jack she is out there, go andfind her

Kav, I can bring chocolate and hot drinks!!! ACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jen

Jack, one last trip to memory lane is good !!!!

Can you make the hot drinks chocolate, Jen?
kav

Don't say goodbye Jack!!!

Em

I just found your story and got caught up on your posts!!!

Three weeks is not long enough to move on, Jack!! Not from Sue!!! And, Sue, I guess dating the nice doctor wouldn't be bad, as a friend, but start working on who you are!!!

Great start, you have us all hiding!!!

Joy

Bobby, dearest, I don't think you were thinking about what you were saying...Jack needs time! (preferably enough time for Sue to show up again....). All right, so Diane seems nice. Don't push him into a relationship....maybe she'll realize he needs time, if Bobby can't

Can I join all you ladies??

I think we're all going to need each others moral support to get through this...

I'll bring the popcorn!

BLT

Poor Jack Sue needs to get back to him, he's so depressed.

Please update soon

How much longer do we have to wait??

Yeah

Em

continue

MORE MORE MORE!!! PLEASE!! I'm Hooked!! Hurry up!! I'm getting older as I type!

Jack! Wait until Sue comes back! Bobby, Don't Rush him! Sue, You know who you want, now get him!!

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After about an hour with Dianne, he felt better… the talk- even though it can’t really be considered that since he did most of the talking, had helped him, even just a teensy bit.

They’ve been walking around the park for about half an hour, no reason in particular, silence hung over them, but not awkward or difficult silence, just silence…

After realizing their “activities” both decided they should head home, Jack offered to take Dianne home, but she said she’ll be fine, Jack insisted and she finally gave in “a good turn deserves another” he claimed.

At Dianne’s doorstep

“Nice house” Jack commented, obviously impressed, looking at the beautiful Victorian/ Italian styled home. “I try.” “well… doesn’t every single girl!” “Well no!” Confusion in his eyes “I made the design for this house.” Grinning at her. “Wow, you must have had a great teacher!” “Yup! My pop’s the best.” Then she grew silent. Jack looked at her for a second, then realize his mistake. Softly and gently he asked “How long has it been?” “3.. Years, but I still can’t believe he’s gone…” “Yes. I know the feeling.” He kept his emotions though, right now Dianne was the one who needed help.

Suddenly she looked up at him, in bewilderment “How’d you know?” tears threatening to come down. She didn’t quite understand what he said because his only reply was “it’s my job!”

Not realizing it, she burst into tears, wiping them away but the tears persisted, finally she fell into Jack’s arms just crying.

At first he was in a hurry but right now she needed him, anyway sue would have probably wanted him to comfort her… controlling his own emotions, he hugged her, giving her the only comfort he could.

About an hour passed, at times it was just silence, sometimes Dianne would in her slow, pain stricken voice tell of how she and her dad used to go fishing, watch movies together… When she was calm, he decided to leave, upon nearing the door her voice he heard, “Wait!” she didn’t seem like she was hopeful he was going to stay or anything but he wondered why she called his attention, turning around his attention was all hers… “She sounds wonderful!” raising an eyebrow, he had no idea what she was talking about. “Sue! She sounds wonderful,” “She is.” He immediately replied she smiled at him warmly “Thanks for the company.” He proceeded to leave once more, then she just blurted out, “I sure wish I met her.” As he left the door he smiled at what she said, no matter how long he spent to comfort her, those six little words brought him great peace.

One Year Later…

“Mary!” the fashionable and always alert Mary jumped upon Susan’s calling, “Where’s the fire!” she teasingly asked her-although it was actually more of a statement then a question.

Panting, Sue smiled “Where are you going for Christmas?” “Nowhere!” pausing and thinking “Why..” she asked skeptically. “Great!” Sue almost screamed, “Ooops, sorry I guess I’m too excited.” Smiling apologetically. “Why don’t you come with us to DC?” “We?” her best friend wondered-they met through Richard, who’s her doctor. “Richard!” “That’d be nice,” pausing then in a teasing manner “but wouldn’t you rather be alone…”
chuckling Sue answered “Maybe… but he’ll be there mostly for business” She smiled an evil laugh “so… while the cat’s away, You will play?!”

