Me too, that was just perfect Marlo.

for sharing your amazing talent with us once again.

Can't wait for your next story, which will be soon, right??

Karen

We can hope Karen!!!!

Jen

Another great story, Marlene .... I'm glad it was all a misunderstanding after all


I'm sure Jack and Sue will have a wonderful honeymoon I bet even more lights will sparkle in the 'city of lights' because of the electricity they 'create'

Well done! And you were true to your word! I didn't really think you'd pull of an ending that quickly, but you did and it was PERFECT!!!! Love how Jack told Sophia to tell the team he was on his honeymoon. ...as if they'd believe her.

Thanks for writing this. Another amazing job!

Jill

wonderful ending but i'm sad it's over

cath

I come home from vacation and it's over!

The entire story, beginning to end, was fantastic, amazing, wonderful, extraordinary.. I could go on!!!!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, Marlene

It was wonderful end of wonderful story!!! I really enjoy this little trip to Paris!!!! I am glad Sophia is all right and Jack and Sue will get married !!!!!

FOR THIS STORY!!!!


Restie

Marlene, a fab way to end a great fuzzy story.

okay, better late than never, right???

Great job! So glad to see it was just a big misunderstanding. But I agree, an epilogue would be just what this story needed.... PLEASE???

Loved the story Marlo! Happy ending with Sophia safe and quite humorous storyline. Jack and Sue were beyond fuzzies, definitely sizzling! Loved the Paris getaway, marriage, and of course that wonderful honeymoon!

C'est fantastique! Love the ending of the story! A fabulous plotline! You've got us going for quite awhile! Thank you for writing this story!

Cette histoire était superbe!!!!

I absolutely loved it! I'm so glad all of this case was a misunderstanding. Loved the J/S romance... Loved everything!

Great job!

Helene

Marlene, I had to print this up to finish reading on the bus and it was fantastic! Such fluff, such fuzz and you spared us a dose of your whopping angst! I loved the twisty ending. All a goosechase...just think Randy Pitts is going to give the approval for paying for Jack and Sue's courtship! What poetic justice. The whole story was wonderful as usual.

Carrolle

Just found out this treasure. It was fantastic.

I went on vacation and found you ended the story!
It was terrific and I can't wait for the next one!

Amazing story, so many lovely fuzzy moments