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Levi_rocks
If Jack is going to let Bobby in on his plan, there is a possibility that Myles will also be in on it too as well as D!
tracyfbeye
Sue went to the washroom just as Lucy passed her in the hall and waved goodnight. Though unbeknownst to her, Lucy held a piece of cake. Had she known, she would have asked but instead, she went on brushing her teeth. Lucy smiled as soon as the door was shut then ran to Sue's bedroom where she lifted the pillow and placed the cake under it.

"Such a waste." She mumbled as she positioned the pillow back to normal. "If that old wive's tale is right, then Sue should dream about Jack." She stated with a satisfied sigh. She then turned and walked to her room, turning the lights off as she went.

After Sue was finished, she went into her bedroom and immediately noticed Levi nudging her pillow. "Levi, what are you doing?" She pulled him back but he was very set on seeing what was under her pillow. Instead of checking, she pulled him back and commanded him to sit. "Stay, Levi." His head drooped down but instead of arguing, he laid down and closed his eyes. She turned back to her bed and pushed her covers back then slipped under them. Sleep quickly took over.

--

"Jack." Sue quietly said as he walked towards her and enveloped her in his strong arms.

His eyes met hers as he said, "Sue, I love you." Before she could speak, he took her lips under his. His strong arms entangled hers as he pushed her against the living room wall. Sue could feel all control dripping away as his kisses deepened and his arms sifted through her blonde hair.

He couldn't feel the floor anymore. It was only him and Sue in heaven. A perfect heaven. His lips snapped away from her lips and he traced her jaw with his. She groaned as he pulled away.

"What's wrong?"

"Could you stop licking me?"

"What?"

--

Levi's huge tongue lapped onto Sue's face as she pushed him back. "Levi, get back!"
lindylou
Flowers.gif Flowers.gif that was fantastic but sue let levi sleep
on the sofa then you can dream of the love of your life jack
in peace more soon please tracy prettyplease.gif chocolate.gif chocolate.gif Lin
Cindy01
QUOTE
Lucy smiled as soon as the door was shut then ran to Sue's bedroom where she lifted the pillow and placed the cake under it.

"Such a waste." She mumbled as she positioned the pillow back to normal.


laugh.gif I hope Sue's not like me. I tend to put my hand under my pillow....what a surprise she'd get! laugh.gif

Great post! Flowers.gif
Kav
Lucky for Sue Levi isn't a needle nosed sheltie or he'd have slurped up that slice of cake before she could have a delicious dream! bakedcake.gif But she did dream and it was about Jack! blissysmile.gif

kav
theatrenut86
rofl2.gif No words...I am laughing too hard...
Levi_rocks
LolLolLolLol.gif I liked Sue's dream....biggrin.gif
Anne
dance.gif I finally got caught up! This is great! Love the B/T romance building happydance.gif Jack finally asked Sue out for Valentine's Day blissysmile.gif and plans to ask her to marry him bounching.gif

Sue was sure having quite a nice dream there about Jack, until Levi got in the picture. Stop licking me crylaugh.gif rofl2.gif

I guess the old wives tale came true! Can't wait for more! thumbsup.gif
learningtosign
if i was sue i'd be dreaming about jack every night, with or without wedding cake under my pillow blushing.gif blushing.gif

cath
Linny27
I suppose that if you need to make your dream date with the woman of your dreams work, then your best mate is the best person to go to.

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He couldn't feel the floor anymore. It was only him and Sue in heaven. A perfect heaven. His lips snapped away from her lips and he traced her jaw with his. She groaned as he pulled away.

"What's wrong?"

"Could you stop licking me?"

"What?"


Hehe, this was funny. Poor Levi, though. He knew all about the special treat lying underneath his mistress's pillow and yet Sue wouldn't share with him.
tracyfbeye
Im glad you all like it biggrin.gif

Sue awoke the next morning with a smile on her face. The dream just previous to when she woke up had been better then the first. She sighed and looked down, seeing Levi's brown eyes staring into hers. "You want out Buddy?"

He practically nodded as he bounded to the door and stood by it, whining.

