Marlene prepared a bath scene for us I CAN'T WAIT !!!!!


Restie

You have to get in the bath to wash her back Jack, it's no fun otherwise!!

I still in a state of shock that it was Sue who suggested it. This place really is having the desired affect on her. About time!!

Bring on the fuzzies, I'm ready.

Karen

marlene just one word to describe post with sue jack bath scene

WOW
lin

Lovely, teasing, morning post! Somehow I don't think that's gonna help you stay cool though, Marlene.

I didn't know it could get that hot so far north. We're have the same type of weather - hehe.

Sue is such a tease!!

Can't wait for more!!!

Marlene, you've just raised the temperature......I thought you were trying to initiate cooling, calm atmosphere, not that I'm complaining or anything, but you know with what I think your planning, your going to need to sit in the freezer whilst typing!

Isn't 'lune de miel’ French for honeymoon???? That was a lovely post and I loved how you mixed fuzzies and humour together!!!

Great post Marlo29!!

Jenny

Sue, why can't Jack think about it?? You're the one who asked him to wash your back!!!

Joy

She breathed in the lavender scent of the bubbles surrounding her and the candles she lit up around the room. Completely immersed she closed her eyes. She was almost in heaven, only missing ... him. His name drowned in her deep sigh after leaving her lips. He was marking all the points in this seduction game, her poor attempts turning to his advantage. How was she supposed to guess there would only be one bed? Or that there would be plenty of room for him to soak beside her? Should she give up trying to get even with him, or should she invite him in? She trusted Jack to let her lead, but with her limited experience could she trust herself to tell how much teasing to subject Jack before she pushed too far?

Jack wasn’t consciously aware of the water running until it actually stopped, when silence filled the air. He imagined clothes falling on the floor before she lowered herself in the bath designed for lovers. The beads of water dripping along ... he shook his head. He needed to rein his imagination if he didn’t want to scare her away. He looked around the room for something to occupy his mind. He spotted their two bags by the door. He placed them on the table. Would she really call him or would she step out all wrapped up in a fluffy towel since she had no nightclothes with her? Being the useful man he was, he opened her bag. He searched for her sea green camisole and boxers set she wore the previous night, but found her baby blue nightie instead. It was very thin, eyeing the garment, but it would reach her knees, making it harder for his hands to wander underneath.

“Baby blue tonight, my love”, taking it with him and making his way to the bathroom. He had every intention of slipping his hand inside, flipping the light switch to get her attention, and then simply drop the nightie on the floor before retreating. However, he never expected she would be whispering his name with such silkiness, doubting very much he was supposed to be privy to it. Still, her voice acted as a beacon. With the door ajar, he noticed the shadows dancing through the gap. The lights were off, but obviously candles were burning. He played with the switch, immediately hearing a loud swoosh of water as he startled her.

“Jack?” He shook the nightie, and heard her soft chortle. “I would prefer my pink one.” He pulled it away and signed ‘pink’, wondering if she had enough light to read him ... and how many nighties she packed. “Yes ... pink. And why are you rummaging through my bag?” she asked highly amused. “Are you bored?” She laughed out loud when he signed ‘yes’. “If you get me my pink one, I ... I will let you come in”, the words rapidly stumbling out of her mouth before she was too late to recall them.

The door closed quickly, leaving her to ponder Jack’s countermove.

Our little Sue is playing with fire, but that's okay!!!

Joy

At least she's sitting in water - so she shouldn't get burned too badly.

I can't believe Sue said that!!!


Waiting and ready for the next post!!

I think they are both playing with
Fire and are going to get burned WOW WOW
cant wait to find out lin

I see you Marlo does that mean a post is coming soon

lindylou

I see you there Marlène and I can't wait for the next post!!!!

playing with fire...absolutely!

Don't think it will take too long to figure out Jack's counter move. I'm thinking clothes are flying out of her suitcase as I write.

Okay, it's nighttime here and it has cooled off quite a bit outside. We're expecting storms tonight and tomorrow, so the best thing for us would be... another post, of course!

Those last two were incredible. Can't wait for you to turn up the heat even more!!! I've got my fan ready.....

Thunderstorms are coming my way too, and I love storms !!!!

+++++

He searched her bag for the elusive pink nightie, coming across very attractive undergarments in the process. He grinned, thinking he shouldn’t be seeing that. On the other hand, she might appreciate a bottom part. Picking up a very sexy pair, he kept looking. Once he found it, he held it for inspection. Sue wasn’t kidding ... it was pink ... very very pink ... thicker fabric and not as transparent as the one he previously chose ... short sleeves ... about knee length ... overall, more conservative than the blue nightie ... until he noticed the little buttons opening on the front. Perfect, he thought, as his phone rang.

“Hudson”, hoping for a short and fruitful conversation.

“Agent Udson”, Jack recognising the inspector immediately. “We ave mademoiselle Marchand. She is colaborayting. She says Sophia made de call and tawked to er broder.”

