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suesfan
I was thinking that David might be her father, but I was hoping he wouldn't be that low!!!

Joy
Cindy01
Wow, David is her father! whistling.gif
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"Why do I have a feeling that one of you is a candy short?" Tara asks giving a big smile.

Observant Tara! Flowers.gif
lindylou
Flowers.gif Flowers.gif Laura hope your feeling A bit better today
loved the post never did like david so can well believe sam is
his daughter and wouldnt want anything to do with her or her mum
more soon please laura prettyplease.gif chocolate.gif chocolate.gif Lin
Levi_rocks
Well I'm glad that we all have the info straight about Sam. But David, sheesh! Leaving his own flesh and blood.... shakes head.gif
savgraceleland
Here's another one for you reading enjoyment....


"You're late." Myles states simply as Jack and Sue enter the bullpen. The Agent from Boston looking up from the report. His desk is a mess and he can't find the things he needs.

"We had to drop Sam's registration papers off at MIT." Sue says simply letting Levi off his leash.

Lucy gives her a confused look. "Who's Sam?"

"Sam is David's daughter, to make a long story short." Jack answered when he saw that Sue wasn't going to.

"She was shot last night and her papers are due today or tomorrow." Sue continues. "Jack and I went and visited with her last night."

"So that's why you came home after I was in bed." Lucy says making the connection.

"Sure." Sue agrees to, not wanting her best friend to know about her and Jack.

"Does this have any thing to do with the case I gave Bobby and Tara?" D questions making his way over to the group. "The victim's name is Samantha Palmer. Single gunshot in the back. Witnesses say it was a young man. No one could see his face. His jacket had Hawks on it." He updates the team.

"Hawks? As in the Hawks gang from Chicago?" Myles asks in surprise. "The drug gang?"

Sue looks around at her group of friends, hoping that they would understand. "Yes. Sam got involved with them after her mom died from cancer. She told the leader that she would be leaving for school and he didn't like that, so she figures that he's come after her."

Lucy looks over to her room mate. "Sue I'm sorry."

Sue just shakes her head sadly. Jack notices the exchange between the two women and makes a note to talk to Sue about it.

Bobby and Tara enter arguing. "Bobby, that girl needs a place to stay." Tara's voice carrying across the room.

"Yes I know, that's why we're looking for a place for her." Bobby states trying to keep his temper.

"She can't afford any of those Bobby. She's a college student remember." Tara points out.

"But it's the only place near the school. She'll have to think of something." Bobby looks down sadly.

"Sounds like you're not having any luck with finding Sam a place to live." Jack points out. "The dean gave away her dorm room too."

Lucy looks back and forth between her room mate and team leader. 'Something's going on with them. Maybe they just need an extra push.' "Jack don't you have an extra guest room that isn't full of junk?" She asks forming a plan.

The look on the agent's face is priceless. "Yeah, why what are you thinking?"

"I think Luc is thinking that said college student could board with you." Myles points out. He looks at Lucy. "And while it would fix the housing problem, she is a teen age girl. It may not seem appropriate."

D shakes his head in amazement. "I see where you're going with this." He looks to the rotor. "You keep working on them, and I'll go talk with the A.D." He leaves the pen in a rush.

Sue watches in confusion. "Where is he going?" She looks to Jack. "I think Lucy's idea is good. You do have that extra room. You live not to far from the school, and your apartment could use a woman's touch." She finishes teasing.

"Hey! There is nothing wrong with my place, thank you Miss Thomas." Jack's phone ringing puts a stop to the conversation. "Hudson…Yes…Right…Would it matter if Sue or I signed the papers? No…That's fine…We'll be there…Thanks."

Bobby walks over to a shocked Jack. "Spark what's wrong? You look like you just got told the biggest secret."

'We need to talk.' Jack signs to Sue, not paying attention to who's around. "That was the hospital. Sam's being released this afternoon. The nurse said that she had had another guest after we left, one that she was not happy to see." Jack explains. "The hospital is putting her in our care." He looks only to Sue.

D returns with a huge smile plastered on his face. "It's been all worked out." He looks in confusion at the team. "Okay what did I miss?"

