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tis*me!
It's me again; this is my fourth entry into the Challenge! Hopefully, y'all aren't too sick of me yet! Somebody should have probably told me this writing thing could be addictive! laugh.gif I had the idea for this short story the other day and was able to write it fairly quickly. It's just one post. I hope y'all enjoy it! I want to thank Jenny (suethomasfan2468) for beta'ing it for me! thank you.gif

Thanks for reading,
Tracy (tis*me!)
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One month after Sue changed her mind about going to New York…


Sue was rummaging through the "junk drawer" in the kitchen of her and Lucy's apartment, looking for a spare key, when she came across an envelope addressed to her. Puzzled, not remembering ever having seen it before, she decided to ask Lucy about it.

"Hey Luce!" Sue exclaimed.

"Yeah, Sue?" Lucy said, after having moved into Sue's line of vision.

"Do you know what this is and where it came from?" Sue questioned.

"It looks like a piece of mail. I'm not sure where it came from." Lucy said.

"It's addressed to me, just my name though, no address, no return name or address, and no stamp. It looks like Jack's handwriting." Sue said, confused.

"Ohhhhhh, I think I know what it is!" Lucy said, realization dawning.

"Mind sharing with me?" asked Sue.

"The morning that we thought was going to be your last day with the team, when you were set to take the job in New York, I ran into Jack in the parking lot before work. He gave me this and asked that I give it to you right before you got on the plane for New York. I, of course, already knew that you had changed your mind, but I didn't tell Jack, because I was hoping that he would reveal his true feelings for you, if he thought you were still leaving. With all the excitement of you staying and the 'Welcome Back' party, I completely forgot about it! I'm not sure how it got in the drawer. I put it in my purse, and then, I guess, when I went to clean out my purse, I just dumped it in there with some other stuff." Lucy explained.

"I wonder what it is..." Sue said curiously.

"Well, I know one sure way to find out!" said Lucy.

"Huh?" questioned Sue.

"READ IT, SILLY!!!" said Lucy.

Sue went to her room and sat down on her bed before opening the letter and reading it.




Dear Sue,

First, let me say that I hope that you are able to read my handwriting. I thought about typing this letter. It probably would have been easier to read, but it just seemed too impersonal.

I'm going to give this letter to Lucy tomorrow so that she can give it to you right before you get on the plane for New York (Once again, I'm so sorry that I can't see you off at the airport, but I have plans that just can't be changed!). I hope to be able to tell you this in person, but just in case I end up "chickening out" (Uh oh, I just opened myself up again for more of those chicken jokes, didn't I? LOL), I can't let you go without telling you this...

I've been tossing and turning all night, unable to sleep, thinking about you, Sue. Thinking about how much I'm going to miss you! Thinking about how much I'm going to miss our lunches, our dinners, our walks with Levi, our talks, etc.

You'll never know how much of a difference you've made in my life, Sue. You've made me a far better person than I was before I met you! I thank God everyday that you barged into the bullpen that day, thinking it was personnel! I know at the time that you were embarrassed about it, but I truly believe it was God's will...and that's just one of the ways you've made my life better, Sue.

You restored my faith, in God, most importantly, but also in people. You are the most loving, caring, compassionate, intelligent, beautiful woman I have ever met, and I can't imagine my life without you! I love you, Sue! I'm madly, deeply, head over heels in love with you! I have been for a long time, but I was afraid to admit it! I was afraid of breaking the rules! I was afraid of ruining our friendship, which I treasure! I was afraid you didn't feel the same! Quite frankly, I was just plain afraid!

As much as I'll miss you, and as much as I love you, and yes, I did say that I love you, I know that I can't stand in the way of your success. This is a wonderful opportunity you've been given, Sue, and I'm so proud of you for having accomplished so much. But then again, it doesn't surprise me!

I know you'll be a huge asset to any team that's lucky, make that blessed, enough to have you. Because of you each and every member of our team is a better individual than they were before you came! Our team is a better team because of you!

I can't imagine coming to work and not seeing your beautiful smile! On the upside, because we'll no longer be in the same unit, the "no inter-unit dating" policy would no longer apply! If you feel the same for me as I do for you, and if you're interested, we could give long-distance dating a try?!

Please know, that no matter what, I'm only a phone call or an email away. Don't hesitate to contact me, day or night! If you need me to come to New York, for any reason, let me know and I'll hop on the first available plane. I would do anything for you, Sue! I'll miss you desperately!

Love,
Jack

P.S. I love you! I love you! I love you! (Just in case I didn't make it clear enough before!)




