Once again, that was amazing, Rosa!!! I loved it!

Em

I loved the story.... Bravo!!!

Deranged is the right word for Tim!! That he thought his reasons for killing them was justified is sick!! I'm glad that Lorna survived and has Charles!!!

The wedding and reception was beautiful!! I had to laugh as Jack and Sue tried to rein in Lucy!! A definitely impossible task!!!

Thanks for sharing!!!

Joy

Lovely ending, Rosa. You always do such a good job of wrapping up a story to a wonderful conclusion.

kav

Catching up on a weeks worth of postings. Ah Ha! So Madeline prosecuted Tim eh? He's our man! Now, I don't like Lorna being a guinea pig to catch him though! Why do I have this feeling Sue is going to trade places with Lorna?

Okay, so I was wrong...Lorna is going to do it! Agree with everyone else, the realization that what she had hoped for her son by giving him up did not come to pass must have made her very sad, even feel guilty. A tough situation to be in.

Wow! I didn't see that coming. What a sweet proposal!

Good, they got him.

Rosa, this was a thrilling mystery and lovely ending with Jack and Sue marrying. You kept our attention from beginning to end. And what a way to end, with a lovely wedding and wedding night. Thank you for a wonderful story!

Lynn

Rosa, you finished while I was camp! I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed your story. You created an excellent plot and added all the extras to make this a "must read". Great work!

I'm still playing catch up and noticed you have this finished. What a wonderful ending Rosa. Great story and you got the bad guy. Very well done.

Jack and Sue's wedding was sweet and the last scene was

What a wonderful mystery you wove in this story, though it was a heartbreaking one too. But I loved the twists and turns along the way. Great job!

This story was brilliant !

I love chocolate cake but maybe will wait a little bit before eating one again...
The characters seem nice and it's sad 2 of them have to die.

Jack and Sue are so sweet, for once Jack went a little faster than usualy.

glad they stopped tim. yay they're married...too bad it rained.