Myles waits a few seconds to see if Jack or Sue will answer. "From what I understand, Sam Palmer has been put into the care of Jack and Sue."

"Only, that's not it, is it Jack?" Sue questions. "That's why we need to talk." She looks nervous.

"No it's not." He looks sheepish. "Apparently the Nurse from last night thinks that we are married. Jack and Sue Hudson have been given full custody of Samantha Palmer." He explains in a rush.

"But wouldn't that mean…" Sue starts only to be stopped by Jack.

"Why don't we go and get something to drink? I'll fill you in on what I just learned." He holds out his hand for her to take.

She doesn't even hesitate. "Okay. I need to tell you something too." She says shyly.

The two leave hand in hand, much to the surprise and pleasure of the team.

"It's a good thing that this has already been approved." D smiles shaking his head

Lucy starts bouncing on her heels. "Okay now that we have something to smile about, how are our hearts situation going. I still have two, though if Jack and Sue keep going, I may lose one."

"Jack and Sue are both down to one each." Tara explains. "Though I'm not sure which one they used. Bobby is also down to one."

"I am?" The Aussie questions.

"Yup. You called Sam a 'Wiz Kid.' I believe that is what one of your hearts says." Tara explains blushing slightly.

"Oh, that one. Well I wasn't going to count it. I was planning one using it on you." He whispers only to Tara. "You're my 'Wiz Kid.' He finishes.

Bobby goes to his desk not noticing the stares of the others. He looks up and laughs. "What are you guys looking at? We need to get working or Sam will get all the credit for getting Jack and Sue together."

The team gets to work on finding more about The Hawks and Sam. Each one hoping that Jack and Sue will move forward and not backward….




~laura michelle~
theatrenut86
rofl2.gif Jack and Sue arent married though...what is going to happen next hmmm.gif
Cindy01
Oh, what an interesting turn of events! LolLolLolLol.gif

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"I think Luc is thinking that said college student could board with you." Myles points out. He looks at Lucy. "And while it would fix the housing problem, she is a teen age girl. It may not seem appropriate."


Hmm, somehow I don't think that's what she was thinking. Still a bit confused, but I love the team scheming together.

QUOTE
"No it's not." He looks sheepish. "Apparently the Nurse from last night thinks that we are married. Jack and Sue Hudson have been given full custody of Samantha Palmer." He explains in a rush.


Well, if they are thought to be Mr. and Mrs. Hudson, who's to argue with that? laugh.gif

suesfan
I'm pretty sure I know what Lucy and D were thinking, but I'm going to wait to see if I'm right!!!

Joy
learningtosign
QUOTE(suesfan @ Jan 12 2007, 09:59 PM) *

I was thinking that David might be her father, but I was hoping he wouldn't be that low!!!

Joy


i'd wondered too but hoped not

cath
lindylou
adulation smilie.gif that was terrific now they are MR and MRS HUDSON
thats wonderful even if they are not sam could be making sure sue has
nothing to do with sue . why would they both have to talk but
more soon please laura adulation smilie.gif Flowers.gif Lin
learningtosign
wonder if this means they are going to rush out and get married?

cath
LittleEm
yay.gif So good!

Em
Levi_rocks
LOL! D caught Lucy's plan! Love it!
catgirl
just started this story- love it!!! Intrigued to see what happens...
Linny27
I just caught this and I'm enjoying it. I can't believe David had a daughter that he never told Sue about. I knew I never liked him and for good reason. I hope the team can protect Sam and maybe even reconnect father and daughter.
savgraceleland
Hey guys....sorry it's been awhile...my health isn't good right now but I will be posting the next part sometime today....thanks for all your wonderful comments....


~laura michelle~
Linny27
Sorry you're not feeling well. Flowers.gif Hope you feel better.
savgraceleland
QUOTE(Linny27 @ Jan 19 2007, 01:23 PM) *
Sorry you're not feeling well. Flowers.gif Hope you feel better.


Thanks Linny...I've started on blood pressure pill...and they seem to be working.
Here's the next part....hope you like

Jack can feel Sue’s shaking hand as he leads her into the conference room. He gently sits her down on the couch and takes his place by her side.

‘Sue, what’s wrong?’ He signs, his face showing his concern.

