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volleyballgirl
Interesting....... Wonder what Stanley has planned?

Faith
theatrenut86
Woah...didnt see that one coming....Stan the Man is engaged..wink.gif Everybit of happiness to him as long as it isnt to Tara....gag me with a spatula..very nice, I work in the restaurant business rofl2.gif
savgraceleland
OOOO.....ummm....okay....now I'm confuzzled

~laura michelle~
Cindy01
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'Oh gag me with a spatula.' Bobby thought to himself as he took a bite of the garlic bread. Jack saw his friend's mood change and gave a sideways smile to which Bobby barely returned.


The look I had pictured here was something like the look he wore when he was babysitting Howie. laugh.gif I may be way off, but that's what popped into my head.

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"Thankyou Jack. Well since you're all here, I figured that this would be the best time to tell you all that I have an announcement." Bobby glanced to Tara as if searching for any hint on her face. But hers looked as surprised as everyone elses. "I'm getting married."


Ok Tracy, you've left us all hanging here hanging.gif Just tell me he hasn't gone and got engaged to Tara in one day.

Ok, no, I have fully convinced myself that that can't be it. Bobby can't lose out to Stanley....it's a fact of nature ..... right? eek.gif

More soon prettyplease.gif
afanfromSicily
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Sorry Stanley, you don't stand a chance against Bobby's charm! He could win with one dimple tied behind his back.

Cindy, you're hilarious! crylaugh.gif

Tracy, I'm so sorry for having been absent in these days but my days have been hectic and I have nearly any time left to stay in front of my pc! ranting2.gif
I missed so much! They found Sara and her mother...Bobby has been shot(!!!) eek.gif fainting.gif ...Stanley is getting married...
Hold on! Stan the Man is NOT getting married with Tara luv, is he? schmoll.gif

I need more! post-52112-1108572884.gif
Ornella

LittleEm
dry.gif Better not be to Tara!

Em
Levi_rocks
hmmm.gif I don't know what to feel about this annoucement from Stanley. Could it be Tara?
learningtosign
QUOTE(LittleEm @ Jan 18 2007, 12:14 AM) *

dry.gif Better not be to Tara!

Em


my thoughts exactly

cath
tracyfbeye
"See ya later, Stanley. Thanks for supper." Everyone said as they filed out of The Chicken Shack. Stanley still looked in shock from the bill.

"You know, maybe you could have slacked off a little bit." Jack suggested as they walked to their cars.

"What can I say, when he's paying, I feel.. Even more lighter."

"Well better him then me." Jack said with a smile to which Boby replied with the same. "So what do you think about that, huh?"

"About what?"

"Stanley marrying Rachel."

"I don't. I don't even know who Rachel is."

"Well no one does. But from what he says, she sounds like a nice girl."

"Ya. But why would he come all the way to D.C. to tell us that? Doesn't it seem a little odd?"

"Maybe he wanted to make sure he wasn't in love with Tara anymore."

"Do you really think they were in love?" Jack shrugged as they reached their cars.

"Bobby I can honestly say that I don't know and I don't want to know. That's too much into a woman's mind for me." He gave a wink before diving into his car after giving a wave. Bobby returned the favour. He slowly got into his car and watched as the rest of the group disperssed into their own cars. He watched Tara closely. She and Stanley had hardly spoken after his announcement and now she looked downright sick. He wondered if it would be the wrong course of action to follow her and see how she was. After she turned on her car and drove away, Bobby decided to let his heart take the wheel. And he knew exactly where it was taking him.
theatrenut86
yay.gif It isnt Tara! bounching.gif
suesfan
So, Rachel was a surprise to even Tara?? Bobby, good for you - follow her home!!!

Joy
Cindy01
yay.gif I'm so glad it's not Tara that he's engaged to!

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He wondered if it would be the wrong course of action to follow her and see how she was. After she turned on her car and drove away, Bobby decided to let his heart take the wheel. And he knew exactly where it was taking him.


