Oh Kav....I can't say anything more....
really.....
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Oh Kav....I can't say anything more....
really.....
the most wonderfulest wedding ever 
I love how you incorporated everyone's thoughts throughout the song ... beautiful song. It's one of those times you wish you could see it on big screen, while knowing at the same time it could never render justice to the words you wrote.
Just amazing !!!
Just amazing !!!
Okay...so this was one of the most beautiful weddings I have ever been to and this wasnt even real...
I seem to be ditto-ing everyone today, so Marlo I ditto you!! 
Sam
Sam
That was trully A beautiful wedding Kav it wasAs it should be for jack and sue wonderful more soon please
Lin
Aw, Kav, what more can I say, but beautiful? I really wish I could say more about this, but I'm in awe and a bit teary-eyed from such a beautiful beginning. Are you going to continue with the ceremony or are we just going to assume that they said a few sweet words to one another before they said "I do"?
that was so beautiful really really beautiful, they all came full cirkel really really beautiful
really really beautiful, they all came full cirkel really really beautiful
*dreamy sigh* That was amazing!
Thank you Kav
Em
Thank you Kav
Em
Beautiful, simply beautiful! 
kav, once again i'm speechless 
cath
cath
Amazing!
Myles' voice seems to have this effect on them...
Ornella
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I love how you incorporated everyone's thoughts throughout the song ... beautiful song.
Myles' voice seems to have this effect on them...Ornella
i love the sound of the wedding like that simple but amazing to be there and wintess it
I love that song and I've always wondered how people who don't believe in anything manage to live and enjoy.
Yes that is my Jack and he loves water - definitely the cat for this family. The funny thing is that the avatar I see didn't change yet but I'm glad to know it did for someone else at least!
Yes that is my Jack and he loves water - definitely the cat for this family. The funny thing is that the avatar I see didn't change yet but I'm glad to know it did for someone else at least!
Beautiful. The most beautiful wedding ever to take place.
QUOTE(duckfan @ Dec 29 2006, 10:43 PM) 
I love that song and I've always wondered how people who don't believe in anything manage to live and enjoy.
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Yes that is my Jack and he loves water - definitely the cat for this family. The funny thing is that the avatar I see didn't change yet but I'm glad to know it did for someone else at least!
Try hitting 'refresh' while you're looking at one of your posts, Pam. It ought to show up for you! 
Beautiful job, Kav!!
Well goodness gracious me, but I've actually finished days ahead of the deadline! Now that has to be a first!!!! Thanks so much for reading, and all your kind words 
. And major warning on this post...the last one was really the ending...this one is more like an epilogue and it is rated 
x 10.
“I thought I’d never get you away,” Jack complained, locking the door behind him with intense satisfaction.
“Lucky for you Bobby and Tara created that diversionary tactic or you’d still be sitting next to my mother listening to her recounting all my accomplishments,” Sue’s nose wrinkled with laughter as she rolled her eyes heavenward. “Where was she – I was about ten?”
“Junior High,” Jack corrected with a smile as he shrugged off his jacket and tossed it onto a chair. Loosening his tie came next.
Sue gulped and took a step backwards. There was something dangerously exciting about the look of Jack in a rumpled tuxedo – especially as it was being removed piece by piece. She watched his tie slide to the floor and his hands wasted no time undoing the button at his neck.
“Well, you’re lucky you were spared those fateful years,” Sue said, wetting her lips nervously. “You could have been there the entire night.”
Jack tracked the path of her tongue as it moistened her full lips. He groaned inwardly, hacking off two buttons of his dress shirt in his haste to rid himself of the constricting cotton. There were too many clothes between them.
"Don't worry sweetheart, I have other plans for the night."
Sue watched the shirt join the jacket as Jack moved forward, anticipating and countering her instinctive retreat. His hands reached out to keep her in one place and she stared, mesmerized by the bare expanse of his chest. Her hands reached out hesitantly, palms flattening against the sculpted muscles. She wasn’t surprised to feel the heat emanating off him. It engulfed her too within seconds and she watched with interest as her fingers splayed, gliding along his skin in a shy exploration.