“Jack, it’s nothing.” She says hiding her face.

He cups he chin and tilts her head up. “I know that’s not true. You can tell me everything. I know you’re hurting, and that makes me hurt.” He leans in for a gentle kiss.

Sue gives him a shy smile. 'You know that I love you right?' Seeing Jack’s nod she continues. 'Okay then you have to promise that you’ll just listen. I might not get through this if you interrupt me.' Again Jack nods.

Figuring that it would be best that Jack understands quickly she switches to speaking. “The night after our undercover kiss, David called to say that he was in town. He invited me out for coffee, and I didn’t see a reason to say no. The coffee started out fine, then he asked me to marry him.” She pauses to watch Jack’s reaction.

Jack’s face goes pale and his hand grabs hers and holds it tightly. “What happened?” He simply asks.

“I kindly said no. I couldn’t picture my future with him. He got understandably upset. He said that he wanted me to be his wife, that I was what he wanted. He wanted me to be his first.” She says softly, tears slowing moving down her face.

“He wanted to sleep with you?” Jack asks to be sure.

Sue just nods her head. “He even offered to wait for answer until morning. Said that he loved me enough that he would wait until morning. That making love would bring me around.” She throws herself into Jack’s arms. “He wanted me to be his first lover, but he has a child…” She cries angrily

Jack’s hands move up and down her back. Soothing her with kind words that he knows she can’t hear. Pulling back from her enough for her to read his lips, he whispers. “I don’t know why he did what he did, but I’m here now. You’re not alone. I love you.” He pulls her back into his embrace.

A few minutes pass and Sue’s sobs slow. “Thank you Jack. It just hurts.”

“I know sweetheart. I know.” He kisses her forehead lovingly. “Now if you couldn’t picture your future with him, what does your future look like?” He asks teasingly, giving her the Hudson wink.

“It looks very nice.” She says smiling. “It has you though out it.” She blushes

“That’s good.” Jack returns. “Cause my future is built around you.” He takes his one hand and rubs the back of his neck. “I know we haven’t been dating long, and this might be too soon. But I need you to know where I stand with you. I love you very much, and I want to spend the rest of my life with you. I picture you and me with many blonde haired children. All of them spunky like their mother and all of them have her heart. I’m not officially asking right now, but it will be coming. Would you consider becoming my wife, making me the happiest man alive?”

“I would be very happy to consider you my husband, but there’s just one thing you need to change.” She pauses for affect. “Some of our children have to have their father’s dark hair and eyes, but let’s just hope they won’t take his turtle gene.” She laughs.

“I can live with that.” He smiles. “Now that we have that sorted, what are we going to do with Sam?”

Sue bits her lip nervous about what she’s about to suggest….


Linny27
Why do I have the feeling that Sue's going to suggest that they live together to keep up the ruse that they are married? If my assumption is right, tatice_05.gif YAY! I sense things will be heating up between them if that was to occur.
suesfan
Well, I never really felt David was for Sue, but now I think I'm beginning to dislike him!!!

I'm sorry you haven't been feeling well!! Hope everything improves soon!!!

Joy
theatrenut86
hmmm.gif I applause.gif you on your fuzzies, they are coming along quite nicely! No worries Laura! I hope you get to feeling better. Love ya SiC!
Cindy01
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Linny27 Posted Today, 12:38 PM
Why do I have the feeling that Sue's going to suggest that they live together to keep up the ruse that they are married? If my assumption is right, YAY! I sense things will be heating up between them if that was to occur.


ditto.gif Can't wait to see where you take this! clapping.gif
LittleEm
David shakes head.gif ... Creep!

Em
Levi_rocks
shakes head.gif Bad move there David! Not telling Sue about your child....shakes head.gif
Kav
Oh my goodness -- I just caught up and I have to say I am shocked that David is Sam's father...but of course now that I know, it makes sense and you did give us a few hints. I'm just dense this week I guess. blink.gif Poor Sue -- first she finds out Tony is married than she finds out what a scumbug her other major love interest is ...Thankfully Jack is there to take her mind off all that!

kav
lindylou
QUOTE(Kav @ Jan 20 2007, 04:54 PM) *

Oh my goodness -- I just caught up and I have to say I am shocked that David is Sam's father...but of course now that I know, it makes sense and you did give us a few hints. I'm just dense this week I guess. blink.gif Poor Sue -- first she finds out Tony is married than she finds out what a scumbug her other major love interest is ...Thankfully Jack is there to take her mind off all that!

kav



ditto.gif I agree Kav both nasty Didnt trust or like either shakes head.gif Lin
savgraceleland
Thanks so much for all of your comments...they mean alot....

