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yhm
Hi, ladies, could you stand one more entry from me? This is fairly short although it'll take a few posts ...

Enjoy ... I hope!


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From: JH@backup-fbi.gov
To: ST@backup-fbi.gov
Subject: Spy Games

Hey, Toots. I thought they’d never leave!

I just wanted to tell you that last night was great. I’d forgotten how much fun going on the secret mission to hunt for a fugitive could be … you, me, together on a case again like the old days. I’ve really missed those days. We need to be careful, though, wouldn't want the surveillance experts getting tipped off that we’re … you know.

Anyway, I’ve made headway in the case and I’ve a pretty good idea where that rascal could be hiding himself; I’m working with another contact in Cyber Crimes to see how we can trap him into revealing himself … just need more time.

Sweet dreams.
learningtosign
i'm positive we could stand another entry

in fact i think we could stand more than one entry from you

intriguing start

cath
suethomasfan2468
I'm with Cath, more than one entry is GREAT. Heck, I've got 3!!! I liked the e-mail, very interesting!!

Jenny
australiagirl
QUOTE(yhm @ Jun 12 2006, 02:52 PM)
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Hey, Toots. I thought they’d never leave!


Ain't that nice!

YHM, we love your work...any entries from you are fab!
suesfan
Yhm, no problem!! In fact, I was going into withdrawal!!!

Can't wait to see where you take us with this!!!

Joy
JesusFreak718
Yhm, I don't think I can get enough of your writing! biggrin.gif That post was short but good. It certainly captured our attention! So, Jack and Sue are what? dating? wub.gif They're secretly working to capture a fugitive? That sounds dangerous! unsure.gif Jack calls Sue "Toots"?!?! laugh.gif
tis*me!
Another entry is great!
Great start! Looking forward to more...

QUOTE(yhm @ Jun 12 2006, 09:52 AM)
Hey, Toots.

Maybe I'm wrong here, but something tells me only Jack could get away with calling Sue "Toots". laugh.gif
yhm
Thanks, ladies. I've finished with the story so the posts should be reasonably fast ... enjoy!
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From: ST@backup-fbi.gov
To: JH@backup-fbi.gov
Subject: re: Spy Games

Hi, sweetie. Me too … I thought they might camp here! Who knew they’d have so much to talk about? I mean, they see each other everyday!

And yes! I had a great time tracking that fugitive with you and it was wonderful to work with you again … ‘adrenaline rush’ doesn’t even cover it, LOL.

There’s an itsy bitsy part of me that wishes this case will take a while just so we can work together longer <blush>. Anyway, do you really think they suspect we’re … you know?
MelissaT
But of course we can handle another entry! The more the merrier! band.gif

By the tone of the emails, I'm guessing that Jack and Sue are dating? wub.gif And he called her "toots"??!! What in the world does that mean?? wacko.gif Anyway, still so glad that you're back and posting! bounching.gif drinking.gif
JesusFreak718
So are they using the Bureau's back-up server for emailing each other or something?
LeviCool
I don't think e-mailing through bureau's accounts is safe. There is a "computer-magician" Tara in the same team. But I love it any way. wub.gif
suethomasfan2468
This so lovely but I'm intrigued about Sue's line : Do you think they know we're.... you know.

yhm, what exactly are they?????

Jenny
australiagirl
YHM...two itsy bitsy posts and my minds already working overtime....what would you say if I said I think they're more than dating, actually they're engaged, working in different units in the same building, but help each other out when needed like now, or Sue's started a new position and no one knows they're dating in secret, I mean how else can he get away calling her "toots" blushing.gif and her call him "sweetie" blushing.gif

I'm all crush.gif and loving every minute of it!
suesfan
Yhm, that's what I like about you - you start with a bang and go out the same way!!

Could they by any chance be married???

Joy
yhm
So many possibilities ... so little time. tongue.gif

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From: JH@backup-fbi.gov
To: ST@backup-fbi.gov
Subject: re: re: Spy Games

No one will suspect anything because we’ve been ultra discreet. And if Tara doesn’t detect our communications, no one will know. That said, we can’t be too careful because … well … you know the rules.

Anyway, Toots, I’ve downloaded a file for you to check. Think you can do a rush job in cross referencing it with the one D sent this morning? There are some entries I’m suspicious of but I won’t tell you which for now … not because I’m being difficult but because I’d like to see if you can locate the oddities and that will help confirm my suspicions.

Missed you at lunch today.
JesusFreak718
I'm definitely curious as to the details on this case they're working on. hmmm.gif
Kav
Where was she at lunch? Why aren't they always working together? They keep saying like old times and working on a case again? I love this -- you're very clever!

kav
MelissaT
I'm definitely getting more and more intrigued by this! book.gif book.gif
australiagirl
Joy, I originally thought they may be married also, but then something in the first post persuaded me otherwise, something about did any of the others notice? And then this

QUOTE
That said, we can’t be too careful because … well … you know the rules.