Her touch was light and hesitant. She was still unsure, groping to find her way in this new aspect of their relationship. It was just a whisper of a touch – a shadow of what could be and yet his body leapt in reaction, heat flowing through his veins, fueled by the fire that each trailing touch fanned. He wanted her. Could barely think straight with the need that was coiling up from his belly. The intensity of his desire shocked him, spurred on as it was, by such a delicate touch. He groaned when her tongue darted out again. A quick swipe across her parted lips had him clamoring to have her treat his heated flesh with similar attention. Sliding his fingers through her hair, he cradled her head and urged the direction of her gaze upwards.
“Do you know how many nights I have spent fantasizing about us? Planning this night out to perfection. What I would do, what I would say, how I would touch you. I want to drive you wild, stroke your body to life. I want to memorize every curve, every freckle, all the hidden sensitive places you’ve saved just for me.” His eyes darkened as he watched the effects his words were having on her.
Her face was flush, her lips unconsciously parting in invitation. He could see the erratic beat of her pulse at the base of her neck. His thumb stroked down to cover it, feeling the hammering against his pad. It accelerated and he smiled. “You do that to me too. Feel.” He waited for her hand to slide over to the right spot, sucking in his breath as the swirling caress shot streaks of lightning down his spine. “The one thing I didn’t factor into my careful seduction was what it would feel like to have your hands on my body and how your slightest touch would drive everything out of my mind but my all consuming need for you. I’m afraid I’m going to lose control, Sue…”
He had woven a spell around her and she found herself standing still in the circle of his arms as the depth of the meaning in his words washed over her. She looked into his handsome face, the passion in his eyes pinning her there, holding both a challenge and a promise. She shivered, every nerve ending in her body suddenly alert with anticipation. She wanted him, she acknowledged, as a powerful drive pulsed to life deep inside of her. But want was such an inadequate word. It didn’t come close to defining this moment or the feelings that they shared. She wanted more than the night of passion he was offering her. She wanted this night…and many others like it, but not just because he was heartstoppingly attractive and she found various aspects of his body highly desirable – but because she saw past the layers of skin and muscle into the heart of the man. Tender, compassionate, full of life and laughter it was his pure soul that had captured her heart. Her hand slid experimentally across his chest. Though the packaging was of superb quality.
“Jack, I thought that the whole point of a wedding night was that you were allowed to lose control,” she told him rather brazenly as her right hand grew bolder, playing at the waistband of his trousers. “I still think you’re wearing way too many clothes for a honeymoon.”
A knowing light danced in his eyes as he traced the outline of her mouth with his forefinger. “Then do something about it, Mrs. Hudson,” he murmured huskily before claiming her lips with his in a mixture of love and lust.
She struggled with his belt. It was more difficult than she thought mainly because she was painfully aware of the heated flesh her hands were brushing against as her fingers fumbled. His mouth was distracting as he playfully nipped and teased and then plundered into a deepening kiss that had her abandoning her attempt in order to cling to him for support as shocking need clawed its way through her body.
Electricity sizzled along his spine at the innocent touch of her fluttering hands and he took pity on her...on him...and hastily completed the task she had set out to do, quickly divesting himself of his trousers.
“Now whose wearing too many clothes?” he grumbled into her mouth and set about to remedy that oversight. Her bodice proved thwarting, the double bow that laced it all together at the back quickly turning into a knot under his urgent questing fingers. He had more success with the skirt, which, to his delight, he discovered was separate form the bodice and an easy matter of gliding a zipper down along her hip. Yards of fabric dropped to the floor the minute he lifted his hand away.
Her arms crept up around his neck and she pressed her body into his, reveling at the feel of skin against skin. She buried her face in his neck, her breath tickling against his flesh, the sensation almost painful in his need. Her tongue flicked out and then he felt her teeth and he frantically set to work on freeing her from the fitted bodice while her teeth and tongue wrecked havoc across his chest.