Tears of joy streaming down her face, Sue carefully put the letter back in the envelope. She rushed to get ready and head over to Jack's apartment, as quickly as possible.

Jack was already expecting her for dinner; they'd made plans to have pizza and watch a movie at seven o'clock, but she couldn't wait that long to see him now. It was only five o'clock -- two hours would seem like an eternity to her, after reading his declaration of love for her.

Rushing out of her bedroom and into the living room, she reached for her keys and told Lucy "I'm going to go ahead and go over to Jack's!"

"I thought dinner was at seven o'clock?" Lucy questioned.

"It is, but I need to go early!" Sue said.

"Why?" Lucy asked, a Cheshire grin forming on her face. "What did that letter say? Are you going to share?"

"Not now, Luce!" Sue said, as she quickly headed out the door with Levi, ensuring that she had the letter in her possession.

Arriving at Jack's place a short time later, Sue nervously knocked on the door.

Jack opened the door relatively quickly, a look of surprise on his face. "Hey, Sue! You're early...is something wrong?" he said with concern.

"No...umm...umm..." Sue began.

"What is it, Sue? You're starting to worry me!"

Taking a deep breath, and summoning up all the courage she could muster, Sue drew closer to Jack and lovingly placed a hand on each side of his face and drawing his face closer to her's, she kissed him passionately.

"WOW! What was THAT for?" Jack asked in surprise, once he was actually able to speak again. "Not that I'm complaining, mind you!" he said, with a huge smile on his face.

"I love you! I love you! I love you, too!" Sue said, handing Jack the letter in her hand.

"I love you, too! But...what..." he started, as he began scanning the letter. "Oh, my goodness, this is the letter I wrote you when I thought you were going to New York!!!" Jack said in surprise.

"Yeah! I found it today, just a little while ago! And I'm so glad I did! It's such a beautiful letter, Jack! I love it! And I love you for writing it!" Sue said.

"I totally forgot about it, and I guess Lucy did, too!" Jack said.

"Well, I'm glad you DID forget about it, because if you'd remembered you probably would have found a way to get it back from Lucy! And then I would have never seen it!"

"You're probably right!" Jack said slightly embarrassed.

"I'm definitely right, Jack! Is that what you were going to tell me before Myles interrupted and revealed that I was staying?" Sue asked.

"It's what I wanted to tell you before Myles interrupted. Who knows if I would have had the nerve to do it?" Jack answered honestly. "By the way, Sue, I did mean every single word of it! I love you!"

"Jack, I just want you to know that I love you too, and I have for a very long time! I don't know what I'd do without you in my life either! That's the main reason I decided not to go to New York! If I have to transfer to another unit so that we can date, I will! I love my job, and I love our team, but I love you more, Jack!" Sue said, with tears in her eyes.

"Well, let's worry about that later! Right now, I think we've done enough talking!" he said with a huge smile and a wink. Lovingly embracing her, he kissed her passionately, while she willingly and eagerly responded.

"You have absolutely no idea how thankful I am that I wrote that letter!" Jack managed to say, in between kisses.

"Me too, Jack, me too!" Sue said, as she leaned in for another kiss.


THE END
suethomasfan2468
Told you I'd be first in line!!! As I said before, it's great!!!!! wink.gif I was happy to beta for you!!!

Jenny
yannick in my heart
wow how can i miss this, it's amazing, jack how can you forget your letter, not that i mind, because sue wouldn't have found out .... i loved it great wub.gif
Mirjam
That was really sweet! Can't believe Lucy forgot about the letter but I am glad she didn't throw it away! Great!
learningtosign
loved it, glad i found it before i headed to bed wub.gif

cath
Ivory
One little letter can sure give a big opening. This was a cute short story. I enjoyed it.
yhm
QUOTE(tis*me! @ Jun 17 2006, 02:17 PM)
It's me again; this is my fourth entry into the Challenge!  Hopefully, y'all aren't too sick of me yet!  Somebody should have probably told me this writing thing could be addictive!

Good news, Tracy - you have 2 more titles to go! tongue.gif We'll tell you when we're sick of you ... ask us again in 2010.

