Again and

Em you can't keep doing this to us.....on second thought, yes you can!!

Just be warned that a few of us may end up with concussion

I really dont know what to say Good job though, Post more!!!




Mallory

I'm glad you guys enjoyed! Here is the next part and then I have one more after that and then I'm done! I'm leaving this week to go out of town for a few days and I wanted to be done before I left so I didn't leave you guys hanging Here you go!

Em

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Just as Jack predicted, the day did drag on. After the initial teasing comments about Jack and Sue’s late arrival, the team settled down to do their paperwork, wondering if they’d be getting a new case soon. Paperwork was just so boring, although, after the last case, a little break wouldn’t be so bad.
Especially for Sue. Jack thought as he looked at her, again. He had to stop doing that. He was having a hard enough time concentrating on his report without looking at her. This time he caught her eye and she smiled. She couldn’t concentrate either. He could see it in her eyes and she knew it. She laughed and rolled her eyes, looking back down at her desk. He watched her fidget restlessly. He was still looking at her when she raised her eyes back to his. They both laughed. This was getting ridiculous. He needed to touch her. He went to stand just as Lucy returned, blowing into the bullpen like a tornado. A tornado that whisked Sue away at the end of the day.
“I’m sorry.” Sue said with a pout as she said good bye to Jack.
“It’s ok.” Jack was disappointed, but he understood why Lucy wanted ‘girl time’. She’d been so worried and she’d missed out an quite a few days. “Have fun tonight. You girls do, whatever girls do.” He paused with a smirk. “Get some sleep.” Sue smiled knowingly. “I’ll see you in the morning.”
Sue nodded. “Yeah.”
As much as she was looking forward to hanging out with Lucy and Tara, she’d rather spend tonight doing what she did last night. She bit her lip as images of those activities flashed through her mind.
“Sue.” Jack warned as his heart started to pound.
She whined as she looked around the office. What were all of these people still doing here? How was she suppose to give Jack a proper good bye? She sighed with frustration.
Jack shifted his weight from one foot to the other in an attempt to distract his body from grabbing hers.
“I’ll see you in the morning.” She finally echoed and she turned to meet Lucy, Levi, and Tara, who were waiting at the door. She cast one last look over her shoulder.
“I love you.” He mouthed just for her and he winked when she smiled back.
“Me too.” She signed before she disappeared out the door.
Jack shook his head and sat with a smile. This was going to be a long night too. Of course, maybe without her here he’d be able to finish his report before he left.

“So you’re really ok?” Lucy asked as she handed Tara and Sue their salads.
“I’m really ok.” Sue assured her. “I only had two muscle spasms today, which is worse than yesterday, but I’m getting used to them so they are easier to handle.” They settled down in the living room. “The soreness in my body is practically gone, and I get my stitches out in the morning. I’m almost back to normal.” She shrugged.
“Good.” Lucy nodded. “You have no idea how worried I was when I dropped you off that day. And then when I spoke to Tara I almost jumped on the first plane back.”
Sue smiled.” Well I’m glad you didn’t. You needed the vacation with your mom and as nice as it would have been to have you here, everyone took really good care of me.”
“Especially Jack.” Tara added with a smile.
A smirk crossed Lucy’s face. “Really?” She said with interest.
Sue smiled shyly. “He’s been great.”
Tara laughed. “He stayed here the whole time you were gone, just to make sure she was ok. We could barely get him to leave.”
Lucy nodded and Sue could tell by her smile that there was something she wasn’t saying.
“What?” Sue asked reluctantly.
“Nothing.” Lucy couldn’t stop smiling. “I assumed he probably did.”
Sue was getting worried.
“It explains why I found a man’s undershirt in the apartment. Although it’s a little unclear how it got part way under the couch.”
“What?!” Tara shrieked.
So that’s it. Sue thought. She knew she was blushing and by the look on Lucy’s face Sue knew there was no use in even trying to make up an excuse or form any sort of defense. She didn’t even know what to say.
Lucy laughed. “Ok girl. Spill.”
Tara nodded enthusiastically.
“You guys.” Sue protested with a laugh.
“Not everything. We’re not perverts.” Lucy assured her. “But you have to at least tell us how it finally happened.”
Sue smiled. “Ok. But first, tell me what you did with Jack’s shirt.”
Lucy nodded, understanding completely. “It’s on your bed.”

