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suethomasfan2468
Those are some mean working hours. I live in England too so i could pay your boss a friendly visit if you like! He he he! More when you can! It's saturday in England so I will look out for posts!

Jennifer
learningtosign
hallelujah my long hours are over and i've finally caught up on my reading

Leaving the restaurant, Jack took her hand as they headed for the car. Seeing the confused look on her face he mumbled ‘I think we should practice the undercover………… so it’s easy when we’re in Vegas…………’

‘Practice is always good, Jack.’ she agreed, smiling to herself……. This felt wonderful …………..

As they walked Jack gently rubbed his thumb over her hand as she squeezed gently, both relishing the closeness.

Walking Levi together, Jack placed his arm around Sue’s shoulder, feeling her snuggle in closer and place her arm around his waist.

Giving her a gentle kiss on the cheek at her door he mumbled, ‘I definitely think we need to practice this undercover dating a bit more……….’

Feeling the air moving across her cheek she moved her head to read his lips, ‘sorry I didn’t catch that Jack……….’

‘I said ‘I definitely think we need to practice this undercover dating a bit more……….’’ He mumbled again.

‘Yeah, we definitely need the practice……… come round tomorrow night….. I’ll cook dinner …… Luce will be out at a signing class…..’

As he leant forward to kiss her goodnight she moved her head so his lips were planted firmly on hers.

As they met, Jack wasn’t sure who was the most surprised at her boldness. Allowing his lips to linger for a few more seconds he murmured, ‘yup we definitely need to practice this whole undercover scenario……….’

‘See you tomorrow, beautiful heart friend’ he signed as he reluctantly walked away.
Ivory
This undercover dating is beginning to sound suspiciously like real dating to me. wink.gif
Restie
Yeah, Jack and Sue aren't the only one who thinks they have to practise more and more!!!!!! wubb.gif

Great, you're back, Cath!


rolleyes.gif Restie
suesfan
Practice makes perfect!!!

Joy
suethomasfan2468
Does anyone know how you quote multiple people in one quote??? Cos I want to quote:

Suesfan: Practise makes perfect!

Definitely

Restie: Yeah, Jack and Sue aren't the only one who thinks they have to practise more and more!!!!!!

ditto.gif what you said girl!

Ivory: This undercover dating is beginning to sound suspiciously like real dating to me.

Me too!

I like how Sue oved so it was an almost fully fledged kiss. Now we just need to get rid of the almost!!! More soon cath!

Lovin it!

Jenny
tis*me!
I got behind in my reading, but I'm having a good time while trying to catch up! Beautiful posts, Cath! Thanks!

Tracy
Rosa17
QUOTE(learningtosign @ May 29 2006, 11:22 AM)

‘See you tomorrow, beautiful heart friend’ he signed as he reluctantly walked away.

This just made me melting.gif
Levi_rocks
laugh.gif they do need to dating don't they? I mean they totally skipped that part when they were married to each other twice in the show!
Kav
wub.gif They're so dedicated to their work!

kav
learningtosign
Chapter 5

As Sue entered the apartment wearing a dreamy look on her face she saw Luce sitting on the couch.

‘You obviously had a good time tonight girlfriend……… but what’s he done to upset you…...........?’

Sue looked at her, completely confused, ‘upset me? Jack hasn’t done anything to upset me………why would you think that he had………?’

‘Look at the size of that bunch of flowers…….. men only ever buy flowers when they’ve done something wrong…………’

‘He hasn’t done anything wrong………. It was a generous gift, as was dinner……..we’re going undercover in a few weeks……….’

‘Undercover…………….?’ Luce asked, more than a little confused; she didn’t know anything about an undercover and she would bet that no-one else did either.

‘Yeah…….. undercover.’ Sue stood to her feet heading for her room, ‘night Luce…….’

Watching Sue’s retreating back; Lucy opened her laptop and emailed Tara.


From: ld@fbidc.com
To: tw@fbidc.com
Re: lovebirds

Sent; May 24th 01.30 AM

Why are Jack and Sue going undercover?

Why don’t I know anything about it?

Luce

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From: jh@fbidc.com
To: ih@somewhereinwisconsin.com
Re: Wedding and Allie

Sent: May 24th 02.00 AM

Hi Mom

I will be at the wedding

I am bringing someone, her name is Sue

The question is not is she good enough for me but am I good enough for her?

