Cindy01
Jan 20 2007, 04:05 PM
Feel better Tracy!
tracyfbeye
Jan 20 2007, 04:38 PM
Sorry to have lied to you all but Im feeling better.. I still feel pretty sore and headachy but the sickness has passed.. I was probably just hungry
Anyhoo, please enjoy (once again, sorry that its so short)...............................................................................................................................
Dimitrius rubbed his eyes as he made his way to his car. After supper with Stanley, he had decided to go to the mall and try to find a suitable gift for Donna for Valentine's Day. None was found. He could feel the exhaustion and cold creeping into his bones but he refused to let it get to him - at least not until he was at home, in his bed. He chastised himself for driving 15 minutes away from the already 30 minutes from home Chicken Shack. If he was lucky and if traffic was on his side, he could be home in 50 minutes. He heard a strange noise and whipped around only to see a man holding a gun, aimed directly for D.
"Woah!" He said, louder then he had hoped.
"Shut up." Jeff said with equal volume.
"Jeff. What are you doing?" D immediately recognised Jeff Taylor and rolled his eyes.
"What does it look like Im doing?"
"It looks like you're trying to get caught."
"No, you're alone."
"Oh really? Are you sure?" D found his opportunity when Jeff glanced over his shoulder. D kicked his legs grabbing the gun as he did so, then punching his face, knocking him to the ground. "That wasn't a good move. You see, if you were good at this, you would have just shot me." D delivered another blow when Jeff struggled for the gun that D now possessed. He pulled out the pair of handcuffs which he had brought and after using them on Jeff, he gave him a hand to help him up. Jeff was less then impressed.
"What do you think you're going to do with me?" He asked in a sarcastic tone. D shrugged.
"Well I was think we could go for a nice scenic drive to the beach in Virginia where we could enjoy some deep sea diving." He rolled his eyes again as he pushed Jeff towards his car.
theatrenut86
Jan 20 2007, 04:46 PM

THis should be good...
Cindy01
Jan 20 2007, 05:23 PM
So glad you're feeling better Tracy!!!!
Very interesting scene.
QUOTE
"Oh really? Are you sure?" D found his opportunity when Jeff glanced over his shoulder. D kicked his legs grabbing the gun as he did so, then punching his face, knocking him to the ground. "That wasn't a good move. You see, if you were good at this, you would have just shot me." D delivered another blow when Jeff struggled for the gun that D now possessed. He pulled out the pair of handcuffs which he had brought and after using them on Jeff, he gave him a hand to help him up. Jeff was less then impressed.
I'm glad D's such a good agent.....that was a scary situation.
Levi_rocks
Jan 20 2007, 07:05 PM
Now what in the world is Jeff up to?
lindylou
Jan 20 2007, 11:18 PM
QUOTE(Levi_rocks @ Jan 21 2007, 01:05 AM)

Now what in the world is Jeff up to?

I agree why highjack D

Lin
Blueangel
Jan 20 2007, 11:34 PM
this doens't sound good.
update soon!
learningtosign
Jan 21 2007, 05:09 AM
glad you're feeling better
glad d avoided being captured
cath
Linny27
Jan 21 2007, 07:31 AM
I love that even though D's bones may be starting to creak that he is still as light on his feet as ever. He's still in good enough shape to give the bad guy a wallop!
savgraceleland
Jan 21 2007, 08:22 AM
This doesn't sound good at all....
~laura michelle~
suesfan
Jan 21 2007, 12:05 PM
That could have turned out badly!! I'm glad D captured him so easily!!!
Joy
tracyfbeye
Jan 21 2007, 02:34 PM
Thankyou all for the comments and get well wishes
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Jack was shocked to find out that he had been played by a dog. Of course, he couldn't blame Levi since he probably didn't know he was in the middle of this con anyways. Sue had collapsed in giggles and Jack couldn't help but laugh at how well she had played him.
"How long were you planning on pulling a Levi on me?"
Sue smiled. "Lucy told me to wait until Valentines Day."
"Oh so the point was to get me so mad that I'd feel like I needed to ask you for a date?"
"Well, ya, something like that." She strode to the couch with Jack following behind.
"So what are you going to do now? Pretend you're dating Bobby?"
Sue's face blanched. "You mean you didn't know." Jack simply rolled his eyes as Sue smiled. "I'm kidding. No, it's fine. It was just a joke."
"I can hardly wait to see what you'll do for April Fools."
"I'll have to ask Lucy." They took their seats and Sue reached for a pillow, pulling it close to her chest. "Soo.." She quietly said, glancing from Levi, who occupied to floor, to Jack then to the wall behind him.
"What are you doing for Valentine's Day anyways?"
"Well I was going to spend it with Joseph.. I mean Levi just watching a movie that Lucy wanted."
"Hmm I'm very glad I'm not Lucy's best friend."
Sue chuckled. "She's not bad. She just likes to watch romantic movies."
"Like what?"
"Umm, well last Valentine's Day we watched The Notebook."
"Oh. How was it?"
"I don't know. I slept through it. How about you? What are you doing for Valentine's Day?"
He shrugged. "I don't know. I haven't thought that about it much. I've been kinda busy with the case."
"Oh yes, about that. Sara is supposed to meet you tomorrow."
"Oh yeah. You think she'll like me?"
Sue smiled. "Who could resist?"
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Sorry the writing is so silly but I don't have anything interesting going on at the present moment but I hope to give you a good post soon
theatrenut86
Jan 21 2007, 02:38 PM
That left things too open Tracy....
Levi_rocks
Jan 21 2007, 02:59 PM

