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GinaSue
QUOTE(chickenpotpie @ Apr 26 2008, 11:43 AM) *
Now, if the girls were filthy after that terrible ordeal, it would be hard to believe that Sue come out a tad bitter dirtier than when she entered. Maybe she should take a shower.....with Jack.... "later."

I'm just sayin'.

Paula shrug.gif

Um . . . Tina . . . could we take a vote, here? blush.gif (Just remember, it's partially YOUR FAULT I'm addicted . . . )
marlo29
Kristie... I don't think you need to worry about Chet biggrin.gif
Kav
Perfect closure, Tina. Kristie is found -- and safe in Sue's arms until Chet can take over. Brilliant.

Catch your later later later. batting eyelashes.gif

kav
audiokim
QUOTE(GinaSue @ Apr 26 2008, 12:32 PM) *

QUOTE(kmt123 @ Apr 26 2008, 11:25 AM) *
Jack’s heart swelled with pride and he wondered if it was possible to be any more in love than he was at that moment. Angels came in many forms, he supposed, and his came in the form of a blonde beauty who couldn’t hear a word uttered by the people she championed, but who could listen more deeply than anyone he’d ever known.

girl_sigh.gif I got all teary when I read that. Is it weird that I feel proud of Sue, too? blush.gif

Now . . . about that "later" . . . l_turn.gif


I couldn't agree more!

Kim
Cere Cere
Don't worry Kristie!!! A baby is a blessing exclaim.gif

I like the last paragraph batting eyelashes.gif biggrin.gif

Tere
sue&jacktlf
Tina, I hear you about the healthcare system in this country. Luckily for my dad since he was working when he had his accident it is covered under workman's comp, because the bill for his 3 day hospital stay was outrageous! That doesn't include the follow up visit to the drs and the need for a visit to the orthopedic dr because his knee is still swelling, now they think they may need to do surgery, but luckily it's an outpatient one. Anyway, if he hadn't been at work and had the accident Medicare does not cover accidents! The insurance for older people is lousy and to not even cover accidents - it's just terrible. Hope your dad gets to go to the rehab center and you and your mom can get some rest. I hope he's up and feeling better soon.

P.S. Is it later yet? blush.gif
kmt123
Thanks for all the well wishes - my dad has been admitted for the required time so that medicare will help pay for a rest home (that's not the correct name for them anymore, but my brain won't remember the right term!) once he's released. Now we just have to see if there's a room available. There's usually a waiting list...

sue&jacktlf - good luck to your dad! It frustrating isn't it? I hope everything turns out OK and he has a swift recovery. With my father, who's 80, it's a matter of keeping him mobile for as long as possible. But his age combined with his "undiagnosed condition" makes that a bit of a losing battle.

Now. No more hospital talk. We come hear for fantasy and by gosh, that's what I aim to deliver. Everybody got their seats in the upright position and your food tray locked? 'CAUSE IT'S LATER!!!

(Oh, and hang on to those showery thoughts and wishes. My insider information tells me that the next post is what your waiting for.)


Chapter Twenty-Eight
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


The lights of DC lay spread out before them. It had been exactly ten hours and twenty-seven minutes since they had taken off that morning and now here they were, circling the airport waiting for permission to land. The puddle-jumper hopped about over the air currents, shifting first to the right and then back to the left, leaving Sue clinching her eyes closed and holding onto Jack’s arm for dear life.

If his stomach wasn’t doing flip-flops of it’s own, he would have enjoyed her need of him much more, but even in his woozy state, it was endearing. Only Levi seemed unfazed by the aeronautic acrobatics of the little plane. He lay at Sue’s feet and slumbered away, oblivious to everything.

When they finally rolled to a stop, the annoyingly chipper pilot flipped off dozens of switches, released the latch holding the door shut and kicked the folding steps into place. “Thanks for flying with us folks! No extra charge for the roller coaster ride!”

Jack sneered at the man and put a shaky foot on the top step, feeling a bit better when the fresh spring air outside the plane dispelled the stale cabin air they’d been breathing for the last hour and a half. He helped Sue down and waited while Captain Happy handed their suitcases out to them.

“I guess we could have left these here.” Sue pointed to the cases.

“Well, there was no way to know things would move so quick. I mean, I knew I was good, but…”

“Down boy. We still have to go through security and your head isn’t going to fit through the metal detector if it gets any bigger.”

“Wait a minute. You said yourself that you weren’t mad at me. I believe there was even a kiss promised. A promise on which, by the way, you haven’t made good...yet.”

She pointed to the security station just ahead. “Well then, let’s squeeze that head through this thing and see if we can’t remedy that.”

~~o~~


Twin bolts of electricity shot through him as her hands found their way past the buttons of his shirt and her fingernails scored a path around his ribcage. She nuzzled his neck and nipped at his ears, sending chills chasing along after the electronic effects of her fingernails.

They’d rushed through security, causing at least one official to eye them suspiciously until Jack flashed his badge and murmured something about official FBI business. It took too long to locate his car, navigate the parking garage and scramble together enough cash to pay the parking fee. And for a Tuesday night, the roads were extremely busy… taking almost a half hour longer than it should to reach his apartment. He’d grabbed her wrist the second the door shut after them, and tugged her to the sofa, collapsing on it and pulling her down on top of him.

Grinning, she’d pushed upright again and began a slow, painstaking assault on his senses, starting with his eyesight. The mere sight of her gazing at him lovingly and moistening her lips in anticipation had him reaching for her. She avoided him though, by capturing his hands and enfolding them between hers, holding them tight against her heart for a moment.