Atta boy Bobby! I love the line 'let his heart take the wheel'....beautiful! cloud9.gif
Linny27
So, Stan the Man is getting married and it's not to Tara. To me, that's a good thing. They were cute together, but they just weren't right for one another. To me, Tara and Bobby have a better connection.
tracyfbeye
Jack and Sue had talked all through the dinner about Sara, parenting, and marriage, but they hadn't quite breeched the topic of dating. He wondered if she was avoiding it for a reason. He found himself following her in his car. He could see how she would glance back every once in a while and wave. She wasn't frightened by the fact that it was almost 10:00 and he was following her. They arrived at her place and after taking a deep breath, Jack jumped out of the car.

--

Tara hadn't noticed Bobby following her until she looked in her rear view mirror.

"What's he doing?" She said quietly. Her heart had just been shattered and she hoped he wasn't going to try to talk about it. She wasn't in the mood for talk. She wasn't in the mood for anything. She just wanted to lay down and cry. But obviously that wasn't in his plans

--

Bobby hoped he wasn't being too intrusive but he figured that this would be the only way they could talk without any interruptions. She slowed and parked her car in front of her apartment and he did the same. Slowly, he got out of the car and made his way to hers.

--

"Nice night." Jack commented after helping Sue out of her car.

She nodded and turned back to the car, opening the door for Levi. "Oh, Jack, did you feed Levi some of you're chicken?"

Jack smiled. "He looked hungry." He gave the dog a steady pat before looking back to Sue.

"Is there something you wanted Jack?"

He nodded. "Yes, actually. We need to talk." She slowly nodded supsiciously then turned and motioned for Jack to follow her.

--

"Nice night." Bobby commented as he held the car door open.

Tara looked up with a small smile. "Ya."

"Are you okay?"

She nodded slightly as she stepped out and closed the door behind her. "I will be after I get inside."

"In any mood for company?"

She shrugged. "How could I resist." He smiled as she led the way and he followed behind.
Cindy01
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"Nice night." Jack commented after helping Sue out of her car.

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"Nice night." Bobby commented as he held the car door open.


I love how alike Bobby and Jack are. Flowers.gif

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"In any mood for company?"

She shrugged. "How could I resist." He smiled as she led the way and he followed behind.


Good answer. Even if Tara didn't feel like talking, Bobby will make her feel better....hopefully.

grouphug.gif



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lindylou
adulation smilie.gif I love playing catch up on A terrific story
stanley sounds weird who is this rachel and why come back to DC
to let them know and hope jack and sue can talk trufully abot there
love for each other now more soon please pretty please adulation smilie.gif Lin
Levi_rocks
I think I'm starting to feel the love in the air! biggrin.gif
theatrenut86
hmmm.gif What is going to happen next....
suesfan
The guys are going to take care of their girls, even if the girls don't want them to (and, even if they don't know they are their girls)!!!

Joy
savgraceleland
Very interesting.....come on don't make us wait....


~laura michelle~
Linny27
QUOTE(Levi_rocks @ Jan 18 2007, 04:26 PM) *

I think I'm starting to feel the love in the air! biggrin.gif


You're definately not the only one! heartbeat.gif
tracyfbeye
Bobby followed Tara in then closed the door. She had barely made it in before Bobby pulled her into his strong, protective arms. The arms she could get lost in - and there's no fiction to that.

"Bobby," She pulled away slowly. "Maybe you should go."

"Do you want me to?"

She shook her head. "No, its just.. I'm a mess right now."

"You're certainly the best looking mess I've ever seen."

She smiled. "Thankyou." She walked to the couch where she fell onto, grabbing a pillow and pulling it to her chest as she did so. Bobby watched, then followed, and sank in beside her.

"Is this about Stanley?" He asked quietly - caringly.

She nodded slowly. "Ya, I guess so. I mean, I was so worried that when he was coming here.. He was going to want me back. But now.. I don't know. I was almost happy again when we were talking. It was like old times when we were fine with eachother but then he announced it and.. I feel so lost." She wiped her eyes as a single tear fell. Another quickly followed, taking the path the first had made. She wiped them away angirly. "I'm sorry."

Instead of answering, Bobby pulled her to him again. She relaxed against his chest as he tightened his hold. His wonderfuly Tara was so precious. Her heart had been altered way to many times. He hoped he be able to put it back and he hoped that tonight was the night.

--

Jack followed Sue into the apartment and glanced around for Lucy.