He conquered the binding at last, pulling her away from him so that he could slowly, with infinite care, ease it off her shoulders. He tossed it aside, his eyes never leaving the sight of the beauty he had revealed. His hands caressed her first; gliding with expert care from waist to neck though his fingers trembled.
Her breath hitched in her throat as she fought the sensations that his roughened fingers rasping over her ultra sensitive skin produced. She couldn’t breathe, couldn’t think, couldn’t speak or sign. She could only feel, marveling at the exquisite torture that his touch kept building.
Somehow they ended up on the bed, the last remnants of their clothing lying scattered around them. Jack pressed her back against the pillows, intent on fulfilling some of his fantasies. His teeth nipped her soft flesh, tiny pinpricks that had her shivering. He soothed the shivers away with his tongue, swirling patterns of heat that fueled the fire already rampaging out of control. And all the while he ran his hands over her body, down her spine, massaging her rounded bottom, caressing the curve of her hip.
He became more demanding as his exploration deepened. He held her firmly, refusing to allow her to shy away. His hands were everywhere, his lips alternately soft and gentle and then relentlessly demanding as he built their tension to a breaking point. He would forever remember the sound of his name on her lips, the thready tremor in her voice as she cried out in her passion.
She turned to him in the calm after the storm, snuggling closer into his warmth, wrapping herself in his arms. He kissed her. Softly, gently, reassuringly, his hands now moving over her body with the intent of soothing, though she still shivered intermittently. Still arched into his heat. He nuzzled her neck, lovingly shaping his body around hers, savoring the miracle of being with her. You have everything you need, if you just Believe.He smiled his contentment. He did have everything he needed, right here in his arms.
He watched her heavy lidded eyes finally close. Stroked her hair soothingly as she drifted into sleep. He would be content to simply hold her like this close forever, he thought. Though his attitude changed when they both woke several hours later.
He woke to whispered words of passion; her husky sleep-laced voice caressing his ear just before her teeth began to worry the tender flesh. His hunger revived, sharp and gnawing and he fisted his hands in her hair, dragging her head closer so he could devour her, his tongue sweeping into her mouth. Passion instantly flared between them. He tumbled her onto her back and savored the joy of having her in his bed, sprawled beneath him. This time he would love her slowly, and gently with controlled precision. There was no need for haste; they had the rest of their lives together. Then Sue moved impatiently, one long leg ensnaring his hip as she arched against him. He groaned as his control snapped. It was over rated anyway. This time he would show no mercy.
The End
. And major warning on this post...the last one was really the ending...this one is more like an epilogue and it is rated x 10.“I thought I’d never get you away,” Jack complained, locking the door behind him with intense satisfaction.
“Lucky for you Bobby and Tara created that diversionary tactic or you’d still be sitting next to my mother listening to her recounting all my accomplishments,” Sue’s nose wrinkled with laughter as she rolled her eyes heavenward. “Where was she – I was about ten?”
“Junior High,” Jack corrected with a smile as he shrugged off his jacket and tossed it onto a chair. Loosening his tie came next.
Sue gulped and took a step backwards. There was something dangerously exciting about the look of Jack in a rumpled tuxedo – especially as it was being removed piece by piece. She watched his tie slide to the floor and his hands wasted no time undoing the button at his neck.
“Well, you’re lucky you were spared those fateful years,” Sue said, wetting her lips nervously. “You could have been there the entire night.”
Jack tracked the path of her tongue as it moistened her full lips. He groaned inwardly, hacking off two buttons of his dress shirt in his haste to rid himself of the constricting cotton. There were too many clothes between them.
"Don't worry sweetheart, I have other plans for the night."
Sue watched the shirt join the jacket as Jack moved forward, anticipating and countering her instinctive retreat. His hands reached out to keep her in one place and she stared, mesmerized by the bare expanse of his chest. Her hands reached out hesitantly, palms flattening against the sculpted muscles. She wasn’t surprised to feel the heat emanating off him. It engulfed her too within seconds and she watched with interest as her fingers splayed, gliding along his skin in a shy exploration.
