 2006, 03:17 AM)

“Oh, I can be. My pursuit of you was pretty ruthless … eventually.”

She giggled. “That wasn’t ruthless; that was a piece of cake. I was waiting for you the whole time.”

“Oh, really?”

“Hmmm … but I’m glad you see yourself as ruthless. Imagine what it might be like if you’d decided you were slow and steady?”

rofl2.gif That cracks me up!!!!! I loved it yhm. Great idea tied in to Spring Cleaning.

kav
Bell
hmmm.gif Spring Cleaning, eh??? Clever my friend and a wonderful, cheerful little story, simply loved it!
suejack05
hun!! trouble !! nup!! more like enjoying my self reading your work its simply amazing !!!!


thanks YHM you do have two more to go if you want !!!

i loved this story!! you made me dance2.gif and rofl2.gif and wub2.gif !!


pfff why did it have to come to an end !!! i really enjoyed it!!!! thanks hun!!


FROM EAST TO WEST YHM IS THE BEST!!!! dance.gif
Ivory
I can't imagine spring cleaning being any more enjoyable.

Great little story.
JesusFreak718
QUOTE
He grinned, reaching over to pull her head in for a kiss. “That’s what I love about you: that eternal optimistic Pollyanna spirit.”

“How else could I put up with you?” she retorted, kissing him back.

rofl.gif

QUOTE
“Ruthlessly? I never knew you had it in you to be ruthless!”

“Oh, I can be. My pursuit of you was pretty ruthless … eventually.”

She giggled. “That wasn’t ruthless; that was a piece of cake. I was waiting for you the whole time.”

wubb.gif

QUOTE
“Getting married is more fun than I thought,” she said happily.

“You ever thought it might not be fun?” He looked hurt.

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QUOTE
She threw a cushion at him. “Don’t you dare. I’ve cleaned out my apartment … my closets … I couldn’t bear to think I have nowhere to stay.”

“Oh, so you’re just moving in … I’m really just getting a flatmate … ”

She laughed. “No, darling, you’re getting a wife … in a week. It’s too late for you to run.”

Jack pulled her against him.

“Who says I’m running, Sue Hudson-to-be?”
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MelissaT
Aw, girl, that was a most wonderful piece of work. So sweet and funny and all at the same time. My eyes are swollen from all the work I had to do but your story just put a smile on my face. biggrin.gif

Thank you! thank you.gif
yhm
Thanks so much for the comments.

It was fun writing this ... and, hey, no cliffies!
suesfan
Yhm, that was just wonderful!! I love the way you worked "Spring Cleaning" into the beginning of the paragraphs!! If I quoted, I would have to quote the whole thing, because it is superb!! The love and banter.........!!! **sigh**

Thanks so much for sharing with us!!!

Joy
christyb
Oh that was so sweet! Great piece of work!
JesusFreak718
QUOTE(yhm @ Apr 6 2006, 10:11 AM)
It was fun writing this ... and, hey, no cliffies!

rofl.gif Miracles do happen!
yhm
QUOTE(JesusFreak718 @ Apr 7 2006, 12:59 AM)
QUOTE(yhm @ Apr 6 2006, 10:11 AM)
It was fun writing this ... and, hey, no cliffies!

rofl.gif Miracles do happen!

Oh, now you've done it, JF.

I'm relooking the OTHER thing ...
chelseasoph
Great story!

I was wondering who the couple was all the way through, should have guessed!!!

Had me smiling all through!!!

Soph
Rosa17
wub2.gif Lovely and cleverly written little story well done smile.gif
JesusFreak718
QUOTE(yhm @ Apr 6 2006, 08:51 PM)
QUOTE(JesusFreak718 @ Apr 7 2006, 12:59 AM)
QUOTE(yhm @ Apr 6 2006, 10:11 AM)
It was fun writing this ... and, hey, no cliffies!

rofl.gif Miracles do happen!

Oh, now you've done it, JF.

I'm relooking the OTHER thing ...

Uh-oh. Can I take it back? unsure.gif Um, perhaps I should just apologize to the rest of y'all right now...
lilsmoochiegirl
J/S!!!! AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!


This is perfect, yhm! Short and Sweet!
LizzyM87
Aww! Very cute! I could definitely sense the camaraderie there, but the one that's befitting to an engaged couple. You captured that well.

A delightful read!
LeviCool
Great acrostic. You never cease to entertain us, yhm,do you? biggrin.gif
yhm
QUOTE(LeviCool @ Apr 8 2006, 06:29 PM)
Great acrostic. You never cease to entertain us, yhm,do you? biggrin.gif

I try ... wacko.gif

Thank you all so much for stopping by to read and for taking the trouble to drop a response. I'm really glad you liked this cos it was so much fun to write. smile.gif
tis*me!
Great story! Like LeviCool said, great acrostic -- very clever! Thanks for sharing! I really enjoyed it! smile.gif
Catspaw
Yayness! I just read the story, and enjoyed it thoroughly! I loved the acrostic, and trying to figure out for sure who the people were, and the style of the story. It was very enjoyable! biggrin.gif
kw9171
cute
loved how u used the first letter of spring cleaning for each little blurb.
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