Anyway what is "Toots" doing about the rush job on this file huh I need to know what happens next....do they meet soon, do we get hints about what is going on...huh...huh?!
LeviCool
Can't wait for more!! I definitely am engrossed into this fic. bouncing fire.gif
suethomasfan2468
yhm, I would really like you to post again!!! *smiles sweetly* Pretty please??? I hope you are okay and are just taking some time to read our weird replies!!

Jenny
suesfan
I'm still playing a guessing game!!!

Joy
yhm
Here you go ...

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From: ST@backup-fbi.gov
To: JH@backup-fbi.gov
Subject: Secret Agent Man

Sweetie, if you’re worried about discretion and the rules, calling me Toots is hardly being discreet. What if someone sees these emails? We’ll never hear … ummm … see the end of it, and I don’t want you to get into trouble.

About the files: I believe you’re on to something. What I’ve found are entries on the second Monday of each month from Feb until May with different times between when the clients deposited money into their accounts and when the bank recorded the transactions … there’s a time lapse of more than two or three minutes in each case.

Are you thinking your rascal placed a bug in the system to enable illegal transactions during this time lapse? Do you suspect any of the clients? Or a bank employee? Or employees?

No one really checks the time, do they, when they deposit money as long as the dates are the same and the money’s there. But trust my super secret agent man to spot the time difference! <big hug>
MelissaT
Sue called Jack her "super secret agent man"! How cute is that?! wub.gif wub.gif Yes, sweetie Jack, if you're using the FBI's back-up server, you can be sure Tara's going to check in on it if she suspects anything.

And yes, I believe you guys are on to something too! rofl.gif dance2.gif
tis*me!
QUOTE(MelissaT @ Jun 14 2006, 06:42 PM)
Sue called Jack her "super secret agent man"! How cute is that?!  wub.gif  wub.gif

I was thinking the same thing!! wub.gif

yhm, great posts! I'm totally intrigued! Looking forward to more!
suethomasfan2468
QUOTE(tis*me! @ Jun 15 2006, 05:15 AM)
QUOTE(MelissaT @ Jun 14 2006, 06:42 PM)
Sue called Jack her "super secret agent man"! How cute is that?!  wub.gif  wub.gif

I was thinking the same thing!! wub.gif

yhm, great posts! I'm totally intrigued! Looking forward to more!

Hmmph, I'm stuck with ditto! Geez, a girl goes to bed for a nice sleep and comes back to a lovely post and all the things she wanted to say, already said. Oh well, you guys probably said it better than i would have! wink.gif

jenny
Bell
Yhm, your stories really are amazingly clever and I noticed two titles of episodes, is this going to continue?? I love the mystery...I just wish for longer posts!! tongue.gif
australiagirl
YHM, thank you.gif for the post, but do you have to tease us like this!

Super Secret Agent man and Toots are sure as heck gonna be found out if Mrs Computer Genius intercepts their e-mails or hacks into their area!
JesusFreak718
Super Secret Agent Man!! wub.gif
yhm
Thanks, ladies, your encouragement is sorely needed!

bell, good spot! And Mel, thanks.


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From: JH@backup-fbi.gov
To: ST@backup-fbi.gov
Subject: re: Secret Agent Man

Super secret agent man, huh? <blushes, ducks head and enjoys hug shamelessly> Now you’ve got me all heated up … if you see me spewing smoke, it’ll be all your fault. And calling me Sweetie is being discreet?

But, yes, you got it: the times are off. There’s no reason for the time difference because these are straight forward deposits that take … what … thirty seconds?

I’ll need access to the original time of each data entry from the bank’s central database to verify the actual transaction times before I can prove something’s wrong. I can guess where that rascal of a fugitive bug is hiding himself but I still need to determine how he’s doing this and who’s been helping him before I can nail him.

The clients appear to have nothing in common and Cyber Crimes has checked them out and cleared them - all regular folks, randomly chosen because they happened to go to the bank on those days. I’m betting they’re probably not even aware extra money’s going in and out of their accounts.

You doing anything tonight, darling?
Bell
QUOTE(yhm @ Jun 15 2006, 06:49 PM)
<blushes, ducks head and enjoys hug shamelessly>

I love how they flirt with each other through those e-mails...they sound happy and carefree!
LeviCool
QUOTE(yhm @ Jun 15 2006, 05:49 PM)
You doing anything tonight, darling?

Nothing without you. Right, Sue? wub.gif
suethomasfan2468
QUOTE(LeviCool @ Jun 15 2006, 05:58 PM)
QUOTE(yhm @ Jun 15 2006, 05:49 PM)
You doing anything tonight, darling?

Nothing without you. Right, Sue? wub.gif

*says in dazed voice* what she said.