Funny, I did something similar a while back, only it was Sue who wrote to Jack! Always knew the pen (stylus, ink, quill, whatever) was mightier than the sword. Loved how you portrayed Sue's mad dash to Jack's.
Kav
laugh.gif Just think, Lucy the matchmaker was sitting on that little gem all the time!!!! How ironic is that?

kav
Bell
QUOTE(Kav @ Jun 18 2006, 06:14 AM)
laugh.gif Just think, Lucy the matchmaker was sitting on that little gem all the time!!!! How ironic is that?


rofl2.gif I guess it was meant to be that way...great little piece, Tracy
suethomasfan2468
QUOTE(yhm @ Jun 18 2006, 02:27 AM)
QUOTE(tis*me! @ Jun 17 2006, 02:17 PM)
It's me again; this is my fourth entry into the Challenge!  Hopefully, y'all aren't too sick of me yet!  Somebody should have probably told me this writing thing could be addictive!

Good news, Tracy - you have 2 more titles to go! tongue.gif We'll tell you when we're sick of you ... ask us again in 2010.

Funny, I did something similar a while back, only it was Sue who wrote to Jack! Always knew the pen (stylus, ink, quill, whatever) was mightier than the sword. Loved how you portrayed Sue's mad dash to Jack's.

2010???? Try never!!! We'll never tire of your stories!!! They're so good!! Don't worry, I'm addicted to it too!!!

wink.gif Jenny
tis*me!
Thanks everyone (Jenny, yannick in my heart, Mirjam, Cath, Ivory, yhm, Kav, bell) for the wonderful replies! They are greatly appreciated! I'm glad you enjoyed it; I enjoyed writing it!

QUOTE(yhm @ Jun 17 2006, 09:27 PM)
Good news, Tracy - you have 2 more titles to go! tongue.gif  We'll tell you when we're sick of you ... ask us again in 2010.

I think I'm probably just going to stick to the 4, but you never know! shrug.gif
So, I guess that means that at least you aren't sick of me just yet!? laugh.gif

QUOTE(yhm @ Jun 17 2006, 09:27 PM)
Funny, I did something similar a while back, only it was Sue who wrote to Jack!

Really? I didn't know. I'll have to read it sometime, when I get a chance. Just proves, once again "there is nothing new under the sun" (Ecclesiastes 1:9, NIV).

Glad you enjoyed Sue's mad dash to Jack's! I just figured that's how she would respond...

Kav, I'm glad you appreciated the irony! Can't you just imagine Lucy's reaction when she finds out? laugh.gif

QUOTE(suethomasfan2468 @ Jun 18 2006, 06:32 AM)
2010???? Try never!!! We'll never tire of your stories!!! They're so good!!

Okay, so I guess that means that at least you and yhm aren't sick of me yet! biggrin.gif
Thanks, Jenny! I really appreciate that! You're too kind!!!

QUOTE(suethomasfan2468 @ Jun 18 2006, 06:32 AM)
Don't worry, I'm addicted to it too!!!

wink.gif Jenny

So, maybe someone should set up some sort of intervention for us? hmmm.gif

Nah!!!!!


ickleails
Perfect in every way possible..... band.gif
suethomasfan2468
Us writing-addicts should stick together!!! I'm not too knid, just telling the truth!!! Tracy, we'll never get sick of you!! Ever!!

Jenny wink.gif
JesusFreak718
Tracy, just found this and of course I loved it! Are you sure you're not going to do any more Challenges because I'm not sick of you yet either! tongue.gif
tis*me!
QUOTE(JesusFreak718 @ Jun 19 2006, 02:19 PM)
Tracy, just found this and of course I loved it! Are you sure you're not going to do any more Challenges because I'm not sick of you yet either! tongue.gif

Thanks, ickleails, Jenny, and JF, for the wonderful comments! I really appreciate them! No, I'm not sure I'm not going to do any more Challenge stories, but I haven't had any ideas for the other 2 titles yet. Plus, I've got to finish writing what I've started so far. rolleyes.gif Glad to know that you haven't gotten sick of me yet either, JF!
marlo29
Looking for a spare key ... and finding the key to Jack's heart!!! wub.gif
wicked and welsh
Aww, so sweet!! Great writing wub.gif
suesfan
Tracy, I'm trying to catch up on all the challenge stories and found this one, and am I glad I did!!!

I'm surprised that Lucy forgot about the letter!! It is ironic isn't it that she had the letter all this time that would get these two together once and for all!!!

I love that Sue ran to Jack immediately!! It was absolutely perfect - that's exactly what she would have done!!!

Thanks for sharing with us once again!! Tired of you?? Don't even think it!!! You write - I'll read!!!

Joy
theatrenut86
I loved that....I needed that for my sanity....wink.gif biggrin.gif cool.gif kissing.gif wub.gif dance.gif
kw9171
beautiful letter
yay they kissed kiss.gif
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