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Ivory
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ok i've written a cleaning up chapter now
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‘Well, to be honest…… I was praying as we kissed…….. I was thanking God for something like the millionth time since last night that he had blessed me with you…… so I wasn’t really lying……’
Great answer, Jack!
savgraceleland
I love it....it's just perfect.....

~laura michelle~
Rosa17
Aww liked the bit where they were oblivious to everyone else wub2.gif
lindylou
kissing.gif cloud9.gif fanning.gif melting.gif WOW more please cath melting.gif kissing.gif lin
yannick in my heart
how sweet wub.gif
suesfan
So Jack was praying!! It's a good thing he made a move when he did, or he would have lost Sue!!!

Joy
Villagespirit
Wow Jack you just made it in under the wire. fainting.gif
grouphug.gif it's a good thing the team was working to get you two togeatherthat night before Sue gave up on you.

Dianna
chelseasoph
Another great story Cath!

Good job Donna had persuaded Davey otherwise who knows how long Jack would have taken...

Soph
audiokim
heartbeat.gif I love kisses!

Kim
tis*me!
QUOTE(learningtosign @ Oct 22 2006, 05:30 AM)

QUOTE(suesfan @ Oct 21 2006, 07:21 PM) *

Actually, I wouldn't mind watching Webber clean up the mess!!!

Joy


ok i've written a cleaning up chapter now
So, it's that easy? We just have to say we wouldn't mind seeing something, and you'll write it? hmmm.gif LolLolLolLol.gif

QUOTE(learningtosign @ Oct 22 2006, 05:30 AM)
‘He saw us……..’ Jack grinned, ‘I told him I was praying……’ he too could feel himself blushing furiously.

‘Jack…….. it’s nothing like praying…..’ she slapped him lightly on the arm.

‘Well, to be honest…… I was praying as we kissed…….. I was thanking God for something like the millionth time since last night that he had blessed me with you…… so I wasn’t really lying……’
biggrin.gif I'm glad Jack wasn't really lying. How sweet!!!!

Wonderful post, Cath!

Tracy
Blueangel
Flowers.gif drama.gif ALL I CAN SAY IS GREAT POST.
uPDATE SOON.
Levi_rocks
Jack wasn't making up the praying stuff huh. LolLolLolLol.gif Great story!!! Just waiting for Christmas to come!
LittleEm
I knew she must have been talking about Jack! bounching.gif And I am so, so, so glad she gave him that one last chance! heartbeat.gif

Em
theatrenut86
dance.gif Victory dance...so great Cath....Keep it up wink.gif biggrin.gif kissing.gif cloud9.gif
learningtosign
Chapter 15

Saturday morning saw Myles reclining on a lawn chair, a mug of coffee in his hand and a plate of delicious pastries on the table beside him as he directed Webber on clean-up duty.

Chuckling as he watched Webber picking up soggy bits of toilet paper with his hands Myles offered a silent prayer that it had rained as that was making the task more onerous.

Oblivious to Webber puffing and panting as he bent to pick up the pieces Myles kept the camera focussed on him throughout, taking regular walks around his garden gleefully pointing out all the minute pieces he had missed.

Mid morning Myles pulled out more lawn chairs and headed in to the house to make coffee before welcoming the team to join him in the garden to ‘watch the sideshow’.

Placing sandwiches and pastries on the table Sue ignored the chair beside Jack, sitting instead on his lap as he wrapped his arms around her waist, both oblivious to the stares of the team.

While Webber continued to laboriously huff and puff his way around the garden the six of them chatted waiting for D and Donna to arrive.

As the eight of them left some time later for a friendly game of soccer Myles set up a camera and left Webber strict instructions that he was not to leave until they returned and that he expected Webber to return on Sunday morning bright and early if he was unable to complete the task before nightfall.

‘I will know if you slack off…….. I have it on camera……..’ Myles reminded him as they left.

Webber cast him a filthy look and muttered a number of obscenities under his breath which no-one heard.

Returning later with Lucy Myles ordered Webber to leave and return early the following morning since clean-up had yet to be completed, ‘and keep the noise down……… I like to rest on the weekends.......................’

FADE
tis*me!
rofl2.gif So glad you wrote Webber cleaning up! That was a great post!!!
But...the story's over?! bye.gif
I wouldn't mind seeing it last longer...will that work? laugh.gif
How about if we give you chocolate.gif ?
Oh well...I'm sorry to see it end! It was a wonderul story! clapping.gif
Thank you once again for sharing!

Tracy
savgraceleland
Toliet papper 2.99 a package....
Cost of clean up 250.99....
Watching Webber do clean up priceless...

~laura michelle~
theatrenut86
LolLolLolLol.gif YOu know I think what needed to be said already was ditto.gif as well as cloud9.gif for the lap sitting by Jack and Sue.
Ivory
That was fun, but the story is over. Now I am sad. Well, it was great to see Sue and Jack free to be with each other.
Kav
Goodness, I can't keep up with you. I settled down at my coffeepc.gif this morning to get all caught up and I did only now it's over. pfff.gif But it was a wonderful read and I loved the way they ganged up on Jack in the end! rofl2.gif And Webber... rofl2.gif rofl2.gif Great story! Looking forward to reading more from you!
kav
suesfan
I don't want this to be over!! Thanks for the clean up scene - I had a picture in my mind of how Webber was picking up wet TP mumbling under his breath the whole time!! I don't think Myles' house will be TP'd next year!!!

I love Sue sitting in Jack's lap!! A picture is worth a thousand words!!!

Thanks for sharing with us once again, Cath!! It's always an amazing ride!!!

Joy
LittleEm
crylaugh.gif Good OLD Webber!

I'm so crying.gif it ended! Great job Cath!!!! clapping.gif

Em
silkvelvet2000
Thanks Cath, Webber cleaning up was funny laugh.gif

Sam angelnot.gif
Levi_rocks
LolLolLolLol.gif That last statement from Myles brings back a lot of memories from that episode on STFBE! Thank you for writing this story! I had a blast reading it!
Rosa17
Great story thanks for sharing cheer.gif
Blueangel
LolLolLolLol.gif loved the webber bit. kinda feel story for him but still i can't help but laugh banghead.gif webber must feel like killing myles. but tping myles house must have been fun
sue and jack... aww they are so cute. i would sit on his lap. too. blissysmile.gif crylaugh.gif
can't wait for your next story kissing.gif drama.gif
chelseasoph
Great story Cath as usual, sorry it has finished, looking forward to the next one book.gif

Soph
Villagespirit
Jack finally makes his move and now it's over? when is the sequel? laugh.gif
I really did like Myles getting Webber back for the TP of the yard.

Dianna
suethomasfan2468
"I like to rest on the weekends"

LOVED how you tied that in Cath!!!

Jen rofl.gif rofl.gif rofl.gif
LizzyM87
very entertaining. Great job!
marlo29
Lady in red ... I love that song !! Glad Jack took advantage of the opportunity.

Webber LolLolLolLol.gif


Great job Flowers.gif

kw9171
poor luke...glad he's healing
aww love how the team came together to help the children have a good 'non' halloween. and jack came through for myles by videotaping whoever tped his house.
ugh webber...grow up!
yay love is in the air! bobby/tara, myles/lucy and finally jack/sue!
glad she didn't give up on him and that practically everyone told jack he and sue belonged together.
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