“Let me get this straight. The overseas call on Miranda’s cell was made by Sophia?”

“According to mademoiselle Marchand ... oui.”

“Could she recall the conversation?”

“Not rayly ... she was not paying attention, but after Sophia gave de phone back, Sophia told er it was er broder, and e was at scool.”

“I will contact my team immediately”, Jack assured him.

“I cannot old mademoiselle Marchand if I ave no oder prove”, he informed the agent.

“I understand. Thank you very much.”

“Good nite, Udson.”

As soon as he hung up he dialled the bullpen and explained the new development to D.

“That could explain a few things”, D commented afterwards. “I will relay the information to Bobby.”

“Have they found out anything?”

“Yes. The cell does belong to Mrs Jamieson but it is only used as an emergency phone. She usually leaves it to her children when they drive the car.”

“Did the son have it on Wednesday?”

“Yes, she confirmed that much, but insists her son never mentioned anything about any phone call.”

“Where’s the cell now?”

“With one of the kids. Bobby and Myles are waiting for them to return from school.”

“Okay. Keep me posted.”

“We’ll do. Good evening, Jack.”

Jack paced the room. If everybody was telling the truth, their last clue regarding Sophia’s whereabouts rested with that mysterious phone call she made to her brother. It sounded less and less like a ransom case, he admitted. Not that it made it any easier to find her. He sighed. He hoped the kid remembered his conversation with his sister.

Pushing the case in a corner of his mind since he couldn’t do more at the moment, he concentrated on the task at hand. With renewed purposes he walked to the bathroom.

Jack, first, turn off the phone. NO MORE INTERRUPTIONS!!!

Okay, Marlo, that was great. A little bit more on the case. Now. ONTO THE FUZZIES!!!

Why do I have a feeling that things are suddenly going to get very steamy? Oh Yeah....Marlo is writing this story!!! Can't wait!

WOW Some lovely posts there Marlo29!!!! Bring on the fuzzies!!!!! I like how Jack was discovering her stuff and I love this new bolder side of Sue.

jenny

Ohhh, we're getting closer to the fuzzy bit now.

Sue is getting bolder by the minute, and I love it. I hope Jack doesn't think she's playing him at his own game.

Right Jack, next move is to march right back into that bathroom and wash her back like she asked.

Karen

-+why do people interupt when things
are hotting up, just hope they sought themselves
out .turn all phones off ,grt ready for fuzzies
lin

HMM a pink nightie ... I don't recall you ever used that color before ...

I agree; Jack, turn off your cell first before you go to Sue

It was great to see how Sue laughed about Jack going through her things. It shows she is already very comfortable with him, which must be a big step for her, being the private person that she is.

I think that it"ll be getting rather steamy too!......Bring it on Marlo!!!

I'm sitting here, with my hair wrapped in a towel, my face prepped. I'm ready for my steam bath. I figured I might as well make my time sitting in front of the computer fruitful...and I'm counting on you, Marlene! (and Jack and Sue of course)

His hand on the doorknob he paused. He couldn’t hear any sound coming from inside. He shut the little voice rising in his head, warning him he was playing with fire. How could they possibly get burned with that much water around? He would only be washing her back, like she asked him to. He wouldn’t be joining her ... unless of course she strongly insisted. With those resolutions in mind he opened the door just enough for his hand to slid in.

He clicked the switch repeatedly. When she didn’t respond to the flashing light he started to worry, pushing the door further until his head peeped inside.

“Sue?” knowing very well she couldn’t hear him, but feeling less intrusive if he introduced himself.

It was darker in the room than moments before. Some of the candles already burnt out, making him wonder how long he stayed on the phone. The flames of the remaining candles cast dancing shadows on the wall. He advanced towards the tub, his smile getting wider with each small step. Only her head was visible above the sea of bubbles. She was dozing peacefully. He sat on the side, and gently caressed her cheek. She moaned softly, stirring just enough to send ripples in the water, the bubbles wobbling over her. He slipped his hand in the water. It was still warm. He should let her enjoy her bath, he reasoned. His hand brushed along her leg, waking up the powerfully yeaning he felt deep inside for her. He knew a sensible man would be walking away while he still could, chuckling at the thought. He had been that sensible man, walking away after they shared that amazing forbidden kiss in a dark office. And he regretted it for so long, almost losing her. Never again, he promised himself.

He stood up and glanced around. He left her nightie on the counter before slowly shedding his clothes.

The hot water appeased his tense body but not his frantic mind. He reminded himself he promised to let her set the pace of their relationship. Was she seeing their final destination just as irrevocably he did? And if so ...

If you write scenes like this everytime it gets over a hundred where you live, you know people are going to start praying that you have a very hot summer!

My favorite mental picture was Jack rummaging through the suitcase for the pink nightie. I could so see his face.

And??? You can't just stop there Marlène!!! That was too good to stop!!!

Caught up on your last two posts, Marlo!! Where could Sophia be???

