I love Bobby and Jay together!!!

Joy

Yes yes yes
Yes yes yes
Bobby and Jay are together, I would like to see their progress in their relationship

ah so sweet bobby is a sweety pie

Awww, don't you just love it when it all comes together???

Karen

Brilliant, bell!

**


She watched her reflection in the mirror, critically straightening her silk nightgown. She knew he was waiting for her but he wouldn’t expect her to show up…like this. They just returned from a romantic walk by the lake and a bottle of champagne with some appetizers waited for them in their small cabin. She excused herself for a moment and he poured the champagne and told her that he would wait for her on the porch.

Sue moved her hands along her gown, her body tensing as she imagined him touching her. Biting her lips, she opened the bathroom door, heading outside with nothing but her white gown. Pausing at the entrance, she took a moment to observe him. He removed his jacket and tie and had the sleeves folded, he also removed his shoes and she was mesmerized when his fingers curled around the glass of champagne.

A wave of sudden awareness washed over her, its intensity threatening to drown her. He was her husband, she was his wife, and that sudden awareness aroused her so much it shocked her, sizzling fire burning through her veins.

He knew she was standing behind him, hearing her quiet steps as she slowly advanced towards him. He swallowed, his fingers curling around his glass, tempted to feel the burn of the drink in his throat, wondering if it could help him restrain his desire for her.

Jack moaned softly, feeling her drawing closer, her scent engulfing his senses. He slowly turned to face her, his breath catching at the sight of her in her white satin, her hair cascading on her shoulders. He placed the glass on the table, reaching a hand to stroke her shoulder, trembling fingers traveling lower to the swell of her breast, stopping to caress before lowering his lips to hers.

She tilted her head upwards, matching his delicate movements as he cupped her face with his palms, his mouth warm and demanding against hers. He bit her lower lip with his teeth, sending waves of anticipation that cursed through her body, settling in her womb as her anticipation rose higher. She opened her mouth, deepening the kiss, surrendering to his demands and making some of her own, their bodies seeking further contract.

He picked her up, nearly loosing his balance as they both started to giggle, the tension disappearing, allowing compassion and desire to take control. He lay beside her on the bed, allowing her wandering hands to slowly open the buttons of his shirt, enjoying her attention. The world slowly disappeared as she focused on him only, on them…while they loved each other.

Ooohhhh, Bell.........!!! **sigh**

Joy

kav swoons dramatically into a of bliss by her computer. Bell you sure know how to do fuzzies that are

kav

That was just

Karen

cath

WOW! Fuzzilicious, bell!

**


"So…" Bobby chewed the pasta, his expression thoughtful. "Juliet, you say…"

Jay groaned loudly, reaching out for her tea. "There is no possible way you could…forget that Jack called me that, right?"

"It's a beautiful name." He grinned. "And I don’t think I'll forget."

"Is there anything I can give you in exchange for you forgetting my annoying birth name?" She batted her eyelashes at him, leaning closer to him on the sofa.

He chuckled. "I might be persuaded to temporary forget…"

"Temporary?" She laughed, raising her eyebrow at him. "Not good enough, Bobby."

"Did you like the food?" He changed the subject, taking their plates and heading for the kitchen.

"It was good, considering I lost the ability to taste." She grinned when he chuckled.

"Now I understand why you used so much salt."

She reached for a tissue, knowing that after her sore throat came the running nose and the splitting headache. "I'm sorry I ruined your plans."

"You apologize too much." He returned from the kitchen with a new tea. "Mixed with honey, it should help your throat." He sat beside her, enveloping them both with a blanket. "For your information, I did plan for us to eat here although I wanted things to be a little fancier. After you told me you were sick, I figured you wouldn’t appreciate fancy so I settled for simple things." He smiled, tucking a curl behind her ear. "Now will you stop apologizing?"

She pursed her lips, her eyes twinkling. "I can try."

"Juliet…" The name rolled easily from his lips.

