That's the perfect ending...


~laura michelle~

Ahhhhh, on cloud nine with Jack. What a perfect place to have an ending.

Tina

Oh Cindy! That was amazingly sweet and sincere. My eyes are all misty! At this moment, I am listening to my iPod and the theme to our favorite show is playing softly in my ears. Talk about a perfect ending!

I think I could stand a sequal or two. Outstanding, simply outstanding!

Kim

Cindy, I've enjoyed this story so much. The mystery and angst. The team I love a prepared Jack, and ready to melt the ice with Sue Ending with How perfect. You do fuzzies very well. I'll be looking forward to your next story and the sequel to this one.

wonderful from start to finish

on cloud 9 with jack? i could live with that

cath

(Quotes are still not working)


A sequel? I think I'd be lying if I said there would be no sequel, but I don't have anything planned yet.

Well, I'll be ready and waiting if you do plan on one!! And yes, Jack and Sue can't be engaged forever!

As a surprise, her friends had rehearsed beforehand and had silently signed the 'Happy Birthday' song to her in unison. Even Myles had gotten through it without incident.

That is so sweet!!

Sue smiled sweetly at him, almost getting lost in his chocolate brown eyes. "I'm just admiring the view," she said, never taking her eyes off his handsome face.

Oh yes, I enjoy "the view" myself!

Jack gave her a lopsided smile.

Just those 6 words and I'm gone

Sue laughed lightly with him and forced herself to turn, her back pressed to his chest and his arms wrapped tightly around her waist.

Ohhh that just sounds so romantic and sweet!

Sue tilted her head back towards Jack with a teasing glint in her eyes. "Scared Sparky?" She watched as his lips twitched into a smile.

"No, I already faced my biggest fear this week. This is a breeze," he said with a wink.

So cute!

"Of course I do. We're on cloud nine!"

Cindy, not only am I thrilled to have such an ending but I'm excited at the prospect of a possible sequel!

You've made my morning!! Thankyou for a fantastic story from start to finish!!!!

See, this is my favorite quote, because it speaks volumes about Jack and Sue. He is so willing to face his fear of heights to risk a helicopter ride over DC just so he and Sue could have a romantic date. And, of course, she is more than willing the tease him about his fear and comfort him if it gets to be so much.

Wonderful ending, Cindy! Just perfect! Next Stop: Cloud Nine!

Ahhhhhhhhh, I feel better now! Although I was afraid something else would happen before he spoke his proposal to Sue! He was really wound up and long-winded!

Beautifully done!

Donna

A perfect ending to a wonderful story!!! I love this from start to finish!!!

Thanks for sharing!!!

Joy

Wonderful story, Cindy! You have an amazing talent! Your characters seem so real! And because of this it is even harder to see your stories coming to an end. However, perfect ending!

Ornella

Great story and I loved the line you ended it with. What a nice wrap up.
thanks,
Terie

great story!

cloud 9 sounds about right... LOL

Wow, Cindy, I can't believe I missed the fun of posting comments as the story went along. I just finished a marathon read and it was kind of fun to race through all the cliffie part. This was a real page turner with a nice dose of fuzzies thrown in. Fantastic job!

kav

Congratuations, Cinty. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.
What a perfect way to end, on cloud nine.

Your readers have asked for a sequel. I hope to see one soon.

Cindy

I finally was able to steal a few minutes while the family was away this evening and finished your last three posts. I agree with all the other great comments; your story was wonderful. Here are some

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for a supercalifragilisticxpialidocious (sp?) story! Now just to mention a few: A great mystery and many wonderful clues, which left us hanging until the perpetrator was revealed; Judy’s twin brother…that was a great twist! I can’t leave out the warm and fuzzies. They were absolutely delicious. I especially loved that balloon ride at the end. Such a romantic way to profess his love for Sue, by doing something which he fears! And, of course, you know how I feel about those “chocolate brown eyes”.

But, Cindy, I think my favorite part was the quote below. It was so beautiful and expresses so well exactly how I think Jack would feel. I am so glad you wrote this into your story.

Cindy01 3/8/07 Quote: “Jack gave her a smile as he pulled them both to a kneeling position. He cleared his throat and in a steady voice told her, "I was going to do this on your birthday, but almost losing you tonight made me realize that I don't want to wait another second. Sue, I have no doubt that you were put on this earth to do so much good. You touch people's lives in a way that I've never thought possible for one person to do. You have so much faith and joy that you gladly share with the rest of us when we need it most." Jack took a moment to compose himself as all the feelings of that night washed over him again.

"Every person who has ever met you is better for it. That's something you never need to doubt. I am only one of the many people that God has blessed with your presence and I hope to be the one blessed with it for the rest of my life. Sue, you will make me the happiest man in the world if you'll agree to be my wife." Jack opened the small box to reveal the ring he had bought. "Will you marry me?" “

I’m sorry to see it end and will anxiously be awaiting your vignette and next full length story whenever you decide to favor us with your talent.

Lynn

Cindy - I finally had a chance to catch up and the story is done...

I loved every second of it! You did an amazing job and I can't wait to read your next story

Em

This was exelent... i loved it.....

Thanx so much for sharing... you write exelent mistaries...
Thanx again

I enjoyed your story, thanks for sharing.

Sairs

Sorry for playing catch-up.

You had nothing to worry about. You weaved that mystery very well.

Great job!

Marlene

Cindy,

First of all, these are for you.

And I've been to busy so far to read your story. I finally took some time this morning and the only thing I can tell is that you've made my day!!!

I really enjoyed your story from the beginning to the very last word. You have an amazing talent...

So thank you again to share this wondeful story with us.

O'seam

Cindy this was awesome...I wish you luck in the challenge...this way very well written!

A sequel for this one would be awesome tho...I have to admit!!