Sue slept in it that night and when she woke up from a nightmare, the scent alone gave her enough comfort to go back to sleep.

You know, Em, we'd love to have been around as Sue told them ...

How sweet!

cath

Busted!
kav

I didn't think Sue was going to be able to keep Lucy away from the truth for long!!!

Joy

i see you i see you are you going to post....pleaseeeeee

She's more than busted, she's been found out truely and completley!

Em, I've really been enjoying myself with this story and you say there's only one more post before your done, I'm sad now....please tell me your gonna do another one soon, when you get back?

Love this story Em, can't wait for the next post!

Great job, and I loved how the girls were trying to get Sue to tell them. So cute!!! I am looking forward to your next post.




Mallory

Besides Sue, Lucy was the last person to enter the bullpen the next morning.
“Hey Luce.” Bobby greeted. “Tara was just telling us a little about your girls night last night. What exactly is a McDreamy?”
Lucy burst out laughing and turned to Tara. “Nice.” She nodded. “What did you say?”
Tara smiled and shrugged. “I just told him that we ate, and talked, and when he asked what we talked about I told him ‘girl stuff’, and that you guys gave me advise about my McDreamy.”
Lucy nodded and continued to laugh.
“That doesn’t answer my question.” Bobby complained.
Jack shook his head. “I’d let it go Crash. I don’t think you’ll ever get an answer.” He then turned to Lucy. “Where’s Sue?”
Lucy feigned offense. “Hey. I’m great thanks for asking.”
“Sorry.” Jack smiled. “Hey Luce. How are you?”
“She’s getting her stitches out.” Lucy laughed.
“Still? I thought she’d be done by now.” He said. Her appointment was early.
Lucy shrugged. “She probably stopped to get coffee or something.”
She was right. Ten minutes later Sue arrived, carrying three grande cups from Starbuck's, giving one to Lucy and one to Tara.
“Where’s mine?” Jack teased with a smile when she turned to him.
She smiled back apologetically. “Hey, we were up very late coming to some very important conclusions about Tara’s McDreamy. We earned these.” She explained and Tara and Lucy both laughed.
Especially after Bobby yelled, “What’s a McDreamy.”
Sue just smiled at him and turned to her desk.
Jack turned to Bobby and shook his head with a smile before he turned back to Sue, who was approaching his desk.
“So what do you think?” She asked, modeling her newly revealed scar.
Jack stood and the rest of the team gathered.
“Looks hot.” Jack approved, resisting the urge to lightly run his fingers over the pink flesh.
“I told you it would be sexy.” Bobby said with a nod and Sue smiled, her eyes meeting Jack’s as the rest of the team laughed and dispersed, going back to whatever they were doing before.
Jack smiled playfully and shrugged. “I’ve seen sexier.” He whispered while discretely sliding his finger over her ribs.
Sue could feel her cheeks burn as she remembered the way he’d discovered the small pink scar just below her left breast on his very thorough exploration of her body.
“Careful.” She cautioned with a smile. “Room full of people.” She pointed out and turned to her desk.
Jack smiled. Oh yeah. He thought. Damn it.

By mid afternoon Jack couldn’t take the torture anymore and, using some lame excuse about needing something (no one quite understood what it was), he practically dragged Sue to the elevator, where D caught them making out.
He smirked at their surprised faces when they jumped apart and he leaned into the elevator.
“If you want to change floors you have to push one of these buttons.” He teased, pushing the button for the parking garage and letting the doors, once again, slide closed before he went back to the bullpen to collect his forty dollar winnings. Six days on the dot.

