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justme_jp3
Oh boy... I haven't done this in a looooong while, but here goes! terror.gif


“I’m not saying I don’t like Valentine’s Day, I’m just saying I don’t think it’s entirely fair.”

“How so?”

“Well, first, it’s up to the bloke to make all these elaborate plans, which usually never turn out quite the way he hopes but costs him a bundle anyway. Then on top of it, he’s expected to buy the sheila flowers and candy and get all dressed up… when what he’d rather do is kick back with some beer and pizza and watch the game on the telly.”

Tara rolled her eyes and headed for her desk.

“What? You think I’m wrong?” Bobby followed behind her, ignoring the rest of the team watching and listening in rapt attention.

“I didn’t say that!” She turned around and nearly ran smack dab into the solid wall of his chest. Blowing out a quick breath, she backed a step and lifted her chin. “All I was saying was that it’s nice to have a special occasion to get dressed up and do something a little different. But it’s more important that it be fun… and that it be spent together. So if pizza and beer and a game are what you want, then maybe that’s what you should do! A girl can enjoy that too!” She dropped her gaze nervously and moved behind her desk, adding in a hopeful undertone, “If you’d bother to ask.”

“Nice to see Bobby hasn’t lost his touch with the fairer sex,” Myles quipped, earning himself a withering glare as Bobby walked past to hang up his coat.

“I’ve always loved Valentine’s Day,” Lucy interjected with a dreamy sigh. She shrugged with a smile. “Then again, you can’t beat the day after, when you can buy all the Valentine chocolates you want at half off!”

“They sure had enough left over last year…”

“Oh, right – the Valentine’s Day blizzard! I’d almost forgotten about that!”

Jack glanced over at Sue and saw her frown slightly as her eyes darted back and forth trying to keep up with the banter in the bullpen. She sighed and shared a look with Levi before returning to her desk. He walked over and sat on the edge, facing her. “They’re pretty wound up about Valentine’s Day,” he summarized with an apologetic grimace.

“It’s okay.” She gave him a small smile. “I’m kind of wound up myself.”

“Nervous about testifying?” He reached over and laid his hand over hers on the desk.

“Maybe a little,” she conceded after a moment. Swiveling her chair slightly, she crossed one leg over the other and demurely smoothed the skirt of her suit. “It just feels strange.”

“The skirt? You look great!” Jack let his gaze sweep over her appreciatively before returning to meet hers, and a slow smile warmed his features. “It’s a very nice look.”

She shook her head, but smiled. “Not the skirt. I do wear dresses now and then, just not usually to work when we never know when we’ll be chasing the bad guys.” Her smile widened when he shook his finger at her. Her involvement in the chase and capture of suspects was a subject they had yet to agree on. “I guess it’s the ‘look’, as you put it. It just feels different. A little old fashioned, though I guess it’s kind of classic. I don’t know. It’s not really something I would choose for myself, but it fits what the prosecutor said I should wear and Lucy said it’s perfect.”

Jack tipped is head thoughtfully. “I never really got into courtroom theatrics and playing to the jury, but they say this prosecutor gets the convictions; and if it means getting Johnny Mendo off the streets permanently, then I’m all for it. What time do we have to be there?”

“Ten o’clock.” Glancing at her watch, Sue straightened. “We should probably leave now in case traffic is bad.”

“Traffic is always bad in DC,” Jack quipped. “Let me grab my coat.”
audiokim
WhoooHooo! A Janet story! What a wonderful start!

Kim
flip
Yay! chair.gif

A story from Janet! I don't know if I can contain my excitement!!!!! cheerleader.gif
Oreolover
What a great start! cheerleader.gif cheerleader.gif I am so excited!!! chair.gif chair.gif chair.gif I can't wait to see where you are taking this!!! exclaim.gif
kmt123
Oh joy and happiness. First I log on to find a TinaLynne story, and seconds later my eyes focus on "Justme_jp3"! How much better can a Tuesday get?

Glad Jack is going with Sue when she testifies. I already don't like Johnny Mendo, and I know nothing about him yet! But I'm sure you'll tell me why I don't like him.