Jack, I can see you are not going to be sensible and you are not going to walk away this time!!! Good for you!!!

Oreo, I like the way you think!!!

Joy

Marlo29, you can't leave it there!!!! I can see you down there. Can you come up and post some more please????? Pretty please?????

I've spent the afternoon baking brownies, cookies and sticky gingerbread cake. Can I tempt you with anything????? Please post!!

Great post though!!!

Jenny

Brownie? I love brownies !!!! One ... please ????

I'm frantically. As soon as the post is ready, it will go up ... I promise.

And Oreo ... it's still hot and humid here ... also very dark out ... thunsderstorms fast approaching ... nothing else to do but

Marlene

Double chocolate brownies. I'm not sure if i could send it by post, because they're very delicate!!! Maybe a cyber brownie????

Sad to hear about the storm, but very about the writing bit!!!!

I'll be trying to wait patiently!

Il est très intéressant et je l'aime ! I'm not sure if that's right. I used an online translator parce que when i wrote it, it looked wrong.

Jenny

She lazily stretched, her mind still hazy from her impromptus little nap. She wondered what held Jack back, or if he simply granted her that round. How could she feel disappointed that he did take her on her offer, and at the same time relieved that he didn’t place her in a situation she wasn’t certain she could handle? She sighed, just as confused by her own feelings than by Jack’s behaviour.

She came to stand when movements in the corner shower caught her eyes. If anything, she certainly wasn’t ready to handle Jack taking his shower in front of her. Not that she could see much of him through the frosty privacy glass of the shower and the dim illumination of the room, but her imagination was enough to raise the temperature in the room by quite a few degrees. And the steam escaping from over the shower wasn’t helping.

Her towel was out of reach. Her clothes were on the floor by the wall ... along with his, she noticed. Her pink nightie was ... She glanced around. Jack wouldn’t have forgotten, would he, not seeing the top of the counter from her position. What possessed him to ... She watched as the water stopped running, and his hand reached over the side where a towel hung on a hook. When he exited, the towel was loosely tied around his waist. His eyes met hers. He deliberately approached her very very slowly, his smile growing with each step. Pure male satisfaction rose inside him as he noticed her rasped breathing and her large luminous eyes.

“Were you practicing for your next part?” sitting on the side of the tub. He followed her gaze to the beads of water dripping along his chest.

“Next ... part?” her words catching in her throat.

“For when you play Sleeping Beauty”, teasing her, surprised she even read his lips. His hand reached for her burning cheek. “You are beautiful”, he whispered, flustering her even further. She shivered under his touch, his hand skimming down towards her shoulder to disappear under the water as it followed her arm. “Water is getting cold”, he observed, though the bubbles were just as plentiful. “You should come out. I will take care of your back when you joined me in bed”, he huskily suggested before leaning for a tender kiss. His lips barely brushed hers before he pulled away. “Clothes are on the counter”, he informed her before placing her towel by her side and exiting the room to give her some privacy.

Okay, it's 89 degrees here today, but I think we just had a heat spike!!! I'm almost positive it's over 100 now!!!

Joy

For a minute I really thought Jack was gonna join her in the bath ... or he'd sit on the side of the tub and fall in it with his clothes still on .... but giving Sue his full attention in the bedroom and massaging her back there sounds good to me, too ... I could even feel the heat here in The Netherlands, Marlene ....

Marlo29 that was brilliant! I'm so glad you posted!! It was lovely!! Can't wait for the next bit!!! I know, I'm very impatient!!

Jenny

Its been in its 80 here but tempretures just risen
to over a 100 realy getting hotter
more please lin

Jack, the gentleman, reigns. Delicious post, Marlene.

i thought the sun was back here in the netherlands but you are right jolan, marlene it was from your story wow can you write some more scenes maybe i will get a tan from the heat coming from those post off yours

I'm glad Jack was a good boy and didn't join her in the tub. While I would've loved those fuzzies, Jack would not have put Sue in that kind of situation unless she had asked for it. He's such a good guy.

Now. I can't wait to see what he has in store for her in the bedroom....

Oooooo - good job, Marlene. My face is nice refreshed from the double steam bath. I love it!

Ready for more - I can hear thunder rumbling here too.....or is that my stomach?

Here you go Flip.

That was nice of Jack not to join her in the bath (as much as I wanted him to). I sensed she was a little embarrassed. She'll be wondering what's in store for the bedroom, as I certainly am!!!

Can't wait.


Karen

If you dumped snow over here, it'll just all melt into a huge gigantic puddle in just seconds!

I'm melting already!

It seems to me that Jack and Sue might do some talking...or any other activities...

You're not the only one bell! Marlo29, please come back and post soon! I have to go to a really long band practise followed by the service we are performing in, and i would really like a post before I go, so i can focus instead of wondering whether you've posted. Sorry, that was a really long sentence!!! My point is: PLease post soon!

Jenny

Karen

Marlène, Où vous êtes?