more please?
Cindy01
Jan 21 2007, 03:08 PM
QUOTE
"So what are you going to do now? Pretend you're dating Bobby?"
Sue's face blanched. "You mean you didn't know." Jack simply rolled his eyes as Sue smiled.

That was great!

They seem really comfortable talking with each other......now Jack just has to ASK her out for Valentine's!
savgraceleland
Jan 21 2007, 04:17 PM
Love the teasing....keep going....
~laura michelle~
lindylou
Jan 21 2007, 04:26 PM

love how jack fell for the teasing but more please

Lin
afanfromSicily
Jan 21 2007, 07:29 PM
Loved the teasing!

But we didn't make any progress with the matter of Valentine's Day date...
*hint hint*I can't wait for little Sara to meet Jack...
Ornella
tracyfbeye
Jan 21 2007, 07:29 PM
Tara felt Bobby's heart beat jump when the phone rang. They both chuckled as he reached for it and handed it to her.
"Hello?" She said, attempting to hide the exhaustion in her voice.
"Hey, Tara, It's D."
"D, it's," She checked her watch. "2 a.m. What are you still doing up?"
"I found Jeff."
"Really?" She sat up straight and Bobby rubbed his eyes then watched her. "Uhuh. Okay, thanks. We'll be there soon. Ya, Bobby's here too. Okay, bye." She pushed the off button then looked at Bobby. "D found Jeff. He sais he'll tell us more when we're there." Bobby nodded.
"Okay, let's go."
--
"What were you thinking?" Jack asked as he and Bobby quietly paced the interrogation room. Jeff sat, glancing from both of them. "First you run off, then you shoot one of our agent, then try to kidnap another? Or were you planning on killing D?"
Jeff shrugged. "Didn't matter to me."
Bobby gave a disgusted groan as he leaned down and came face to face with the man who had shot him. "You know what? You've got alot of nerve." He said, poking a finger at Jeff's chest. "You make me sick. You come here acting like some kinda wounded bear and then we find out you set the trap!" He pushed off and continued his pacing as Jack eyed.
"You know, you didn't hurt Bobby that bad. Or at least not as bad as you might have hoped. So what was your plan?"
"Just get a few of you out of my way. You were too close."
"Too close? To what?" Bobby asked, curiously watching the man.
"Too close to the truth."
Jack took a seat. "Oh you mean to truth about you being an abusive father and husband?"
Jeff shrugged. "Hey, what can I say? A man's gotta do what a man's gotta.."
"Oh that is the biggest load of cat's crap I've ever heard." Jack tried to surpress his laughter at Bobby's choise of words as he watched him lay into Jeff. "How in the world can you be that kind of an idiot and then say 'Oh, A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do?' You're sick." He quickly turned and walked out, Jack following behind. They stopped in the hall.
"You okay?" Jack asked quietly.
Bobby shrugged. "People like that can get under your skin."
Jack smiled. "Ya. And what was with 'Cat's crap'?" He asked giving Bobby a fake punch to which Bobby simply smiled.
"Sometimes you've gotta say what you've gotta say."
theatrenut86
Jan 21 2007, 07:35 PM
THis is good, but Cat's crap
afanfromSicily
Jan 21 2007, 07:46 PM
QUOTE
Jack smiled. "Ya. And what was with 'Cat's crap'?" He asked giving Bobby a fake punch to which Bobby simply smiled.
"Sometimes you've gotta say what you've gotta say."
Too funny!
This Jeff guy is a real jerk!
Ornella
Cindy01
Jan 21 2007, 07:52 PM
QUOTE
Jack smiled. "Ya. And what was with 'Cat's crap'?" He asked giving Bobby a fake punch to which Bobby simply smiled.
"Sometimes you've gotta say what you've gotta say."

Tracy, that was fantastic.

