I'm not liking the sounds of that.... Allie is heartless woman...And Jack...what's wrong with him? We all know which woman he should be with and it's definitely not with that witch!

Great job, Mallory! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

As I said before: Sue had better become a wedding crasher. Is Bobby going to be the best man????? Cos if so, he could stop Jack from making the worst mistake of his life. Here is my solution to the whole J/A thing:


D handcuffs the bride. Tara brings in Sue. Bobby beats some sense into Jack. Jack and Sue run off together. Honeymoon somewhere and live happily ever after. What do you think???? Or Jack could just come to his senses before and save us all the trouble!

Jenny

jenny you gave me an idea!! hope you like it !!


D and sue walk together out in the parking garage before turning to face sue…
“Sue you are under arrest.”D said as he handcuffed sue to him…
“What D what are you doing. You can’t arrest me I did nothing wrong” Sue yelled at D as she tried to open the cuffs…
“Sue you and I have a wedding to attend to.”
At the church
Bobby and jack stand side by side….but before jack could speak. Bobby slapped jack over the head.
“What was that for.” jack asked angrily rubbing where bobby hit him
“That was for being an idiot and going to ruin your life by marrying the goody two shoes.”
mal where are you!!

SueJack05 I love it!!!!!!!! If only Mallory would only get her butt back here and do something like this all would be well. Sorry, keep on quoting you SueJack05, I'm going to shut up now. I posted a comment just for you SueJack05 on Mission Impossible and i posted more story for you Mallory, so you have to post now!*says truimphantly* I'm off now!

If only it would turn out like that, we could hope and pray

can't wait for more

Please hurry back soon

alternatively someone could just shoot Allie

working for the FBI they must know someone who could take her out!!!!!!!!!

cath

Let's skip the whole arresting Sue part and arrest Allie...

I have to agree, that is the best idea so far

Why not??? Go for it. Mallory, I know you are posting today, so i'm just sitting here and waiting.

cath - the only thing wrong with that is that it might land them in jail for a looong time and then they wouldn't be able to witness the wedding. Grrr Allie! Mallory, I have noticed that in most of your recent fics, you have Allie disturbing the peace! Me is not likin the whole A-word thing. I cannot even bring myself to say her name. Drama, drama, drama. Honestly, after you've finished, can you write a J/S fic that is purely fluff???? Cos I'm dubbing you the queen of angst at the moment. Let's see if you can add fluff to your resume. {sp?} in England we call it a CV.

More soon please!

Jenny

Here is the next part everyone, Enjoy, this is for you Jenny since you have been waiting so patiently for me. Thanks. Enjoy!!!!



Jack headed home as soon as he left Allie's he wanted to go talk to Sue but he knew she would not be up so he had to wait till the morning to talk to her. He really wanted to talk to Sue and see if she will go his wedding, It was really important that she attended. He got to his apartment and went to bed.


THE NEXT DAY IN THE BULLPEN:


Jack was sitting at his desk he was waiting on Sue to come in, He really wanted to talk. Lucy kept on watching Jack, she could tell he kept on looking out toward the door. Lucy got up and walked to his desk.


" Jack what you doing?

" What you mean? He asked looking down doing his paperwork.

" Jack dont do that, you know exactly what I mean.

Jack looked up at her. " No I dont Lucy, I think you have gone crazy, quit looking at me that way.

" Jack you keep on looking out the door, are you waiting on someone or what?

" Yes I want to talk to Sue, is she coming in today?

Lucy looked him and didnt know what to say. " Should I tell him. She thought.

" Lucy what is it?

" What is what?

" Lucy dont make me get up from this desk and hurt you. Jack said pretty demanding.

" You wouldnt hurt a female now would you?

" I might. Just tell me, what is going on? Where is Sue? Jack asked again.

" You didnt hear?

" Hear what?

" Maybe Sue should tell you, not me.

Jack started to get up from his chair. LUCY DOTSON YOU TELL ME RIGHT NOW!!!!!.


" Ok, Sue is not coming in today, and the matter of fact she isnt coming back.