I am NOT interested in Allie, I am very much in love with Sue.

Love Jack


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From: jh@fbidc.com
To: bh@hugehotelvegas.com
Re: wedding

Sent May 24th 02.10 AM

Ben

Yes I will be there, with Sue

Jack
suethomasfan2468
Cool cath. Very hmmm. Can't wait for the wedding. I loved how Tara and Lucy are completely clueless about the whole undercover thing!!!!!


Jenny
Restie
I love Jack's clear e-mail to his mom... I hope she will understand!!!!! mad.gif

Jack and Sue are so sweet!!!!!


rolleyes.gif Restie
Kav
thumbsup.gif Yes! That's a nice way to start the morning!

kav
Rosa17
Great post and Jack was straight to the point with his Mom. Looking forward to reading more smile.gif
Ivory
Yes, Jack did get straight to the point with his mom.

This is gonna drive Lucy crazy until she gets more details. smile.gif
tis*me!
Loved Jack's email to his mom! Great post! Looking forward to more.

Tracy
learningtosign
Chapter 6

From: ih@somewhereinwisconsin.com
To: allie@nyadvertising.com
Re: Jackson Samuel Hudson


Sent: May 24th 09.00 AM

Allie

He will be at the wedding

He’s taking someone

Her name is Sue.

Irene

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From: allie@nyadvertising.com
To: ih@somewhereinwisconsin.com
Re; Jackson Samuel Hudson

Sent: May 24th 11.00 AM

Irene

If it’s who I think it is I met her a few times.

No competition, not his type, quiet and mousy

She’s deaf.

Allie
Restie
I hate Allie!!!!!! mad.gif mad.gif mad.gif Who do you think you are, young lady... the Princess of England????? Take your hands away from Jack...

... AND Mrs. Hudson... I thought every mom wants her kid's happiness.... mad.gif


mad.gif Restie
suesfan
Quiet and mousy - Sue??? I don't think so!!!

Allie, think again - you're right, there is no competition - because you are out of it!!!

Joy
tis*me!
mad.gif
Mousy? Mousy? Oh, no you didn't!!! gunman.gif (I've always wanted a chance to use this one. Seems appropriate here!)

BTW, Allie, Sue's exactly Jack's type!!!!
JesusFreak718
Hey Cath, sorry it took me so long to check out your story. I really love it though! I'm so excited about this "undercover" dating and I'm ready for Jack (with Sue's help) to put Allie in her place! mad.gif And weddings are romantic settings, so who knows what could develop... wub.gif Great job hun, look forward to more!
jamie
gunman.gif I have officially started the I hate Allie with a passion club. We will be having a march tomorrow culminating with me throwing a punch(es) at her face. Anyone interested is asked to report to her house.

Haylee
Chairwoman
JesusFreak718
rofl.gif Alright, Haylee, I'll come. Should be fun. Do you need me to make picketing signs?!
Ivory
Allie is being a first-class snot. mad.gif Put her in her place, Jack. You're just the one to do it.
MelissaT
Sue? Quiet, mousy? Obviously, Irene wasn't there at all the times when Sue took down the bad guys.

And Allie, don't even think about it! Sue's EXACTLY Jack's type! gunman.gif
jamie
QUOTE(JesusFreak718 @ May 30 2006, 10:07 PM)
rofl.gif Alright, Haylee, I'll come. Should be fun. Do you need me to make picketing signs?!

Yup! as many as you can!!!

Haylee
JesusFreak718
I'm on it! tongue.gif When is report to duty time?
Kav
ohmy.gif Allie is so going to rue the day she dissed Sue!

kav
Levi_rocks
QUOTE(jamie @ May 30 2006, 11:40 PM)
QUOTE(JesusFreak718 @ May 30 2006, 10:07 PM)
rofl.gif Alright, Haylee, I'll come. Should be fun. Do you need me to make picketing signs?!

Yup! as many as you can!!!

Haylee

Do you guys need another pair of hands for this gunman.gif ? I'm here to help in any way I can. And Sue is definitely NOT mousy
learningtosign
I had no idea my story would result in readers becoming violent, perhaps I had better have Jack and Allie elope somewhere secret so they can't be harmed!!!!!!!!!
Hmmmm......... where could I send them???????????


Chapter 7

From: jh@fbidc.com
To: st@fbidc.com
Re: Dinner

Sent: May 24th 11.30 AM

Sue

Had a great time last night

You free for lunch?