"I need to get you litter trained." She said with another smile as she stood and opened the door for him. After grabbing a robe from the bathroom, she went to the kitchen where Levi was pacing in front of the fridge. "Alright, Alright, hold your horses." She pushed him aside, which was not an easy task, then looked in the fridge, gathering all neccesary objects for breakfast.

She took his food bowl off the floor and filled it then set it back down. Levi hardly waited a second before devouring it. "Woah. Hungry?" She chuckled as she poured herself a bowl of yogurt and granola then walked to the couch where she sat down. After taking a bite, she felt a hand on her shoulder.

"Good morning." Lucy said through a hoarse voice.

"Good morning, Luc. You don't look so good." Lucy's hair was standing up on all ends and her eyes were puffy.

"Yes, I think I'm getting that cold that's coming around."

"Do you want some vitamins?"

"Uh no. Not after what happened last time I took one." Sue smiled at the recolection of Lucy's accidental mishap with Levi's sedative.

"Don't worry, Luc. He's not eating them anymore so you'll be fine." Lucy smirked as she walked into the kitchen. She turned to Sue.

"Say, did you have any weird dreams last night?" Lucy immediately noticed how Sue was attempting to hold back a smile.

"Not really, why?"

"Cause I did. I dreampt that Stanley and I were getting married. You wanna talk about waking up with a start." Sue chuckled.

"Maybe you should try that old wive's tale. You know, put a piece of wedding cake under you're pillow and you'll dream about your future husband. You certainly have enough cake." Lucy smiled.

"Well I might not when I'm done with them."

"What do you mean?"

"Oh nothing." Lucy gathered her yogurt then joined Sue on the couch. "So, you said you didn't really have any weird dreams. Any I'd be interested in?"

"I doubt it."

"Did it involve a male."

"Yes." Sue said after a few seconds. Lucy almost jumped up but kept her cool.

"Does he have brown hair and deep, brown eyes?" Seeing Sue's blush, Lucy knew she was correct.

"Yes." Lucy couldn't hold back her giggle anymore. "Why are you laughing?" Instead of answering, Lucy stood and walked into Sue's room. "Um Luc, that's my room, not yours." Sue stood and followed her in and wash shocked to see her holding up her pillow. Only it wasn't the pillow that shocked her. "You had a piece of wedding cake under my pillow?!" Lucy collapsed in laughter.

"Yes! And you drempt about Jack!!" Sue couldn't hold back her smile.

"Well, Miss Dotson, you've managed to do it again."

"Do what?"

"Make me feel incredibly uncomfortable."
Cindy01
QUOTE
"Well, Miss Dotson, you've managed to do it again."

"Do what?"

"Make me feel incredibly uncomfortable."


LolLolLolLol.gif That was funny. And I bet Lucy is really proud of herself. Flowers.gif
suesfan
Cindy, I agree!! I do the same thing and all I would have is an incredibly sticky mess!!!

I'm not totally sure that the wedding cake under the pillow had as much to do with Sue dreaming of Jack as Jack did!!!

Very amusing - it made Lucy's day!!!

Joy
LittleEm
I ate wedding cake and then dreamt of Jack... I wonder what that means blink.gif

Em
theatrenut86
I am kind of shocked that Lucy would tell Sue about the cake so quickly but whatever! wink.gif biggrin.gif
Linny27
QUOTE(suesfan @ Jan 24 2007, 11:25 AM) *

Cindy, I agree!! I do the same thing and all I would have is an incredibly sticky mess!!!

I'm not totally sure that the wedding cake under the pillow had as much to do with Sue dreaming of Jack as Jack did!!!

Very amusing - it made Lucy's day!!!

Joy


Either one could have done it. But, maybe it was a mix of both. You know, just to be sure.
Levi_rocks
LolLolLolLol.gif I wonder if you can feel the wedding cake under your pillow hmmm.gif
tracyfbeye
Thankyou all so much for the amusing comments


Sue and Lucy got to work just in time to see Jack and D ending a fight. Jack stormed to his desk and D practically ran out of the room. Sue gave Lucy a worried glance then looked back to Jack who was rubbing his eyes.