"I guess she's not home yet." Jack nodded as Sue shed her coat and scarf. He did the same. Levi gallantly trotted away, happily leaving the couple alone. "So," Sue turned back to him at the same time he was bringing his coat to the rack and they bumped against eachother. Sue's arms on Jack's chest, their legs making instant contanct but instantly breaking apart. Sue's hands lingered on his chest for a second longer and Jack wondered if he was just over thinking everything. She cleared her throat in her typical nervous way then walked into the kitchen. "Can I get you anything?"

He shook his head.

"Are you sure? We have Grape juice..?"

He smiled. "Actually, that does sound good. Yes please." She smiled and turned to the fridge. He watched her then turned away, placing his coat on the hooks. He quietly whispered the words he thought most fitting to start the conversation. Several words like "I love you", "Marry me", and "Could we sit down". The last, of course, sounded more reasonable but unbeknownst to him, Sue had seen his lips move in silent whispers and her brow furrowed.
afanfromSicily
Loved the parallel between the two couples! perfect10.gif

Stan the Man is getting married to Rachel! bounching.gif WOOHOO! bounching.gif
Ehm... who is Rachel?! huh.gif

Great job, Tracy! applause.gif


Ornella
theatrenut86
yay.gif
savgraceleland
What is Sue going to do about it?


~laura michelle~
afanfromSicily
poster_oops.gif BUSTED! Jack, now you have to say those words out loud... sitting.gif

Poor Tara! console.gif At least she has a strong, firm, muscular faint.gif shoulder to cry on...

drama.gif

Ornella
Cindy01
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"You're certainly the best looking mess I've ever seen."

Sweet. cloud9.gif

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Instead of answering, Bobby pulled her to him again. She relaxed against his chest as he tightened his hold. His wonderfuly Tara was so precious. Her heart had been altered way to many times. He hoped he be able to put it back and he hoped that tonight was the night.


Why can't everyone be like Bobby? wub.gif Is that really asking too much? laugh.gif

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He quietly whispered the words he thought most fitting to start the conversation. Several words like "I love you", "Marry me", and "Could we sit down". The last, of course, sounded more reasonable but unbeknownst to him, Sue had seen his lips move in silent whispers and her brow furrowed.


Oh, dear. Jack, you've been caught. This should get interesting.

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Levi_rocks
So Sue, now that you know what Jack has on his mind, what are you going to do about it?
lindylou
Flowers.gif Flowers.gif now you have seen sue what are you about to do
kiss his socks off and say YES more soon pkease tracy Flowers.gif Flowers.gif Flowers.gif Lin
ozzie
WOW wonder what Sue is going to do about Jack's little confession.

Can't Wait for more.
suesfan
Jack, you know you should never move your lips if you're around Sue and you don't want her to know your thoughts!! Sue, are you going to tell him you read his lips???

Joy
Linny27
Yeah, I think next time Jack should just figure out which questions to ask in his head. At least, that way, she won't figure out what he's trying to say! But, now that she has seen it, I wonder what she's going to do about it.
learningtosign
jack you are so busted, now tell her out loud

cath
tracyfbeye
Jack asked Sue if they could sit down and she agreed, though she was completely flustered about why he had said those things. It wasn't like she hadn't thought about them but they wre different seeing them on the lips of Jack Hudson. Something about that shocked her; scared her.

Suddenly, Jack understood why she was looking so frightened. "Sue, did you.. Did you just read what I said?" She nodded hesitantley and he spun away quietly chastising himself for being so stupid.

"It's okay. For all I knew you were talking to Levi. You were looking at him."

Jack looked back and gave a weak smile. "Not quite." He took a step towards her and said, "I was talking about you.. about us."

She nodded slowly. "But you said.. I love you and marry me." She smiled as Jack took another step towards her.

"Ya, I know." He gracefully took her hands in his and smiled. "Sue, I wasn't joking. I was serious." She nodded slowly, but her eyes focused on his eyes. He looked away then back and she glanced down to his lips.

"Jack, You know we.. we can't do that. I mean.."

"I know, I know. That's why I haven't said it." She nodded slowly again. "But what if it wasn't there. Would you.. consider it?" She shrugged.

"I'd have to check with Joseph." Immediately, Jack let go of her hands and stepped back. Sue just about burst out laughing. He noticed the smile and tilted his head in a curious way.