December 9, Sunday

They’ve arrived at DC for an early vacation, As the 3 step off the plane getting out of the airport, Richard yawned and stretched and somehow his arm caught Sue’s shoulder.

Sue suddenly told him “shouldn’t you be working now?!!” “What! Don’t I at least get a goodbye kiss.” Leaning forward, toward Sue, she just deflected his lips with her left hand and grabbing hold of Mary’s they dashed for it.

He sighed, any woman any woman they always said, any woman he wanted he could get. But Sue’s different she could never love him, the moment she said yes, he thought he was the happiest man in the world but he has since found out that she could never love him…

They’ve hit every tourist spot that afternoon, then they arrived near the FBI Building, Sue had that uneasy feeling inside of her, it felt something like uncomfortable butterflies in her stomach but at the same time, excitement, like reuniting with an old friend.

She suggested, but it was barely a whisper “let’s go in there?” Now Mary had been flirting with a cute African tourist, she was beautiful, obviously! With brownish black pupils, high cheekbones and she had a curvaceous body, but obviously for the guy her flawless dark complexion was a great asset. “What! Why would you want to go there?”
“I don’t know.” And she just proceeded in.

Between navigating the place and avoiding to be detected-as “tourists”. They got separated, but Sue was too preoccupied to have noticed especially when she noticed the handsome agent who was about 30 feet away, he seemed to be very busy, reading some documents and beside him, a beautiful African- American was telling him some things but she was talking too fast.

He had beautiful chocolate brown eyes, his semi-curly black hair was just the right length, his skin fairly light, he seem to have a good build- even in the suit he was wearing, she guessed him to be about 5’9. and the woman with him was just gorgeous.

They’re probably a couple Sue concluded… even as she walk away she wasn’t sure why.
As they passed each other Sue just smiled “Jack Hudson… Lucy Dotson ” she read their ID, just then Jack raised his head, this case was driving him crazy, but finally they had a lead, they might be able to finish it just in time.

Then he stopped in his tracks, dropping everything, forgetting whatever was there before him. Lucy stopped what she was explaining “Jack… Jack , Jack?” “OH! What? Sorry must have wandered” catching his breath “Umm… excuse me.” He went directly into the male washroom, splashing his face wet with water.

Snapping himself back to reality, he looked into the mirror and asked himself, was it really her? “No!” he snapped angrily “of course not.” He answered himself in a much softer voice.. “… but for a moment I saw her again. For a moment I felt her deep inside me once more…”

Hey guys, I'm really sorry this took so long it's just I haven't the time to post, first of all our musical production for church is in two weeks, so we've had almost nonstop practices, and we only have a short time for school so the lessons are being rushed and I really have to study hard if I want to retain my grades... and I'm really really tired Mainly because of those two and everything else in between so I'm really sorry!

i'm glad she's not in love with richard, i'm sure he's very nice but he's not jack

sorry life is crazy for you, we will be patient

can't wait for them to be reunited

cath

Yikes! That was so close -- Jack don't let her get away!!!!!

kav

Jack ... you didn't imagine her

Jack go get her...come on the suspense is killing me .....

Great Post I really love the scenerio Sue not knowing who jack is and all it's like their meeting again for the first time. This is my favourite story in the christmas challenge so far. I hope you can find time to write more

for posting again....
Jack......go, get her.... I bet if Sue looks into Jack's eyes, she would remember him!!

Jack!!!! Go get her!!!!!

Em

Hey guys thanks for all the replies, I'm sorry I can't post for a while... I'll try as much as I can though.. but I do promise one thing, after about 2 weeks, I'll have more time, so I can promise better and more posts by then!

I'll be looking forward to it

Wow.....it's been over a year! Glad Dianne was understandin and glad Jack could be there for her. Can't wait till Jack and Sue meet....maybe wonderful young doctor Richard won't be too upset over losing Sue....since he's sure to...he seems nice, perhaps Tara is still available or something? Again, waiting on the edge of my seat for them to meet!
~Cristy

Maybe Richard and Dianne can get together while he's visiting in DC. And Jack, you didn't imagine it. If I were you, I'd look again.

Jack, you weren't seeing things!!!! Go after her, you caught her attention straight away!