"What's wrong?" She quietly asked and Lucy shrugged then signed, "You ask. I'll watch." Sue couldn't help but smile as Lucy went to her desk. Sue sighed as she walked to Jack's.

"Hi." He greeted with a weak smile.

"What's wrong?"

"What do you mean?" He picked up a pencil and tapped it against his other hand as he watched Sue.

"I mean you and D were just.. talking. And now he just walked out. What's up?"

"Nothing. We just had a disagreement."

"About what?"

"You know Sara?" Sue nodded. "Well she's going to a foster home since her mom and dad will both be in prison."

"No." Sue commented, knowing that nothing she said could change it.

"Yes. I know and D said he can't do anything about it."

"I know he can't but that's awful. And so close to Valentine's Day."

"Not like that really matters to her." He gave a smile to which she returned one back.

"I know. Do you know who she's going to?"

"No. All I know is that she'll be at the home for today and until next month when her mom's hearing is."

"Do you think Karlee should go to jail?"

Jack shook his head as he glanced around. "No. But it doesn't make any difference what I think." He shrugged. "I'm sorry, Sue. I tried."

She nodded. "I know. Thankyou." Slowly, she turned and walked back to her desk.
theatrenut86
Sad...crying.gif
lindylou
crying.gif that is so so sad cant sue and jack foster her till her mums case is heard
more soon please tracy Flowers.gif Lin
suesfan
This is so sad!! I think Lin has a good idea - how about Jack and Sue fostering Sara???

Joy
Cindy01
QUOTE
"You know Sara?" Sue nodded. "Well she's going to a foster home since her mom and dad will both be in prison."

"No." Sue commented, knowing that nothing she said could change it.

Aww, crying.gif There must be something they can do to help. praying.gif
savgraceleland
No wonder Jack was upset....


~laura michelle~
LittleEm
That poor girl! crying.gif

Em
audiokim
Poor Sarah.

Kim
Linny27
Oh, I hope there's something they can do.
Anne
I just love Jack's heart...sigh. melting.gif Poor little Sarah. crying.gif Sue and Lucy with the cake and the dream was a hoot. mf_laughbounce2.gif
tracyfbeye
Bobby followed Tara into the apartment as she placed her keys on the table then stripped off her coat and scarf. Bobby followed suit.

"Boy, it's cold out there." She said as she hung up her coat.

Bobby smiled and nodded. "Ya, Sure is." As soon as she was finished hanging her things up, Bobby pulled her into a warm embrace. He felt her sigh hard and he hoped she wasn't resisting. He pulled her back. "You okay?" She smiled and her eyes blinked heavily.

"Ya, I'm just tired."

"Well no kidding. You haven't been sleeping too well lately."

"On the contrary, I've actually been sleeping exceptionally well."

"Oh really?" Bobby asked, placing his arms over his chest as Tara planted her hands on her hips.

"Yes. You happen to be very comfortable Bobby Manning."

He chuckled as he pulled her to him again. She wrapped her arms around his waist and hugged tightly as he covered her back with his arms. A soft moan escaped her lips as he gently rubbed a hand over her back and neck. Suddenly, she jumped back. "What?"

"Sorry but you're hands are freezing."

He laughed then turned away and walked to the sink where he turned on the hot water. After doing so, he placed his hands under and rubbed them. Tara watched with an amused smile. "There." He said, turning back to her after rubbing the water off with a towel. "All better." He held out his hands and she placed hers over them.

"Yes they are." Bobby looked down to their hands. Hers were so small compared to hers. He slowly closed his hands over hers. She looked up to him with expectancy written in her eyes and the arch of her brow. While keeping their hands in the same position, Bobby took a step forward, a look of desire on his face. Slowly, he closed the distance between them and their lips mets in a gentle kiss.

After a few seconds, they pulled back. She gazed into his eyes - searching them for something. He watched her closely as she stepped forward again but his eyes closed when her lips gently rubbed against his. Nothing was heard as Tara gently took her hands out of his and wrapped them around his neck. He placed his arms around her back and slowly began to straighten. Her feet were about 6 inches off the ground by the time he was fully straight, but she didn't even notice. He walked slowly to the couch, theire lips still engaged in a tender kiss.

