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Frwdgranny
Kitti I think I'm beginning to understand this and that's quite a leap for someone who knows nothing about the paranormal! Good job!

Lynn

justme_jp3
Eek! hiding.gif
suesfan
This is becoming extremely interesting!!

Joy
Kitti146
Part 9

- Are you sure of it, Dorna?
- Yes, I am. After they noticed that we aren’t ordinary wolves, we were set upon. Norovan has been injured – the black wolf nodded towards the grey one, whose paw was visibly helpless.
- We couldn’t stop the bleeding... – the black wolf looked at her master appealingly. – If you can help him, please, do it... he is my sweetheart...

Nytar took a vial out of his pocket, which contained a green cream, and after opening it they smelt a mentholated scent. O’Connell and Dorna looked at the vial reverently.

- The Darigold – O’Connell whispered. – I thought...
- That we lost it? – Nytar smiled wickedly as he knelt down beside the wolf. – No, we didn’t. I have been keeping it for a long time. It consists of daisy, marigold and a little wolf magic – the man put some cream on the wolf’s wound which immediately healed. – He will be well now.
- Thank you, Nytar – Dorna looked at him with her amber eyes gratefully, and then snuggled to her love to warm him up.
- Now, after you saved Norovan’s life, we should discuss where to take her before Drogan arrives – O’Connell pointed at the unconscious Darcy. – As I know him, he’ll be here very soon.
- We won’t take her anywhere. I’ll talk to Drogan. And I’ll gain him over. Or if I’m not successful... one of us will leave this place in a coffin.
suesfan
It's going to be interesting to see how you bring all this together and what they hope to accomplish having kidnapped Darcy!! And, I'm hoping for the good old-fashioned Valentine fuzzies at the end!!!

Joy
Kav
Wow -- this is totally different from any fanfic I've ever read! .... And why do they want Darcy?????

kav
Jill
cold.gif I don't think it's the cold here making me shiver. Can we get back to some romance soon????? Please?????

Jill
suesfan
This story is on hold for a moment while Kitti considers reworking a few posts to bring it more closely into the guidelines for this site. Stay tuned and check back on this thread later.

The Mod Team
Tashia
Very interesting story! hmmm.gif I can't wait the next chapter.
Kav
Fellow readers,

The story you have been following is about to make some changes. We will call it our mistake that it wasn't caught right away... blush.gif OOPS! It took a couple of posts before we realized that vampires and werewolves are taboo on RFF. Kitti has graciously reworked her story to pull it back within the writing guidelines and we are so appreciative of that. Thank you for sticking with her while the changes were made.
Sorry about the delay.

The Mod Team
suesfan
Kitti, I love the changes you have made and can't wait to see where you take us from here!!!

Joy
Kitti146
As it has been said, I had to make some changes, so please read Part 9 again to understand the new line. I changed vampires into fairies of the dark side and werewolves into talking wolves. I kept the names, only the characters were changed, if you get confused just tell me and I'll help. I hope you'll enjoy my story this way as well.



Part 10

Strong wind started to blow in the forest; Nytar and his companion turned over. They were surrounded by yellow- and red-eyed creatures, then a red-eyed stepped in front of them.

- Give us the woman and I won’t kill you. How do you usually spend your nights? – Nytar was talking so as if they were sitting over two cups of coffee in a sunny afternoon. Drogan just looked at him with his red-eyed and Nytar immediately withdrew.
- I won’t give her to you. I have a better idea and I think you’ll like it.

The fairy frowned.

- Talk.
- Do you want to defeat Ayala?
- Of course I do. She brought us low when she expatriated me and my people.
- Then I have an offer for you: sacrifice the woman together and the people of both of us will get power... after that it would be very easy to defeat the fairies of the good side.
- Your human servant killed one of my strongest fairies. I should kill you immediately and after sacrificing the woman I would be able to defeat Ayala on my own. Then I shouldn’t share with you anything.
- You tried to kill Norovan as well. Now we are quits. You and your people are vulnerable in the daytime, because as I know, light harms the fairies of the dark side. You need someone who can protect you and your people in the daytime as well. Light doesn’t harm me and my wolves.

Drogan was thinking for a while and he answered only a few minutes later:

- Okay. But we aren’t friends.
- Of course we aren’t. It’s just a business we’re doing together... because we are stronger together than separate.
suesfan
Oh, oh, a very scary alliance!!!

Joy
Jill
Scary...and I'm hoping maybe a traitorous kind of alliance where good is still going to conquer evil!