Her touch was light and hesitant. She was still unsure, groping to find her way in this new aspect of their relationship. It was just a whisper of a touch – a shadow of what could be and yet his body leapt in reaction, heat flowing through his veins, fueled by the fire that each trailing touch fanned. He wanted her. Could barely think straight with the need that was coiling up from his belly. The intensity of his desire shocked him, spurred on as it was, by such a delicate touch. He groaned when her tongue darted out again. A quick swipe across her parted lips had him clamoring to have her treat his heated flesh with similar attention. Sliding his fingers through her hair, he cradled her head and urged the direction of her gaze upwards.
“Do you know how many nights I have spent fantasizing about us? Planning this night out to perfection. What I would do, what I would say, how I would touch you. I want to drive you wild, stroke your body to life. I want to memorize every curve, every freckle, all the hidden sensitive places you’ve saved just for me.” His eyes darkened as he watched the effects his words were having on her.
Her face was flush, her lips unconsciously parting in invitation. He could see the erratic beat of her pulse at the base of her neck. His thumb stroked down to cover it, feeling the hammering against his pad. It accelerated and he smiled. “You do that to me too. Feel.” He waited for her hand to slide over to the right spot, sucking in his breath as the swirling caress shot streaks of lightning down his spine. “The one thing I didn’t factor into my careful seduction was what it would feel like to have your hands on my body and how your slightest touch would drive everything out of my mind but my all consuming need for you. I’m afraid I’m going to lose control, Sue…”
He had woven a spell around her and she found herself standing still in the circle of his arms as the depth of the meaning in his words washed over her. She looked into his handsome face, the passion in his eyes pinning her there, holding both a challenge and a promise. She shivered, every nerve ending in her body suddenly alert with anticipation. She wanted him, she acknowledged, as a powerful drive pulsed to life deep inside of her. But want was such an inadequate word. It didn’t come close to defining this moment or the feelings that they shared. She wanted more than the night of passion he was offering her. She wanted this night…and many others like it, but not just because he was heartstoppingly attractive and she found various aspects of his body highly desirable – but because she saw past the layers of skin and muscle into the heart of the man. Tender, compassionate, full of life and laughter it was his pure soul that had captured her heart. Her hand slid experimentally across his chest. Though the packaging was of superb quality.
“Jack, I thought that the whole point of a wedding night was that you were allowed to lose control,” she told him rather brazenly as her right hand grew bolder, playing at the waistband of his trousers. “I still think you’re wearing way too many clothes for a honeymoon.”
A knowing light danced in his eyes as he traced the outline of her mouth with his forefinger. “Then do something about it, Mrs. Hudson,” he murmured huskily before claiming her lips with his in a mixture of love and lust.
She struggled with his belt. It was more difficult than she thought mainly because she was painfully aware of the heated flesh her hands were brushing against as her fingers fumbled. His mouth was distracting as he playfully nipped and teased and then plundered into a deepening kiss that had her abandoning her attempt in order to cling to him for support as shocking need clawed its way through her body.
Electricity sizzled along his spine at the innocent touch of her fluttering hands and he took pity on her...on him...and hastily completed the task she had set out to do, quickly divesting himself of his trousers.
“Now whose wearing too many clothes?” he grumbled into her mouth and set about to remedy that oversight. Her bodice proved thwarting, the double bow that laced it all together at the back quickly turning into a knot under his urgent questing fingers. He had more success with the skirt, which, to his delight, he discovered was separate form the bodice and an easy matter of gliding a zipper down along her hip. Yards of fabric dropped to the floor the minute he lifted his hand away.
Her arms crept up around his neck and she pressed her body into his, reveling at the feel of skin against skin. She buried her face in his neck, her breath tickling against his flesh, the sensation almost painful in his need. Her tongue flicked out and then he felt her teeth and he frantically set to work on freeing her from the fitted bodice while her teeth and tongue wrecked havoc across his chest.
He conquered the binding at last, pulling her away from him so that he could slowly, with infinite care, ease it off her shoulders. He tossed it aside, his eyes never leaving the sight of the beauty he had revealed. His hands caressed her first; gliding with expert care from waist to neck though his fingers trembled.