They slowly dropped onto the couch. There was no rushing. No expectations. His body covered most of her as he dropped her down then removed his arms from her back. She fell the distance, which was only a few inches, and smiled when he stood. "Are you just going to leave me here?"

He shook his head then sat down, gently pulling her to him again.

If this was earth, he couldn't tell.
Cindy01
QUOTE
Her feet were about 6 inches off the ground by the time he was fully straight, but she didn't even notice. He walked slowly to the couch, theire lips still engaged in a tender kiss.


Aww, perfect! Flowers.gif cloud9.gif fanning.gif mademyday.gif melting.gif perfect10.gif
dreamer
QUOTE(tracyfbeye @ Jan 25 2007, 09:16 AM) *

If this was earth, he couldn't tell.


cloud9.gif
suesfan
**sigh**

Joy
Linny27
Now that was just beautiful. cloud9.gif
theatrenut86
Nice fuzzy I really needed that today thanks! cloud9.gif kissing.gif melting.gif
lindylou
Flowers.gif cloud9.gif that was beautiful cloud9.gif lin
Levi_rocks
cloud9.gif wub2.gif I can see the fuzzies popping out like crazy from the explosion that's coming from Bobby and Tara!
tracyfbeye
Thankyou all for the wonderful comments!


Jack had offered Sue a ride home but instead of going to her house, he turned down a different road. She eyed him curiously but stayed silent for the trip. After about 10 minutes, he pulled into a parking lot. "Jack, what are we doing here?" She asked, trying to read his eyes.

"Well if I told you it wouldn't be a surprise." He gave a sly smile then jumped out, walking to her door to open it and help her out. Jack had asked Lucy to take Levi so he wouldn't be a bother. Jack led Sue into the building that was set off the parking lot.

"Jack is this what I think it is?"

He smiled. "Just wait." He led her through a hallway and to another then opened a door. Sue's breath caught in her throat.

"Jack." She breathed as she took in the sight before her. He was thrilled when she suddenly wrapped her arms around his neck. "Thankyou." She said quietly as she turned back.

"So are you ready?"

"But I don't have my skates."

"I do." He signed, leading her to a bench. There sat two sets of ice skates. She gazed back at the empty rink. Her mind clouded with the memories of her friends death and then Levi being shot and Jack bringing her outside so she could roller blade.. Tears filled her eyes as she sat on the bench and Jack placed both skates onto her feet after removing her shoes. While she laced them, he put his on.

"I didn't know you skated." She said with a smile.

"I played hockey." He said with a wink as he tightened his skates. Sue shivered as the cold air finally touched her skin. "You ready?" He asked as he stood, holding out a hand to her. She accepted with a nod. They slowly made their way to the rink and walked on. Jack immediately held her straight then let go of her waist. Slowly, she began to push forward. All the memories flowed back. All the techniques she had known came back and she began to skate freely and fast.

Jack watched her and his heart swelled with pride. She skated in an almost perfectly straight line, then turned, and did a fancy spin. Jack watched with a smile. Then she turned and motioned for him to join her. He did so. After gaining much needed speed, he slowed when he reached her.

"Thankyou Jack. This means the world to me."

He nodded. "Well I hoped you wouldn't be too mad."

Instead of answering, she cupped his face and moved closer. Her lips met his as he tightened his hold around her waist. He was certain he would fall at any second but instead, she slowly began to skate backwards, bringing him with her as they seperated. They reached the wall and he immediately dove it, captivating her lips with his own. It was a tender yet passionate kiss. One that showed the true love that they had for eachother. Jack was certain that he would go insane when she opened her mouth a little giving him just enough of a teasing sensation to make him back away. She was surprised when he did so. She hoped he hadn't brought him to far. She hadn't. To her shock and disbelief, he slowly knelt down on one knee.

"Susan Marie Thomas. I love you more then anyone in this entire world." He pulled out a blue velvet box from his pocket and slowly opened it, holding it up to her. "Will you marry me?" He had never seen her look so shocked - he just hoped it wasn't too shocked. When she gently took his hands in hers and pulled him up, he knew her answer.