Jenny
JesusFreak718
yhm, I'd noticed what Bell mentioned about the eppy titles but I didn't have much time to r & r and I was too caught up in Sue calling Jack "Super secret agent man" to remember to mention that! rolleyes.gif Your stories truly are quite clever and some of my absolute favorites. I love how you've managed to capture such lively, carefree emotion from Jack and Sue through their emails. Truly amazing!
MelissaT
QUOTE(yhm @ Jun 15 2006, 11:49 PM)
<blushes, ducks head and enjoys hug shamelessly>

wub.gif wub.gif wub.gif The both of them are so in love with each other!! And I shall assume that by Jack asking if she has any plans for the night, he's planning to ask her out.. band.gif
tis*me!
QUOTE(bell @ Jun 15 2006, 10:59 AM)
QUOTE(yhm @ Jun 15 2006, 06:49 PM)
<blushes, ducks head and enjoys hug shamelessly>

I love how they flirt with each other through those e-mails...they sound happy and carefree!

ditto.gif

QUOTE(yhm @ Jun 15 2006, 10:49 AM)
You doing anything tonight, darling?

wub.gif

I'm so loving this story, yhm! Looking forward to more...
suesfan
Sweetie, Darling isn't doing a thing tonight, except meeting you!!!

Joy
yhm
From: ST@backup-fbi.gov
To: JH@backup-fbi.gov
Subject: re: re: Secret Agent Man

You are no help. Calling me Darling is worse than calling me Toots. What if someone detects us? Darling is so much more … more … intimate than Toots. <chews lip in worry and embarrassment>

You know, I’m not sure all this name calling is wise. Actually, I’m not even sure any of this is wise … I guess I’m not sure what I want …

Perhaps we should keep things more professional? Step back and think about how a personal relationship could hurt our careers?

Speaking of careers, I think we need Tara’s expertise on this, don’t you? She’s the only one I know who could access the bank’s records without triggering any of the security settings. And it’ll be fun to work with her again.
australiagirl
QUOTE
What if someone detects us? Darling is so much more … more … intimate than Toots.


And Sue, do you really have a problem with that, because see we don't, and Super secret agent man doesn't either!

QUOTE
I guess I’m not sure what I want …


Yes, you do Sue. Listen to the thumping sound!

QUOTE
Step back and think about how a personal relationship could hurt our careers?


No way Sue, you piker!

QUOTE
And it’ll be fun to work with her again.


And why is Tara not working with either of them.....don't tell me they're not a team any longer?

Yhm......where are you?

BTW I'm always here with words of encouragement and what ever else you need, as your stories keep me going through the day!
yhm
I'm here ... having the greatest fun reading.

Thanks ... you've always been a staunch supporter and I'm so, so thankful.
JesusFreak718
yhm, I too am wondering about the team. They are still together aren't they? unsure.gif So many questions? Are you enjoying watching us worry and bite our fingernails again?! laugh.gif
suethomasfan2468
QUOTE(JesusFreak718 @ Jun 16 2006, 03:15 PM)
yhm, I too am wondering about the team. They are still together aren't they? unsure.gif So many questions? Are you enjoying watching us worry and bite our fingernails again?! laugh.gif

Me thinks she is. Right here is what I think:

Jack and Sue are still on the same team otherwise they wouldn't have to worry about inter-team dating
Tara and the rest of the ace-gang are split up for some reason
yhm will post for us soon


Please??? Am I right????? Hopefully about the last bit!!!

Please post soon, I already have very short fingernails (even though I don't bite them) I could be tempted if we don't get a post soon. In cyber-land, I don't have any fingernails because of all the angst!!! I'm going to stop rambling now and wait for a post! waiting.gif

Jenny
LeviCool
Or Jack and/or Sue are/is undercover... huh.gif
suethomasfan2468
QUOTE(LeviCool @ Jun 16 2006, 04:30 PM)
Or Jack and/or Sue are/is undercover... huh.gif

Hadn't thought of that. Geez yhm, are you trying to kill us with suspense???? Do we have a smilie with a smilie being killed by a black cloaked thing with a label called angst/suspense????? Cos if we did, I would have it here --->

Post soon please!!

Jenny
LeviCool
Need help, Jenny?
IPB Image
suethomasfan2468
QUOTE(LeviCool @ Jun 16 2006, 04:57 PM)
Need help, Jenny?
IPB Image

That's a great smilie, now it just needs two labels, one pointing to the porr smilie under the bat, saying poor readers, then another pointing the batter saying angst.

Great smilie LeviCool!!! wink.gif

Please post soon yhm, can you see the madness we're talking about here? Allocating smilies to emotions. Scary huh!!!!

Jenny
lilsmoochiegirl
Sue, please tell me that you aren't getting cold feet...
suesfan
Yhm, you really have me thinking on this one!!

I think Darling and Super Secret Agent Man are cute!!!

Joy
crazy4stfbe
The team split?!?!?!?!?!
Ivory
yhm,

I'm catching up after a week away. You are conveying so much with simply using email. Please post more soon. I want to know more.
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