Her breath hitched in her throat as she fought the sensations that his roughened fingers rasping over her ultra sensitive skin produced. She couldn’t breathe, couldn’t think, couldn’t speak or sign. She could only feel, marveling at the exquisite torture that his touch kept building.
Somehow they ended up on the bed, the last remnants of their clothing lying scattered around them. Jack pressed her back against the pillows, intent on fulfilling some of his fantasies. His teeth nipped her soft flesh, tiny pinpricks that had her shivering. He soothed the shivers away with his tongue, swirling patterns of heat that fueled the fire already rampaging out of control. And all the while he ran his hands over her body, down her spine, massaging her rounded bottom, caressing the curve of her hip.
He became more demanding as his exploration deepened. He held her firmly, refusing to allow her to shy away. His hands were everywhere, his lips alternately soft and gentle and then relentlessly demanding as he built their tension to a breaking point. He would forever remember the sound of his name on her lips, the thready tremor in her voice as she cried out in her passion.
She turned to him in the calm after the storm, snuggling closer into his warmth, wrapping herself in his arms. He kissed her. Softly, gently, reassuringly, his hands now moving over her body with the intent of soothing, though she still shivered intermittently. Still arched into his heat. He nuzzled her neck, lovingly shaping his body around hers, savoring the miracle of being with her. You have everything you need, if you just Believe.He smiled his contentment. He did have everything he needed, right here in his arms.
He watched her heavy lidded eyes finally close. Stroked her hair soothingly as she drifted into sleep. He would be content to simply hold her like this close forever, he thought. Though his attitude changed when they both woke several hours later.
He woke to whispered words of passion; her husky sleep-laced voice caressing his ear just before her teeth began to worry the tender flesh. His hunger revived, sharp and gnawing and he fisted his hands in her hair, dragging her head closer so he could devour her, his tongue sweeping into her mouth. Passion instantly flared between them. He tumbled her onto her back and savored the joy of having her in his bed, sprawled beneath him. This time he would love her slowly, and gently with controlled precision. There was no need for haste; they had the rest of their lives together. Then Sue moved impatiently, one long leg ensnaring his hip as she arched against him. He groaned as his control snapped. It was over rated anyway. This time he would show no mercy.
The End
i'VE NEVER POSTED A REPLY BEFORE BUT I HAVE TO SAY THAT I HAVE LOVED THIS STORY
YOU'VE DONE A GREAT JOB KAV
WELL DONE
YOU'VE DONE A GREAT JOB KAV
WELL DONE
First I when I logged on and came immediately to your thread and saw the "FIN". I hate to see that by your stories.
But then I began to read and lost myself in the post - such a wonderful weaving of description and feeling - so tastefully done.
Magical! Simply magical!
Thank you, Kav, for yet another fantastic journey.
when I logged on and came immediately to your thread and saw the "FIN". I hate to see that by your stories.But then I began to read and lost myself in the post - such a wonderful weaving of description and feeling - so tastefully done.
Magical! Simply magical!
Thank you, Kav, for yet another fantastic journey.
Magical ... in every sense and nonsense of the word
Kay, thank you so much for the epilogue! It made my morning! Brilliantly executed and a wonderful ending to a beautiful, beautiful story! 
Donna
Donna
Kav! This was exciting from beginning to end! Loved it
I wanted to quote so many breathtaking parts - but all I seem to come up with is
dkjfasldkjfdsjka;kdsadfkdsjaieruthjnbndlkadsmlfajd
Masterful, brilliant, magical job, Kav - I believe you have crafted another of my favorites!
dkjfasldkjfdsjka;kdsadfkdsjaieruthjnbndlkadsmlfajd
Masterful, brilliant, magical job, Kav - I believe you have crafted another of my favorites!
Kav, you have out done yourself again!!!!
And that last post was
Sam
And that last post was
Sam
wait a minute! just hold on here a darn second....WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU'RE DONE?
