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suesfan
I wonder what Myles has in mind???

You're doing great, JesusRocks!!!

Joy
JesusRocks
Thank you!!!
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After getting out of Ted's office he called Jack.

Myles: Jackson!
Jack: Myles I told you not to call me that!
Myles: Sorry, hey can you help me with something?
Jack: Maybe...
Myles: Sue's 1 year anniversary at the Bureau is coming up and I want to do something. Can you meet me at the enterence of the Bureau so that we can talk about what to do?
Jack: Sure, when?
Myles: About 15 minutes.
Jack: ok bye.

CALL ENDED

Myles turned around and walked back into Ted's office.

"Sorry Ted.... I think I've got it!" Myles said.

"What Leland?" Ted asked.

"Have Jack propose to her on live TV at the Easter Egg Hunt, while she is dressed up as the Easter Bunny." Myles said excitedly.

"Not bad... but I thought you were the Easter Bunny." And he looked back down to his paperwork.

"She can take my job this year. Think about it and call me, because I'm meeting Jack in 15 minutes to set it and make sure he'll do it." Myles said.

"Ok. I will." Ted said as Myles turned to walk out.

Once he got out the door to meet Jack his phone rang.

Myles: Leland!
Ted: Yes.
Myles: HUH??
Ted: This is Ted, yes you can go through with the plan.
Myles: Great!!
Ted: Bye.
Myles: Bye and Thank you!!
Ted: You know what? Get me and invite! I want to see this!
Myles: Bye
Ted: Bye

CALL ENDED

He was all in control and this was going to be the best idea ever! Sue Thomas will now be a Susan Hudson!

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Hope you like it! Note! I don't intend on putting the wedding in it so don't get too excited, at that it just if Sue says yes!
Cindy01
Wow, 3 posts to catch up on! yay.gif

I loved the spanish stuff laugh.gif So we know the mystery person is a young woman who is fluent in spanish. whistling.gif I'm going to need many more clues!


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"Have Jack propose to her on live TV at the Easter Egg Hunt, while she is dressed up as the Easter Bunny." Myles said excitedly.
Oh my! adulation smilie.gif That's quite a prank, isn't it? laugh.gif But the proposal is real right? hmmm.gif I'm very interested to see how Myles is going to pull this one off.

Jack proposing to the Easter Bunny! rofl2.gif Oh, what a sight that'll be.
Anne
Oh how funny! Gee, how will Myles pull this one off? hmmm.gif So Jack will be proposing to the Easter Bunny, and then they will have Jack Rabbits. crylaugh.gif Sorry, couldn't help myself. lol OK, and now with the case, what is with all these people calling in as relatives of Sue and Lucy, etc.? That is creepy darkevil5yg.gif I'm looking forward to what you are going to do with all this. dogdance.gif
suesfan
This is going to be fun!!!

Joy
Kav
QUOTE(Anne @ Mar 9 2007, 06:41 AM) *

hmmm.gif So Jack will be proposing to the Easter Bunny, and then they will have Jack Rabbits. crylaugh.gif
mf_laughbounce2.gif Good one, Anne. I think Sue will cute as the Easter Bunny. Is Levi going to get his own set of rabbit ears?

kav
JesusRocks
sorry I haven't written in a while... I've been really busy.
This will be short because I can't stay on long.
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Myles met Jack at the enterence of the Bureau.

"JACK!" Myles said.

Jack turned around and Myles said, "Lets go."

"What do you mean? Where?" Jack asked.

"I don't know. Just I have a really good idea."

"Ok lets take a walk in the Mall." Jack said.

The two men began walking. After being able to hear each others footsteps, because they were so quiet, Jack finally asked, "Whats you brilliant idea, Myles?"

Myles looked over to Jack and said, "Ok here it is... I won't be the Easter Bunny this year..."

Jack interrupted, "Oh so is this to make you happy?"

"No Jack, Sue will be and you'll propose to her on live tv, on stage, in front of the country... are you following me...??" Myles stared at Jack while Jack smirked.

"Not a terrible idea, but what to do about the Bureau's rules?" Jack puzzledly asked.

"Well, I kinda already figured that out." Myles began.

Myles' phone rang.