His sense of smell was the next to give in to her hypnotic spell as she removed the clip holding her hair and let it spill over her shoulders, releasing a soft floral scent that teased his nostrils and had him breathing deep to experience it more.

Then she trailed a finger from his forehead, over his temple and onto his cheek, ending at the corner of his mouth. He turned his head, catching the tip between his teeth and moaning as ‘taste’ became the third sense to fall prey. A salty, unique taste that he found completely delicious.

“J-a-a-a-a-a-c-k…” her soft voice came to him, more sultry than any vixen in any movie he’d ever seen; engaging his hearing in this dance that threatened to be his undoing. She bent lower, holding her face just an inch or so above his; teasing him and causing him to shudder.

Then at last she had pity on him and the last of his senses… touch… was allowed to add it’s distinctive and extremely gratifying talents to this game she played. She kissed him. Pliant and warm, her lips moved over his; taking command when always before she’d allowed him to be the one to take charge. Her tongue darted out to moisten his upper lip, seeking entrance and running over his teeth slowly when it found it’s way. His head came up, following the need in him to be closer, and he pulled his hands free so that he could run them up her arms and then pull her down until every muscle could feel the same joy as his lips.

Sue broke the kiss and lay there stroking the hair at his temples, loving the play of light across his features. He smiled up a her, wondering what she was thinking and knew in that moment that he would always want to know what she was thinking. For the rest of his life, this woman could keep him guessing. For the rest of his life, this woman could be strong enough to stand beside him and take on the injustices of the world. For the rest of his life, this woman could be his friend, partner…. lover. For the rest of his life.

“Sue, let’s get married.”

She smiled and nodded, but her real answer was in her kiss.

**********
marlo29
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“Sue, let’s get married.”



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audiokim
Wow! Puddles can type! I'm proof. Is that wedding bells I hear pealing in the near distance?

Kim
suesfan
Well, Tina, I caught up again. First of all, I'm sorry to hear about your father. You and your family are in my thoughts and prayers.

I just love when Jack plays cards not necessarily dealt him and wins anyway!! And, leave it to Sue to let him know that she knows exactly what he's doing!! Larry is toast and I'm glad!!!

I'm also glad they have found some of the girls, especially Kristie!! I know Chet is going to be very happy to have her back with him!! She has nothing to worry about at all!!!

I managed to show up in time to have "later" now, instead of later!! Oh, Tina, how you do write Jack and Sue together..........you leave me in a puddle every time!!! **sigh**

Joy
Kav
Oh please let it be like now.... caveman.gif caveman.gif caveman.gif caveman.gif caveman.gif Because Tina promised us a post-71242-1112188113.gif next post. Unless it's an anticipatory shower scene? smiley_181.gif Or a snoozer_11.gif shower scene. I love the way you right the romance, tina -- I feel like I shouldn't be there eavesdropping on them. blush.gif But I'm going to anyway. girl_sigh.gif

kav
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I was coming here to beg for it to be "later" but now I'm begging for it to be "now."

I know - I'm fickle! hehe.gif

I love that your muse has been so good to you. This is a wonderful story - and I hate to see it end - even if it ends with a shower!
chickenpotpie
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(That's puddlespeak for "Is the shower going to be too much 'laterer'?")

Paula
Cere Cere
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hehe.gif Tere
nanajo
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Red Shores Lady
Excellent! Can't wait to for the rest...which I know will come soon since this is the last day of the contest!!! batting eyelashes.gif

Bless deadlines!!! biggrin.gif

- RSL write.gif
Linny27
QUOTE(marlo29 @ Apr 26 2008, 08:29 PM) *

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“Sue, let’s get married.”



Like in NOW????? caveman.gif caveman.gif caveman.gif

Oh, I hope, I hope, I hope!

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Lindsy
GinaSue
QUOTE(kmt123 @ Apr 26 2008, 06:23 PM) *
They’d rushed through security, causing at least one official to eye them suspiciously until Jack flashed his badge and murmured something about official FBI business. It took too long to locate his car, navigate the parking garage and scramble together enough cash to pay the parking fee. And for a Tuesday night, the roads were extremely busy… taking almost a half hour longer than it should to reach his apartment. He’d grabbed her wrist the second the door shut after them, and tugged her to the sofa, collapsing on it and pulling her down on top of him.

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Yeah, I loved the END of the post where he said "Sue, let's get married," but this part said it all . . . LOVED Jack flashing his badge to expedite things . . . Shouldn't everyone have some kind of badge to flash when things are . . . er . . . um . . . well . . . need to be expedited? blush.gif

So today's the day!! Will we get the end? Really? I know this is perverse, but I'm almost sorry to see the stories end this time!!!

But I'll get over it . . . ! broccoli1ani.gif
kmt123
Thank you, thank you, thank you for reading, commenting, and sticking with me when life took some funky turns! I love you guys!

NOW...

Chapter Twenty-Nine
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With raindrops still clinging to the filmy softness and glistening in the light, Sue removed her short veil, laying it on Jack’s bed. Short. Like everything else to do with their engagement and wedding.

Neither of them could bear the thought of a long, drawn out engagement; not after waiting four years to get to this point. A week was all either was willing to give up for the planning process. After all, some lengthy ceremony with dozens of bridesmaids and groomsmen wasn’t their idea of the perfect union. Instead, Bobby stood beside Jack; both dressed in black suits with crisp white shirts, dark gray ties and a white boutonniere of a single dogwood bloom with a bit of ivy as accent.