Jill
Averil
Hope this alliance won't hinder Bobby & the good fairies in saving Darcy...
Kav
terror.gif Ouch -- the darkside is uniting against the good side....and Darcy is just lying there in completely unaware of what is happening...at least I hope she is unaware!

kav
Oreolover
Kitti, this is getting more and more intense!
Kitti146
The astronomical thing I wrote in this part is real and very beautiful indeed. And please forgive me how I described the FBI but I didn't have a better idea. batting eyelashes.gif



Part 11

- What do you mean with that not a human being thing??
- The DNA has features which similar to a human’s, but the main features are missing from it.
- It’s impossible.
- I said that, too, but then I saw it.
- Can’t it be that you made a mistake?
- No, it can’t.
- You said that as well when you told me that there had been no human in the house.
- I was right, it isn’t a human being. It’s something special.

Bobby lost his temper.

- Call me when you really know where Darcy is and don’t tell me such paranormal things.

He rang off.

***


- The woman is called Darcy D’Angelo and she was born in the moment when the Venus and the Moon were crossing the Golden Gate, not too far from the Pleiades. Because of that her blood is so special. It happens only in every 200th year, astronomer would give everything to see it – Lynette told her master.
- But it means death for Miss D’Angelo – Ayala said sternly. – How much time do we have left?
- They have to sacrifice her on Valentine’s Day, tomorrow, before midnight. According to Marina they want to start the ritual at 10 p.m., so we have a little more than 24 hours.
- I hope it is enough. Does she have somebody who is searching her?
- Her sweetheart, Bobby Manning, works for the FBI.
- FBI?
- An organization made by people to protect America.
- I spent so much time with fairies that I can’t live with people now – Ayala sighed. – I have to go to him... a man in love has very much power.
- It sounds like you experienced it.
- I have had one true love so far... a human being. He did everything for me... but he couldn’t defeat death either. It happened 500 years ago. Since then I haven’t spend much time among people.
- Ayala! – a little fairy flew into the room with her golden wings; a pop could be heard and in the next moment a tall woman was standing in front of her Queen.
- Marina! What happened?
- The fairies of the dark side and the wolves decided to sacrifice the woman together...
- I was afraid of that – Ayala stood up. – I have to go to Bobby Manning... where does he live?

Lynette told her the address and Ayala disappeared among the colours of the rainbow.
Jill
Bobby's gonna flip!!! Let's hope he believes, though!

Great story! Keep up the good work!

Jill
suesfan
Very interesting!! I hope Bobby listens to Ayala and believes that she can help him find Darcy!!!

Joy
Mrs. Manning
I'm wondering what Bobby will say hmmm.gif You're doing a great job, please post more soon!
Averil
Hope Bobby believes what Ayala tells him and that he can save Darcy.
Frwdgranny
Okay, Kitti.....I found myself very confused when catching up with part #9. Everything has changed...I went back and read part #8 too, and discovered it also was changed. But, I persevered, followed all the comments thru, original and revised, to part #10 and think I have it straight now. That is a BIG stretch and accomplishment for my unimaginative mind! biggrin.gif

Continuing on with Part #11. Wow! Building an astronomical event around a story...amazing, Kitti. And Ayala was once human? How did she turn into a fairie 500 years ago? And she'll present herself to Bobby as human, but how will she convince him to....do what? Rescue Darcy, of course, but where do the wolves have her? Oh, I can't wait to see what happens next! exclaim.gif

Lynn

Oreolover
I hope Bobby believes Ayala. Fingers crossed.
justme_jp3
I don't do scary too well, so I'm reading from here -> hiding.gif Hope Bobby can figure out who to believe! terror.gif
Kitti146
Ayala has always been a fairy she just was in love with a human. I think everybody knows that man, I'll tell you in the end of the story. batting eyelashes.gif I hope you'll enjoy this part as well!



Part 12

- It isn’t possible that the DNA isn’t a human’s... and he believes it...

The bell started to ring.