Myles: Hello, this is Myles.
Voice: Myles. How are you my boy?
Myles: Huh? Do I know you?
Voice: Yes, I'm you sister.
Myles: You don't sound like my sister.
Voice: Myles... it's me.
Myles: Ok, what are you calling me for?
Voice: Mom and dad are bugging me again.
Myles: Why?
Voice: I don't know. But can I come and visit?
Myles: Sure, when, I mean, I am really busy, but you can come.
Voice: I don't know, I'll call you back later.
Myles: Ok sis.
Voice: Bye.

CALL ENDED

Jack looked to Myles and asked, "What is going on here?"

The two looked at each other and decided to go back to the Bureau. Right before they entered the Bureau Jack looked to Myles, "Ok, I'll do it."

And they walked in to tell the team about yet another phone call.
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A little to get ya'll by. I'll see how much I can write later smile.gif <3
JesusRocks
ok ok ok... I'll give ya a clue.
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.....................................................Voice's Room......................................................

She looked over to her friend.

"So, ya know, I'm not sure if there gunna help that kid. I don't know what else I can do!" Voice said.

"It's not you're fault you know what's gunna happen, girl, just wait it out..." friend said. "Just wait it out..."

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hope it helps
suesfan
I'm still in the dark!! But Myles' idea sounds good and I'm glad Jack has agreed to do it!!!

Joy
Cindy01
I'm glad Jack agreed so easily too! yay.gif

I'm still very curious about this mystery caller though.....and it's leaving me hanging.gif

Great job...more soon please prettyplease.gif
JesusRocks
more more more... first, does anyone watch Are You Smarter Than a Fifth Grader??
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They walked into the office.

"Where were you two?" Lucy asked the two men.

"Taking a walk and discussing information about the Easter Egg Hunt." Jack said

Bobby looked at them and asked, "Do you want to share?"

"Later." both of them said in unison.

They went to sit down and Sue got up. Sue walked over to Lucy and whispered something in her ear. After Lucy nodded, Sue turned and left.

Myles rose back up and went to his colluegue's desk and laid the bunny suit on her desk. The team looked extremely confused as he put the suit and the head, gloves(paws), and feet on her desk.

Lucy was the most confused and so she asked, "May I ask what you are doing."

"You'll see." Myles said. I few minutes later he continued, "If you really need to know, than it has to do with the fact the I'm NOT the Easter Bunny this year... things have changed and...... well, Sue is the lucky one this year!"

Sue walked back in and before noticing the bunny on her desk, she said, "So, someone is calling FBI agents and letting them know that something wrong will happen at the Hunt. Can we try and figure out who it..." Her voice trailed off as she turned and saw the bunny on her desk. "WHAT IS THIS?"

Myles smiled and got Sue's attention by waving, "Congratulations, Easter Bunny!"
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hope you like!
Cindy01
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Myles smiled and got Sue's attention by waving, "Congratulations, Easter Bunny!"
I can see him with a BIG smile on his face when he said this. biggrin.gif

To answer your question, I've seen a couple episodes of Are You Smarter Than A Fifth Grader.

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JesusRocks
so... I hope everyone likes my story...
On are you smarter than a 5th grader last night, someone proposed to his girlfriend on the show. It was so adorable!
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Sue couldn't believe what was happening.

"I CAN'T BE THE EASTER BUNNY! THAT"S MYLES' JOB!" Sue said in a deep tone.

She looked over to Lucy and signed, "What do you know about this?"

Lucy smiled and signed back, "Nothing really... as much as you know."

Now Sue had 2 mysteries to solve: Who the caller was, and why they were calling, and why SHE has to be th Easter Bunny.

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"Hey, I have to call another one. Maybe Jack, or Bobby, or maybe the supervisor.... what was his name? Um.... come on.. help me remember..." Voice said talking to her friend.

"Ted?" The friend looked over to Voice.

"That's right!" Voice exclaimed.

She picked up the phone and dialed Jack's number.

While it was ringing she said, "Maybe this time they will agree with me... I mean aybe he'll know what I'm talking about and take me seriously!"

Jack: Hudson!
Voice: Jackson?
Jack: Um, yes. Can I help you?
Voice: Ya you can help me Jack.
Jack: How ma'am?
Voice: By being up on your toes at the Easter Egg Hunt.
Jack: Why? Why have you been calling everyone?
Voice: Because, Jackson, something bad is going to happen!
Jack: How do you know?
Voice: Because I just do.
Jack: Are you going to the Hunt?
Voice: Yea, I'm in it!
Jack: Ok well, than I'll see you there?
Voice: Ya sure... hope you listen to me!
Jack: Sure... bye!