They matched Sue bouquet, the dogwood sent to her courtesy of Josh Wilham, along with his sincere apologies that he wouldn’t be able to attend the wedding. Lucy had spotted the dress she wore in a boutique just a block from the Hoover building. It was a simple, tea length creation of creamy white silk that fitted her curves snugly before flaring away at the hips and ending in an elegant swirl of white on white embroidery along the hem. The veil she’d just removed was trimmed in a white satin band at the edges and reminded her of the one from a long ago photo of her grandmother. Lucy was her only attendant, lovely in a dove gray silk dress and carrying a smaller version of Sue’s bouquet.

Their parents flew in the evening before, and they had had dinner with them at one of their favorite restaurants. Their fathers got on famously, and by the end of the meal, their mothers were beginning to find things in common as well, mostly comparing stories of their children growing up.

All in all, the day went as planned. Even the weather cooperated long enough to have the ceremony in the small courtyard at her church, the sun lasting through the proceedings and just disappearing behind a cloud as they made their way into the fellowship hall for a short reception. The first raindrops fell as everyone raised their glasses in a toast to the couple.

Jack came out of the bathroom and saw her standing there, her forefinger just touching the veil laying on the bed in front of her. He crossed the room and slipped his hands around her waist and kissed her shoulder, his lips lingering before he turned her toward him. “You looked far away just now.”

She smiled softly. “Just catching my breath. It’s been a busy week.”

“I hate to rush you, but we need to get to the airport.”

“I just need to change.” She picked up the neatly folded clothes she’d left there yesterday and closed the bathroom door behind her; they might be married, but she wasn’t used to changing in front of a man… even Jack. Besides, the real honeymoon wouldn’t begin for another… she looked at her watch with a sigh… four or five hours.

~~o~~


Jim and Mary Beth Shelburne’s four bedroom, two story house sat on a large lot with aging playground equipment rusting away in the back yard. Their two children were grown; James Jr. graduating from college next month and moving to Louisville for his first job. Their daughter was married and living in Florida with her husband, and would soon be giving them their first grandchild. Roscoe, the family Labrador, was the only one left at home, keeping Mary Beth company during the long days now that she was retired and encouraging her and Jim to take long walks together in the evening. He was laying on the floor beside Jim’s chair now; snoozing more and more of his days away the older he grew. When he suddenly raised his head from the floor and looked toward the front door, Jim knew the bell was about to ring; Roscoe was a very reliable alarm system despite his age.

The chime came a few seconds later and Mary Beth, on her way into the den to start reading the next chapter of her current romantic novel, switched directions and headed toward the door. “I guess it’s probably our tenants…” she called to her husband with a chuckle, “…but they’re a little early.”

The handsome young man who stood on the doorstep when she pulled open the door smiled and Mary Beth felt her stomach do a little flip. My goodness, she thought, the blonde by his side probably hadn’t stood a chance.

“Mrs. Shelburne? I’m Jack Hudson, and this is my… wife…Sue.”

Mary Beth grinned at the way he hesitated and smiled down at the blonde when he said the word ‘wife’. She didn’t have a lot of experience with newlyweds; her former career as a third grade school teacher had brought her into contact with a much younger crowd, but she couldn’t imagine a lovelier couple, or one more obviously in love, than the one standing just outside her front door.

“Please, call me Mary Beth. Come in, come in… get out of the rain.”

“Thank you. But we don’t want to disturb you…” Sue protested.

Mary Beth pushed the storm door open and ushered them inside. “Nonsense, I bet you could stand a good cup of coffee after your trip. Come on in the den; Jim’s in there.”

“Really, Mrs. Shelburne… Mary Beth, we can’t stay long. I want to get there before dark.” Jack insisted.

She noticed the way the way Sue kept a firm grip on Jack’s hand, and the anxious look on his face. ‘Newlyweds Mary Beth, remember how you felt on your honeymoon?’, she reminded herself.

“Of course you do. Let me get Jim, he’s got everything all ready for you.”

Ten minutes later, the couple was on their way again after profuse thanks and a promise to call if they needed anything.

~~o~~


Jack drove the small pick-up they’d rented down the gravel drive indicated on Jim’s map and shut off the engine as he brought to a stop at the dead end. He gave Sue a quick kiss and climbed out, rounding the nose of the truck to open her door and take the shopping bag full of linens, wash clothes, towels and various other items that Mary Beth had insisted were theirs to use, from her lap. Then he offered his free hand to help her from the truck and stood there grinning like an idiot once she was out and offering to take the bag from him.

“Why are you grinning?” Sue asked, smiling at the goofy look on his face.

“We’re alone. For the first time all day, we’re totally alone.”

“We’ve been driving, alone, for over an hour.”

“True, but I couldn’t do anything about it while I was driving.” He sat the shopping bag on the ground and advanced on her, backing her up against the side of the truck. Sue could feel one hand on her waist, gradually sliding down until it rested on her hip. The other cupped her chin and tilted her face to the perfect angle for a lingering kiss, promising a night like she’d never before experienced.

She drew a shaky breath and tried to remember what she wanted to say when the kiss ended, only succeeding in muttering something unintelligible. Jack answered by running the tip of his tongue around the shell of her ear, taking huge delight in the way she was thrown by their kiss.