**taps foot....** Surely you meant to epilogue another wonderful couple here as well? eh?
Loved it Kav! amazingly brilliant as usual!
from start to finish Kav it was wonderful melting: 
Lin
That post was beautifully worded and reflected their powerful love! Amazing!!!Thank you for such a fantastic story!
QUOTE(mionebristow @ Dec 30 2006, 02:11 PM)
wait a minute! just hold on here a darn second....WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU'RE DONE?
**taps foot....** Surely you meant to epilogue another wonderful couple here as well? eh?
Hmmm...maybe a sequel is in order
Awesome job, Kav...Loved all the magic. I too am very bummed to see it end. Looking foward to your stories in 2007 
Happy New Year Everyone....Flip, isn't it about
we read some Flip fuzzies???
kav it was wonderful from beginning to end and i am very sad to see it finish but looking forward to the next one
cath
cath
Incredible!!!!!!!!! Once again Kav - you have amazed me!
Thank you!
Em
You have more talent in your little finger than I could dream of having. That enitre story was magical -- poetic, funny, hot, and beautiful all masterfully woven into one incredible work of art. I to your brilliance. Thank you for putting belief back in Christmas.
P.S. I am a Grobanite to the core and love that song. You made everyline fit perfectly.
to your brilliance. Thank you for putting belief back in Christmas. P.S. I am a Grobanite to the core and love that song. You made everyline fit perfectly.
As always amazing- I love it so much, just like i love you you wouldn't mind doing a sequel. i know we wouldn't mind reading one.... 
you wouldn't mind doing a sequel. i know we wouldn't mind reading one....
I will never look at a train in the same way again!
Kav, I've been away for a few days and came back to the wedding post and the epilogue!!!
Magic is the only way to describe this story from start to finish!! I'm sorry that it's over, but I also revel in the fact that now I can go and read it again from the beginning to the end!!!
Thank you so much, Kav, for sharing!! This is truly wonderful, beautiful, heartwarming, uplifting, magical........!!!
Joy
Magic is the only way to describe this story from start to finish!! I'm sorry that it's over, but I also revel in the fact that now I can go and read it again from the beginning to the end!!!
Thank you so much, Kav, for sharing!! This is truly wonderful, beautiful, heartwarming, uplifting, magical........!!!
Joy
Kav - I'm breathless! The honeymoon was GREAT!!
Flip - you've really gotta love an Out Of Control Jack!!
Whew! where's the guy with the fan? Oh,
there he is. This story was an wonderful Christmas present.
Thanks so much for sharing your wonderful talents.
cleaning and redecorating is way overrated.......writing your 1st story of many in 2007 is much more important.
Oh....... my.......
What a post.
What a story.
Thank you from the bottom of my overheated, fuzz-filled, ever-so-grateful, thoroughly melted heart.
Tina
What a post.
What a story.
Thank you from the bottom of my overheated, fuzz-filled, ever-so-grateful, thoroughly melted heart.
Tina
QUOTE(alaskanfan @ Dec 30 2006, 01:47 PM)
Happy New Year Everyone....Flip, isn't it about
we read some Flip fuzzies???ditto!!!!!!
and Kav.... O Mylanta! Brava!!!! :adulation smile: this story was absolutely amaing. It didn't matter if I was reading funny parts, romantic parts,
or beautiful parts, you had me desperately wanting more the entire time! You are just an inspiring author! What more can I say?... this story was the best. luv,
sarah
ps
in 2007
You know, if I had the option, I think I would quote the entire post, but since I don't have that kind of time...
This made me melt and thank you, Kav, because I love to be a puddle because of you.
This was one of the most excellent stories I've read. From beginning to end, you've held me captive and I don't want to be let go. Yet, I understand that these things happen and a good story must always come to an end.
HUGS!