" WHAT? What does that mean?

" It means she quit.

" What? Why? It is me isnt it? She doesnt want to be around me? Jack asked feeling a little angry at Sue for acting like this.

" Jack all I know is that Sue was not happy working here so she talked to Garrett and he let her go.

Jack shook his head. " She was happy Lucy, she is doing this cause she is not happy that I am getting married. What a friend she is. Jack said and looked down.

" Jack how would you feel if Sue was getting married to David? Tell me would you attend the wedding? Lucy asked.

She got him there, he didnt know how to answer that. She was right he would be very upset if Sue married someone else besides him. What was he saying?

" Jack. Lucy tried again.

" That is different Lucy, Sue is not getting married, she needs to support her best friend.

" Well her best friend would tell her before now, Jack dont you.... Lucy started.

" Dont I what?

" Nevermind. Lucy said and walked off.

" Wait Lucy, where is Sue working?

" I cant tell you that, that is not your business.

" Lucy come on, if you dont tell me then I will come to the apartment tonight and talk to Sue then.

" Fine, she is working at the school now that Amanda goes too.

" I will go to her now. Jack said and headed toward the School for the deaf.

" JACK I DID NOT MEAN FOR YOU TO GO DOWN THERE NOW!!!!. Lucy yelled.

" Great what did I do, Sue is going to kill me. Lucy said.

Tara over heard the conversation and she went up to Lucy.

" Hey Maybe Sue will tell him what she thinks, Dont worry Sue can handle herself.

" I know that but she didnt want Jack down there. he will ruin everything. Lucy said.

" Is Sue hurting? Tara asked.

Lucy looked at her. " Yes very much, She has feelings for Jack, she thought he would ask her out and they would be getting married one day.

" Poor Sue, hey you never know Jack might not go thru the wedding.

" I dont know. We will see.

" So Sue is not going to the wedding? Tara asked.

" No, she said it will hurt too much.

" Yeah I would have to agree with her there.

" Yeah. Lucy said and got back to work so did Tara. Then Tara looked up.

" Hey Lucy, I got a plan.

" For?

" To get rid of Allie.

" Really? Lucy eyes lid up.

" Really, and get Sue and Jack together, you wanna help?

" You bet. I never liked Allie. So what is the plan?






Mallory

i'm a tad confused,

jack would be sad if sue married anyone but him but he thinks it's ok for him to marry allie,


has he regressed somewhere along the line?


cath

Was Jack knocked on the head as a child??!! He thinks it's okay that he can marry an old flame but fumes at the thought of Sue getting married to David. *coughhypocritecough*

Tara has a plan? Awesome! Does it involve kidnapping Allie and sending her to a mountain-ous area where there are hillbillies?

Glad to see you back

Wow wonder what Tara's plan is? Hope it's good and Allie gets whats coming to her.

Can't wait for more

yeah, but you can't bame Allie. Jack is just too cute for our own good, his own good and Sue's own good!

That is very true, too cute for his own good

Lets hope what Allie has got planned for Sue isn't to horrible

or she could have her crated up and sent overseas for a while,

in a box with air holes so she doesn't die of course

cath

Ooohhh what is the plan to get rid of Allie???? I hope that it's something good!

Mal just got caught up on your story and this is all I have to say: You really have a penchant for bringing Allie up, putting her with Jack, and riling up the crazy fanfic ladies dontcha?!

Anything to get rid of Allie!!!

Poor Allie, do you think she has a complex from us all? But on the other hand, Jack does belong with Sue.

kav

Kav, if Allie has a complex from us all then it sure hasn't stopped her from showing up in fanfic world way too many times to torture us all by taking dear Jack away from sweet Sue. Allie...*shudder*

Please come back soon Mallory!

Take care,
Kristen

I know I have not been posting lately I have been really busy, But I am leaving for the beach tomorrow afternoon but I wanted to post on this fanfic. Enjoy.




THE SCHOOL OF THE DEAF:


Sue was working with Amanda and some other deaf kids when Jack walked in. Jack saw her but he had to go the sectary's desk first.