Shivering slightly, she pushed him back and gripped his shirt, a look of slight desperation in her eyes. “Please, Jack, let’s go. Please?”

His smiled disappeared, replaced by a realization that time for teasing was at last at an end. Handing her the bag, and another out of the bed of the truck, he gathered the rest of their supplies under his arms and indicated the trial winding away through the woods with a tilt of his head. Sue walked ahead of him while he appreciated the view from directly behind her; up and down hills and around a large pond, finally coming along side a small creek. After a dozen or so yards, the path split away from the creek again and meandered back through the woods, at last bringing them back to the welcome sight of a small clearing and the tiny cabin tucked under the trees.

~~o~~


The old oil lamp had been joined by two more placed around the room, and they each burned merrily within minutes of their arrival, lighting the cabin with a warm glow. It was only a little after eight in the evening, but the shadow of the surrounding hills and the now fully leaved trees blocked the waning sun from the cabin and the interior needed the illumination they provided. While Jack went back outside to tend to the generator Jim had left for them, Sue had removed the linens and towels from the shopping bag and was almost finished putting sheets on the small bed. Straightening the quilt, she stood back with her hands on her hips, admiring her work when Jack spun her around.

“Beautiful job, but they’re not gonna’ stay neat for long you know.” He gave her a knowing grin and watched as the blush crept up her cheeks. She wanted to be witty; to show him that she wasn’t nervous, even though it would be a lie. But words failed her, so she began to unfasten his top shirt button, and then the next, placing a kiss in the dip at his collarbone when the fabric parted. His breathing quickened and his mouth opened as though he couldn’t quite get enough air. Encouraged by his response, she repeated her actions on each and every button, ending with a kiss on his stomach, just above his navel.

He pulled her up and kissed her hard, telling her in no uncertain terms that she had his full attention and that it was time for him to take part in the seduction she’d started. Walking her backwards toward the bed, he caught her when her legs came in contact with it and she began to fall. He lowered her slowly and then knelt in front of her, running a hand behind her neck to pull her forward for another kiss.

She pulled at his shirt sleeves, trying to get him to join her on the bed, but he broke the kiss and shook his head slowly. “No, it’s my turn now.”

She had no buttons to unfasten, but her pale blue T-shirt was inched up bit by bit, exposing more and more quivering skin for his inspection. He pushed her upper body sideways so that her head lay on the pillow she’d just encased in a crisp white pillowslip. His mouth hovered above her bare stomach, his breath warming each stop he made to kiss and tease the skin. Burying her fingers in his hair, she couldn’t make up her mind whether to hold him closer or pull him up. He made deciding a moot point by suddenly standing and pulling her legs onto the mattress. Sitting beside her, he returned to the hem of her shirt, pushing it up until she raised her arms over her head and he slipped it off, tossing it over his head to land in the middle of the floor. She followed his lead and pushed his shirt off one shoulder and then the other, letting him pull his hands free and then send it flying through the air to join her blouse. Bit by bit the heap of clothes grew until only a trio of undergarments remained to separate them. Jack had long since joined her in the bed, stretched out and in the process of giving every a thorough visual inspection to each and every spot where his body touched hers. When he finished, he trailed a finger up her stomach and between her breasts, pausing to finger the tiny satin bow that nestled there, chuckling to himself when he realized he was jealous of the embellishment because it was privileged enough to spend it‘s days in such a location. He forced himself to continue his journey up to her chin… where Sue made a face and wrinkled her nose.

Jack’s brows rose and he rolled his eyes, but smiled when he spoke. “Gee thanks. That’s exactly the reaction I was going for.”

She kissed him to sooth his damaged ego and shook her head. “No, your hands smell like gasoline, that’s all.”

“Oh. I filled the generator so we’d have some hot water. It should be heated by now, I’ll go wash my hands… be right back.” He hopped out of bed and pulled on his jeans and was out the door in a flash, leaving cool air in his wake.

He stepped on a rock in his haste and hopped on one foot to the shower enclosure. Opening the door, he spied the soap on it’s little shelf and crossed the small space to retrieve it. When he turned to leave, he froze, the soap bottle clutched tightly against his chest and the air in his lungs refusing to move either in or out. She leaned against the post at the open edge of the door, wearing nothing, so far as he could tell, but his shirt she had helped him remove only moments before. He had a fleeting thought that he should give every single shirt he owned to her, since they looked infinitely better on her than they did him.

When she took a step toward him, even that thought left his head and the soap bottle slipped from his nerveless fingers, bouncing on the wooden platform. She stooped to pick it up, and that’s when his suspicions that the shirt was the only garment she wore were confirmed as he glimpsed a delicious curve. She straightened and stepped close, reaching for his hands. She pumped a large dollop of pearly white soap in one palm and placed the bottle back on it’s shelf. Holding his hand, palm up, she swirled a forefinger in the soap, spreading it in a wider circle, and then moved to his chest. Dipping up a finger full of the slippery liquid, she drew a wavy line from his collarbone to his navel.

Jack didn’t move. Only his eyes followed her movements, widening when her finger trailed down his chest. When she reached his navel his composure snapped and he fisted the extra fabric of his shirt hanging loosely about her and pulled until she was in his arms. His kiss was impatient and hot, eliciting the response of which he knew she was capable. Her arms came up and her fingers raked through his hair, drawing his head down. The perfect white teeth he often found himself mesmerized by as he watched her soft words, now bit almost painfully into his bottom lip, pulling and wanting more. When he reached behind her and under the shirt tail to cup her bottom, his palm slid against the smooth skin and he grinned into the kiss. The soap.