I can kind of picture this being said with a John Wayne swagger
Levi_rocks
Jan 21 2007, 08:30 PM
Nice choice of words back there bobby!
lindylou
Jan 22 2007, 03:08 AM

loved bobbys cats crap I
can see bobby or jack thumpping this jeff
more soon please

Lin
Linny27
Jan 22 2007, 07:04 AM
Well, I've gotta say that the cat's crap thing, definately put a smile on my face...

... and a stich in my side. Wonderful Tracy!
tracyfbeye
Jan 22 2007, 11:19 AM
Bobby returned to the bullpen and quickly went straight to his desk. Tara noticed.
"What happened in there?" She asked, stepping away from her desk and going to his.
Bobby shrugged with a smile. "Well first things first, we know he's a jerk. Second, he pretty well attmitted to being abusive. Everything else we got from Karlee seems to match up. We've got our guy."
Tara nodded. "Good."
"Hey, how are you doing?" He asked, suddenly turning to a whisper.
"I'm okay. Thanks for being there with me." He gentlty took her hand in his.
"Anytime." He gave a wink before releasing her hand and turning back to his desk. Tara turned and walked back to hers.
--
Jack and Sue walked silently along the sidewalk on their way to Sue's building.
"So everything is wrapped up then?"
Jack nodded. "Ya. Lock, stock, and barrel."
"Are you trying to confuse me?"
He chuckled then signed, "Lock" "Stock" "and barrel"
She nodded. "Thankyou. So now that you're done with that, have you thought about what you're going to do for Valentine's Day?"
He shrugged. "Not really. A little holiday isn't first on my mind."
Sue smiled. "Me neither but Im trying to get any excuse to stay away from my house that day."
"Why's that?"
"Chick flicks."
"Oh yes." Jack smiled and chuckled as they reached Sue's door.
"Well thankyou for walking me home."
Jack nodded, suddenly acting nervous as he checked his watch. "Well I didn't see how you should have come there anyways. Jeff's going to jail and we're done. You should have just had a good nights sleep."
"You know how I don't like to be excluded."
Jack chuckled. "Yes, I know."
Slowly, she nodded. "Alright."
"Okay."
"Thankyou."
"Yup." She then turned and after giving a wave, walked through the doors, giving Levi the chance to enter first. "Wait a second." Jack finally said, seeing Sue dissapear inside. He followed her, running to catch up. "Sue." He touched her shoulder and she whirled around.
"What's wrong?"
"Sue, would you like to go with me on Valentine's Day? I mean since we're both available.. for a date?"
She smiled. "I'd like that."
"Okay."
Cindy01
Jan 22 2007, 11:27 AM
QUOTE
"Anytime." He gave a wink before releasing her hand and turning back to his desk. Tara turned and walked back to hers.
QUOTE
He shrugged. "Not really. A little holiday isn't first on my mind."
Sue smiled. "Me neither but Im trying to get any excuse to stay away from my house that day."
Nice hint Sue!
QUOTE
"Sue, would you like to go with me on Valentine's Day? I mean since we're both available.. for a date?"
She smiled. "I'd like that."
Yes!!! He finally asked! A date!!!!
suesfan
Jan 22 2007, 11:39 AM
I wonder if Jeff realizes how lucky he is that Bobby didn't tear his head off!!!
Well, Jack, it took you long enough, but you finally asked!! Good job!!!
Joy
theatrenut86
Jan 22 2007, 12:51 PM
He followed her good....and a date...even better
LittleEm
Jan 22 2007, 01:37 PM
It's a date!

Em
Levi_rocks
Jan 22 2007, 02:59 PM

Jack finally did it!!!
savgraceleland
Jan 22 2007, 04:52 PM
He finally asked....YAY....
~laura michelle~
Becka
Jan 22 2007, 06:28 PM

He said the word DATE, making it official!! I found this story and I've finally caught up! You're doing a great job! Will you grace us with another post today??
audiokim
Jan 22 2007, 06:41 PM
Will wonders never cease. He actually stopped Sue BEFORE she got inside the build and actually asked her on a DATE. That's just so great!
Kim
tracyfbeye
Jan 22 2007, 06:45 PM
Thankyou all so much for your constant support and welcome to any newcomers! I hope to bore you too badly