Tina
Ivory
What an intriguing title, Janet. I am so excited to see a story from you. Sue in a skirt is something we saw little of on the show. I am wondering what the trial is all about.
marlo29
QUOTE(kmt123 @ Feb 5 2008, 08:53 PM) *

Glad Jack is going with Sue when she testifies. I already don't like Johnny Mendo, and I know nothing about him yet! But I'm sure you'll tell me why I don't like him.

Tina



If we're lucky, we won't hear about Johnny biggrin.gif biggrin.gif biggrin.gif just Jack and Sue alone in the traffic...
Cere Cere
QUOTE(marlo29 @ Feb 5 2008, 10:06 PM) *

QUOTE(kmt123 @ Feb 5 2008, 08:53 PM) *

Glad Jack is going with Sue when she testifies. I already don't like Johnny Mendo, and I know nothing about him yet! But I'm sure you'll tell me why I don't like him.

Tina



If we're lucky, we won't hear about Johnny biggrin.gif biggrin.gif biggrin.gif just Jack and Sue alone in the traffic...


I vote for that, nothing about this Mendo, but lots of Sue & Jack blush.gif exclaim.gif

Tere
Linny27
Whoop! Janet's writing a new story! Happy dance! yahoo.gif

And I loved how Jack commented Sue's skirt. giggle.gif I think he's looking a bit too close, though that gives me hope!
MizzN
Ack! I'm late! I'm mentally retarded... uh... exhausted today, so I'll just ditto everyone above. I'm excited!
Kav
So, Jack noticed that Sue has legs, eh? biggrin.gif That's a start for our favourite turtle man and I'm over the moon that you've entered the challenge! chair.gif You have officially made me late because I really didn't have time to read another story. I have half an hour to get dressed, dry my hair, get the dogs out and make a lunch....I'm doomed.

kav
chickenpotpie
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So, Jack noticed that Sue has legs, eh?


I was wonder what he thought they were all this time. Planks of wood? Pogo sticks?

Paula broccoli1ani.gif
bigfan
Oh my goodness, my heart is pounding. I'm soooo excited to follow this story and even more excited that I get follow you writing it. Go, JP!!!!

Let the good times roll!!!!
LittleEm
So excited for this new story!!! chair.gif And I can't wait to see where you take us smile.gif

Em
Jill
LolLolLolLol.gif Yeah, Jack....better leave early....and keep your eyes ON THE ROAD!!!

Jill
suesfan
You've really made my day, Janet!! A story from you with a very intriguing title, in a very romantic challenge - I'm in heaven!!!

I know the day has started very well for Jack - Sue in a skirt!! You've brought up a valid point too about the way we dress puts across certain messages and causes distinct impressions!!!

Joy
Frwdgranny
Hi Janet...I'm so glad you've entered the challenge. Been wanting to read one of your stories but can't even keep up with all the WIP/BC/Challenge stories let alone go back and read completed ones. Now I have the opportunity. cheerleader.gif chair.gif broccoli1ani.gif
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“Then again, you can’t beat the day after, when you can buy all the Valentine chocolates you want at half off!”
I always knew there was a smidgeon of Lucy in me! LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif

I'll have to just ditto everyone else...they've said it all...about Jack and the skirt and Mendo! But, hey, if a skirt will get Jack off square one, maybe Sue should wear one more often! slaphappy.gif slaphappy.gif

I wandered why she always wore a pant suit...now I know....in case she had to go chasing after the bad guys/gals. hehe.gif

Lynn




justme_jp3
Thank you all for your encouraging responses! I'd almost forgotten how much fun this can be! biggrin.gif This story is a bit of a departure from my norm, but I'm having fun writing it! chair.gif And now, the rest of the first scene. . .


They both stood and Jack went over to his desk while Sue settled Levi beside Lucy’s desk. Recovering from a rather deep cut on his front paw, he would be staying in the bullpen while Jack and Sue went to the courthouse. Lucy had agreed to keep an eye on him and take him for a walk at lunchtime. They expected to return by late afternoon.

“Heading out?”

Sue nodded. “It’ll take a little while to get through traffic. Thanks for watching Levi.”