I remember the hassle of schoolwork and Christmas concerts, good luck!

hey guys sorry this isn't a post... but I promise after this week on about sunday or so I can post, I already have an idea just have no time to post it, tnx for understanding and sorry for this delay.

bring it on

They were so close to each other, I almost stopped breathing!!!

Joy

Hey guys sorry this took ssssoooooooooo long.... well here goes

Enjoy:

DC had been great Sue kept mentioning about it since the flight now both Mary and Richard were tired of hearing it, but they enjoyed the great delight Sue had in it.

She was smiling so hard you'd think her face was frozen that way.

"Sue, Sweetheart." Richard fondly called her, "I still have business to attend to, so you and mary have fun okay?" they had just arrived a week and3 days later, it was suppose to be a vacation for the 3 of them but he ended up working the whole time.

"But... but you were working the whole time, can't you rest a while?" she asked raising her eyebrows. "Well, dear I'm glad you care but I really need to work but I promise we'll have Christmas all to ourselves." there was a hint of teasing in his voice, affectionately talking to Sue but also it seemed like to a child.

She brightened up a bit and nodded, He kissed her on the cheek waved goodbye and was off to work once more.

Mary stood there feeling a bit out of place, but when Sue finally faced her she relaxed a bit as she said "Let's go Christmas shopping!" nodding Mary followed the bright blond and beautiful young lady-acting like a kid... in a good way! leading.

They walked from store to store, sue commented from time to time "don't you ever do your Christmas Shopping on time!" Mary would slyly comment "You don't either," devilishly smiling " and I was too busy." Sue would always laugh at her answer... but despite all the happiness she couldn't help but feel that something's not there, the holiday felt incomplete...

then one store struck her, she felt like she just had to go in, hurriedly leaving a very curious mary behind she dashed into the place, selecting an item and requested it to be wrapped... in her neat handwriting she wrote a note addressing it to JACK.

Mary wondered and asked "whose that?" Sue shrugged and looking into space replied "I don't know..."

This is getting weird, really weird....you do have more to go on this time right?!

You suppose Sue's memory is starting to come back??

Joy

i'm really hoping so..........

cath

Oooo! So good!!!!

Em

I know who it is

Great post I hope you can write more soon.

Hey guys sorry I just haven't been thinking very clearly this week so even though its Christmas break I haven't had any brilliant ideas for a while, so anyway here goes hope you enjoy!

Sue had asked Richard a thousand times-who was Jack! but still he would just shrug it off, she could remember some details like her name and all but where she lived what she did she wasn't quite sure, she landed a position at a school for the deaf in New YOrk but she had a feeling that wasn't her job before... sometimes people would look at her as if they know her but no one really approached her-declaring acquaintance.

She sighed looking around Richard gave her a cute little apartment, renting it out for 6 months then Sue insisted paying for herself using her teaching money, it wasn't much but then there really wasn't anything she wanted.

Richard.... she mused, I am contented with him, his nice, handsome, intelligent, mascular, successful,helpful, thoughtful... and the list goes on, everything a girl could ever wish for but she just felt something missing, something wasn't there like how it was before.

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He stared at the ceiling daydreaming, not because he wanted to but because he had to... well not exactly unless he'd rather cry his heart out infront of a dozen FBI agents so he decided to stare at his friend, the ceiling.

Lucy sat somewhere across Jack, she was getting worried- he was finishing paperwork 3x faster than before and still he was always spacing out... she would have by now been amazed by that and think he was some alien from outerspace but she knew better she also knew how it felt if the reason you were breathing and living left she knew how it was to have your heart so vulnerable, a time when it was good to be vulnerable but suddenly it was attacked, attacked by the cycle of life.

I should do something! she told herself determined.

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"Sue, sue! SUE!" forgetting she was deaf, mary was getting frustrated, they were doing their last minute Christmas shopping when Sue got this brilliant idea to split up for each other's present.

The mall was very big and very crowded Sue was getting nowhere with the maps they provided here and there, suddenly she saw him again- actually them!

his chocolate dark brown eyes standing out in the crowd, his sad smile had her concern and she still had that admiration for his handsome face , ofcourse by his side his girlfriend.... she didn't hate the girl or anything- anyway she had a boyfriend. buy somehow she felt jealous of the pretty girl with someone like that man by her side.

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The last Christmas flew quickly by, she can't even remember what happened last year, although that was so she still remembered it wonderful and knew DC was waiting.