We can practice our undercover

Jack

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From: ld@fbidc.com
To:tw@fbidc.com
Re; lovebirds

Sent: May 24th 11.30 AM

Tara

What have you got?

Lucy

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From: tw@fbidc.com
To: ld@fbidc.com
Re; lovebirds

Sent; May 24th 11.35 AM


Lucy

Nothing

If they want or need us to know they will tell us

Tara

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From: st@fbidc.com
To: jh@fbidc.com
Re: dinner

Sent: May 24th 11.40 AM


Jack

Lunch looks good, we’ll walk Levi

Guess we do need to practice more.

What do you want to do Thursday and Friday?

Sue

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From: ld@fbidc.com
To: bm@fbidc.com
Re; lovebirds

Sent: May 24th 11.40 AM

Bobby

Why are Jack and Sue going undercover?

Why don’t Tara or I know anything about it?

Lucy

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From: bm@fbidc.com
To: ld@fbidc.com
Re; lovebirds

Sent: May 24th 11.45 AM

Luce

What??????????????

Bobby

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From: jh@fbidc.com
To: st@fbidc.com
Re: dinner

Sent: May 24th 11.45 AM

Sue

What would you like to do?

Your wish is my command

Jack

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From: st@fbidc.com
To: jh@fbidc.com
Re: dinner

Sent: May 24th 11.50 AM

Jack

Flying down the Grand Canyon?

If you want to play golf I’ll caddie for you, not that I know what stick is what!

You choose something.

This undercover relationship is about equal partners right?

Sue

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From: jh@fbidc.com
To: st@fbidc.com
Re: Dinner


Sent: May 24th 11.55 AM


Sue

Equal partners? Exactly

All sounds good to me

I’ll book tickets for flight when I book tickets for Vegas.

Jack

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From; ld@fbidc.com
To: bm@fbidc.com
Copy: tw@fbidc.com
Re: lovebirds

Sent: May 24th 12.00 Noon

When they go for lunch we will have a meeting in the conference room

Lucy.

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She looked up to see Bobby and Tara nodding at her.

Thankfully Sue and Jack missed it since they were now staring at each other across the pen.

Practicing the undercover was going to be good…….. very good.
Restie
I have to laugh... Luce is Luce tongue.gif laugh.gif

I can't wait to read more about their "practicing" wub.gif


rolleyes.gif Restie
suethomasfan2468
rofl2.gif rofl2.gif rofl2.gif rofl2.gif rofl2.gif rofl2.gif <-------------- me
Kav
As long as they remember practise makes perfect! laugh.gif
kav
tis*me!
QUOTE(learningtosign @ May 31 2006, 12:56 AM)
I had no idea my story would result in readers becoming violent, perhaps I had better have Jack and Allie elope somewhere secret so they can't be harmed!!!!!!!!!
Hmmmm......... where could I send them???????????

Absolutely NO Allie!!!!!!! NO! NO! NO!

QUOTE(learningtosign @ May 31 2006, 12:56 AM)
Practicing the undercover was going to be good…….. very good.

Yes, undercover is a very good thing indeed!
This story is good.......very good! biggrin.gif

Tracy
bigfan
Looking forward to a trip to Vegas. I have a seat right behind Jack and Sue.
suesfan
QUOTE(learningtosign @ May 31 2006, 05:56 AM)
I had no idea my story would result in readers becoming violent, perhaps I had better have Jack and Allie elope somewhere secret so they can't be harmed!!!!!!!!!
Hmmmm......... where could I send them???????????



Off the planet? No, we'd still find them!!!

I love that the team doesn't have a clue, and it is literally killing some of them!!!

Joy
Ivory
I can see why Jack is so distant from his brother. They are not at all alike.

Sue has such a gracious spirit. No wonder she has won Jack's heart.

I wonder what TW, LD, and BM are going to come up with in the conference room as they try to surmise what is going on?
JesusFreak718
Practice makes perfect indeed! blushing.gif And Luce is a riot - always the matchmaker! Don't these folks ever work?!
Doglover
I finally got caught up. This story is really good. I am totally hooked.


2nd Allie does not know what she is talking about. Jack and Sue is perfect for each other, she doesnt know what she is talking about, she is just jealous.


Great job cath. I am loving it.