"What's so funny?"

"You. I mean.. you and Joseph."

"You keep saying that like I know him."

She smiled again. "You do."

"How?"

"Because Joseph is.. Joseph is Levi."

"What?!"

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Sorry about the length but my mind is having a hissyfit.gif at the moment because I made it get up extra early before work to check this site.. anyhoo, Im off to write on my other story kittywag.gif
theatrenut86
rofl2.gif She told him...that is great!
savgraceleland
Priceless.....


~laura michelle~
LittleEm
blissysmile.gif Perfect!!!

Em
Linny27
I'm glad she told him. At least now he has nothing to be jealous about. Maybe then they can talk more about their feelings and what they want to do about them.
Cindy01
Thank goodness for slip ups or Jack would have never come out and said it! yay.gif

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"Because Joseph is.. Joseph is Levi."


Now that he knows the truth, I think he can find it in his heart to share Sue with "Joseph" wink.gif


lindylou
rofl2.gif that was really funny its priceless boy jack is worse than
clueless more soon please LolLolLolLol.gif Lin
tracyfbeye
Bobby watched as Tara fell into sleep. The irreagulatory flick of her eyelashes stopped and her breath deepened, coming in long and slow strides and she had been sleeping for about an hour now. He smiled as she nuzzled further against his chest. At first, it had seemed like she was refusing to talk but she soon gave in, telling him how angry she was at Stanley for coming back here and then announcing to the world that he was getting married - and not to her. Thank God, Bobby thought as he sent a silent prayer of thanks up. She was so vulnerable right now. He loved how she let herself trust him.

"Bobby.." She whispered as she glanced up, her eyes barely opening before closing again.

He nodded. "Yeah?"

"What are you still doing here?" She opened her eyes and looked at her watch. "It's almost midnight."

"Are you saying I should leave?"

She shook her head more fiercely then she had hoped. "No! I mean, I don't want you to stay here when you want to be home."

"No way." He said quietly before kissing her hair. She smiled as he pulled back.

"You know, if you're going to try to charm a girl that's trying not to be charmed.. You should stop before she gets charmed."

"Am I getting close?" She smiled as he leaned in and gave her a soft kiss. She gently responded with no urgency or passion. Just the passion of a fire slowly beginning to burn. He pulled back and rested his forehead on hers. "Should I go?"

She slowly shook her head as she cupped his face and placed a few kisses on his lips, pulling back just as he attempted to pull her closer.

"Thankyou."

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Once again, not long but I think Im getting sick flu.gif.. although it might just be the early morning biggrin.gif

Thankyou all so much for the magnificent comments! I love them all
theatrenut86
yay.gif So cute kissing.gif Btw-stay healthy...I will be praying.gif
Linny27
Aw, again, I am so happy that Bobby can be there for her. Although, I don't know what Tara's going to be thinking when she wakes up in Bobby's arms. That's going to be interesting.
Cindy01
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"Am I getting close?" She smiled as he leaned in and gave her a soft kiss. She gently responded with no urgency or passion. Just the passion of a fire slowly beginning to burn. He pulled back and rested his forehead on hers. "Should I go?"

She slowly shook her head as she cupped his face and placed a few kisses on his lips, pulling back just as he attempted to pull her closer.

"Thankyou."


That's certainly more than a typical friendship they've got there. cloud9.gif I do believe that Tara is beyond charmed.

Don't fight it Tara. yay.gif
Kav
Blissful sigh heartbeat.gif The fuzzies are fuzzifying!

kav
lindylou
Flowers.gif melting.gif IM so glad for bobby and tara heartbeat.gif Lin
Levi_rocks
yay.gif I'm soo glad that there is progress between both Jack and Sue, and Bobby and Tara!
learningtosign
lovely warm fuzzies

cath
theatrenut86
console.gif Tracy is currently not feeling her best, so no writing from her today. She hopes to be feeling better by tomorrow. She's sorry!
suesfan
Sorry you're not feeling well Tracy!!!

Jack, I'm really glad you talk to yourself and overjoyed that Sue can read lips!! And, now maybe you will continue to move forward since you know who Joseph is!!!

Bobby is so sweet to Tara!! I know she is charmed beyond belief!!!

Joy
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