That was wonderful and you managed to get B/T in it as well as J/S- brillant lass brillant...

This was a great paragraph.




Thanks for sharing this lovely story.

I love it! Raindrops on roses!!! What a perfect theme! Bravo!

Oreo -- that was fantabulous!!!!! I'm only sorry that I didn't get to read it as it was posted. I was kind of battling my own deadline! You constantly amaze me with your creativity! You have to be the most romantic person I know -- or your guy is!! I loved the whole romance angle with Donna and D and Tara's game?! Mr. Chocolate Eyes???? and the fight!!!! Oh it was priceless from beginning to end. You are the queen of romantic comedy!

kav

Great story.

Lucky D & Donna having such great friends that will change their plans to include their kids at the drop of a hat.

What a great idea to use Rain as a theme!!The weather cooperated nicely for them as well!!

Soph

Oreo, that was just incredible!! I love reading a story about D and Donna - and, you made the whole thing so romantic!!! **sigh**

I love the theme and all the surprises!! The "little" umbrella from Tara was perfect!! Everything was perfect!! Thank you so much for the visuals too!!

You did manage to sneak in a moment with Jack and Sue - I love the game and Jack deciding how the game should go!!!

Thank you for sharing a very romantic, funny, wonderful story with us!!!

Joy

I love your Donna and D story. Married love is so different than new love and you showcased it so well. It was written well and portrayed so vividly. D is so awesome as a married man.

Loved the kids and the fun they had...silly drunk man...

So glad you did a D and Donna story! It was great! I loved how the whole team pitched in to help! Thanks for sharing!

I can't really add more things to say that haven't been said already!

This was a wonderful story and I enjoyed reading it from the beginning till the end

Great Job! I loved this story.....D is so romantic and it's nice to see a different side of love for a change.....

I enjoyed reading it immensely!

That was absolutely wonderful. I loved how you wrote D and Donna together and the treasure hunt was perfect. The roses and the notes attached were beautiful. The game and the hockey match were a wonderful and humerous idea.

A wonderful story, thank you for sharing.

Sairs

Love romantic MARRIED love!!

D/D great!!

Thanks,

That was so sweet.



Hope ~