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crazy4stfbe
Hey! tongue.gif I got it eventually, didn't I?
yhm
QUOTE(crazy4stfbe @ Jul 25 2006, 11:30 PM)
I think I get it now, yhm, JF. Are they Jack and Sue?

Whoa! Before anything else, who's the 'they' you're referring to, Nicole?

Must be the heat ... definitely.
MelissaT
QUOTE(yhm @ Jul 26 2006, 09:44 AM)
Must be the heat ... definitely.

Sure, yhm dearie, blame it all on the heat.. happy.gif
Ivory
Well, I'll didn't quite expect that one. The computers are dialoging. That was clever to give them personalities. biggrin.gif
crazy4stfbe
QUOTE(yhm @ Jul 23 2006, 07:28 PM)
Just because he’s a lawyer doesn’t mean you have to take after him; I swear you’re learning all the wrong things.
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BTW, speaking of happy endings, now that you two are … you know … and you have access to their home ISPs, can you confirm if Sue’s been Googling baby names?


So him is Jack and their home is our Jack and Sue's home (the people)?
yhm
QUOTE(crazy4stfbe @ Jul 26 2006, 02:52 AM)
So him is Jack and their home is our Jack and Sue's home (the people)?

Yep! thumbup.gif

Jack doing surveillance at the bank is essentially the real Jack using his computer to access the bank's database, and his computer communicates with Tara's and Sue's computers. The emails thus take on a different perspective.

I figured we've had Levi's POV in other stories, why not have some fun with the team's computers and a dose of Artificial Intelligence ... at least, that was the plan. Sorry if it's disappointing. crying.gif
crazy4stfbe
QUOTE(yhm @ Jul 25 2006, 11:52 PM)
I figured we've had Levi's POV in other stories, why not have some fun with the team's computers' and a dose of Artificial Intelligence ... at least, that was the plan. Sorry if it's disappointing. crying.gif

No, it was great! I really enjoyed it. I will look forward to your next story!
MelissaT
No, it wasn't disappointing at all! I loved this whole new and novel way! I love it! thumbup.gif
Kav
clapping.gif You are the cleverest of cleverests. Now what about those baby names? rofl.gif
kav
Ivory
I think this is so very clever. With all of the things that they are doing with computers today, something like this could be closer to happening then we might think. wink.gif
suesfan
Disappointing?? Not by a long shot!!!

This is very clever, Yhm!! You certainly know how to keep us going!! I always love your ideas!!!

Joy
australiagirl
Yhm...your one clever thinker, I love the way you write and the stories you've written. They make me think, I like that!
tis*me!
It's not disappointing at all, Yhm! It's brilliant! I loved this story! I know I said it before, but I love how you used episode titles as the email subject. And I loved how with the last email you used the story title as the subject heading. Very clever, Yhm! Great job! clapping.gif
yhm
Thank you, ladies, for reading and for the encouragement and support. thank you.gif
Levi_rocks
OK! After rereading the last few posts, I've finally got what was going on all this time!!! It was very clever yhm!!!! outstanding.gif
Bell
yhm, don't even think for a moment that it was disapointing...it was really clever and I loved it!
wicked and welsh
Incredible idea yhm! Definately an unexpected twist clapping.gif

outstanding.gif
LeviCool
What a twist! I loved it very much. thumbsup.gif

Post Scriptum: I am glad I missed the agony about what's really going on. My heated mind wouldn't take it easily. wacko.gif
chelseasoph
Hey yhm,

What an amazing story, I'm just sorry I missed the story as it was running.

I love the way you make us think with your stories, it makes them all the more compelling.

Thanks

Soph
kw9171
it wasn't disappointing...just a little confusing.
but im glad jack and sue are together for real...and maybe looking up baby names.
love the different pov's and personalities expressed through e-mail.
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