QUOTE
He woke to whispered words of passion; her husky sleep-laced voice caressing his ear just before her teeth began to worry the tender flesh. His hunger revived, sharp and gnawing and he fisted his hands in her hair, dragging her head closer so he could devour her, his tongue sweeping into her mouth. Passion instantly flared between them. He tumbled her onto her back and savored the joy of having her in his bed, sprawled beneath him. This time he would love her slowly, and gently with controlled precision. There was no need for haste; they had the rest of their lives together. Then Sue moved impatiently, one long leg ensnaring his hip as she arched against him. He groaned as his control snapped. It was over rated anyway. This time he would show no mercy.
This made me melt and thank you, Kav, because I love to be a puddle because of you.This was one of the most excellent stories I've read. From beginning to end, you've held me captive and I don't want to be let go. Yet, I understand that these things happen and a good story must always come to an end.
HUGS!
I'm gone for 3 days and look at what I miss....Great ending....just love it....
~laura michelle~
~laura michelle~
Kav, I have to agree with everyone else's comments and even though there are so many ways to describe your wonderful story, I think only one word comes close to doing it justice ....... MAGIC!!!!
It was incredible! You are such a talented writer. Thank you for sharing it with us!
It was incredible! You are such a talented writer. Thank you for sharing it with us!
Kav, I started reading this yesterday and I've spent the most glorious afternoon reading the last half of your wonderful story. I was enraptured from the beginning in the magical story you created, having never seen or read the book Polar Express I was a little unsure what to expect, I wasn't disappointed, however, this was a wonderful adventure that I've thoroughly enjoyed reading. The humour, emotion and magic that wove through every single installment has made your story a truly wonderful seasonal story and it will remain one of my favourites I'm sure for many years to come.
Thank you for sharing, it was a truly wonderful story.
Take care,
Sairs
Thank you for sharing, it was a truly wonderful story.
Take care,
Sairs
.....What a post
Kav, my friend, as always.....sheer brilliance!!! Thank you Thank you Thank you.
Jill
Words cannot describe how great this story is.
thanks for a wonderful train ride,
Terie
thanks for a wonderful train ride,
Terie
wwwwwwwwwwwwwwooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwww I...just ....I.......I......I .... I don't know what to say........ I love your story...and i hate to see it end but..............wwwwwoooooooooooooowwwww what a ending I don't know if i'm ever coming down from this cloud ........wowgreets law
Kav,
Thanks for the wonderful story it truly was Magical.
Dianna
Thanks for the wonderful story it truly was Magical.
Dianna
WOW! A wonderful ending for a wonderful story!
Thank you, Kav! You made my Christmas with this amazing story! This fiction was the only beautiful, magical and positive thing that happened in my Christmas and I'll be eternally grateful to you for this!
Ornella
Thank you, Kav! You made my Christmas with this amazing story! This fiction was the only beautiful, magical and positive thing that happened in my Christmas and I'll be eternally grateful to you for this!
Ornella
Kav - thanks for reading my story! I feel special!
especially since I have joined the FIRE club..................cooking ham and beans for New Years Day and all of a sudden FLAMES are leaping from the back Burner!! the old smother with a lid trick didn't work, huffing and puffing on it didn't work............the flames just went higher..........finally my yelling got my husband's attention ( he's mostly deaf)......and he was able to blow it out. whew......I wasn't even reading fan fics. but now I do kinda feel "Official".
It must be contagious.
hugs, skeeter
Oh My! I go away for a few days and look what I miss! Well, I'm all caught up and very, very happy. I only thought I had visited the Magic Kingom over these past few days away. All I really needed to do was stay home and log onto my computer.
Thank you, Kav for a wonderfully magical, lovely, beautiful story! I wish it could have gone on forever. But, if it had, you might not be able to grace us with yet another wonderful story in the not so distant future (HINT HINT) In fact, I think I will camp out in front of the computer until I see a new story start. I wonder if they will buy that at work or if I will need to come up with a different excuse?
Kim
Thank you, Kav for a wonderfully magical, lovely, beautiful story! I wish it could have gone on forever. But, if it had, you might not be able to grace us with yet another wonderful story in the not so distant future (HINT HINT) In fact, I think I will camp out in front of the computer until I see a new story start. I wonder if they will buy that at work or if I will need to come up with a different excuse?
Kim
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