This year Richard wasn't going to DC, She invited him to just go on vacation with her- since Mary died earlier that year she has been real uneasy and so has Richard they were both just different people, they still stayed together but somehow a wall had been growing thicker and thicker between them.

She arrived December 18, desperately wanting to get away from it all, something was just missing.... since Mary's accident the feeling had grown stronger, she was also on that plane when it crashed but she was one of the very few survivors who made it! from then on she was strongly determined on finding her true identity- life was short, too short.

You better find some way of getting Jack and Sue back together because this is torture waiting for her memory to come back!

I agree, this is torture, lol, but I'm loving every minute of it, trusting that Jack and Sue will soon find each other again!

MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!

kav

Mary died and a whole nother year went by Poor Sue whe has to find out who she is.
I'm so glad that you've found time to write. I hope inspiration hits you.

Sue's getting so close... She's going to remember soon... right?

Em

hey guys really really sorry this is so late it's just I got back from camp and well I actually wanted to finish this during Christmastime but now I'm just gonna try to finish before the due date...
I wrote all of the songs here myself feel free to comment and all if you have questions feel free to ask and I just need to tell you that this is Christmas themed so even if it is sort of late I hope you can just imagine. the () means spoken.




She woke up one night, she wasn't sure how long it has been since she went to DC, but her days were filled with useless time and nights were filled with sleepless spells... tonight particular, Heck! it was Christmas Eve, you can say she was lonely but more than that somehting in her head ticked.

She hunted down a spare notebook in her bag grabbed a pen, started writing down...

Just Coz

one night (who knew if it were dark and cold or scorching hot.) but what we do know is that a man, one man , all alone, (a man who came as a baby, just coz, just coz he loved,just coz he loved us so.... he came one night , a baby wrapped in swaddled cloth, laid in a manger because, because he loved us so although he had the whole world's gold, though he sat in a throne of glory, even if he once wore a crown of the most precious jewels and robes of the finest silk, he wanted to leave it all (Everything) went down to a strange little place, what can you expect? who else would die for you? who else could?... that's why on that fateful nigh, he came to die, gave life, gave hope, so that one day we could finally be with him, not (because we're great beings) but just coz.

a small tear dropped from her eye, tickled down her throat, she then continued writing...

The most precious thing

Family and friends, love and joy, the peace within we always feel... Christmas time is here, Christmas is here again... What can I say?
None is missing except the one who truly is CHRISTmas.
Mary, Joseph, baby Jesus we all know the tale but why oh why on this time of night do we forget the most precious of all.
I must have heard it a thousand times, but never, never did the story ever clicked... it wasn't becaus e I was narrowminded,(NO!) it wasn't because I didn't listen (I actually remember all the details) it is because we all do, the whole world always forgets the most precious gift the most priceless treasure was given this day so now what should we say what can we do?
Nothing except celebrate the most precious thing of all...

God and Me

Lord, all my cares, all my woes I give to you, I want to stay committed like I used to... Father don't ever leave, I need you all of my days... I'm sorry for all the pain for all the worrying I've cause you but still believe me when I SAY ____________

I love you, Especially on this lonely evening, we all remember the sacrifice you made I would have wished it different but you did it all the same...
What can I do, What can I think all but how much we really belong together.
I've wandered off far enough... I've already gone through all, but the one thing, I've been missing, is the big picture, God and Me oh how can it be? you asked... all along during this joyous occation it's God and Me all along...
I can honestly say I've never even knew even as Christmas flew through, even if You gave some irreplaceable never give a care but I know all that is and should be.... is on this Christmas eve I make things right with you not so I receive your gift just so I can love you as you have love me!

By this time her tears grew... she felt so convicted and yet she didn't know what was happening anymore, why she felt this way and how much she knew about this time of year but never knew it well.

Miss You Jesus
All the Christmas shopping all the sharing and giving and yet I fell something missing, I miss you Lord, Jesus... (you wouldn't realize it was your birthday) coz all around saint nick is there (now I don't contradict the idea of giving but isn't this time suppose to be for Jesus?) I love thee Lord Jesus and even I forget thee... so what about the others? those who might not know you... those who never knew you before, and those who just don't care?