"Yes, Jack. I will marry you." He smiled brightly as he wrapped his arms around her back, pulling her as close to him as possible. Their lips met again in a new found wave of passion. Her mouth once again opened, inviting him in to a place unknown. He gingerly tested the waters by placing his tongue on his bottom lip. He felt a shiver run through her body and this brought utter satisfaction to him. She responded when she suddenly closed her mouth. He was surprised but not as stunned as when she opened her mouth slightly, lightly touching his tongue with hers. The teasing finally stopped when she backed away, utterly breathless.

"I love you." She said tightly. He chuckled as he saw how flushed she looked. He gently raised a hand and pushed away a wayward hair.

"I love you too."
suesfan
Beautiful surprise and beautiful proposal!!!

Joy
theatrenut86
yay.gif That was great bounching.gif crying.gif cloud9.gif
Cindy01
cloud9.gif That was beautiful.

QUOTE
"Susan Marie Thomas. I love you more then anyone in this entire world." He pulled out a blue velvet box from his pocket and slowly opened it, holding it up to her. "Will you marry me?" He had never seen her look so shocked - he just hoped it wasn't too shocked. When she gently took his hands in hers and pulled him up, he knew her answer.


What a perfect place and perfect way to propose!!!!

I loved it! cloud9.gif perfect10.gif 2.gif yay.gif wub.gif
LittleEm
melting.gif Perfect!

Em
learningtosign
a simple but beautiful proposal

cath
Levi_rocks
wub2.gif cloud9.gif Love the proposal-short and sweet, and the skating surprise!!!
ozzie
melting.gif melting.gif melting.gif melting.gif I have no words
audiokim
Way to go, Jack! Wonderful post.

Kim
lindylou
perfect10.gif that was really A beautiful proposal with all
melting.gif kissing.gif cant wait for more tracy cloud9.gif outstanding.gif lin
tracyfbeye
I'm thrilled that you all like it! thank you.gif



Lucy arrived back home in hopes of seeing Sue but when she didn't her hopes soared that she and Jack were together. She gave a gleeful sigh as she walked to the fridge and pulled out a piece of wedding cake. Levi stood under her feet, looking up to her and groaning every once in a while.

"Oh you want some, huh?" She said with a smile then threw a small piece which he caught in mid-air. Slowly, she walked to the couch as she took several bites but suddenly stopped. "Hmm If it worked for Sue.. Maybe it'll work for me!" She quickly bounded up and ran to her bedroom where she placed the cake on her nightstand. Levi who had followed her sat at the door. She shook her head. "Oh no you don't. You stay right here while I brush me teeth." She walked away with a silly smile in hopes of seeing her future husband. When she returned Levi was still sitting in the same position. "Good boy, Levi." She said before walking in and seeing the plate 75% empty.

It was her turn to groan. "Oh Levi. Oh well." She quickly tossed the remaining piece under her pillow and sat at the edge. "I think I should do laundry tomorrow." She commented with a smile then looked to Levi who sat, licking his lips at the doorway. "Fine, come here buddy." She said, clapping her legs. The dog immediatly walked in and pounced onto the bed making himself comfortable immediately. "Well I can see that one of us is going to sleep well," She said as he yawned. Slowly, she laid back and closed her eyes. "Goodnight, Levi."

--

His warm hands dug into her hair as their lips brought more passion then she could ever remember. With her eyes closed, she moved closer to the man who was captiviting her mind. His arms twisted to her back and roamed freely over the shirt covered flesh.

"Oh Lucy," He quietly moaned, desire and passion dripping from his tone. Her mind stopped all together when he gingerly touched the raw skin on her neck. The heated embrace slowly came to an end and she finally opened her eyes.

"Randy?!"
savgraceleland
RANDY?!?!?!?!? Please tell me I read that wrong.....


~laura michelle~
audiokim
crylaugh.gif Poor Lucy!

Kim
Levi_rocks
Did I read that right? Randy?! GAH!!! Poor Lucy!
lindylou
adulation smilie.gif Flowers.gif Flowers.gif OH NO not randy poor poor
lucy more soon please Flowers.gif Flowers.gif Lin
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