- Who is this so late? – Bobby asked his flat angrily then opened the door. There a woman was standing and her eyes were so blue that couldn’t be a... human’s. Bobby banished that thought fretfully.
- How can I help you?
- Are you Bobby Manning? – The woman had such a clear and tinkling voice that the man immediately thought of the word he hated.
- Yes, I am.
- And do you work for that FDI?
- Erm... FBI.
- Sorry, I haven’t been in this world for a long time. May I come in?
- Of course... how do you mean ‘in this world’? – Bobby closed the door behind the woman.
- The world of the people is new for me –Ayala answered as she was staring at the TV. – I’m the happiest when I can be with my tribe.
- With your tribe? – Bobby started to become nervous. – Do you mean with women?
- I mean with fairies.
- Okay, stop here. You are trying to tell me that you are a fairy. But you haven’t even told me your name.
- I’m Ayala.
- Ayala what?
- Just Ayala.
- Well, dear just Ayala. Why have you come here?
- You don’t believe me.
- No, I don’t.
- What should I do to change your opinion?
- Let me think... for example, you could spread your wings – the man answered ironically but his jaw dropped when a golden twinkling appeared around the woman and her wings were becoming visible on her back. Bobby went to the couch and flopped down on it. The fairy walked beside him; her wings had already disappeared.
- Do you believe me now?
- I think... I think yes.
- Then I’ll tell you why I came. I know where your girlfriend is.
- Really?? Is she well?? Where is she?? Is she alive??
- Yes, in the forest, and she is still alive. But if we don’t help her, it won’t be so for long.
- Why?? Does somebody want to hurt her??
- Evil fairies and talking wolves want to kill her.
- There aren’t such creatures.
- According to you I don’t exist either but I’m still standing here in the room.
- Okay, I’m trying to believe this... story. Why do those... creatures want to kill Darcy?
- She was born during a rare astronomical phenomenon, it made her blood special. You have to save her.
- Do you want to send me to a lot of bloodthirsty creatures who are about to sacrifice my love?
- Of course not. I chose another option. It isn’t so dangerous but can easily change the world if we do it wrongly.
- What are you talking about?
- You have to preclude the whole thing before it even begins.
Jill
I'm relieved that Bobby believes her, and anxious about what he has to do.

Jill
suesfan
I think Bobby believes, even though he doesn't want to!! So, Kitti, does this mean we are also going to enjoy time travel???

Joy
Averil
So Bobby has to go back in time... hmmm.gif Hope he can save Darcy.
Oreolover
Poor Bobby's head has to be swimming with all of that. bang.gif Good work, Kitti.
Kav
Oy -- that would be such a shock! Especially for a man whose job is to gather facts. I have a feeling his whole world is going to be turned upside down by these fairies! Hopefully, he'll manage to rescue Darcy, though.

kav
Kitti146
Part 13

- Well, it can’t be done, unless you send me back in the...

A sharp light flashed and a lot of pictures ran by the man; it was over a few minutes later and Bobby was sitting there where he had been talking to the fairy from and the clock showed 10:30 p.m. as well. The only difference was that the fairy wasn’t standing there anymore. The man didn’t know what had happened... I must have hallucinated... I’m going crazy – he thought worriedly.

His phone started to ring, but he didn’t care for it. He was going to the bedroom when the answering machine picked up and hearing the caller’s voice he stopped and turned over quickly.


- Hi sweetheart, it’s me, Darcy. I know it is late now and you must be sleeping but please, don’t forget that we are having a dinner with my parents tomorrow. It’s very important to me to see the three people I love the most together... I just wanted to tell you this. I love you, good night!
Kav
Oh -oh I think he's just been given a way to save Darcy, but does he realize that he's been given that? Is he going to remember his fairy visitation or shrug it off as a dream?

kav
suesfan
Ayala really did it!! I'm sure he wouldn't have believed it could be done if Darcy hadn't have called!! Now he's going to have to act fast!!!

Joy
Averil
So he indeed went back in time... hmmm.gif Hope he can change the events and prevent Darcy being kidnapped.
Oreolover
So he is back in time. I just hope he can remember what he's back there to do.
Jill
Get it right this time, Bobby!

Jill
Frwdgranny
Oh, Bobby, do you realize that not only have you been given a chance to save Darcy's life, you've also been given a second chance with your relationship. I hope you don't blow it!

Lynn

Kitti146
Part 14

Bobby rushed to the phone and he was dialling Darcy’s number when somebody touched his shoulder and he almost dropped the receiver.