Here's the next installment....enjoy....

Walking back into the bullpen about an hour later Sue looks at her friends. "Myles, you're friends with Judge Roberts right?"

The Agent nods his head. "Yes I am. You need a favour?"

"Yeah, could you talk him into granting Sue and I temperary full custody of Sam?" Jack says shocking the group. Seeing his team mates faces he continues. "I figure if Marc is the leader of the Hawks and if he's after her, she'll be safer with Sue and I than he would be in a dorm room."

D nods his head in agreement. "That sounds like a good plan to me. What are you going to do about her father?" The last part is spit out in disgust.

Sue looks down sadly at the floor. "From what I caught this morning, David gave up all custody rights. She's in foster care."

Lucy walks over and places a comforting hand on her friend's shoulder. "What are you guys planning on doing?"

Jack rubs the back of his neck nervously. "I have two guest rooms. Sam will take one Sue will take the other."

Bobby smirks. "Right. And what about the married thing?"

Sue blushes under the stare of Tara. "We're working on that." Is her simple statement. "We'll be able to provide her with a place to stay, and the support she needs."

Myles looks at the pair a teasing light in his eyes. "Why do I get the feeling that you're not sharing everything?"

"Has there been talk of a real marriage?" Bobby adds his teasing question.

Jack looks to Sue for the permission of letting their friends in on their relationship. "Sue and I are courting." He simply states waiting for the explosion.

A loud chorus of cheers comes from the group. The girls jumping up and down and the guys giving Jack congratulatory pats on the back.

"So what candy hearts have you two lost?" Lucy teases.

"That is none of your business." Sue glares mockingly at her room mate.

The phone rings before any further prodding can be done. "Hudson." Jack answers. "Hey there…you okay…no…you'll be staying with Sue and I…you won't be…I promise…are you sure…yeah…we'll be there in 5…yeah…bye."

"That was Sam." Sue states grabbing her jacket.

"Yeah. Marc called her on her cell and threatened her." He shakes his head. "Sam also mentioned that Marc talked about David by name."

Sue stops in shock. "No matter his past, I can't see him being part of this Jack."

"But Sue. He's lied to you before." Lucy points out. "Just be careful." She gives her friend a hug.

"Bobby, would you mind stopping by my place with those storage bins I lent you?" Jack shrugs on his jacket. "I have some cleaning to do if Sue is going to have her own room."

"No problem mate." Bobby nods his head. "And I'll get a couple of more keys cut."

"Thanks. Tara, see what you can find out about Palmer's past and see if there is any connection with the Hawks. Lucy, you're up with the times. Go shopping for things Sam may need. Note books, cloths, things that she would have in her bed room." He hands the rotor his credit card. "Just don't max it out please."

"Sure Jack. Let me work my magic and I'll have everything a 16 year old could ask for." She smiles and signs. 'You're going to be a great dad.'

'Thanks' He signs back blushing. 'Let's go, Sam's waiting for us.' He continues looking at Sue.

The new couple walks out of the bullpen, their team watching proudly.

"I don't think we'll have to wait long before they'll be walking down the aisle." Myles says a true smile appearing on his face.

"Nope. Myles, I want you to get the Judge's opinion on permanent custody being granted to Jack and Sue." D orders. "They are going to make one nice family." The acting supervisor mumbles to himself planning a way to make everything work out…..


theatrenut86
hmmm.gif This is getting better all the time Laura!
Levi_rocks
Permanent instead of temporary custody....I like that! Great idea D!
Cindy01
QUOTE
Bobby smirks. "Right. And what about the married thing?"

Sue blushes under the stare of Tara. "We're working on that." Is her simple statement.


