Michelle all I can say is WOW!!!!

That's about all I can say too! I was so caught up in this story, and really felt for Howard...such emotion! But you captured Jack and Sue so well...LOVED the tender moment in the conference room!

Wow!!!

Michelle

I have just sat and read this story

and it has made me cry

I really felt for Howie/howard...I found myself wanting somehow for both Jack and Howard to keep their own Sue

That was amazing, a very big dose of the twiligh Zone

When I first read that Howie was Sue's husband I thought I was going to be sick. It was too freaky. Now I feel really sorry for Howie. I was kinda hoping his Sue would come back to him. I really wanted both Jack and Howie to be happy. You did an excellent job. I think this is the scariest story I've read so far.

I haven't been able to post a reply to the conclusion of this story because it made me so sad! Poor Howie. I can't even honestly say that I'm glad Sue and Jack ended up together. Maybe it's because I'm married, but I can imagine myself in that situation...listening to my spouse choose someone else. Just heartbreaking.

Great job, mjasd...the most creative entry of the whole contest, hands down.

i'm new here. but i have to say that was GREAT!!!!!!!! i love the shaow. i started watching it when it first started and that was really good!

Wow I was in theTwilight Zone reading this. I feel so bad for Howie. I wish it ended happy for him but oh well. Great story.




Hope ~