"Alright…alright…" She rolled her eyes. "Now what are we doing?"

"We can watch a movie." Bobby offered. "Or we can give you the drowsing medications and put you to back to bed."

"A movie you picked?" She made a show of considering her options, tapping her lips with her finger. Bobby smiled a little, tempting to take hold of her finger and slowly kiss the tender flesh. He closed his eyes for a moment, shaking his head. "Am I in for a three hour marathon of Rambo or something?"

He rolled his eyes. "You have to take your chances with this one, Jay. Movie or bed?"

"Well, when you put it that way…" She raised her eyebrows suggestively and he threw a pillow on her. "Hey, I'm sick!" Jay faked an unsuccessful cough for good measure. "Alright, a movie, but I might just fall asleep in the middle."

He pulled her closer, their knees touching under the woolen blanket, his arm enveloping her. "I'll keep you awake and warm, how's that?"

"Sounds good." She cuddled closer, her head resting on his shoulder. She laughed when the opening credits showed up. "Ice Age Two?"

"Well, we never saw the ending." He chuckled. "If my memory serves me right, we were…occupied."

She smiled a little. "I think it was well worth it…missing the ending of the movie."

Bobby nodded his head, tilting hers so that their lips almost touched. "So…considering the fact that we already saw the beginning of the movie…" He trailed his fingers along her forearm, her skin warm against them.

"I'm sick…" She breathed, a shiver running down her spine. "You might catch something."

His eyes were very dark and very serious, holding just a hint of mischief that she picked up beneath layers of something she couldn’t place and wasn’t sure she wanted to just yet. "The way I see it, Jack and Sue got themselves a week off while I have lots of vacation days I never used…that way, I can spend more time with you…"

"Oh, I can see it already, both of us consuming industrial amounts of Advil and tissue paper…such a romantic scene…"

He captured her lips with his, relief spreading in his veins when she responded immediately, welcoming the pressure of his lips, tangling her hand in his hair. He deepened the kiss, his body responding to her closeness, to the way she felt beside him, reacting to her wonderful taste, knowing that he was already growing addicted.

She arched closer, practically straddling him, the blanket falling to the floor. Surrendering to a wave of delicious sensation, she wondered if he was really such a good kisser or was it simply the electrifying attraction that seemed to pull them together. His hands sneaked under her T-shirt and the slow caresses slowly halted their heated exploration.

Jay leaned her forehead against his, sighing softly. "Bobby…when I'm well enough…"

"We won't stop." He breathed, moving his head so that he could see the small smile that traced her lips. "But for now…it's a start…" He frowned a little before sneezing loudly.

Jay giggled, kissing his lips and handing him a tissue. "It's a start of something alright…"


~Fin~

Not sure how I managed but I did, T minus 24 hours and it's finally done, let me just say that this story and the site in general were my source of comfort and joy in the last couple of weeks, I enjoyed writing this and I hope you enjoyed as well...
Bell

Poor Juliet (BTW I can't understand someone likes Jay over Juliet but that's just my 2 cents)! But to be sick in the arms of Bobby...Just for that I'd throw away all my Advil, flu medicin, asperine and what not!!!

Great story, Bell. The ending is so full of promise... wonderful! Maybe one day you can do something with that promise for the future, like a sequel or something.

I loved this story. Thanks for writing it. Any chance of a sequel?

Sam

Oh, for the chance to be close enough to Bobby to make him sick!! Does Juliet know how lucky she is???

Bell, that was wonderful as always!!! Really hate to see it end!!!

Thanks for sharing!!!

Joy

Awe, that was a great ending Bell. I'll ask the same as everyone else, any chance of a sequel???

We done more than enjoyed it, we simply loved it!!! Glad you could come here and escape the pressures of what's going on in your country right now. I'll continue to hope and pray for a peaceful end to it all. Be safe.