" Sir may I Help you?

" Yes I would like to speak to Sue Thomas.

" Can I ask who you are?

" Yes, I am Jack Hudson, May I speak with her please?

" Let's see if she wants to talk. Hold on.


The sectary goes to the desk where Sue and the kids are.

" Sue I am sorry to interrupt but I have a gentleman here to speak with you.

" Who is it? Sue asked.

" Jack Hudson.

Sue rolled her eyes, how did he know I was here. I bet it was lucy I am going to kill her. Sue thought.

" Ok send him back here.

" Ok Miss. Thomas. The sectary goes back to Jack and told him he has 5 mins and that is it.

Jack walks past her and goes to Sue. Sue signed to Amanda. " I will be right back. Amanda signed ok and said hey to Jack.

Sue walks in one of the teacher's lounges and Jack behind her. She closed the door.

" Ok Jack what you want.

" I want to talk to you and I want to know why you are avoiding me.

" Jack I have not been avoiding you, I just been really busy.

" Ok then why did you quit then?

" What?

" Sue why did you quit the FBI? I know you did it because of me. Right?

"Jack I have my reasons and I dont have to explain myself to you.

" Sue please come to my wedding, Allie does not mind you come, I already asked her.

Sue started to feel angry. " When do I need permisson from Allie to come to your wedding?

" Well you dont, but you just said that you were not going to attend.

" Well I am not. Sue paused and looked at Jack she could tell that he really wanted her there. You want to know why I will not attend.

" Yes please tell me.

" I will feel very uncomfortable, I wont understand nothing cause you guys are not facing me. I am deaf Jack and if I cant see your lips then I wont understand, you of all people should know that by now. Sue said.

" Sue I do understand, I can get an interper for you so you can understand, to make it easy for you.

" No Thanks Jack, I dont need your pity or anyone elses, Everyone would just stare and think I am just stupid. They would say look at that girl she cant hear, why is she at this wedding. Stuff like that. I have seen it before in the past and it hurts let me tell ya.

Jack touched Sue's hand. " Sue dont say that, you are not stupid.

" Think what you want Jack but I will not be attending your wedding, and I wish you would leave me alone and quit asking me. I dont care to go and see you marry that witch. Now if you will excuse me I have to get back to Amanda and the kids. Sue said and walked out of the teacher's lounge.






A note: I am gone for the beach so no post this weekend. Take care and I will see you next week.



Mallory

Sue's right. Allie's a witch! Me thinks that maybe someone may knock some sense into Jack. I don't mind if it's Allie, Bobby or even Sue, but please stop Jack from making the biggest mistake of his life!!! That was great Mallory!!!!

Jenny

yup i'd have to agree allie is a witch

someone definately needs to knock some sense into jack........... i'm available!!

cath

ditto to that i am getting on a plane tonight to fly out !!


i can give you a hand there cath!!

can't wait for more!!

Yikes, this is not going well!

Ack How can you go to the beach at a time like this?

kav

I know, but some people need to have a break from people pestering them. Sorry, that makes me a hypocrite. Mallory, enjoy your weekend and post on this and 'The Past' soon!!

Jenny

great story so far! i cant wait to read the next part! please post soon!

Am so enjoying this story, hope there is a happy ending for Sue.... with Jack would be nice.

Hope you enjoy the beach.

Can't wait for more

I am back everyone, here is the next chapter. Enjoy!!!



THE BULLPEN THAT AFTERNOON:


Jack walked in the bullpen very mad. Everyone saw him coming in and slamming the door. Lucy walked over to him to his desk. He was slamming his drawers and everything. Lucy leaned over his desk.

" Jack what's wrong?

" SUE THOMAS THAT IS WHAT IS WRONG!!!!!!. Jack yelled. Everyone looked up at him since he raised his voice. " WHAT YOU GUYS LOOKING AT!!!!!!!


" Jack calm down. What happened? Did you go see Sue?

" Yes I saw her and she is being totally stubborn.