- Sorry for disappearing, but I wasn’t here two days ago – Ayala apologized.
- Is it just a joke, isn’t it? You couldn’t have sent me back in time!!
- That was my only option. We went back two days in time, so today is 11th February. Till noon on 13th you have to preclude the kidnapping of Miss D’Angelo. If you fail, your sweetheart will die. I can’t send you back in time twice, with this I woke our ghosts up and they are really angry.
- Oh, so are there ghosts now?
- There have always been. I know you don’t believe me but you have to. Fairies can’t lie.
- If I believe you... can I save Darcy?
- Yes, you can.
- Then anything you tell me, I’ll believe it. How can I preclude all of this?
- You have to bring me the holy obsidian stone of the fairies of the dark side and the Darigold of the wolves. Without their holy things they’ll become weak.
- Okay... but... what is this Darigold?
- A cream which heals every wound. We thought they had lost it some hundred years ago but one of my fairies saw the master of the wolves using it.
- All right, but where are these things?
- Drogan and Nytar keep them... Drogan is the master of evil fairies and Nytar is the master of wolves.
- This... doesn’t sound good.
- Don’t worry, I’ll help you. But now go to your love and you’ll have for that dinner with her parents. I’ll arrange everything until then and come to you again.
- Okay, but couldn’t you sign with something that you’re coming?
- How do you mean this?
- Couldn’t you... jingle with chains or something?
- I’m afraid not, but I’ll try to find another way to sign it.
- Thank you – Bobby grabbed his coat and headed to the door. – Then we’ll meet again – he turned over but the fairy wasn’t there anymore. The man was staring at the place where she had disappeared from then shook his head and closed the door behind him.

***


He was knocking on Darcy’s door for a long time until the door opened and the woman was standing there. He seemed to be tired – obviously because she had been waken up at midnight – and perplexed that she saw the man here so late... but she was alive and healthy. But her perplexity grew more when Bobby hugged her very tightly, planting soft kisses on her face.

- Bobby... don’t think I’m not happy because you are here because I am... but... what are you doing here? – Darcy asked confused.
- I missed you – Bobby hugged the woman more tightly – and I wanted to tell you how much I love you and want to spend the rest of my life with you.
- Bobby... is it what I think it is?
- Yes. Would you marry me?
Frwdgranny
Oh, all he has to do is steal this cream away from the dark fairies and wolves....well, that should be a snap, especially with Ayala helping him! LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif

Bobby proposed to Darcy!!!!!! chair.gif cheerleader.gif

Well, I would rather it have been Tara....but, this is your story and if he's in love with Darcy, than he should be proposing to her and I'm happy for him that he has a second chance with her! ily.gif

Lynn



suesfan
I love the mysteriousness of all this, Kitti!!!

Bobby is doing fine so far - he has Darcy in his arms and he has asked her to marry him!! I think this was just the easy part though!!!

Joy
justme_jp3
Yeah, I don't think it's going to be that easy either, Joy.

I can't count how many times I've wanted a "do-over" on a couple of days. Lucky Bobby!
Averil
Bobby proposed to Darcy... wub.gif wub.gif

Hope he can obtain everything necessary before everything is lost.
Tashia
Bobby proposed to Darcy!!!!!! cheerleader.gif wub.gif wub.gif
Kitti146
Part 15

Darcy stared at the man stunned. Was she really proposed to as she was wearing only a nightgown and there weren’t even candle light?

- Bobby...
- I know it was unexpected for you but when I almost lost you, I really know how important you are to me and...
- I don’t know what you mean with that losing me thing... but yes, I would. I didn’t imagine my proposal so but I have felt that for a long time that you are the man who I would like to marry and whose children I would bring into the world...

She couldn’t continue it because the man kissed her gently and yet passionately; when they parted Darcy had to grab Bobby’s hand because she felt dizzy.

- Tomorrow I’ll ask your father’s bless for this – Bobby whispered. – I know that your parents want it.
- From where?
- It’s just a divining.
- You are becoming more and more mysterious to me.
- At least you will never be bored with me... what would be if we started to do something for that children now? – The man asked, kissing Darcy’s neck and the woman didn’t object.
Averil
wub.gif wub.gif wub.gif
Kav
I love it! Talk about putting a new spin on the phrase 'making up for lost time' ! Now we just have to hope that Bobby succeeds in his mission so there can truly be a happily ever after.

kav
justme_jp3
Suppose Bobby can give Jack lessons on "making up for lost time"? Oops, wrong story. blush.gif Way to go, Bobby! Now you've got some other things you have to accomplish before all is well, right? unsure.gif
suesfan
Perfect, Bobby!! Now, on to the hard part (I'm holding my breath)!!!

Joy
Frwdgranny
QUOTE
- Tomorrow I’ll ask your father’s bless for this – Bobby whispered. – I know that your parents want it.
- From where?
- It’s just a divining.
- You are becoming more and more mysterious to me.
- At least you will never be bored with me...
Loved this part! girl_sigh.gif

Lynn

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