Call Ended

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"So that really narrows it down." Jack said as the team agreed.

Sue turned around and was lost, "What happened? Why am I always the one that gets lost?"

Jack smiled and said, "So it's either Raven Symone, Hannah Montana, Ty Pennington, one of the Bushs, or Ryan Seacrest..."

And Lucy added, "Don't forget Kermit!"

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Let me know what you like! blissysmile.gif chocolate.gif
suesfan
Sue, you are really going to like being the Easter Bunny!!!

Who is this person calling all the team???

Joy
Kav
Sue's a natural as the Easter Bunny -- remember the show where she mimed bunny instead of saying the word when Levi'd lost his? I can still see her face. rofl2.gif

kav
Cindy01
Oooh, oooh! I have a guess as to who the mystery caller might be! waving.gif But I'm not sure if you want me to post it in case it's right....I don't want to spoil anything.

But then again.....it's probably wrong. laugh.gif I'm not a great guesser!

More soon please prettyplease.gif
JesusRocks
you can pm me with your guess if you want. I mean I might not tell you if you're right, but it'll be fun to see what you guess!! smile.gif
JesusRocks
hey all!
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"Ok we won't forget Kermit." Jack said

The team thought and thought. They needed to figure this out, or they could just forget about it. It could be a teen making prank calls from a party or something.

"Why are we wasteing our brain power over this?" Myles asked. "Let's just call it a prank call."

The team agreed and went back to what they were doing. Sue went back to contemplating why she had to be the Easter Bunny in the same suit that MYLES wore!! How gross?!?!

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It was now about 2 weeks before the Hunt and everyone was getting anxious. The mystery caller had not called anymore agents, since her last call to Jack.

The team had mostly forgotten about the caller, except for Sue. The knawing thought of all that the caller said, was bugging her.

Materials for the Hunt were already getting misplaced. Some eggs would disappear one day and be returned the next. And each of the guests going the Hunt, that is the famous ones, had lost something that they needed for the big day.
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A shortie... I know!! We already had a lucky guesser... if you think you know who the caller is or anything else about the case, than pm me!! lol can't wait to hear more guesses!! smile.gif
Kav
I'm no sure who the caller is but I do know they shouldn't dismiss the calls as a prank.

kav
suesfan
I do believe the caller is up to something that is not going to be good!!!

Joy
JesusRocks
someone else guessed right... not saying who though...
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(skipping to 2 days before hunt)
=)

The phone rings at the White House.

Bush: Yes?
Kermit: Hi Mr. President!
Bush: Hi Kermit! How are you?
Kermit: Good sir, just I dont think I can make the hunt this year.
Bush: Well, why not?
Kermit: I just landed a lead role with Ms. Piggy.
Bush: Congratulations kermit! we'll all miss you!
Kermit: Ok Mr. President. Thank you!

in distant we hear Ms. Piggy screaming for Kermit to hurry.

Kermit: Well, I have to go...
Bush: Ok bye Kermit. I'll talk to you later!

Kermit: Bye. (sings) It's not easy being green...........................

CALL ENDED

Pres. Bush smiled.
Cindy01
Cute post. Flowers.gif
suesfan
Well, to Kermit, Miss Piggy would be more important!!!

Joy
JesusRocks
well, i'll try to write a lot this weekend.... but I can't write any right now
JesusRocks
so... how are you all??
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"So.. how many more days until the Hunt?" Sue asked everyone while she walked into the Bullpen.

Myles looked at her like she had no sense of the days of the week and how much longer they had until such a big day. And Myles and Jack were o the only ones who knew how special it would really be.

"What?" Sue replied to Myles' facial expression. "I just 'CAN"T WAIT' to wear that ugly bunny suit!"

The team smirked, and Jack smiled. Hopefully she would say yes.

"What if something bad happens?" Sue asked

"Then we'll stop it." Jack said.

"I don't know. I just think we should've taken those... " Sue was interrupted by Bobby's phone.

Bobby looked nervous and asked, "Should I answer it?"

Jack and D nodded yes.

Bobby: Manning!
Voice: Hey!
Bobby: How can I help you mate?
Voice: Um.... who is this?
Bobby: Bobby Manning.
Voice: Oh yes... Mr. Manning.
Bobby: yes?
Voice: you are adorable! Where are you from? The south?
Bobby: Australia
Voice: I knew that... so how are you?
Bobby: I'm good. How about you?
Voice: Good... thank you for asking!
Bobby: You're welcome. Why did you call, because I have to get back to work...
Voice: Oh ya... I'm sorry, just be careful...
Bobby: Why? Where?
Voice: I got to go.
Bobby: Wait!
Voice: Yes?
Bobby: Answer my question!
Voice: No! I have to go!