" Jack I told you not to go down there.

" I thought with me going down there, things would be different and she would come to my wedding.

" Jack I think it is best that she is not coming to your wedding.

" Why you say that? I want her there lucy.

" Why Jack? To make her feel bad.

Jack looked down at his paperwork and said. " I guess she would feel bad, I guess she is not happy about this is she?

" No Jack she is not, It is very hard on her, Just leave her alone, if she wants to come then she will.

" Yeah maybe you are right. Jack said and got back to his paperwork.

Hmm, Mallory, do you think Jack will realise WHY Sue isn't coming??? i hope so! That was very good, I like how Jack was ranting and raving one minute, then yelling at them for staring. He's obviously very stressed, maybe if he talked to Sue, it would calm him down??? great post!!

Jenny

wow, Jack is doing alot of shouting

I hope Jack comes to his sences soon, and dumps Allie for Sue

Can't wait for more

Man, Jack is totally blind to the fact that Sue is in love with him....why would she go to his wedding if she is not going to be the bride? Someone smack that man on the head!!!

Great post, Mallory. I like how you're portraying Jack's frustration and thick-headness in concerning Sue.

Hmmm, if Jack wasn't actually in love with Sue instead of Allie like he thinks he is, I don't think he'd be as upset about Sue not coming...

Jack, don't you realize that good things come from bad, but only if the heart allows it...

Sue went home later in the afternoon she was hoping that Lucy would not be there and she was lucky that she was not. She decided to go in her room and lay down for a bit, she was really tired. She started to close her eyes and fall sleep. She started to have this dream.


Jack was waiting at the alter for Allie to come down. Sue was sitting in the pew with Lucy and the rest of the gang, She felt so awful being at a wedding that she was not invited. She saw Allie walk down to meet Jack. Sue could not sit here and watched this, it was tearing her up inside.

" I cant watch this Lucy, I have to leave.

" Sue please dont. You dont know if he will marry her.

" Look at them Lucy, he loves her, he never loved me, I am out of here.

" Sue please dont go.

" I have too, I love him I dont want him to marry Allie. She will treat him bad.

Lucy was shocked to hear these words. Sue sat back down as she read what the preacher said to them.

" Who doesnt think these two should not get married, speak now or forever hold there piece.

" I think they should not get married.

Jack look back and saw Sue standing up.

" Sue what you doing? Lucy said.

" I am stopping Jack from making a big mistake.

Jack looked at Sue like she was crazy, he walked back there to Sue.

" What you doing?

" What you mean what am I doing, I love you Jack.

" Well Sue you are a little too late, I dont love you, I love Allie.

" yes Sue he loves me not you!!! Allie said in a mean tone. You are messing up our wedding day, why dont you just leave.

" Maybe I will. Sue said.


All of a sudden Sue woke up and sat in the bed. She looked around and saw that Levi was on the end of the bed fast sleep.

" What did I just dream? Sue thought. Now I know for sure I will not be attending his wedding. Jack loves Allie not me. If he loved me he would be with me. Right? Sue thought to herself, she laid back down and went back to sleep.





Mallory

WOW a powerful post there Mallory!!! Geez, when will Sue realise that Jack does love her. These two will never learn will they! Me thinks someone needs to lock them in a room until they see sense, or until the wedding's over. Sorry, I'm a J/S fan all the way!!!

Jenny

A great post, Mal! I thought for a second that Sue was really objecting to Jack and Allie's marriage. Too bad it's only a dream. But does this mean that Sue might actually do such a thing on the actual day?

WOW what a dream, hope Sue realizes that Jack does love her, but is a bit slow on the uptake.

Can't wait for more

I'm having the feeling that part of this dream is going to come true.

Mallory, I can see you down there. Can you post now??? And then maybe on 'The Past'?????

Jenny

Thanks for the comments guys. Here is the next part. Enjoy.




Lucy came in late that night, She knew Sue was home but thought she was in the bed, she was going to question her in the morning. Lucy took a personnal day so she can have a long talk with Sue and get to the bottom of this.


