Rosa17
Jul 24 2006, 04:08 AM
Great post I'm glad it went well
lindylou
Jul 24 2006, 08:49 AM

great post cath pleased the parents like
each other and are delighted for jack and sue
cant wait for next post

lin
tosca
Jul 24 2006, 12:58 PM

Ah....I love it when a plan comes together! Now, onto the wedding!
tis*me!
Jul 24 2006, 04:15 PM
Another great post, Cath! I'm glad the announcement went so well. I look forward to more!
suesfan
Jul 24 2006, 04:30 PM
Cath, I just caught up again!! Three great posts!!!
I'm so glad that they don't have to go back to Randy's ever again!!! I'm sure if the situation comes up again, the answer will be a resounding NO!!!
I'm glad that they told Charlie about the engagement early and asked him to be a part of the wedding!!!
I love the way Ted told the team that the no-dating rule was gone and I'm glad both families are happy with the upcoming wedding!!
Joy
learningtosign
Jul 25 2006, 12:31 AM
Chapter 19
‘Thomas……………… a word ………..’ Randy’s nasal tones drifted down the corridor as Sue and Levi stepped out of the elevator on Monday morning, followed by Jack.
Levi put his paw up to alert Sue just as Jack touched her arm and wrapped his arm around her shoulder.
‘Randy…………. What can I do for you………..?’
‘I wanted to thank you for looking after my pets so well while I was away…….. and to reward you I have decided that Hudson will be doing all your reports from now on……………. I was on my way to see you all, I understand that there has been an administrative error in my absence and as such I have to demand payment from you all, in lieu of expenses which were incorrectly paid out by Morris while he was covering for me…………. He made payments for expenses incurred incorrectly as well as those claimed on the wrong paperwork…….. he will of course be dealt with by myself……….. and demoted to office cleaner or some such menial task to which he is no doubt well suited………. since he has once again proven himself to be woefully unsuitable for a post in Office Services………………’
Sue looked blankly at Jack since she had no idea what Randy was prattling on about.
Jack filled her in as Randy continued to talk.
‘Actually Randy, I think you will find that it is not your place to demote Wayne……….. Ted has taken on that responsibility….. he was more than a little concerned that you have failed on a number of occasions to reimburse us for legitimate expenses………… I understand he wishes to see you to discuss a number of issues………….’
‘Yes, well I have a number of issues which I wish to discuss with him, such as your inappropriate and excessive use of bureau issue paperclips…….. as well as the obvious breach of FBI policy number 126 point 7 subsection 68 paragraph 325.4, ‘the forbidding of inter-unit dating’……….. I assume since I see an engagement ring on Thomas’ finger and you have your arm wrapped around her in a most inappropriate manner that you are in breach of that policy Hudson………..’
‘Talk away Randy, talk away……….. if such a policy exists, it refers to dating……… nothing about being engaged or married………. now if you will excuse us we have a country to save……….. and one more thing……… I won’t be writing Sue’s reports…….. she was helping you out and you cannot allow that kind act to affect what you do in the workplace…….’
As they walked away Sue turned, ‘one more thing Randy……….. if I were you I’d tread carefully around here………. We wouldn’t want Ted to find out you named an Iguana after him would we……………….?’
As Randy walked off muttering something incomprehensible about agents Jack dragged Sue into a room and closed the door before pulling her close for a kiss that left her breathless and wanting more.
Fade
yhm
Jul 25 2006, 01:49 AM
It's over?

But ... but ... Randy's still there!
Kav
Jul 25 2006, 06:18 AM

Love how Sue had the last word! I don't think I will ever look at Randy Pitts in the same way again!
kav
lindylou
Jul 25 2006, 06:40 AM

that was smashing realy was,loved the way randy
was put in his place by both jack and sue

lin
suesfan
Jul 25 2006, 09:53 AM
What a story, Cath!! And, I love that Jack called Randy on the carpet!! Sue was cute about the Iguana being named after Ted!!! I don't think it's going to be a very good week for Randy!!!
I love it from start to finish!!! Thanks for sharing!!!
Joy
australiagirl
Jul 25 2006, 10:16 AM
Cath that was a great story from beginning to end, just loved all the icky bits with the critters to the fun and love shared by our favorite characters.
Another well done for another great story!
Rosa17
Jul 25 2006, 01:48 PM
Thansk for writing such a great story for us to enjoy
tis*me!
Jul 25 2006, 04:17 PM
A great ending to a great story! Thanks for sharing, Cath!
Ivory
Jul 25 2006, 06:35 PM
Thanks for a great story, Cath. I even liked the "creepy" parts.
JesusFreak718
Jul 25 2006, 07:43 PM
Fantastic story Cath! You had some very unique ideas and I love the way that Sue got the last word with Randy!
wicked and welsh
Jul 27 2006, 03:44 PM
Brilliant Story Cath, loved the way you dealt with Randy in the end!!
Jill
Aug 1 2006, 11:52 AM

Sheesh....rats and randy...who'd of thought. Great story! Thanks for writing it!
Jill
Oreolover
Aug 2 2006, 10:28 AM
k80cue
Aug 5 2006, 05:35 PM
Great Story. Liked the way that Sue couldnt keep her hands of Jack
- but then again who could in that situation
theatrenut86
Oct 17 2006, 05:55 PM

I am so glad this story is over...you are a good writer as always but I almost

a lot...happy about the engagement tho.
kw9171
May 8 2010, 04:41 PM
ugh randy.
glad their time at the reptile house is over and an engagement came out of it as well as an abolisment of that stupid rule.
love how even charlie played matchmaker
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