Awwww, the whole scene was so cute. cloud9.gif They're 'working on it'. laugh.gif
Kav
Everything is falling into place nicely...but David has me worried.

kav
savgraceleland
This is the last one for today....I'm hoping to get another one up tomorrow....
I've messed up peoples ages just a bit....to fit my idea....Davie, D's son, is a year older than Sam...so keep that in mind for future posts....

WELCOME HOME is the first thing that Sam sees entering Jack's home. The whole team is there and while the living room is in a bit of a mess, Sam feels very safe and sound.

"Hey Shelia!" Bobby yells waving his hand. "Be careful where you step, you can never be to sure of what Sparky might have laying around."

"Sure Agent Manning." The teen smiles. "Is Agent Williams here to?" She asks looking at all the people.

"Yeah Tara's here somewhere." D says walking up to the student. "I'm D." He holds out his hand.

"Nice to meet you. I'm Sam." She shakes the offered hand. "What are you guys up to?" She set her worn back pack on the couch.

"We're getting Jack's place family friendly." Myles says puffing out his chest. "Myles Leland the Third."

"Samantha Palmer, the Only." Her witty come back shocking the Agent. "Where do you all want me to dump my junk?"

"Davie is just finishing moving your bed then you can get yourself settled in your room." Tara says joining the group, quickly followed by Lucy.

"I hope you're not scared of heights." The rotor says with a big smile on her face. "Your bed is off the ground." She explains.

"Okay." Sam laughs. "And you are?"

"Oh…right. Lucy. I used to room with Sue." She pulls the un-expecting girl into a hug. "You've got a whole new family, your safe now." She says reading the student's mind.

"Dad, do we have any of the wood putty in the truck?" A young man looking very much like D asks entering the room.

"This is my son Davie." He introduces the tall teen. "No I don't think so. Sorry. Why do you need it for?"

"Just to hide the screw holes in the bed. It's not a big deal." Davie replies not taking his eyes off of Sam.

The two teen's eyes meet and Sam blushes under Davie's stare. "Welcome to the clan. It's nice to have some one my age around here who isn't my sister." He grins.

"Davie I have extra wood putty in the closet closest to the garage." Jack says smiling at his new charge. "Then why don't you show, Sue, Sam and I what you guys have been doing this afternoon."

Tara starts bouncing on her feet. "Come on Sam, you need to see this." The computer tech grabs a hold of the red haired teen and drags her to the room across the hall from the bathroom.

Sam's eyes open in shock. "This is amazing." She looks around the blue room. There's a tall bed long the wall next to the window. A study space built in underneath, with a desk and book shelves. A tall and long dresser stands next to the door, a place to hang cloths and a shelf separate to hold a TV and video combo.

She enters the room and spins around. An arm wraps around her shoulders. She looks up into the kind eyes of D. 'Thank you' She signs her eyes tearing up. She buries her head into the strong body, her body shaking with sobs.

D wraps his arms around the shaking girl, whispering comforting words. "Shh…it's okay. We're here. You're welcome here."

Sam lifts her head and smiles through the tears. "I know. That's what's making me cry. I've never felt at home any where before. But I know that this is home, at least for now. I feel wanted here, it's a new feeling." She admits looking at both Sue and Jack. "You're going to think this is strange, but I've never felt this safe before."

Bobby pulls Sam out from D's arms. "You see Shelia; you've got a family now. We're going to protect you. You couldn't have asked for any better guardians than our Jack and Sue." He smiles at the girl's giggles. "You just better keep up with your studies or Uncle Bobby is going to get after you." The Aussie teases.

Sam nods her head quickly. "Yes sir." She looks around again. "Well now that I've got a place to stay, with people that I can call my own. I need to get registered for classes."

"Already done." Jack says handing her the list of times for her classes that the dean had given him. "You start on Monday. And I'm sure that Davie won't mind showing you around."

The door bell rings before Sam has the chance to question Jack's statement. Davie leaves the room to answer it. He quickly returns with a confused look on his face. "Who ordered the pizza?" She asks showing the box.

All the agents shook their heads in the negative. "Davie give the box to me." D ordered, feeling very nervous. He slowly opened the box. There lying on top of the cheese pizza is a note. Handing the box to Jack the supervisor takes the note and opens it. " 'You can't hide. I'll find you. You belong to me.' It's not signed." D points out.

