Great post, Cath!

Tracy

It's so loving of Jack to go at Sue's pace!!!

Joy

last chapter, hope you've enjoyed it, sorry can't do honeymoon. imagine this chapter multiplied and lots of romantic gondola rides!!

Chapter 21

Waking late the following morning he realised she had slipped her nightie off and she was even more beautiful than he had imagined, her hand was resting just below his waist, her head resting on his chest……

Unsure whether she was awake he kissed her gently on the top of her head, surprised when she whispered ‘morning handsome……. Love you………’

As he moved gently and their lips met a fire was lit in their hearts and bodies which consumed them both as they expressed their love and desires…………

Leaving their room only long enough to attend church in the evening and making full use of room service, they then remained there until booking out Monday morning to head for the airport.

‘Venice………? We’re going to Venice…………?’ Sue could barely keep the excitement out of her voice, ‘how did you know I’ve always wanted to go there…………?’

‘Your dad told me………. I didn’t know what to organise…….. I didn’t want it to be somewhere you’d hate…….. he said you’d written a book when you were a kid…. You’re dream wedding……… he couldn’t find it but he and your mom remembered the horse drawn carriage and Venice………….’ Jack knew he would give her the world if he could; his love was growing minute by minute,

Sue blushed, she remembered the book, she’d written it when she was 10….. thrown it away when she was 15, her dreams shattered when a boy at school had dated her once then told her she was defective and not worth the effort, particularly since she wouldn’t go to bed with him………. She’d pretty well given up on a dream wedding……… well any wedding at all really, never again imagined romantic gondola rides with the man she loved beside her.

Her dream wedding had been surpassed over the weekend; she could feel the tears trickling down her face.

‘You Ok, Sue?…….did I do something wrong………..?’ he asked, panic rising in his throat………. He hadn’t expected her to start crying on him.

‘Happy, Jack just so happy………….. I had my dream wedding and more…….. just marrying you was a dream come true…….. the carriage and this…….. it’s all so wonderful……………. I love you…………..’ she wrapped her arms around him, moving her head to meet his lips not caring who was watching, she loved this man and she wanted the world to know……………………..

FADE

That was lovely Cath. I always wanted to go to Venice. I loved the aprt about the book she wrote.

That was a lovely story cath and i'm so glad I was along for the ride!!!

Such talent!

Jenny

Beautiful ending! Wonderful story! I definitely enjoyed! Thanks so much for sharing Cath! I'm sorry to see it end!



Tracy

Cath, that was a beautiful ending, and I can just imagine how wonderful the honeymoon will be!!!

Thanks for once again sharing your amazing talent with us!!!

Joy

thank you cath for sharing your talent with us it was a beautiful story!! it was the perfect ending!!


can't wait for your next stories which i am already reading!!! and more

Thank you for writing such a beautiful story for us to enjoy

Well done! I loved all the warm fuzzies I got when playing catch up!

kav

What a beautiful way for Sue to introduce "herself" to her new husband. That was perfect.

Thanks for a great story, Cath.

Cath, that was a beautiful story! And yet another sweet gesture on Jack's part asking her dad and all where to take her. Venice is a romantic place...

Cath, it was wonderful end!!! I love Jack's caring behaviour, his unconditional love to her !!!!

The last post was definitely


FOR SHARING THIS STORY WITH US!!!!!


Restie

Wonderful, Cath! I loved the way Jack organized Sue's dream wedding, and Venice(sigh) it really is romantic!

Hmm...I just replied but my computer ate my reply, I guess....

Well, as I was saying, I loved this story. Really liked Levi's POV and Jack's reassurance for Sue. Great!!

I just read this from beginning to end, while at work. You had me sobbing at my desk....ok, not sobbing, but there were tears and if I had been at home alone, I would have sobbed. This was a fantastic story! You are a GREAT fluff writer!!!

Great writing, Cath!

Jack ... that was truly romantic !!!!

must of missed this story cath but caught up
with it and it was very romantic loved it lin

wonderful story!! You had me enthralled.

this was an amazing story, I simply loved it....

so sweet
loved how levi was the one to get them together.
their wedding was so beautiful.