THE NEXT MORNING:


Sue woke up with Levi licking her.

" Levi stop it. I am awake.

Sue sat up in the bed and saw Lucy standing in the door way.

" Hey Lucy, what you doing?

" We need to talk.

" Ok what about?

Lucy walked in her room and sat on the bed and faced her so Sue would see her.

" I think you know what about.

Sue gave her a frown. " Lucy I dont want to talk about Jack, why dont you just leave it alone, This is not your business. Sue said and started to get up fron the bed.


Sue walked in the kitchen trying to avoid Lucy. Lucy followed her and touched Sue on the shoulder.
Sue turned around.

" Sue I know it is not my business but I want to talk about it, I thought I was your best friend and you tell me everything.

Sue looked down then she looked up at Lucy with tears in her eyes.

" Lucy you are my best friend but I am so hurt by all of this, I mean I want to be happy for Jack, but I just know that he is making a big mistake.

" Why you say that Sue? Lucy asked.

" I know that Jessica is wrong for Jack, and how am I going to prove to Jack that she is? Sue asked concerned.

" Sue tell me do you have feelings for Jack?

" I think I do. That is why it is so hard for me to go to his wedding, I just believe that he is making a mistake. What do I do Lucy?

" I guess you cant do anything, he will finally realize that Allie is not the one for him, give him time.

" Give him time? Come on Lucy, he is getting married in two weeks, what makes you think he will change his mind?


" Trust me on this Sue, he will change his mind. Lucy said with a huge smile.

" What makes you say that?

" You will see. Just trust me ok?

" Ok. Sue said and went in the living room to sit on the couch.


What Sue didnt realize is that Lucy and Tara had something planned. She just hoped that Sue will be happy with it. Lucy smiled to herself and walked in the living room to talk to Sue some more.

" Are you suppose to be at work? Sue asked.

" No I took the day off.

" Why?

" No reason.

" Ok Lucy you are totally weird.

Lucy smiled. " Thanks for the comment.





Mallory

Sue, do something...Don't just sit there a feel sorry for yourself! GO GIRL!

Hmmm...I wonder what Lucy and Tara have planned.

Great chapter, Mallory.

Mal, when do we get to find out what Tara and Lucy are up to?

I can't wait for what Lucy and Tara have planned for Sue and Jack, hope it's good

Can't wait for more

Good story, can't wait to see what Lucy and Tara are up to!

Thanks for the comments guys. Here is the next chapter. Enjoy!!!




IN THE BULLPEN THAT MORNING:


Jack was working at his desk, He noticed Sue's desk empty and Lucy's desk empty. Jack frowned, He knew that Sue was not going to come in but where was Lucy, then he noticed that Tara was not here either. Jack got up from his desk and walked toward Bobby.

" Hey where is the women today? Jack asked pointing to there desks. Bobby looked around and notice that none of the women is there.

" I have no idea Jack, that is a good question, I know Sue hasnt been here in a while, where is she?

" I dont know, I think she will not be working with us anymore. Jack said.

" Why?

" She has problems, something I dont want to talk about.

" Does it have to concern your wedding? Bobby asked.

" How did you know?

" Jack we all know cause how Sue looks. The question is what are you going to do about it? Bobby said and left it like that for him to think on about.




TARA'S APARTMENT:


Lucy was already there talking to Tara about Jack.

" So what is your plan? Lucy asked.

" Well I thought that we need to get Sue to go to the wedding.

" That is not going to happen. Lucy said.

" Why you say that?

" Because she told me that she was not going to go.

" Well we have to get her to go, maybe she bring a date.

" Like who?

" I am not sure, just ask her and see what she says. I was thinking if Jack sees her bring a date he might get jealous. Tara said.

" What makes you think he will get jealous? Lucy asked.

" Are you blind Lucy? I can see how he stares at her then he stops when Allie comes in. I think if Sue brings a date it will get his attention, what you think you think that is a good idea?

Lucy smiled. " I think it is a great idea. Lets go talk to Sue. Lucy said.






Mallory