CALL LOST

"Dang it!" Bobby said frustrated.

"... more than just prank calls." Sue finished.

Jack replied, "Good idea!"

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I'll try to post more later


Anne
I agree with Sue too. Take the calls seriously, just in case. ohmy.gif
Kav
Yep, definitely more than prank calls, and very mysterious.

kav
suesfan
I'd get on those calls if I were you, guys!!!

Joy
Cindy01
Yep, take the calls seriously. Sue's instincts are good! whistling.gif
JesusRocks
more... might be short, sorry... I'm doing a project on the Bubonic Plague in Shakespeare time, so if any of you have any good tips... let me know!
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"Only problem..." Myles said.

"What?" Tara asked.

"We haven't tracked any of the calls!" Myles said

"Ooo, yeah, that could be a slight issue." Jack said

"How about we all split and so interrogate all the people coming to the hunt." Sue suggested.

"Good idea!" D responded. "Jack and Sue you go see Raven. Tara and Lucy you visit Hannah Montana. Myles, you and I will visit Ty. And Bobby you will go see Ryan. Let's hurry this up!"

They all set out to interrogate the people, now considered suspects.
Cindy01
These interviews should be interesting. bounching.gif

Good luck with your school work. Flowers.gif
suesfan
These interviews are going to be very interesting!!!

Joy
JesusRocks
Like I said if anyone wants to read the bubonic plague thing than let me know or pm me! smile.gif
JesusRocks
thanks for replies!! i love ya all!
Frwdgranny
Okay, I'm all caught up! Very good mystery JR. applause.gif

And, let me know if my guess is correct. If it is, I can't figure out why the person just didn't come and tell the team what they know.... poster_oops.gif oops! I hope I'm not giving it away. I'm probably wrong anyway. unsure.gif

Can't wait until Jack proposes to Sue; but, is it supposed to be just a prank or is Jack really serious? If he's not really serious, that would be cruel for Sue. shakes head.gif

Yes, I would be interested in reading your Bubonic Plague paper. PM it to me. Thanks.

Lynn

JesusRocks
hey sorry guys... I'm grounded this month so I just wanted to post like a little bit so that its still here in May. smile.gif
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Lucy and Tara stepped out of the car in front of Hannah Montana's/ Miley Stewert's house. They walked up and Tara rang the doorbell and knocked on the door.

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so again sory... I owe you all a really LONG post... so hopefully it will come in May... luv ya all!

JR
Frwdgranny
JR

Sorry you are grounded. We'll still be here in May, waiting for your story to continue. Flowers.gif

and a grouphug.gif

Take care.

Lynn

suesfan
Sorry, Jesusrocks, about being grounded. We be here waiting when you come back in May!!!

Joy
Cindy01
Sorry that you're grounded. We'll still be here when you're free to post more! Flowers.gif

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They walked up and Tara rang the doorbell and knocked on the door.
I like how you included this bit of Tara's character (just like in the show)...both ringing the bell and knocking. rofl.gif
JesusRocks
Sorry everyone! I am really praying that I can get this story done because they moved the date up... so lets all hope that I can finish it...

Well, my sister has a practice so I have to go and I'll work on it there and when I get home I'll try to write more!

<3 ya all!
JR
JesusRocks
more
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"i noticed you do that." Lucy said.

"Do what?"

"You ring the doorbell and knock. Why?" Lucy continued.

"Oh! Sometimes you can't tell if the doorbell works, and you want to get their attention." Tara stated, explaining to Lucy.

"i guess no one is home." Lucy said. "They definatly would know with your wonderful letting-know-skills."

Lucy smiled.
As the began to turn around and walk away the door opened.
The boy that answered the door was a tall handsom Sophmore in highschool.

"Can I help you?" the boy asked.

"Um... does Hannah Montana live here?" Tara asked.

"I wish!! I'm not that lucky!" the boy said and shut the door.

"I guess your letting-know skills were wasted on the wrong house." Lucy said laughing.

The two got in the car and called Jack.

