well, i'm a little late...but amazing story once again Tina!
our band didn't do to well performing either, guess our instruments caught
the flu bug or something

anyway: can't wait for more from you!


Stef

Tina, this is an amazing story. You made each scene to vivid and real. The emotions your drew out from the characters lept of the page.

Fantastic, beautiful story Tina!
Wonderful, descriptive writing!
It's amazing how you managed to pack in so much into four posts!
Outstanding job with a ending!
Thanks so much for sharing!
Oh, and I'm so very glad you included '(not a main character)' after 'Anniversary of a death' in your description - or else I would have missed out on your exceptional story (since I refuse to read Character Death stories)!

Tracy

I loved it!

Blissful sigh...

Tina, I'm embarrassed at my extreme tardiness in catching up with this fabulous story. I know I have an excuse, but after reading your masterful prose I feel my reason for not catching up sooner is inexcusable. You have a way of bringing your reader right into the scenes of your story -- we see, feel, hear and smell everything so vividly that I feel slightly guilty at being there with Jack in his private moment to deal with his anger over Wes, and again in his intimate interlude with Sue. But... blissful sigh....

A truly beautiful piece of story-telling. I'm filled with envy. Syabas!

glad sue was able to help jack find peace/acceptance with what happened to wes and his feelings of anger and grief. love that he's also thinking of a future with sue.