“No problem,” Lucy replied, her hands mimicking her words as she spoke. “Go get the bad guy and we’ll see you later.”

See you, Sue responded as Jack walked up and gestured toward the door.

Don’t want to be late.

He helped her into her long wool coat as they waited for the elevator, shrugging into his own as the doors slid open. As the car began its descent the lights blinked and the LED display showing the floor numbers suddenly went black. The elevator seemed to plummet faster than its normal rate of descent and the weightless feeling overtook both of them, making them sway dizzily toward each other.

“Jack?” Sue’s voice mirrored the alarm in his face as he tried to reach for the emergency stop button. But before he could press it, the car shuddered violently, nearly knocking them off their feet, and then slowed, stopping with a bone-jarring thud before the doors rattled back as though on loose fittings.

Acting on instinct, Jack grabbed her hand and pulled her out of the elevator car. “Are you alright?” He ran his hands up and down her arms, reassuring himself as much as her that she was not hurt.

“I’m okay.” Sue’s voice was a little shaky, but Jack was feeling a little unsteady himself. He watched her lift a trembling hand and pass it over her eyes before looking pensively back at the closed elevator doors. Following her gaze, he frowned at the oddly ornate architectural detail surrounding them. They both then looked around the area where they stood, and Sue echoed the question that suddenly bounced through his mind. “Where are we?”

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GinaSue
OOOOOOH!!!!! hifive.gif

I love time-travel stories!! Can't wait to see what comes next!

Regina
kmt123
Ooooooh, I hoped the title wasn't leading us astray, and it wasn't! Are they still at the bureau? Just not today at the bureau? A vision of Jack in a pinstriped suit and fedora just popped into my head... Wow.

More soon?? Now?? Please??

Tina
Oreolover
Oh, Janet, this is soooo exciting! What "time" have they landed in? I can't wait to find out.
Anne
That elevator scene was eekjawdrop.gif

But now I can't wait to find out - where did they go? bounching.gif chair.gif
marlo29
eekjawdrop.gif They stopped where??? eekjawdrop.gif
Cere Cere
WOW!!

I like the stories with a little (or not so little) twist! biggrin.gif

cheerleader.gif cheerleader.gif

Tere
Frwdgranny
I'm with the others....I love time travel stories....but I hope they get back in time to still testify against Mendo!

Now, "ornate architecture"? So, they've gone back in time. It's a good thing Sue is wearing a skirt instead of pants, although it may be a little short for the period. Can't wait to see where they are. Will they get to participate in an FBI take down in that period? Oh, wait...this is a Valentine story....this is going to be so much fun! cheerleader.gif chair.gif

Lynn

Linny27
QUOTE(kmt123 @ Feb 6 2008, 10:46 PM) *

Ooooooh, I hoped the title wasn't leading us astray, and it wasn't! Are they still at the bureau? Just not today at the bureau? A vision of Jack in a pinstriped suit and fedora just popped into my head... Wow.

More soon?? Now?? Please??

Tina

Ooh... Tina, don't make me melt! I still have a little ice cream left in my bowl from my midnight snack...

Fedora... oh dear... melting.gif

Now, what time have they ended up in?
Ivory
What an elevator ride. I am anxious as everyone else to see where they have landed.
LittleEm
blink.gif hmmm.gif

Em
suesfan
Oh, Janet, right up there next to Jack and Sue, I LOVE time travel stories!! I can't wait to see where and when they are!!!

Joy
chickenpotpie
QUOTE
“Where are we?”


Yeah, where are they?

Paula
audiokim
Something tells me they aren't in Kansas anymore! Or D.C. either for that matter!

Kim
justme_jp3
“I don’t like this…”

Sue couldn’t suppress the shudder that shook her frame as she read Jack’s words. Her hand was enveloped in his, the warm solid strength her anchor. But as she followed by his side, she could also feel the tension radiating off him in ever increasing waves. They had found themselves in what appeared to be a basement office from another lifetime. From the antique telephone to the burnished mahogany desk it sat on, the heavy leather chairs and the dark paneling and moldings, it was as if they’d stepped into a scene from an old movie. The light gleaming its warm glow on the desk blotter wore a green shade, hearkening back to days long past. There were no electronics: no computer or tv, no fax machine spitting out pages in the corner. A small fireplace with an iron grate held a smoldering fire, as if waiting for the occupant to return and stir it back to life so it could chase away the chill in the room.