Im really not feeling well but you all have graced with another smile so for that I thankyou.. There will not be a post today as I will probably spend the rest of the watching a movie but thankyou all for stopping by and supporting me! Ill write as soon as I feel up to it!
Thanks again! You all are wonderful
Tracy
lindylou
Jan 22 2007, 09:01 PM
learningtosign
Jan 23 2007, 03:10 AM
Linny27
Jan 23 2007, 08:22 AM
YAHOO! He actually asked her and she said yes! Yay! Go Jack, Go Jack!
tracyfbeye
Jan 23 2007, 09:19 AM
Sue opened the door to her apartment and almost ran into Lucy.
"Oh!" They both cried, looking somewhat shocked.
"Wow, you look beautiful." Sue stated seeing Lucy's done up hair and the black dress that cascaded down her thin body. Lucy shrugged.
"Thanks."
"Did you just get in?" Sue closed the door behind her and unlatched Levi from the leash then began to shed her outer garments.
"Ya."
"It's pretty late." Lucy nodded then smiled.
"I know. I went to another wedding."
"Wow. This must be the season of love. You just went to one last week." Lucy smiled again.
"I know." They both walked to the kitchen where Lucy said, "Here, I have about 6 pieces of wedding cake so if you want some, be my guest."
"I'd love some." Sue said as she sat down. Lucy nodded then walked to the fridge where she pulled out a platter with both white and brown cake. "They must think you have a big family."
"Actually I'm the last one to leave so I get the leftovers." They both chuckled as Lucy sat down two pieces then took her own seat. "So I saw you out there with Jack."
Sue nodded as she took a bit of the cake. "Oh this is really good."
"Ya. Sooo..?"
"So what?"
"Come on. What did he say?"
"Oh nothing.. It's just, We're going out on Valentines Day." She put another bite in her mouth just as she said the last part but Lucy understood in anyways.
"What?!" She happily gasped. Sue smiled.
"Ya, He told me that since we were both available that night that he would love to go out on a date with me. I agreed."
"Well Duh!" Lucy giggled. "Oh I can't believe this. All my hard work is paying off."
"You're right, if it weren't for you this probably wouldn't have happened."
"Really?" Sue nodded with a smile.
"If it wasn't for your terrible taste in chick flick's, he wouldn't have asked me out."
theatrenut86
Jan 23 2007, 09:23 AM

Chick flicks aren't terrible depending on which ones they are....but I would prefer a date with Jack over chick flicks any day of the week!
Linny27
Jan 23 2007, 09:59 AM
If it's that bad, I wonder what movies Lucy had in mind. There are very few who can pluck at my heartstrings.
savgraceleland
Jan 23 2007, 09:59 AM
LOL....so cute....
~laura michelle~
Cindy01
Jan 23 2007, 09:59 AM
QUOTE
theatrenut86 Posted Today, 09:23 AM
Chick flicks aren't terrible depending on which ones they are....but I would prefer a date with Jack over chick flicks any day of the week!
I agree!
And, mmmm....wedding cake!
tracyfbeye
Jan 23 2007, 10:36 AM
To make up for my 1 post yesterday, I'll give you another
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Jack drove silently yet he held the smile he had gotten when Sue had said Yes to their date. Now all he had to do was make it perfect. He had hoped that if she would say yes, he would ask her to marry him on Valentine's Day. No matter what the answer, she was always going to have a place in his heart. A huge place. A place where Allie and Jessica couldn't even begin to fill a speck of. She was his and he was hers. Period.
He drove up to the curb where he stopped and turned the car's ignition off. He stepped out after taking the keys out and closed the door behind him, pressing the lock button just after. The two honks let him know that the deed had been completed. He walked towards the building and opened the front door. He kept walking down the long hallway til he reached the elevator. He pressed the up button and waited for the doors to swing open. When they did, he walked in, turned and closed them. The elevator jerked up as soon as he made his selection. He patiently waited for it to stop, then waited for the doors to swing open again.
He stepped out and turned right, walking past door after door after door. Finally he reached the one he wanted. He knocked then waited to hear the familiar voice.
"Who is it?"
"It's Jack."
"Come on in, Mate."
savgraceleland
Jan 23 2007, 10:52 AM
He went to see Bobby why?
~laura michelle~
suesfan
Jan 23 2007, 11:19 AM
Poor Lucy!! I don't think her choice of chick flicks is the way she wanted to take credit for Jack and Sue!!!
So, is Bobby going to help Jack put together a date to remember???
Joy
Cindy01
Jan 23 2007, 11:30 AM
QUOTE
"Who is it?"
"It's Jack."
"Come on in, Mate."
Hmmm

I wonder what he went to see Bobby about. I love conversations between these two...can't wait for more!
LittleEm
Jan 23 2007, 11:47 AM
Loved the girl talk... Do we get boy talk now?

Em
learningtosign
Jan 23 2007, 01:39 PM
QUOTE(theatrenut86 @ Jan 23 2007, 02:23 PM)


Chick flicks aren't terrible depending on which ones they are....but I would prefer a date with Jack over chick flicks any day of the week!

cath
theatrenut86
Jan 23 2007, 02:46 PM

Jack is going to see Bobby, why? Maybe he needed to tell his best mate the good news, who knows!
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