Pivoting slightly, he reached for the knob to his right and tightened his arm around her as she jumped when the spray burst to life, wetting her hair and back. He eyes flew open and she gasped against his mouth.

“Jack! You….”

“Payback for last time.”

“I thought you paid me back then.”

“Just a down payment. Now you get the full installment.”

“Installment? That would indicate there are more payments to come.”

“Many more sweetheart. And I expect the interest to be very high. I may have to make payments for the rest of my life.”

He backed her under the spray and made an amendment to his previous thoughts of giving her all his shirts. Make that wet shirts. The fabric clung to her body, highlighting every single curve. Her hands moved once again to cover herself, but this time he caught them and shook his head. He pushed them to her sides and then unfastened the two or three buttons that remained in their holes. The fabric clung to her as he pushed it off one shoulder and then the other, but where she had allowed him to pull his own hands free earlier, he wasn’t willing to wait and performed the task for her, urging the garment down to lay in a wet heap at their feet. She was even more beautiful than his wayward imaginings over the last few days had conjured up. Creamy, pink skin begged for his touch and he wasn’t about to deny it what it wanted. He ran his hand around her waist as a prelude.

Sue swayed toward him, hungry for his kiss and trembled when his hand moved up to caress areas that had ached for his touch for all her adult life without ever really realizing it. She arched her body instinctively and moaned his name. He cradled her and kissed her, moving his lips over hers and shaking with desire.

The cold of the snap on his jeans brought Sue out of her haze long enough to realize that she was woefully behind on her duties as a new wife. She hooked a forefinger in one belt looped and tugged, bringing his upper legs against hers and giving him a coy smile when her broke the kiss and opened his eyes. The button flicked open easily and the zipper slid down with her encouragement. Pushing impatiently, she managed to only get the wet jeans down to his knees where they bunched and refused to go further. Exasperated, she set her mouth and ordered him to SIT.

“Yes ma’am.” He grinned and did her bidding.

Once he was on his bottom on the wood slat platform, she grabbed each foot in turn and pulled the blue denim away completely, kicking them and the shirt to the corner of the stall. He was standing before she turned back around and was reaching for her, but she frowned and pointed to his soaking wet boxers. Backing away slightly, he raised his hands to clasp the fingers together behind his head, daring her.

She dared. She circled him closely, inching the garment down as her finger ran around the inside of the waistband. When she stood in front of him again, the silky blue boxers were at his feet and she was in his arms. Even the water found difficulty edging it’s way between them from that point. Slow caresses became urgent and the intimacy God intended for man and wife was frantically explored, bringing them both to the edge of exhaustion by the time they turned off the spray of water and he carried his squeaky clean wife back to their marriage bed.

They gave way to the exhaustion and slept in each other’s arms for a time, but not long. As the sun set and the oil lamps lit their bodies in an amber glow, he reached for her again, and again.

~~o~~

“You think the Shelburne’s ever thought their little retirement get-a-way cabin would ever be used as a honeymoon destination?” Sue murmured lazily, her head resting on his stomach. She raised it to see his reply when she felt his laughter.

“I kinda’ doubt it. But I’m glad they were agreeable to us staying here.”

“Maybe we can make them an offer. They can come to DC and stay in our house and we can come here for a week or so each year.”

“We’ve gotta’ get a house first.”

“Details.”

“Maybe I can just build a replica of this one. Plant a few cherry trees in the front yard… I’m sure any neighborhood in the city would be proud to have it as part of the community.”

“No room for a nursery.”

He rolled to his side and she sat facing him, her side propped against his stomach. “Wow, that was fast. Like I said last week, I knew I was good, but…”

Reaching around and swatting his bare bottom, she wagged a finger at him. “You’re so bad…”

“And you love me for it.”

“Yes. Yes I do.”

Pinging sounds on the tin roof brought his face up, looking heavenward. “It’s raining again, and it’s getting cooler in here.”

“What’s that Elvis song? Bobby sang it to Tara one day… something about cold Kentucky Rain…”

“Yeah, but that’s about some guy that’s lost his girl. I’ve found mine.” He raised up to kiss her again, and she wiggled around to stretch out against his length and met him kiss for kiss.

“Care to prove it to me again?”

“Yes ma’am, I think I would…”

The oil lamps kept a glowing vigil as he loved his wife once more in the small quilt covered bed, in the tiny cabin in the wilderness, under the cold Kentucky Rain.

Fin.
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AWESOME!!!!!


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marlo29
Love you, too, Tina !

And love the honeymoon ! blush.gif blush.gif blush.gif blush.gif

Great story... Thank You!!!
Anne
Absolutely delightful. Such wedding bliss, or would that be honeymoon bliss? hehe.gif

I'm in a bit of a puddle at the moment but I have to tell you how much I loved this story Tina. Thank you! l_turn.gif girl_sigh.gif
GinaSue
As much as I love to talk - and I DO love to talk - nothing I can say could do justice to your story. All I can say is "BRAVO," and . . .

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Thank you for a wonderful time in Kentucky!
audiokim
Wonderful!

Kim
chickenpotpie
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“Yeah, but that’s about some guy that’s lost his girl. I’ve found mine.”


