An image of Howie in whole Cupid's gear just popped in my mind.

I agree there has to be more in such A romantic setting Lin

Haha Cindy, might we be getting a new post today? Anytime? Soon? Very Soon?

Chocolate? Kiss? Hug? Flowers?

anything?

I think it's so sweet that Jack asked Howie to help him with his date with Sue!!!

Joy

Thank you everyone for your comments!

Welcome Oreolover and thanks for your lovely response.

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theatrenut86 Posted Yesterday, 11:58 PM
Cindy there is more to this scene right ?!

Haha, yes, there is one more part to that scene, which will be the next post (not this one) and it'll be the last scene of the story.

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Haha Cindy, might we be getting a new post today? Anytime? Soon? Very Soon?

Chocolate? Kiss? Hug? Flowers?

anything?

Wow Tracy, you sure know how to bribe someone.

On to Bobby and Tara's date.................

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Bobby opened the door to his apartment, flipping on the light switch and allowing Tara to enter first. He smiled inwardly when he heard her light gasp. He had filled his apartment with bouquets of daisies, knowing they were Tara's favourite.

Turning to look at him with misty eyes she whispered, "Wow." Bobby gave a soft laugh at her reaction. "You did this for me?" She fingered one of the flowers in amazement.

"Well, yeah. You always brighten everyone else's days, so I just wanted to do something for you."

She almost took his breath away with the force of her hug as she lunged at him. "Thank you!"

"You're very welcome, luv," he said enjoying the closeness.

Finding herself embarrassed at her outburst of affection, Tara pulled away, her cheeks reddening.

"Why don't you pick a CD to listen to while I check on dinner?" Bobby suggested and headed into the small kitchen.

He smiled as he peered back into the next room, watching Tara browse through his CD collection. She was completely focused on the task at hand, treating it as if it was the most important decision in the world. That was Tara; living every moment to the fullest. It was one of the things he loved most about her.

Still smilling, Bobby turned his attention to the evening meal. He had spent all afternoon trying his hand at cooking a gourmet meal and was quite pleased with the results.

Putting on the finishing touches, he brought out two plates of chicken cordon bleu, to be served with Caesar salad and fresh rolls. Not feeling brave enough to venture into the experience of making dessert, he had decided on bakery-bought cherry cheesecake. He set the plates on the table that had been adorned with two tapered candles in glass holders.

"Bobby, this looks wonderful. I can't believe you did all this," Tara said, lighting the candles while he poured them two glasses of chilled red wine. The soft tones of a mixed CD of love songs that Tara had chosen filled the air.

They enjoyed the meal in relative quiet as both became lost in their thoughts. Tara was seeing a serious side to Bobby that was new to her. She had, of course, seen him act seriously on the job, but this was an intensity that had nothing to do with catching the bad guys. She felt honoured that he had chosen to spend the evening with her.

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Finished with dessert, Bobby reached across the table to take Tara's hand. "Dance with me?"

Unable to speak, she simply nodded her head and allowed him to help her up. They stood in each other's arms, swaying to the melodic tune of Lonestar's Amazed. The living room, to Tara, had been transformed into a wonderful dreamland. She closed her eyes happily, trusting Bobby to lead her.

He smiled at the sight of Tara in his arms. It felt more right than anything he had ever felt before and he longed to feel her lips on his.

Tara opened her eyes to see Bobby looking at her with an intensity that caused her to blush. In his arms she felt at home. It was perfect. Too perfect? Tara wondered, feeling a surge of panic.

Seeing Bobby dip his head bringing them closer together, she looked at him through a child's eyes, torn between emotions.

Bobby noticed the change of expression. "What wrong, luv?" he asked.

Tara's fears came tumbling out as she began to ramble. "Bobby, what if we date and end up hating each other? What if you kiss me and realize you still love Darcy again? Maybe we should go slow?" It was a whispered question.

Bobby could see in her eyes that she desperately wanted to dive into the future ahead of them, but fear of losing their friendship held her back. "Couldn't agree with you more, luv," he said in a soft easy voice as his head descended towards hers. "We'll take it ... Nice. And. Slow." He finished the last word on Tara's lips, enveloping them in a tender kiss that was full of promise.

Just the beginning, each thought as they lost themselves in the moment.