Stepping behind the desk, Jack gingerly fingered through a few papers. Peering around his shoulder, Sue could see that some were typed, the words and letters uneven in their spacing and color. It reminded her of the old typewriter that had sat on her father’s desk in his study, long since replaced in use by a computer, though she had loved playing with it as a child. The fading ribbons had never shared an even amount of ink, making the words appear far older than their time.

Under the stack lay a newspaper scrap, its uneven edges cut from a larger page. “Hooch?” she whispered the headline in a question, reaching down to pick it up. Lifting her gaze, she watched Jack’s eyes focus on something she couldn’t see as he searched his mind for the answer to a question that hadn’t been asked. Reluctant to interrupt his thoughts, she perused the article more closely, noting the almost unintelligible scrawl in the margin, “Sat Eve Post, February 2, 1929”. The article was nearly 80 years old and yet the paper looked as new as if it had been printed the day before! “What is this place?” she mused quietly, looking around the room once again before glancing back at Jack.

“I don’t know what it is, but it’s not the Hoover Building.” He met her gaze with a grim expression. “We need get out of here.”

They searched around the elevator once more, though neither was anxious to step back into the treacherous contraption. But there was no visible call button, nothing to make the doors reopen and grant them entry. Jack touched her arm and motioned toward the only other door in the room, a solid block of heavy wood through which lay more of the unknown. Holding Sue to the side with one hand, Jack slowly turned the knob, opening the door slowly and only enough to see through the crack. He was looking into what appeared to be a small outer office, the only desk in sight empty and the room seemingly quiet. With a reassuring glance at Sue, he took her hand and led her through the door.
audiokim
1929, huh? I have a feeling this is about to get very, very interesting!

Kim
GinaSue
OK, I keep having this ominous feeling - do the words "St. Valentine's Day Massacre" ring a bell? Wasn't the FBI involved in that one?

We need more!

Regina


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Ivory
Janet, your great descriptions made this office so real I could most feel the leather chairs and see the paneled walls.

Gina has an interesting theory.
kmt123
Outer office... 'Outer Limits'...?

I've got goosebumps! My goosebumps have goosebumps!! My goosebump's goosebumps have goosebumps!!! (What the heck kind of word is goosebumps anyway?)

Now, my 'premonition' of Jack in a fedora... it may just come true, mighten it? Goody!

Tina
Cere Cere
OMG!!

eekjawdrop.gif terror.gif

More please! batting eyelashes.gif

Tere
Frwdgranny
Uh, Oh! I googled it...Gina is right...except it happened it Chicago, IL. Could the elevator have transported them to another bldg in another city in another state? I was expecting them to stay in one spot and just go back, or forward, in time...like Rod Taylor in The Time Machine! Now, I'm beginning to shiver....what have you got in store for us Janet? nailbiter.gif hiding.gif

Lynn

eclipsse
Fantastic beginning - though not sure I like the idea of Jack & Sue being involved in the St Valentines Day Massacre!

Really looking forward to more - but I hope Lynn will let me hide behind a bit of her sofa!
Frwdgranny
QUOTE(eclipsse @ Feb 7 2008, 10:36 PM) *
.......Really looking forward to more - but I hope Lynn will let me hide behind a bit of her sofa!
Absolutely Eclipsse...the more the merrier...together, maybe we can fight off these jitters ------> terror.gif
Lynn

Linny27
EEP! terror.gif hiding.gif

Just thinking about the word "massacre" has me running for cover. Janet, this is a great story, but I think I'll be behind the hiding.gif the whole time... although I might peek out every now and then if you offer us some nice warm fuzzies... Please? batting eyelashes.gif
Kav
It's official...you made me late. I was just going to take a peek and then I spent who knows how long gawping at my screen!!!!! Fantastic! Mysterious. You keep leaving us on the verge of discovery...needing more, but you're piece mealing it out expertly. Hope my boss understands.

kav
marlo29
As I stepped out of the elevator with them, I found myself imagining Murdoch.

