Great Job Mentor, Im grinning so much, im at the library, and am suppose to be studying! thanks for another great story, you never dissapoint!

Wonderful story, and I'm so glad you posted that last scene...what a great ending!

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" That’s you being my training agent.” She said mischievously. “I had just got you to the stage where I could get my own way by smiling sweetly at you.”

.... hehehe Great I have noticed that .... on the show she has him wrapped around her little finger ...

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“I would say perhaps my training agent hasn’t quite finished my training yet!” Sue replied cheekily.

hehehe Now there she knocked his socks off.... gotta love Sue's sense of humor and she sure does have one.....

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“Well I couldn’t be seen to be relinquishing on my duties now could I?” Jack said pulling the sheet up over their heads as Sue started to giggle….

hmmm wonder what duties

Mentor great-awesome-fabulous-fantastic-wonderful-excellent-magnificant-striking .......
Maybe a sequel to this now the godchild......for Bobby .....

Beautiful. Just... beautiful

Amazing job! Just wonderful!

Mentor, what an outstanding job you did. Thanks for all the time and thought you put into this. I soooo enjoyed it. Thanks also for the final post. I, like Web, love the Epilogue and you gave us one on day 25. Absolutely perfect...!!!!!

its sooooooooo sweet

Bravo!

Wonderful job - great story! I liked it very much.

Just stopped by to say thank you to everyone for all the feed back and encouragement!

Having just been tidying up the files on my pc I discovered that it was a long story Jacynthe! 30,435 words to be precise! Oops

Do I qualify for another badge yet?

Anyhow I enjoyed writing it, and hope you enjoyed reading it! I can get on with Christmas now! Phew...

Now what was that idea about Bobby? :whistle:

I LOVE that story! I had stopped reading on the 23rd so got to read both chapters at once! I simply loved the wedding, it was so beautiful... and I loved the idea of Bobby's speech, I'm sure it would have been a riot.

And what WAS the idea about Bobby? Inquiring mind wants to know. :whistle:

Oh!! That ending was just perfect. I want a movie... I want to see it somewhere outside my imagination... Then again, the movie's never better than the book, and I don't see how anything can get better than this.

Still Basking in Warm Fuzzies,
Rai

Bravo, Bravo, Encore, Encore!!!!!!!!! :bdayboy: :Bdaygirl: I absolutely positively loved it!!!!!!!! I hope there is going to be a sequal cuz this was sooooooooo GOOD!

What a lovely ending! I'm still basking in the warm fuzzies...

Beautiful story. Great work.

Merry Christmas

Ack!! I wasn't going to post until I finished - but I hit the floral displays and Myles behind the potted fern and Jack shooting balloons and I lost it. It's the last day of school -- I am swamped with book returns piled around my desk like a mini fort -- kids are belting out Christmas carols in the gym -- kids are running around in santa hats -- Kids are flying around the school giggling -- three classes are in the library watching Elf -- and I just couldn't resist sneaking a peak at your story -- so I did and just totally lost it in this scene -- I was laughing so hard I was crying and it happened to be at a quiet spot in the movie and all this kids and teachers were looking at me like I had finally snapped!!!!! Perhaps I have! Now I just snuck a peak at the last post and see that you have actually finished your story -- and here I am barely started on one and only half way through the other. Sob!!!! I'll never catch up!
But I'm loving this and taking the time to read a bit from everything I've been missing the last month. Can't wait until the holidays officially start so that I can get caught up.
kav

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Rai - A movie eh? Are you sure? Maybe if it was combined with a fanfic which actually had a plot!

I think I'm onto something here! Get all the best bits from all the fanfics!
Sell them to the Johnson brothers. ($? an idea!) There's the new stfbeye movie written on very cheap budget, the script would be so good, how could they possibly not want to make it? Movie would probably be atleast 8 hours long, cause of all the good bits! But I could bare the torture! How about you?

Now where was I? Kav I think you were suffering from end of term hysteria! Having suffered this on many occasion, you only need the slightest thing to set you off. Thank goodness you werent reading the hospital scene!

Oh where should I start, Mentor that was the most amazing fanfic I have ever read seriously. You had me in stitches and in tears. You write the characters so well, I truly dont know where you came up with some of your antics, you are truly talented. If there is a movie you should definately help with the script. I think im going to read this one again.

Okay -- so now I've finally found the time to finish your epic Christmas tale. It was fantastic!!!! So funny and goofy and touching and smoochie -- and it would be a great movie -- myabe a mini-seires??? And now I am quite envious of you because you finished your Christmas story -- and I still have 1 1/2 to go!!!!
Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Kav

I finally caught up with this story---wonderful, Mentor! I loved every minute of it---the s.p.a. DVD was hysterical, and the wedding was breathtaking--your descriptions allowed me to see it all. And that ending was perfect! I hope you continue with this storyline in another fanfic!

Mentor, YOU ROCK! thats all I can say.

Have a Happy Christmas Everyone.

Relatives about to descend so won't be able to get on the pc over the holiday!


I wonder if this break will cure my addiction!


Just the thought of no fanfics is making me depressed!


Will catch with you all soon!

Have a good one!


Mentor

Mentor this was absolutely wonderful. I finally got to finish this story and have a big happy smile on my face! I can't even begin to get into details as there are so many things that were so moving. The wedding was done so well, so emotional and I felt like I was right there. Loved Levi.

Dec 25th waking up and sharing was so special and you did a great job.

Thanks again for such a great Christmas story and I look forward to reading more of your works.

Now, I just have to squeeze in some time to read all the rest of the stories I started and some I haven't gotten to yet. I can't wait!

You know how you feel when watching the movie Sleepless in Seattle and its the scene where Meg Ryan and Tom Hanks finally find each other and hold hands for the first time. Its a wonderful feeling that sends a tingle over your skin and a warmth from your toes clear to your head. That's how I feel right now.

Thank you Mentor for such a wonderful story.

That was beautiful...just finished the story...how wonderful it was..I was grinning and crying like an idiot...well done!!!

it was so sweet.
I felt sorry for the SPA dvd and the guys having to wear their gun the whole time at the spa.
Loved the ending. I wonder who sue's new training agent would be bobby or myles?

so sweet!
loved all the humor and banter as well as romance
cute myles/tara and maybe bobby/lucy.