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girl... you give me shivers....

good shivers....

serious... would be melting shivers....

So sweet....

Lonestar's Amazed is the perfect song for both Bobby and Tara, as well as Jack and Sue!

I'm perfectly speechless.. THEY KISSED!!

Okay.. I guess I'm not so speechless

Thankyou for a wonderful post Cindy!

Good thinking Bobby....


~laura michelle~

Now, there's a melt worthy moment!

cute post

cath

that was very sweet more soon Lin

Definately!

Loved it, Cindy!

ok... i just melted...

Ok, this is last post, so I just wanted to thank you all so much for the wonderful comments and for taking the time to read my story. This was the first full-length fanfic I wrote, so I was a bit nervous about posting it and you've all just been wonderful!

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The park lamps provided just enough light for Sue to read lips, while the two small oil lamps in front of them, which Sue had first mistaken for candles, provided a romantic atmosphere. Catching her looking at them, Jack explained, "Oil lamps. We would have used candles, but these are less likely to be blown out by a breeze."

Sue nodded in understanding. He had made sure everything was perfect.

They spoke of everyday things like family and friends as they ate their prepared meal, laughing at the dogs' antics as they explored the surrounding park. The night air was unseasonably warm for February. The grass held a deep shade of green and flowers seemed to be debating whether or not to make an appearance soon. A slight breeze blew, sweeping Sue's hair around her face playfully. She lifted a hand to calm it.

She's never been more beautiful, Jack thought as he adjusted the blanket on her lap. He sent up a silent prayer that this magical night would never end.

As they finished their picnic, sipping from glasses of Howie's merlot, Jack pulled out a small rectangular box. "I've got something for you," he said tentatively. "I hope you like it."

Sue's eyes widened with delight and curiosity. Gently taking it in her hands she began to slowly peel the wrapping.

"Just tear it .... please," an impatient Jack said with a nervous laugh.

She did as he asked although she hated to ruin the lovely paper. Opening the lid of the box, she let out a tiny gasp. "Oh, Jack, it's so beautiful! Thank you!"

"You like it?" he said with relief.

"I love it!" she whispered lifting the delicate chain of white gold. On it was a small cross, which Sue held in her hand, tears gathering in her eyes.

"Turn it over."

She did so, feeling the etching on the smooth surface. "You had it engraved." Holding it next to the lamp, she read the tiny letters in flowing print. "With love, Jack," she mouthed the words to herself before looking back up at him.

"I, um, wanted you to remember who gave it to you," he said softly with a sideways grin, unsure of his choice of words.

"Oh, Jack, how could I ever forget," she cried, the built up tears spilling over.

Still holding the precious gift in one hand, Sue wiped away at her tears with the other. "I have something for you too." She reached into the tote bag she had brought along with her, pulling out a light brown stuffed bear with a red bow tied around it's neck and two smaller pink ones attached to its ears. Between its hands it held a plush heart which read 2007.

"I thought Mr. Huggles could maybe use a Mrs.," she said smiling coyly.

"Perfect," Jack said as they laughed together.

Looking down at the necklace in her hand, she held it out to him. "Will you help me put it on?" Not needing to wait for his answer, she turned to face the other direction, lifting her hair.

Carefully, Jack slipped the chain around her neck, noticing the softness of her smooth skin as he brushed it with his hand. Sue could feel his breath tingling the back of her neck as he worked to fasten the delicate clasp. She closed her eyes as the sensation sent an exhilarating shiver down her spine.

Slowly, she turned back to face him, reaching to touch her new treasure. She looked at Jack with expectant eyes.

"Beautiful," he said and signed it at the same time, afraid his voice would fail him. Sue was able to take his breath away, like no one else had ever done.

When she had been set to move to New York, he'd made the decision to tell her how he felt, but since she had decided to stay, he'd found himself slipping back into their comfortable, yet unsatisfying friendship. He valued that friendship as he knew she did, but he wanted more; needed more. How long would he have until the next job opportunity came along or another David or Jonathan swept her off her feet? He had ached to show her how he felt about her, but fear had continued to hold him back; fear of harming the friendship they had built.

He watched her in the soft lamplight as her golden hair fell around her face in gentle curls. She looked like an angel. Jack loved her with a true love he had never known was possible and in that moment he knew that he could live with nothing less than knowing they were building a future together.