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This whole story was fabulous!!! I'm sad to see it end. crying.gif

Paula
Kav
Every little detail of that post was perfect. Just the right amount of spice and passion laced with that forever kind of love that only exsists between Jack and Sue (at last!) This is one of the most satisfying stories I've read in a long time. I think I'm going to have to read it all in one go -- instead of piecemeal and just savor it.

kav
nanajo
Wonderful story! perfect10.gif Loved your last post! girl_sigh.gif

Sorry to see it end. Like Kay, I think I'll go back and read it again without pause.

Donna
sue&jacktlf
Tina, I was glad to hear your dad was admitted so Medicare would cover his continuing care. I hope he was able to get in. My dad has his MRI tomorrow so hopefully if he needs surgery they will be able to get it done soon so he can recover soon.

As for the story blush.gif broccoli1ani.gif chair.gif yahoo.gif yahoo.gif You rock! That was so awesome. I want a cabin in the woods and a Jack to wash my back, etc!
suesfan
Tina, I didn't know puddles can have goosebumps, but I'm living proof!!!

I agree, I will be back again and again to read this wonderful story!! The case was amazing, intricate and on the edge of your seat fantastic!! The twists and turns kept me coming back again and again to see what new mysteries would be uncovered!!!

Jack and Sue..........amazing!! Your last post was perfection itself!! I could feel the love, anticipation, excitement and finally fulfillment of dreams!!!

Tina, I love you too, and your talent is incredible!! I hated to see this end, but I'm praying for another soon!!!

Thanks for sharing!!!

Joy
Cere Cere
I don't know what to say Tina, only: THANKS FOR SHARE THIS WONDERFUL STORY!!! blowkiss.gif

Tere
LittleEm
Loved it Tina!!!!!! clapping.gif You are brilliant!

Em
duckfan
Somehow I guessed they would return to that cabinet to finish what started there! Great story.
Josy
Wow Tina...yet again, you blown me away with your talent!
What a wonderful story!
Glad the girls will be ok and Jack and Sue...well...what can I say?? I could only blush.gif
Thanks for this gem
Josy
kmt123
Thanks Everyone! For all your kind replies... this was indeed a challenge for me - I've never written anything with a deadline on it and really didn't know whether I had it in me. Yes, I've entered a challenge in the past, but I had it all written before I started posting! But you all make it so much fun to live on the edge! It's always a blast to see who's two steps ahead of me (don't be too proud if you were... two steps ahead of a chimpanzee with a keyboard isn't saying much! LolLolLolLol.gif ). Pat yourselves on your collective back for being such a great bunch of nuts - and I mean that in the nicest possible way!

Thanks again for reading!!
GinaSue
Tina, I just re-read your story from beginning to end in one sitting today. I fell in love with it all over again, and caught things that I probably missed the first time, trying to keep up with so many stories at once. You're a great writer - living on the edge must agree with you!!
Thanks again for a great story, a great ride, and a great tour of YOUR part of Kentucky!!
Looking forward to your NEXT story!!
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Linny27
QUOTE(kmt123 @ Apr 28 2008, 08:11 PM) *

(two steps ahead of a chimpanzee with a keyboard isn't saying much! LolLolLolLol.gif ).

Yes, but sometimes that chimpanzee can end up writing Shakespeare! And though this might not have been one of his great works, it's definately up there in his league!

It's nice to know that when you face a challenge, you really face it and deliver such an excellent story!

Regina said it best: BRAVO!!!!

Lindsy
Frwdgranny
Well Tina, I'm finally back. Have spent this evening starting your story over b/c I wanted the pleasure of reading this all in one sitting...Oh, you thought it was b/c I needed to refresh myself on what happened up to this point? No...winking.gif

How could I forget I left home with Jack just having extricated him and Sue out of their burning vehicle seconds before the fuel tank exploded, with Sue still unconscious? Actually, I did read the next post while in KS....but didn't have time to comment. I left off with someone following J/S. The bearded man? terror.gif

Now, its late and my pest guy is coming early in the morning to spray for those nasty roaches (quarterly spraying) so I can't stay up too much longer. But I'm going to read a couple more posts just so I can be a little over halfway thru the story and on the downhill side.

Ch 12-P13-182 - Well, you have Sue wet and gallant Jack giving her his shirt, which means he is shirtless, or does he have on a white T-shirt...you know, the sexy kind he always wears? blush.gif

I was in hopes it was Bobby running down the hillside trying to find Jack and Sue.

Ch 13-P13-195 - Oh, wow! I'm wide awake now...this Bob said the bearded man left...so he evidently didn't find Jack and Sue? At least I'm going to be positive here and think that, b/c I know you would never let the villian kill our Jack and Sue. So....there is hope! Besides, you didn't post a major character death warning! laugh.gif

My heart is heavy for Bobby and Tara. But, they will find out eventually that Jack and Sue got away, when they don't find their bodies in the burned out vehicle. batting eyelashes.gif

But that doesn't lessen their anguish at the moment. icon1366.gif

Oh, we don't have to wait...Bobby went down...good on ya Crash! And he found the unfastened seat belts. They're alive!!!!!!