I feel all the joyous hearts rejoicing and praising, but who? they would sing songs and hymns but they're hearts are not to you, they're souls are now directed to you, who else..... who else is there but you?


She couldn't finish the song.... she only got to that part and stopped.
feelings overwhelmed her, emotions she never felt before (or don't remember feeling) she was crying so hard she could hardly breath, she curled up and just cried herself to sleep.

The next morning, Christmas day...

Sue woke up on a corner of the hotel room, cuddling a single notebook, blank pages except for 4 songs. she read them over and remember the events of last night. She suddenly had the overwhelming urge to have someone read it... she took a quick shower changed and decided to grab breakfast out, her notebook in hand she ran down the stairs wanting to get to the nearest place she could find, she wasn't exactly sure where it was but she just had to go.

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Another miserable Christmas Jack thought. He sighed "atleast I have the day off he told himself. " for once in awhile he smiled but then remembering Christmas was the time he met Sue his expressioned grimmed again. "I know it's been a while but I really thought she was the one I was in love with her!" He screamed to no one in particular. then he though maybe a morning jog will clear his mind.

running down his usual route he wasn't concentrating on running but instead he concentrated on letting out his anger, why did this have to happen?!

good thing the park's pretty much cleared he thought, then while he wasn't looking at the road he bumped into a pretty young blond girl, not even looking at her he was already muttering "I'm sorry " and all also did the gentlemanly thing and pick up her notebook.
And when he finally looked at her, he was stunned, he couldn't believe his eyes "Umm hi, Sue Thomas," the woman replied awkwardly to all his apologies Jack smiled a little , he didn't speak till he realized he must look stupid, he smiled offered his hand "Jack Hudson." He knew it was her but he didn't want to directly approach by the looks of things she might have amnesia. "Hello," she smiled in response "sorry! was just in a hurry not really sure what I'm looking for." she laughed apolegetically, then he asked what was it she was looking for... she explained and he volunteered to take her to just the place.
They got to know each other along the way, Jaci felt happy but sad at the same time, he was glad to finally see Sue, but since she doesn't remember him what's the point and the big deal was that she has a boyfriend!

They arrived at the place they came to a receptionist, Jack explained their reason for coming the receptionist quickly led them the way but not without stealing a few glances at Jack.

Sue handed her notebook to whom seemed to be the manager... "This is great work!" the man exclaimed"could you sing it to me please I need to hear it if it's ok?" sue nodded but she tentatively started singing then she got more confidence her voice became clearer and she clearly expressed what she sang, she closed her eyes and that was how she ended up onstage, with thousands of screaming "FaNs?" also her new friend jack to support her.

Everyone listened intently as her sweet voice filled the hall, they were wondering who this new singer was, but all the questions disappeared as she opened her mouth, she communicated the message well and the most touching thing was her introduction "I AM HERE today not because I want to suddenly be famous or get your money but I want to communicate something to you the real Christmas story and how it touched me." she sang the four original songs plus some traditional ones and some she just wrote although "Miss YOu Jesus" was never really complete it was finished and it told of what that date was...

Sue was surprised to suddenly see Richard in the audience heading toward her after the show, he hugged her, and everything was just fine, Sue introduced Jack, Richard glared at him, Jack knew better, he knew that no matter what he does he has to stay away but he didn't want to.

One year later Christmas eve, New york

"Richard!" sue esclaimed giggling softly "this is wonderful." "isn't it? " he said grinning at her then suddenly he bent on one knee took her hand and faced her he then asked "Will you do me the honor of becoming my bride?"

Hey guys I hope you liked that post please tell me what you think of it so I can make up my mind upon finishing this I already have a happily ever after but you guys get to choose please be honest feedback and I'm coming back tomorrow! but its the last day of break so I'm gonna need to finish it!

Of course Sue is going to fall for Jack the second time around. Looking forward to the happy ending.

kav

I am with Kav on this one!

ok,ok i guess I'm gonna have to stick with happily ever after! *sigh* just kidding I'd love to write a happily ever after story, listen I'm really sorry I wasn't able to post last night, it's just that today school started so mom said we should sleep early! anyway the last part hope you enjoy!

Jack sat there numb from the cold.. and it didn't help that a legion of girls have decided to sit next to him, he was very frustrated as of now.