Leaning in, just inches from Sue, he looked into her eyes, seeking approval to move forward. Finding the same look in her eyes, he closed the gap between them; lips meeting and souls dancing as they allowed themselves to fully enjoy the unrestrained moment. It was a kiss that stopped time yet ended all too soon for the both of them.

Sue pulled back slowly, eyes still closed, while a smile settled on her freshly kissed lips. Things would be different now. No longer a stolen kiss on an undercover assignment, this one had been intentional, undeniable, and simply wonderful. There's no going back. Sue found the thought both frightening and exciting.

Not realizing she had spoken out loud, she opened her eyes to see a satisfied smile spread across Jack's face. He knew full well what she meant and he couldn't be happier.

"Who wants to go back?" he said before capturing her lips once again.

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FIN

For anyone who's interested, the candy heart words I used were: TRUE LOVE, DREAM, EMAIL, WHIZ KID, EVER AFTER, MAGIC, DREAM TEAM

Nicely done Cindy...I loved that she got Mr. Huggles a Mrs. ...maybe it is a sign of things to come, but we will never know I guess...

Cindy, you have truly put all other stories to shame!! You did a wonderful job and I have tears in my eyes right along with Sue! It was soooooo beautiful! I love the gift, the words, the sensations, the phrases, the scene.. Cindy, I love it!!!!!!



THANKYOU CINDY!

Very nicely written. I loved the story.

Kim

that was lovely from startto finish Lin

This is absolutely fantastic!! And, the guys were both sooooo romantic - they take your breath away!!!

Beautiful job, Cindy!! I love every word!!!

Thanks for sharing!!!

Joy

Mmmmmmmmmmmm, nice, very, very nice!

Sadly, I forgot about Mr. Huggles, but it's sweet that she figured he would need a Mrs... maybe it's foreshadowing in their future. Perhaps, Mr. Hudson will soon gain a Mrs....

Great job...I loved it...


~laura michelle~

well done!

Wonderful!

Wonderful, eternally wonderful... I'm positively speechless.

Darn, I hate when I miss the grand finale -- just caught up and it's a wonderful story, Cindy! You even made Howie a champion! (can you tell I love to cheer on the underdog?)

kav

I had the pleasure of reading the story in one shot.

Myles was hilarious with his useless facts and comments throughout Tara's "dates".

Jack, I was truly amazed by your Valentine date. A doggie lady for Levi and your gift for Sue ... wonderful

And Bobby, keep swooning Tara and she'll forget everything about Darcy.

Great story

I loved reading every post. I adored Bobby and Tara's date, it was absolutely perfect! Thank you for sharing.

Sairs

Thanks for a great story,
terie

Awesome job, Cindy!

Ornella

wow
what a wonderful endding.

Beautiful Cindy!!! I loved it!

Em

Thanks Cindy, your link brought me straight here!!

What fun! A Valentine date for everyone including Levi. that Jack,
he thinks of everything.......eventually.

Thanks for sharing, hope you were serious when you mentioned
sequel. We'll be waiting.

Cindy

Just read your story from start to finish. It was wonderful...A new beginning for Bobby and Tara, a renewed beginning for Lucy and Myles, and a fantastic future in site for Jack and Sue. Everythng all others said I . Characters are so right on, a case with some suspense at the last minute, just when we thought everything would go smoothly to catch that bad Sean; and, of course, those wonderful fuzzy moments at the end. And adding Howie was so cool! He is so smitten with Sue but knows he has no chance with her; so, he does the next best thing and helps "Jackie" to woo her. I especially loved that touch. Myles and Lucy were sweet, but I'm not so sure about that pair. I have some other ideas for both Myles and Lucy. Bobby and Tara discovering each other; and, what can I say about Jack and Sue, they are my favorite and, of course, they have to get married very soon, so it will be two years by the time my story rolls around. And finally, you laid it out just like the shows. I applaud you for a great story.

Lynn

Cindy:

I just loved your story! L/M, B/T and J/S they all were meant to be together in my opinion and you displayed that to perfection! I loved it.



I'm now off to read the sequel!

Cindy!

so sweet.
glad they caught moe.
cute bobby/tara, myles/lucy, jack/sue and levi/his doggy love

That was beautiful.




Hope ~