Karen

wow bell this has been a great ride, i o love bobby and jay together you made them so real.

and sue and jack, yeah what can i say, so sweet, so lovely really really beautiful.

so i have on question.....can you maybe start a sequel i want to know what's going to happen with jay and bobby

loved it

cath

Bell that was perfect. I absolutely loved this story. I hope that you continue it with a sequel...or at least start something new. I think I'm addicted to your writing. And I loved the ending -- it was romantic and funny and full of hope.

kav

Sorry as I am to to see this story come to a close, the fact is you really write the best endings. They are so satisfying, everything feels finished and you stay so true to the story and the characters you have written. Very excellent. Still, I am a little sad to see it go, I have really enjoyed this one

I loved this story. It´s perfect. I think that the end was fabulouse but I guess that it must have sequel. Please write it.
I would like to know what will happend with Jay and Bobby and Jack and Sue in future.

for amazing writing.

That was a beautiful story, Bell! All of us, of course, want to know what's going to happen to Bobby and Jay, so is there going to be a sequel??

You know I have really enjoyed this from beginning to end, and I can't believe it is the end. I mean a sequel would be lovely...but I understand if you don't.

We watch the news and the pictures on TV, and we hope and pray things work out for you all, if ever a bit of calm and peace was required it is now.

Your always in our thoughts!

Thank you all for your kind response, frankly, I never anticipated such a strong reaction to a story that I wrote in parts and never really thought of a plot for it...The way I see it, this is the end and that is the only part of the story that I really saw when I first started but then again...you can never know what the future hold.

I am taking care of myself and there are a few rays of hope in the horizon, I have many friends who were drafted to go northwards and I can only hope that they wouldn't have to fight. I actually started to work on something new but everything that happened yesterday (both in Lebanon and in the UN) brought out so many negative feelings I simply had to stop for a while.

Thanks again, see you aroud the board, Inbal.

We understand and we're here when you feel you can return.

In our thoughts always!

Bell, I finally caught up, and I loved it! You did an excellent job, with this!

I enjoyed it immensely.

You definitely came up to some tough issues in this one, and I agree with you; you handled them very well. And I'm sure it's hard, writing for readers who express so much of how stories make them feel, and trying to fit what you want to write to something people will read. It's definitely a challenge, and you met it excellently! And to let you know, if you're writing stories that make people feel so deeply about them, that, in itself, is huge compliment.

Fantastic job.

hehe, I loved that last line. You really balance the humor, fuzzies, and serious stuff very well. Thank you for sharing it with us!!

Bell, I loved the character of Jay and how you made her and Bobby seem like such a good fit. I think a sequel is definitely in order. Great work!!!!!!!!!!!

Enjoyed the story. I hope to see more of Jay and Bobby. Oh and Sue and Jack too

Dianna

Bell,

this is another of your wonderful stories!!!! I so love the way you wrote Jay (Juliet ;o)))) and Bobby… the way you let the history repeats itself… with the reunion of Jay and Bobby and of course Jay’s wet clothes or very lovely situation with condoms in the store ;o)))) I also love the scene on the pool park… I think they were really lucky there weren’t recording system ;o))

I wanna summarize it… and I feel a bit strange because I still praise you for your stories… but I do it because I have to… I have to because I really enjoy reading your stories… they’re full of love, humor, tension (not just this one) and full of intimacy. I always believe your characters are really alive, I believe their thoughts and I always lose track of time when I read your stories…

So, again… thank you for nice hours which I spent reading your story!


Restie

btw I really hope you’re all right… I always feel sad when I see what’s going on in Israel in TV news. TAKE CARE, please!

i just can't seem to stop reading this story...i absolutly love it...
bell you really are a very talented writer. and i hope that someday soon
maybe you will write another story ....maybe another sequel with jay and bobby.

law

yay. not only did jack and sue admit their felings but they got married.
glad bobby and jay are making headway in thier relationship...they both deserver to be happy.
loved both of the couples activities..sue/jack in the water park and bobby/jay watching a movie/shopping at the mall. very cute/hot!