it was amazing and you deserve all the credit you are getting.

Great story Ivory and the perfect ending.

I liked how you changed the meaning of the proverb into something so positive, at the end.

Thanks for sharing.

Soph

I always did wonder about those people in the background!!!! Great finish Ivory!!!

Jen

Now that you mentioned it i wondered who the other people in the office were. i mean the room is big and there seems to be other agents foating around. anyway great ending i look forward to your next story.

Just beautiful...sniff sniff

Love how you ended it, with the wedding.

Great work.

~laura michelle~

What a lovely ending.....you did well with the topic. Keep up the good work. Cant wait to read more of your stuff.

Ivory, I love how you had the assistant director put Jack to the test and then reassign him back to the team!! Very clever to bring in all those people we see floating around all the time who are never explained!!!

What a beautiful wedding - and happily ever after!!!

Thanks for sharing!!!

Joy

Simply wonderful!
thanks so much,
Terie

Fantastic! This was a job well done. I especially loved the last line. That about sums up everything about life.

Kim

I can't begin to tell you how much I've enjoyed this story ... so I won't. I will simply say thank you for thinking about this, and for taking the time to write.

Yes I always wondered about those people in background too Ivory!!

Lovely post, story and ending.

Sam

realy loved the story it was wonderful lin

I loved this sentence!

Great work! Well-thought out from beginning to end.

Awwwwe... that was such a sweet story. I loved it.
Cindy

aww loved the sleeping beauty scene...prince jack and his fair princess
poor melissa...glad her grandparents are there for her...aww so cute her being the flower girl.
kinda wish she could've been adopted by jack/sue tho then they'd have a ready-made family.
lol love how the team helped out and supported them...giving melissa a doll/toys.

Sweet story and I loved it.