Oh, Tina, so many emotions in that post. Now, we just have to worry about exposure in the cold and other elements. I hope you don't have any bears or wolves or any other creatures there in KY who might want to prey on unsuspecting FBI agent and analyst. I'm going offtobed.gif
now and dream of Jack and Sue finding a cabin and settling in for the rest of the night, that is settling in each other's arms in order to keep warm. girl_sigh.gif

Lynn

Frwdgranny
Ch14-P14-204 -
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(kmt123 @ Apr 10 2008, 10:39 PM) IPB ImageThe tune from Deliverance plucked it’s way through his brain and he shivered. “Cut it out Sue.”
Well, I never saw the movie Deliverance, but I'm still shivering along with Sue. But the prospect of them cuddling for what remains of the night...well, that has me melting.gif
As long as there is no one in the cabin. But I don't think so, since the wood latch was down on the outside. Of course, there could be one on the inside hinged to the outside....Oh, and yes, they need to talk too... blush.gif
Ch15-1-P14-215 - I have to agree with Donna...I felt like I was right there with them on the bed. I could feel the quilts, and of course Jack's back and shoulder. Oh, I bet I know whose cabin this is too...is it Newman's? And the quilts are ones made by his wife, Emily? You know, its strange...I never thought about whose cabin in might be until I read Joy's comment where she said she thought she knew. As soon as I read that, Newman just popped into my mind. Ch15-2-P15-229 -
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He captured her lips with his own and kissed her… hard.
Oh mama...Jack can wake me from a dream like that anytime! faint.gif
I can feel Bobby's frustration. Wow! Sue was the first one to admit her feelings. I guess desperate times = desperate measures! kissing.gif post-71242-1112188113.gif kissing.gif ily.gif melting.gif fanning.gif faint.gif Thank you...Thank you...Thank you... Those desperate measures I can take and take and take and take!!!!! Can I just stay here? I don't want to go on....

Ch16-P17-243 -
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The intimacy they shared might be new, but they had loved each other and been there for each other for so long, it was as if this was a homecoming rather than a new found love.
Oh Tina, that was such a beautiful line, I'm crying.

Oh my goodness, the helicopter was a wake-up call! Will it come back? The helicopter I mean! And the beautiful moment too!

Oh, btw, what about Jack's pants? They got all wet too when they were in the shower. And they couldn't have dried off completely with him wearing them. So now, he's getting the quilt on the bed all wet!!!!

Gotta take a break...be back later!

Lynn


Frwdgranny
I'm back after 4 hrs sleep...see what your romantic interlude did to me...I was so tired I went to bed and had very sweet dreams!

Ch17-P18-258 - Now, well, I knew the fun had to end. Its down to business!

Ch18-P18-269 - I think there is going to be a lot of ducking the head and flaming cheeks on Sue's part. I wonder how long its going to take Bobby and Tara to notice. Awww, nice fuzzies...and as always, Jack is attentive to Sue's thoughts....oh, to have a man who knows what you're thinking...to have a Jack jack.gif

Now slawburgers don't sound in the least appealing to me, unless you leave off the slaw... I don't like cole slaw... or mustard or ketchup or, especially mayo/dressing. Just give me the plain ole cheeseburger with LOTS of dill pickles, tomatoes and lettuce, hold the sauce! laugh.gif

Ch19-P18-277 - I loved your description of the Kentucky hills and horse farms. Bucolic gives me a nice warm feeling. And I love to travel and see the beautiful natural scenery of the land. We traveled thru KY from Chicago to FL on vacation in 1972, but I don't remember what towns we went thru, only the beautiful rolling hills. At heart I'm just a wanna-be-wanderer. I like Agent Mary Green. Almost as tall as Bobby eh? Hmmm, I wonder, have we been introduced to a love interest for Myles? I should have known we're off to the races! Gee, Tina, Regina and Babs all live in KY? Do you have high humidity there? If not, I'm moving! I hate this heat and humidity of SE TX. Was 92 today and like a blast furnace. And its only May! laugh.gif

Ch20-P20-289 -
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“Remind me to wake them up in the middle of the night once we’ve got ‘em in custody.” Jack grumbled as he climbed into the truck.
I loved this line, Tina. Maybe b/c it is the middle of the night as I read. laugh.gif

Oh, now I know what Joy was referring to when she commented she didn't like where this might be headed...or something like that. Bobby and his gambling problem. ***grumbling***should have picked up on that***well, its the middle of the night, what do you expect****
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Forgetting where he was, and who might be watching, he kissed her.
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P20-292 - The pictures are beautiful, Tina. Thank you for posting them. Now, I've seen stone fences like that back east, in the countryside north of NYC, Mass and Conn. We were told there were so many stones in the ground, when the settlers began farming they had to clear the land, so, for lack of just piling them up they used the stones to build fences around their property or to mark off the acres. It might have been the same in KY.

Ch21-P21-301 - Oh dear! I was going to go back to bed after this short post, but now I'll have to read the next one to see where Sue thinks the girls are. What did Mad Larry say that gave it away? And what did Sue see on the racing form. Having never seen a racing form, I'm having trouble visualizing Sue's thoughts. The pictures of Keeneland give off a very serene aura. I can understand why they chose to film Seabiscuit there. I'll have to rent that movie. I've never seen it.

Well, I've a feeling the next few posts are going to be chock full of action and I'm just to tired to participate, and appreciate! biggrin.gif blush.gif So, I'll be back in the morning, after my walk. I'm in the home stretch now, and have cleared my schedule for tomorrow to finish reading.

I'm loving this story, Tina! outstanding.gif

Lynn

Frwdgranny
AAAAAAACCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!