"I'll call S.O.G to start surveillance." Myles states leaving the room.

"Jack." Sam says sounding very frightened. "It's from Marc. I know his hand writing. He's after me and he won't give up." The look of terror on her face causing Jack to pull her into his safe embrace.

"I'll protect you. I promise he won't get you." The new father says comforting his charge. 'Please God don't make a liar out of me. Keep her safe.' He prays as Sue wraps her arms around her partner and the teen….


Cindy01
That was a beautiful welcome they gave her.

Scary that Marc knows where she is, but I'm sure Jack will keep his word and keep her safe with the team's help.

Flowers.gif
Kav
See -- I knew I should be worried. I love how the team is rallying around Sam but this gang has me really, really nervous.

kav
audiokim
That was wonderful...scary but wonderful. This whole story is! Wonderful, that is.

Kim
lindylou
perfect10.gif that was quite scarry but wonderful love it with
with jack and sue in mum and dad mode more soon laura
hope your feelin better now perfect10.gif Lin
theatrenut86
Laura....Marc is really creepy eek.gif but I liked the Samantha Palmer the only...keep it up hun. wink.gif biggrin.gif yay.gif
learningtosign
just caught up

can't believe he's found her already

cath
Linny27
Oh, I hope Marc doesn't try to take Sam away from them and I really think David might be involved. He has lied about his past before and everything that he told Sue about growing up could have been a lie. He could very well still be a member of the gang.
Levi_rocks
Marc caught up already?! ACK!!!
afanfromSicily
Beautiful post! applause.gif Loved the welcome party! So, Sam now has a very BIG family and even a boyfriend... well, future boyfriend. I'm happy for her! happydance.gif

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The look of terror on her face causing Jack to pull her into his safe embrace.

"I'll protect you. I promise he won't get you." The new father says comforting his charge. 'Please God don't make a liar out of me. Keep her safe.' He prays as Sue wraps her arms around her partner and the teen….

I especially liked this part. It's so sweet! cloud9.gif

Ornella
LittleEm
Great post! clapping.gif

I hope they can keep everyone safe! unsure.gif

Em
suesfan
I like the idea of Jack and Sue being guardians to Sam!! She can't ask for better parents!!!

So, Marc has found her already!! Of course, he doesn't have a clue what he's up against!!!

Joy
Anne
This is an amazing story. There is so much love, in so many different ways. perfect10.gif The angst knowing Marc is still after Sam, especially when she is away from the team. wacko.gif I worry about her going to school. shakes head.gif Looking forward to more. thumbup.gif
savgraceleland
Hey...sorry it's been so long....but life sucks.....GGGGRRRR....but here is one I hope you can enjoy....

Myles re-enters the room clears his throat to gain the attention of the others. "Just talked to Mike. His team will be here in about 20 minutes."

Jack just nods his head and turns his full attention to Sam. "You okay kiddo?"

"Yeah I'm fine." She replies wiping a tear from her cheek. "Do you think it's safe for me to be starting school next Monday?"

D answers for the new parents. "I don't see why not. We'll have a team of Agents watching you and Davie will be attending MIT as well. It's his second semester."

Davie walks over and places a hand on Sue and Sam's shoulders. "You'll be okay. I won't leave your side."

The teen nods her head. "Thanks." She takes a deep breath. "Now about this room. It's perfect except it's missing one thing."

Lucy looks around trying to figure out what Sam is referring to. "I though I got everything."

"I need a computer." Sam states simply. " A top of the line one. Anyone up for a shopping spree?" The girl laughs seeing the men's faces. "Okay I guess it means that it's just us girls…"

"NO!" Jack interrupts. "You are not going out without an Agent."

"Tara can come with us." Sue points out.

Myles raises his hand to get Sue's attention before speaking. "I'll go. I don't know much about computers but I can offer protection."

Sue looks to Jack for his opinion. "I think that it's a good idea. If Marc is around he won't likely get near us with a guy around." She looks teasingly at Myles. "And besides, it will give Myles a chance to get rid one of his hearts."