1929? Something special happened in 1929, except for the stock market crash???
suesfan
Janet, you've given me the shivers, but they are the delicious kind!! There's no way I'm going to miss any of this!!!

Joy
Josy
Ok, I am catching up and it WOW!! It's simply captivating!!!
Now, 1929...that sounds very interesting biggrin.gif
Can wait for more
Josy
flip
Janet, this is just wonderful! I love that Jack and Sue have traveled back in time together. The possibilities (fuzzy ones, anyway) are limitless. I just hope when they go back to the future, or present blink.gif, they'll remember everything!

Is time passing for those in the present-day bullpen? If not, won't LUCY be surprised when Jack and Sue return a couple. (They will be a couple, won't they???? unsure.gif)
LittleEm
1929? I'd be all confused.gif !!!

Em
agrp1
People! Massacres aside, time travel is nothing to be taken lightly. If Jack and Sue make one wrong move, our very existence in the present could be in jeopardy! (Sorry, I've watched a lot of Star Trek).

Can't wait for more!!! biggrin.gif

Andrea
GinaSue
blush.gif

If I might apologize for my sister's rant . . .

Actually, if it's an FBI adventure, maybe they could change the non-fraternization rule?? AND, was there a wormhole involved? (I watch a lot of Stargate SG1 - it runs in the family)

Loving this story!!!!!!!!!!!


Regina

hifive.gif
justme_jp3
Wormholes? Oy! I'm nowhere near as creative or talented as the Star Trek or Stargate writers, folks. This is my first venture into time travel, so there are likely to be a few slips. I'll just try to make sure I don't jeopardize their existence! biggrin.gif Thanks for your great replies - I'm glad you're enjoying this!


They were only halfway across the room when a tall brunette breezed through the door and stopped short. “Oh! You must be Mr. Douglas. I’m sorry I wasn’t here; I had to step away for just a minute. I hope you haven’t been waiting long?”

“Uh, no…” Jack stammered, glancing at Sue before looking back at the woman.

“No matter.” With a wave of her hand, she dismissed the subject and turned to set a sheaf of papers on her desk. “I tried to call your office, but obviously I missed you. Mr. Capone had to leave town on a last minute business trip, so we’ll need to reschedule your appointment. Is this your secretary? Do you always take her with you to meet new clients?” She peered at Sue curiously and with what might have been a touch of disappointment.

“No… I mean, yes. Ah, this is… Jean, my new assistant.” Jack glanced at the clock, thinking quickly. “I promised to take her to lunch after this meeting, and thought it might be helpful if she came along to take notes.” He trailed off with a sheepish shrug and gesture of his hand.

The brunette rolled her tongue in her cheek, eyeing both of them speculatively before giving a resigned sigh. “Uh huh. Well, I guess you’ll have a little more time for your… lunch. Mr. Capone should be back in a couple of weeks; I’ll give you a call then to reschedule.”

“Uh, thanks. That sounds… good.” Jack gave Sue a quick glance. “We’ll just be going now…”

“Mmm hmmm.”

With her dismissal, Jack and Sue beat a hasty retreat through the door through which she had entered and found a set of stairs that led upwards. On the other side of the bottom step was another door with a small square cut in it, covered securely with a flap that opened from the other side. A dim light hung on the wall, casting the stairs in heavy shadows. It was too dim for conversation, so Jack gave Sue’s hand a quick squeeze before starting up the stairs.

At the top of the stairs, they found themselves in what appeared to be a storage room. Wooden cases stacked one upon the other lined one wall while others haphazardly strewn around the floor sat open with a narrow walkway between them. Stamps on the sides camouflaged their real contents, and Jack and Sue quickly realized what had to be on the other side of the door. It was too early in the day for the crowds that would seek its smoky depths of the night, but even without the peals of laughter and music, and the alcohol that beckoned a good time for all, it was clear what this room was. They were standing in a speakeasy.

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