But one thought did keep him going, despite the fact that Sue didn't recognize him and despite the fact that right now his eyes were seeing things he shouldn't be seeing.... (note to self: never exchange an assignment with Bobby again!) even if the bitter cold kept pursing in and it was already Christmas Eve...

Being able to spend that much time with Sue Last year was terrific it sounded weird but Christmas was the time they met, they did keep in contact after that but being a secret agent in the FBI wasn't exactly ideal for having a penpal.

He laughed a little to himself, still wondering why all this girls were sorrounding him, the mission sounded easy, simply get evidence that the bar he was at was smuggling....(who knew where these villains get their ideas but it needed tackling!)

He had taken it as a favor, even though to Bobby it was more of a big deal since he got his Christmas off early and he and Darcy are now enjoying a spectacular night... Jack knew he might seem like an idiot but atleast his mind is taken of problems corncerning Christmas.

Then his cellphone rang, happy to hear Sue's voice but later his face turned sour....

He banged his fists at the table (though no one seem to notice) after he hanged up, he didn't know what to feel anymore first he lost the woman he loved most, now that he's found her she getting married to some doctor.

For some reason the girls that had once made a shield around him, seemed to have dispersed, then a brunette, long legs about 5'7, full figure, wearing a miniskirt barely covering her underwear and a small tank top that looked suspiciously like she wanted him! but he couldn't care less, while all men were drooling over the woman's flawless skin, Jack wanted to scream at her and get this whole thing over with.

She came nearer and nearer, dramatically moving toward Jack, he didn't seem to mind... she didn't even care, all she saw him as was a challenge, one whom she soon will overcome.

loudly purring in her french accented voice she introduced herself."My name's Claudia! what's yours handsome!" Jack didn't seem to register that she was talking to him, most of the men were jealous and rushing over to wake jack up he had his eyes glued to the bartenders.

This time Claudia sat slowly beside Jack, trying to seduce him in the manner she always knew worked, and touched his arm softly, took a tight grip of it and before anyone could react she pulled him to her chest and kissed him, he was too stunned too pull away but tried every possible was to, to everyone in the crowd it seemed like they were making out but to Jack he felt he was being "ambushed" by one woman.... then when he finally pulled away though he was breathless he manage to say "I'm sorry." she was surprised most men would have been delighted by that... but not this one!

Jack then decided he got all he needed he just stuck around to clear his head, and even though that kiss was not really something he'd like still it gave him a clearer idea of what he would do.

At first he thought about crashing the wedding in a white stallion and sweeping Sue off her feet but he decided it was too drastic and if Sue really cared for this Richard guy then she should be happy. I can't interfere because if I truly love her I'll do what's best for her. he decided finally wiping away a tear that was threatening to come down.


Christmas day... New York, sue's big day!

Sue was bubbly and giddy inside but still she felt something incomplete looking around she spied a box like wrapped present sitting somewhere.. looking at the tag she read Jack HUdson, she wondered how she got it when she was not doing Christmas shopping for the past week, then she saw a man's sillhouette against the door...

She smiled at him and he returned it only a bit sadder, she gave him his gift and told him how nervous she was but started getting excited again.... talking continously, he only politely listened even though inside he was dying of pain.

when it was finally time for the bride to enter, he gave her a gentle squeeze and went off to find his seat...

As the music played Jack couldn't help his tears coming down he wiped them cautiously and quickly so that no one could have noticed and to distract himself he gently opened the parcel Sue had given him (he was releived to have sat at the back with no one.) inside was a handkerchief and a little cross necklace he found a note and it read, Agent Hudson! even if you're too proud to admit defeat and as a guy won't want to cry in public here's something to keep your eyes dry... and to remember the Guy upstairs never lost faith in HIm coz he will always guide you, also just a small thing to remember me by. luv you always and her name was signed She remembered! he though loudly, for a while she actually remembered him...


The wedding went on and it was about to end Jack hadn't even noticed.

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Sue was getting anxious at first she thought it was natural but she was getting uneasy by the second while the officiator was reciting the love verse and all....

then as the I do's came, a tear fell and she mumbled an apology and just walked out.

Jack as if on impulse went after her....

Inside the room he could hear her crying his heart bled for her, he sat down beside her and then when he got her attention he signed something... She stopped crying and then and there her past life flashed before her eyes.

The End