I just lost three posts of comments!!!!!!!!!! angry017.gif

And I hadn't saved them!!!!! I always save them while writing!!!!!!!!! icon1366.gif icon1366.gif icon1366.gif icon1366.gif icon1366.gif

Well, almost always...99% of the time! icon1366.gif icon1366.gif icon1366.gif icon1366.gif

Lynn

Frwdgranny
Well, I'm settled in and rounding the final curve heading for the finish line! I'm going to pick up where I left off and come back later to try and recreate my three lost comments. Except for this one....b/c it was the last one I wrote... laugh.gif

Ch 23-P22-324 - Now Tina, it seems to me you have a fixation on the name "Jack". First "Jack" Hudson, now this "Jack" in Lost and of course, the "Jack" in Without A Trace! Hmmm, that could make one wonder about your alliegence to "Jack/Yannick"! LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif

Ch 24-P22-330 - How awful for the girls to be locked in the crates and shipped overseas. But what an ingenius idea to use the reverse of Diplomatic Immunity Tina. Now, it was a stroke of luck D called Blount when he did and got the "real" story out of him.
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“Guys!” Hip nasal cry carried down the long corridor to the laughing group.
I was beginning to really miss Myles until this line.... ****don't be so whiny Myles**** laugh.gif

Lost Comment - Oh, after reading the comments on this post, I remember one of my lost ones was about Jack and Sue teaming together....but instead of Hudson and Thomas it should be Hudson and Hudson! biggrin.gif
It could be like The Thin Man 1930's? movie series with William Powell and Myrna Loy, only much much much much much better b/c of Jack and Sue! Just think of all the possibilities of shower scenes with them married! Free rain! Which reminds me, are we going to have another shower scene before the end? blush.gif blush.gif blush.gif
Oh, yeah, I forgot there for a minute....back to the story and my deadline! book.gif

Lynn

Frwdgranny
Ch 25-P22-339 - I'm so sorry to hear about your dad's fall, Tina. I still had him, you and your mom on my prayer list though. Hope he is doing much better now.

Thank goodness they were able to rescue this group of five girls in time. When Sue focuses on the negative instead of the positive, I'm so glad Jack is there to remind her to look at the bright side and the part she played in rescuing these girls. After all, it was her lip reading skills that lead them to Jones and Baranski, which in turn led them to Danner, etc.... That's why I jack.gif
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He had won the bet, and lost his freedom, all in one fateful moment as the horse ‘Gotcha Good’ crossed the finish line.
I love your quirky sense of humor, Tina! LolLolLolLol.gif

Ch 26-P23-342 - I think Sue was away from Myles for so long he reverted back to his old sarcastic ways, forgetting about his pledge to be a little more kinder and gentler with his cutting wit. Or, he just didn't have anyone around to practice on while they were gone. LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif
But the important thing is....they're going back to KY chair.gif
Way to go Jack....Why did Bobby say he was a better gambler than you? You did a darn good job of bluffing there! And I'm also wondering, when is "later" going to be? blush.gif

Lynn

Frwdgranny
Ok, only two more chapters of this fabulous story to go. I'll be sorry to see it end.

Ch 27-P24-348 - They found Kristie...and she's pregnant...I thought that was what was wrong with her.
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Angels came in many forms, he supposed, and his came in the form of a blonde beauty who couldn’t hear a word uttered by the people she championed, but who could listen more deeply than anyone he’d ever known.
This was such a beautiful thought, Tina, you have me crying.gif
It's no wonder we love Jack, and Sue, when we read lines like this. Fabulous, Tina... outstanding.gif
Ch 28-P24-357 - So glad your dad was admitted to the hospital, Tina. Can you give us an update on him?

Now, Yippee! It's later! chair.gif
And I thought this was going to be the last post, but I missed highlighting one, so I have to wait once more for the big "shower/rain" scene. post-71242-1112188113.gif snoozer_11.gif

Loved the "Captain Happy" line! That was a devine scene, from Sue's advances to Jack's proposal to Sue's acceptance, leaving me in a puddle there with everyone else! cheerleader.gif melting.gif kissing.gif girl_sigh.gif cloud9.gif

Lynn

Frwdgranny
Ch 29-P25-369 - I don't want this to end....but, I'll read anyway...and savor.... Oh, I bet the Shelburne's own that little cabin in the woods and that's where they are going, isn't it? So much for the Newman theory! Reading on...

Well, I can't add any more than what has already been said, everyone said it better than I could. I am a mass of liquid fire after that honeymoon... so beautifully written. As Kav said,

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Just the right amount of spice and passion laced with that forever kind of love that only exsists between Jack and Sue (at last!)
So very tastefully, meltingly, shiveringly, deliciously, written, Tina. I am in awe! melting.gif faint.gif melting.gif faint.gif
This was a terrific story. Thank you for gracing us with your exceptional talent! outstanding.gif perfect10.gif wave.gif thank you.gif Flowers.gif grouphug.gif

Lynn

PS. I've downloaded each chapter into Word as I read so I can print and reread anytime I want without having to be on the computer.

yannick in my heart
absolutly fabulous story.... i loved it from beginning till the end... i laughed and swooned along with sue.... truly a great story.
MizzN
Wow...

Tina, I'm glad I've just caught up now and am able to puddlelify without having to worry about leaving goo marks on students' papers, (it's evening and thank God no students around or papers to prepare tomorrow)...

I'm going to sound like a broken record... wait, do records still exist, broken or otherwise?... Anyway, I envy you writing talent and the way you bring everything and everyone in your story so alive that they feel real and tangible... hm...Jack in the flesh... blush.gif

As always, great story, Tina! I've loved every scene!
skeeter
Tina.........that was 'precious'.....I'm too late to vote - but Bravo!! Great Story.

hugs , skeeter
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