“Hey. I was wondering if you were still up.” Jack said when Sue answered her blackberry later that night.
“Well, you know, I had to get up to answer my blackberry.” She teased, both remembering when he’d said almost the same thing long ago.
Jack laughed. “I’m sorry.”
“Actually, I was talking to Lucy. She just went to bed.” She told him. “What are you still doing up?”
He smiled into the phone. “My bed is just so uninviting. It’s big, and cold, and... empty.”
He heard Sue laugh. “Yeah, mine too.” She said with a sigh.
“I could be there in ten minutes.” He offered.
“Jack... What about Lucy?” She asked.
“You didn’t tell her?” He was sure she had from all the weird looks Lucy, and Tara for that matter, had been giving him all day.
He heard Sue laugh again. “I didn’t have to. She found your shirt sticking out from under the couch.”
“Oops.” Jack laughed. “Sorry about that.”
“Don’t be. I slept in it last night.” She said temptingly and Jack groaned.
“Sue.” He protested. “I did not need to know that.”
He was suppose to be getting ready for bed, not creating new fantasies. The only reason he’d called was because he wanted to hear her voice, hoping that it would tied him over until he could see her tomorrow. No chance of that now.
He fell back onto his couch.
Sue laughed but didn’t apologize. “You may not get it back.”
“Keep it.” Jack said. “I’m sure it looks better on you.”
“As long as it’s off you...” She teased.
“Sue!” He groaned again.
“What?” She asked innocently.
There was a knock at his door and Jack turned his head to look at it with confusion. Who in the world would be at his apartment now?
“Hold on. Someone’s at my door.” He said and he stood, slowly walking to it.
He opened the door to find Sue leaning against the frame, a smug smile on her face, her blackberry already put away.
He smiled and clicked off his phone, throwing it over his shoulder.
“I hope that wasn’t an important call.” She played. “I didn’t mean to interrupt.”
Jack smiled. “I’ll make it up to her.” He said with a shrug and a wink a second before he wrapped an arm around her waist and grasped the back of her head with the other hand, dragging her into his apartment and crushing his lips to hers possessively.
The slam of the door echoed down the hall.

The End

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*McDreamy is a phrase I stole from Grey's Anatomy (I don't know if any of you watch it). It essentially means if you could dream up your perfect guy and order him - say at McDonalds (hence the "Mc"), he would be a McDreamy. For example - Sue's McDreamy would be Jack. My McDreamy would be... Jack. I'll leave Tara's McDreamy up to you guys, although I have my own idea... coughBobbycough.

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Well guys - that's it! Thank you so much for joining me on the ride - you've all made it a blast!

You guys are incredible!

Until next time...

Loves and hugs,

Em

Bravo, Em. A brilliant ending ... nice touch with the visit.

Terrific story! I loved it!

Lovely ending, Em. I think my Mcdreamy would be a toss up between Jack, Bobby and Myles depending on who was standing there at the moment!!! I'm so fickle!!!!

kav

Em that was brill, I really do hope we get another story from you soon!

Yes, Em, Jack would definitely be my McDreamy!!

What a wonderful story, Em, and what a different approach to Sue especially!! I like her!!!

I love the fact that she was on her way to Jack's apartment while she was on the phone with him!! A perfect ending!!!

Thanks so much for sharing!! Can't wait for your next story!!!

Joy

wow, that was a slap in my face.....the end....no not the end, you just go and make a sequele or just make a new story, it's ok with me, you don't have to wait on my account, just keep on writing

loved it Em it was great, trully great, loved the diffrent sue, loved jack off course and deffinetly loved the fuzzies between them....amazing

Em, I said it before and I'll say it again, you wrote Sue in a totally different character and made it believable and enjoyable...a sign of good writing in my book.

Looking forward to hearing from you again.

Absloutely fantastic Em!! Love the way you ended it

My McDreamy would would have to be Jack, although watching re-runs of the series I think I may be getting a thing for Bobby too!

loved it

cath

loved the story hope you do a follow up : : lin

Wow what a story Em!! That was great. I look forward to your stories in the future.



Great Job and I loved the J/S fuzzies. I can tell you are a real J/S Fan!!!





Mallory

Brilliant ending, Em, I loved the McDreamy scene and I hope to see a new story from you in the future, I love your attention to the small details and I adore your fuzzy fuzzies, keep up the good work!

Great ending! I hope you write more in the future!

Damn girl...oh my gosh this was an amazing story....keep up the good work....

Em, I just read your story and I loved it!!! I love the new, bold Sue (well, one of them had to move faster than a turtle)!

Donna

Em, I've been trying to catch up on some of your stories. This was fantastic.

Enjoyed it all, well, except for the part where Sue was poisoned and almost died!!

But loved the great teasing and smoozing between Sue and Jack. Bobby was fun, too.

thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.

Great job it was so funny, emotional and definatly hot!!! McDreamy!