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suesfan
This was just delightful from beginning to end!! I just love your cherubs, Jill!!!

I'm glad everyone is back to normal!! Altough a story about Lucy trying to get away from and rid of Randy might be interesting!! No, that's okay - I just lost it there for a minute!! What was I thinking??? LOL

Thanks for sharing your incredible talent with us once again!!!

Joy
marlo29
So happy everything is fine in cherubs world LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif

And no more tooth canal slaphappy.gif slaphappy.gif slaphappy.gif


You made the deadline chair.gif chair.gif chair.gif
justme_jp3
Oh man, this is just awesome!!!
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With the skill of a midshipman hooking an F15 to an aircraft carrier, Trecey reached out and snagged Grace’s crimson sash as the confused cupid attempted to hurtle by. “Whoa, there, amazing Grace. You need to…”

“I’m not taking any more deep breaths, Trecey! You know, I liked you a whole lot better with your 2X4! And I can say ‘prolly’ if I want to!” She pulled against the tight hold, puffing her cheeks as she strained. “Isn’t anyone going to help me fix this mess?”
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“Chérie,” Marene murmured, wrapping an arm around her frenzied friend, “You’ve been at the dentist. A tooth canal, remember?
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“I’ll happy your place if you keep it up.”

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Your alliterations and one-liners are beyond hilarious!!! slaphappy.gif
Linny27
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“I’ll happy your place if you keep it up.”

I just have to say, this is the BEST LINE EVER!

And I am sorry to see this end so soon, I am glad that you made the deadline, Jill! Your cherubs are the best and I just don't think it would be a Valentine's challenge without them!
Josy
Jill, Thanks for the hysterical laughs I had !!! LolLolLolLol.gif
Josy
Oreolover
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With the skill of a midshipman hooking an F15 to an aircraft carrier, Trecey reached out and snagged Grace’s crimson sash as the confused cupid attempted to hurtle by. “Whoa, there, amazing Grace. You need to…”
Where but in a fanfiction story as terrific as this could you put the those two thought together and make the perfect mental image!

Thank you, again, for taking us on another trip with the cherubs. I'm still chuckling at the Mouth of Marene with a southern accent, and I think I'll be thinking of “I’ll happy your place if you keep it up” everytime I'm tempted to use a 2X4 on someone.

But the best part to me was the ending.
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“Well, Dorothy, it’s good to have you back.” Trecey stood and stretched, holding her breath before releasing it with precision control. “Next time, just click those ruby slippers a little sooner.”

“You have ruby…”

“No, Marene! I don’t!” Grace thrust her pudgy piggy toes in front of her friend. “See? No slippers.” She followed up the action with a giant group hug. “Just the best friends a girl could ever have.”

Perfect. Just plain perfect. LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif
duckfan
QUOTE(Jill @ Feb 17 2008, 12:14 AM) *

“How we thought she swooned and got stepped on and Pammie got stuck in the door knob trying to get to her?” Marene dipped her finger in the fluffy frosting and dabbed the end of Grace’s nose. “Remember Pammie plugging up the door knob, Grace?”

“I was stuck in the hole in the door after I expertly removed the knob…I was not stuck in the door knob,” Pammie corrected dryly, not quite to Mommy Voice Mode, yet.


I had forgotten about this escapade! Thanks for that particular smile!

As for ruby slippers - life is short, buy the shoes! As for clicking them together - Kansas is windy - maybe not!
bug
Thank you soooo much for your story! exclaim.gif

Very original, entertaining and soooooo funny! biggrin.gif

If it is true that laughing keeps you healthy, I will definitely be immuned against everything bad for the next few weeks! giggle.gif

Thanks again!

Bug
trecebo
Whoooo-doogies, but that was a ride. I have to remember to use I'll happy your place. Excellent line. And the total riot the cherubs always are...Just faboo, Jill. Made me smile a whole bunches.

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eclipsse
LolLolLolLol.gif Oh, Jill - all that talk of certified swooning positions - going to have to go back and read the earlier ones again, now!

Wonderful story - too many quoteables to mention... just choc-fantastic!
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Frwdgranny
P7-92 - Oh, I always knew chocolate lovers were over the top and you've just proved it with the antics of this precocious group of cherubs! LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif

I love Grace! Actually I love them all, but Grace! blowkiss.gif

I grew up a block from a family owned candy store and on my quick visit to KS a couple of weeks ago, we visited said candy store. I indulged myself waaaayyyy too much! And I bought enough for the cherubs; but, alas, they never came to get them. I think they must have been comatose in the Certified Swoon Position. LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif

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A tooth canal, remember?
Ouch...I just had my temporary crown put on yesterday!
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“No, Marene! I don’t!” Grace thrust her pudgy piggy toes in front of her friend. “See? No slippers.” She followed up the action with a giant group hug. “Just the best friends a girl could ever have.”
Loved the reference here! Loved every word of this story Jill! My jaw hurts from laughing so hard....or is it from the root canal? hmmm.gif

Naw! It's definitely from the story. Thanks again for this glimpse into the life of a wonderful group of extraordinary cherubs! clapgirl.gif

Lynn

hfce
That was cute. smile.gif




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