Jack: Hudson!
Lucy: Jack it's Lucy. it wasn't the right house we need a new address.
Jack: try next door.
Lucy: oh ok.
Jack: bye

Call Ended

"Jack said to try next door." Lucy said to Tara. and Tara nodded.

The two drove to the next door neighbors, and they walked up to the door.

"Are you gonna do your-letting-know skills again?" Lucy asked droggy.

"Yep!" Tara exclaimed and rang the doorbell and knocked.

One minute of waiting someone came to the door.

"Hello, does Hannah Montana live here?" Lucy asked.

The boy, Jackson, turned his head and yelled, "HANNAH!" and than turned to Tara and Lucy and said, "Ya. Who are ya?"

"We're um..." Tara started and then Jackson interrupted.

"Just say what news station your from."

Lucy and Tara looked surprized, "No, um were with the FBI. We want to talk to Hannah about the Easter Egg Hunt."

Jackson look shocked to hear that the FBI was in frount of his house. "DAD!" He yelled.
"Come on in." Jackson said.

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sorry... more to come! I'm really busy!
Frwdgranny
Welcome back JR. Glad your ungrounded. applause.gif

Great post. I can just picture Jackson at the door hollering back inside the house, first to Hannah and then to Billy Ray.....oops, I mean DAD! cloud9.gif

Lynn



Ga Girl
Welcome back, girl!! bounching.gif

Cisty
JesusRocks
more... more...
and remember hannah and miley are the same people...
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Hannah yelled back, "WHAT JACKSON?!?"

"SOMEONE IS HERE TO SEE HANNAH!!" Jackson yelled back.

Miley ran and put her wig on, and ran out to meet Lucy and Tara.

After darting down the steps and almost falling on her face, Hannah recomposed herself and went to the door.

"Hey!" Hannah said.

"Hi! Hannah Montana, I'm Lucy Doston and this is Tara. We're with the FBI. Can we ask you a few quesions?" Lucy said.

"Uh... ya... come in. Jackson, can you either get them a water or something or leave."

"Please sit down......................... what did I do?" Hannah asked.

Lucy and Tara looked at each other than at Hannah, "Why don't you tell us?"

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more to come... leaving to play practice!
Frwdgranny
JR

Can't wait to find out what Hannah thinks she might have done. Flowers.gif

Lynn

Cindy01
Great posts....can't wait to read the rest of their interview. dance.gif
JesusRocks
some more...
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Hannah looked confused.

"Um, I didn't do anything wrong. I mean I text my friends... but..." Hannah stopped.

Tara looked at Hannah, "So you haven't been calling the FBI?"

"Why would I do that?" Hannah asked.

"I don't know. Maybe for attention?" Lucy asked.

Hannah didn't look too happy. "I don't know what you're talking about."

"Ok, well, thanks for your time." Tara said as the two stood up.

Hannah shot up immediatly, "Wait!"

The two turned around.

"What were the calls about?'' She continued.

Lucy looked at Hannah, "Something bad is going to happen at the Easter Egg Hunt. We just want to found out what so that way the person or people that would get hurt, don't. Bye Ms. Montana" And the two walked out of the house
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write more later

Frwdgranny
JR

Me thinks Hannah knows more than she is saying! bouncing fire.gif

Anxiously awaiting the other interviews. Flowers.gif

Lynn

JesusRocks
thanks for the reply!! Love my readers. I'm really tired and I am talking to my friends right now so I'll update later! Have a great weekend!
JesusRocks
more!
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...Jack and Sue...
Jack looked over to Sue, "Here we go."

The two stepped out of the car at Raven's house. Jack fixed his tie and Sue fixed her suit. They had to look professional...

Sue and Jack walked up to the door and knocked. Jack looked over to Sue and said, "I hope it's not her."

Cory answered the door. "Who are you?" Cory asked rudely.

"Is Raven Baxter here?" Sue asked.

"No, she's out with friends, stopping a vision from coming true. Why?" Cory replied.

"Did she say where?" Jack asked.

"I don't know. I'm her brother, she doesn't tell ne nothin'. "

Than right as they were ready to leave Raven screamed, "CORY! WHO'S AT THE DOOR!"

Cory screamed, "NO ONE! SALES PERSON!!!!" he continued, "You better go."

Jack asked, "Can we take a look around?"

"Why and who are you???" Cory asked again

"We're with the FBI and we need to talk to..." the explination was halted because Raven was strutting down the steps.

"...her." Jack continued.
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I'll write more later
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