Tara jumps up and down excitedly. "That's right. 'Teach Me', it's perfect."

"I'm confused; 'Hearts'? 'Teach Me? What's going on?" Davie asks looking at the spunky computer tech for the answer.

"Yeah. You see, as a team building exercise we all had to choose two candy hearts. When they are used in normal life the person gets to eat them, and they can only be used in the team." The only female agent answers.

Davie just looks more confused. "I still don't get it." The teen admits.

"Davie think of it this way." D says moving to put his arm around his son's shoulders. "You know those candy hearts that your sister goes nuts over?" Davie nods his head. "Well we all chose two of those. One on Myles' said 'Teach Me'; Sam is going to teach him a bit about computers, so he will be able to eat his 'Teach Me' heart."

"Oh. That kinda makes sense." Davie shrugs his shoulders making Sam laugh.

"Just nod your head Davie, smile and head to the nearest exit." The girl smiles.

The team break out in laughter, showing the newest member what it's like to be truly part of a family. Bobby is the first to gain control.

"Okay Mates, who else gets to get rid of their candy hearts?" The Aussie asks getting ready to tease his team mates.

"Both Jack and I have already eaten one each." Sue confesses. She blushes "But I'd rather not say which ones."

"Come on Sue. Think of it as satisfying our imaginations." Lucy says looking very excited.

Jack answers instead looking very nervous. "Well correct me if I'm wrong Sue, but I believe that 'Kiss Me and 'Dream' are both off the list." He admits causing all the females but Sue to squeal in high pitched voices.

"Lucy's lost her 'Magic' heart." Myles points out. The object of his affections looks to him in shock. "Well you must have, creating this room our the lovely young lady."

The rotor nods her head in thanks, blushing slightly under the Boston bred's unwavering looks.

"Right and D gets to eat his 'Hug' heart." Bobby says patting his supervisor's back.

"And don't forget Bobby you lost your 'Wiz Kid' one." Tara points out blushing.

Sam laughs at the antics of her new family and looks to Davie. "Are they always crazy like this?"

He laughs back. "Yeah, but I wouldn't change it for the world. It makes life interesting."

Davie leads Sam away from the team and looks nervously down at his feet. "I know we just met, and I don't want to push you or make you uncomfortable. But if I'm going to be your shadow at school, when you're not in class, it might be good to get to know each other." He pauses taking a deep breath. "If you're not doing anything on Saturday, would you like to go to dinner or a movie or something?"

"I'd love to." The young lady answers without hesitating. "I'd like to get to know you better too." She slowly leans in and gives her new friend a kiss on the cheek, much to the embarrassment to the object of the kiss.

"Come on kido." Myles interrupts the moment. "We should go and get your shopping done."

"Myles you really need to work on your timing." Jack teases causing Davie and Sam to take a step away from the other. "Now Sam, I want you to stay close to Myles and Lucy. No going off on your own."

The student looks confused. "But aren't you and Sue coming with us?"

"No, Sue and I need to get things here done before you get back. So promise me, you won't wonder off."

Sam nods her head. "I promise Jack."

The red haired student, the blonde haired Agent and the rotor head out the front door, as Jack and Sue watch.

Sue gently takes hold of Jack's hand comforting him. "She'll be fine Jack, Myles will watch her."

Jack just nods his head, trying to push down the sense of foreboding threatening to claim his mind…..


Linny27
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Jack just nods his head, trying to push down the sense of foreboding threatening to claim his mind…..


Why is he not the only one?
lindylou
cloud9.gif Laura pleased your back writting and hope alls well
now back to the post it was fantastic and I cant wait for the next
post so please hun more soon please prettyplease.gif mademyday.gif
Lin
Cindy01
QUOTE(Linny27 @ Feb 6 2007, 10:10 AM) *

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Jack just nods his head, trying to push down the sense of foreboding threatening to claim his mind…..


Why is he not the only one?



ditto.gif Wonderful post....just a little concerned about the ending. hmmm.gif

More soon prettyplease.gif
earseneault
I hope you feel better!!

Please UPDATE soon please (puppy eyes)
suesfan
It's never a good sign when Jack has a sense of foreboding!!!

Joy
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