Mallory
Mirjam
rofl2.gif rofl2.gif rofl2.gif
learningtosign
Chapter 8

As Jack and Sue headed out with Levi, Luce called the others into the Conference Room.

‘OK ……… why are they going undercover……………………?

What is the case and why don’t any of us know about it?’

Myles and D looked at her blankly, not having a clue what she was talking about.

Luce filled them in quickly and everyone looked at her still blank.


‘No cases I know of coming up……..’ D mumbled, ‘you think they’ve finally got together and this is the code they’re using since inter team dating is still forbidden?’

Luce shrugged her shoulders, ‘don’t think so………. Tara can you hack their computers? Read the emails?’

‘I could but I’m not going to……… if they are dating and we know we won’t have deniability if anyone asks………’ Tara explained.

Luce nodded, it made sense but she desperately wanted to know what was going on.

‘But if they were dating ……….. and I’m not saying they are……. If anyone asked we could tell them we wanted them to stay together in the unit because it’s never affected the way they work………….. couldn’t we?’

She looked around at each member of the team, relieved when they all nodded.

‘Right, I’ll talk to Sue……… Bobby you can talk to Jack……… the rest of you just keep quiet about what we know………’

Myles cut her off, ‘exactly what do we know Luce? Jack and Sue have emailed each other a few times………. It happens, we all email each other, and Sues’ told you they are going undercover, it could be a case for another section…………’

There were times when her romantic streak and matchmaking could drive him to distraction.

‘I’ll talk to Jack‘, Bobby cut in before they started to shout at each other as he could see anger welling up in Luce………..

‘Great, we met back here at this time tomorrow’ she grinned at them all as she dismissed them for lunch.
suethomasfan2468
I loved Myles' line in there: What exactly do we know?

Soooo funny!

Jenny
Restie
Luce, Luce, Luce... do you know what privacy means???? I hope they won't destroy anything!!!

rolleyes.gif Restie
Ivory
I knew it was gonna drive Lucy crazy to not know about this undercover thing that Jack and Sue have going on. More please.
tis*me!
QUOTE(Ivory @ Jun 1 2006, 06:11 AM)
I knew it was gonna drive Lucy crazy to not know about this undercover thing that Jack and Sue have going on.  More please.

ditto.gif

Yep, that's Lucy...very true to character!

Tracy
suesfan
As much as I love Luce, I would love for Jack and Sue to pull off something without her finding out about it!!!

Joy
JesusFreak718
Yup, Lucy is going nuts not knowing what's going on! laugh.gif I love how she's sucked the rest of the team into this covert meetings in the conference room. But I repeat: do these folks ever work!? tongue.gif
learningtosign
Chapter 9

Opening the doors for Levi and Sue, Jacks’ heart was thumping; never had walking Levi affected him like this.

Leaving the garage they picked up coffee and sandwiches before he headed for a wooded area just outside of DC to give them some privacy.

Watching Levi running around chasing squirrels and rabbits they held hands, leaning in for the occasional kiss on the cheek or lips.

Returning to the car, Jack placed his arm around her waist, ‘I think this looks more realistic ………. For a couple who are dating………..’

Sue snuggled closer and placed her arm around him, ’this more realistic?’ she whispered, hoping he wouldn’t pick up on the excitement and desire in her voice.

‘PERFECT’ he signed, breathing in the scent of her perfume.

Pulling up in the garage, Jack asked, ‘you reckon we’ve got this dating thing sorted or do we need more practice?’

‘Well, Jack………… you’re pretty good but I think I need more practice,’

Sue was more than a little surprised at her words but if this was the closest she was going to get to dating Jack she was going to make the most of it.

‘To be honest, I thought you were pretty good but I thought I needed more practice…………… perhaps we should keep practicing…….. we’ve only got a couple of weeks and we need to be really good…………’

‘Looks good to me……… we’ll practice again tonight…….. over dinner…..’

Sue breathed a sigh of relief, sure that Jack was going to say he thought they were OK, oblivious to Jacks’ sigh of relief, maybe after this he would ask her out and worry about the no dating policy later.
JesusFreak718
QUOTE
Sue was more than a little surprised at her words but if this was the closest she was going to get to dating Jack she was going to make the most of it.

Who wouldn't make the most of such a great opportunity?! laugh.gif

QUOTE
maybe after this he would ask her out and worry about the no dating policy later.

Maybe Sue doesn't have to worry so much about making the most of the "practice"!! wub.gif
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