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audiokim
One more post after this guys.

Sue sighed as she gazed out across the lawn. Dawning sun filtered through the summer green leaves and mottled the freshly mowed grass with shadowed blacks and grays. The screen of the porch dappled the wood with the shadows of new sunbeams dancing across the horizon for the first time. In the six weeks since that rainy day, Jack had been true to his vow – never once letting work or anything else interfere with ‘us’. She felt even more loved and cherished than ever before, if that were possible. Still, something was different.

She had suspected for more than a week now that things in their life were slowly changing – for the better she hoped. But it would take a little investigation to be certain. She wanted Jack to be there by her side. She needed him to be there by her side. She needed o be able to gaze into the chocolate depths and see the swirl of assurance that he was okay with this. That he wanted this as much as she did. And she had planned on this leisurely June Saturday to be the day. But then the church had sponsored that golf tournament to raise money for the youth group’s mission trip. After Jack had coerced Myles, Bobby and D into giving up a precious day off to play in it, she couldn’t ask him to stay home with here.

Levi’s warm, silky chin brushed against her leg in its journey to rest on the knee cap visible between denim hem and white sports socks. His breath huffed against her skin as she reached to scratch him behind his ears. “What am I going to do, Levi?”

As if in answer, her blackberry vibrated against her thigh. She smiled when she saw the number on the display as she pulled it from her pocket. Quickly picking up the mic dangling from the silver device, she chuckled her greeting. “Good morning, Gran. Jack’s not up yet.”

“I didn’t call to talk with Jack, sweetheart,” came the reply. “Have you talked to him yet?”

She gasped, wondering for a moment if Sarah Rose possessed some sixth sense when it came to her favorite grandchildren. “How did you know?”

She could almost see the dark eyes crinkling with amusement as they twinkled with delight. “Because, I remember how I felt after that first rainstorm. When are you going to talk to him?”

She wished she knew. “I was planning on talking with him today. But the church is sponsoring a golf tournament. Since D, Bobby and Myles agreed to play...”

“You hate to ask Jack to give it up and stay at home.”

“Yeah.” She felt tears burning in her eyes as she blinked them away to focus on the tiny screen. “Gran, what am I going to do?”

“That’s simple sweetie. Pray for rain.”

~.~.~.~.~


A low rumble that shook the windows and caused Levi to whine softly jolted Jack upright in the bed. He blinked as a flash illuminated the pine floor in front of the window. It was quickly followed by a rolling grumble that echoed back on itself. He couldn’t help but smile as he realized he would indeed get to spend a lazy Saturday with his wife instead of on the fairways of the local golf course.

The gentle creak of aged hinges caught his attention. The light from the slowly opening door of the bathroom partially bathed the foot of their bed in a soft almost blue glow. He raised his eyebrows as Sue, already dressed in denim shorts and one of his old blue FBI t-shirts leaned against the door frame. “Jack,” she called, her voice fading to a hushed stillness.

He felt his grin grow bigger as he slid from the bed and trotted to the bathroom door, hoping that this rainy day would be as enjoyable as the last one: the day he took his Pops advice. One eyebrow slid upward against the crease of his brow as he caught her around the waist and guided her back into the blue and white tiled room. “Have you been praying for rain again, sweetheart.”

She nodded slowly, her gaze dropping to study the blue flecks in the white tile. As she slowly raised her hazel eyes, his breath caught in his throat at what he saw. There was a pensive shimmer in the shadow of her eyes. He couldn’t hide the tremble in his fingers as he lifted them to catch the tears seeping from the edges of her eyes, the knots tightening in his stomach. “Sue, what is it?”

“I love you, Jack,” she whispered through the tightening in her throat.

“I love you, Sue.” She saw the truth shimmering in the dark depths.

“Jack, do you remember what your grandparents say about rain?”

His brow furrowed as he wondered where his blushing bride was going with this conversation. From her state of dress, he could guess it wasn’t the shower. “Yeah. Gran and Pops have always said that the good Lord sends the rain to make Roses grow.”

Her lower lip disappeared behind white teeth as she pushed a sack across the counter towards him. “And sometimes…Hudsons.”

The day turned dark as night, an’ in her eyes he saw the light,
He hadn’t taken the time to notice.
From Heaven, it poured down on that little old farm house:
Lord know what to do when love needs time for growin’:
He sends rain for the Roses.


Jack glanced between the plastic rectangle on the counter and Sue’s shimmering hazel eyes. In those lipid pools, he saw more of the truth than the blue line on white. Her smile was soft and shy. He knew his was growing bigger by the minute. As his lips pressed against hers, tenderly possessive and gently urgent, he knew all his dreams were coming true.

More later
Kim
GinaSue
That was absolutely beautiful. I loved that Jack's grandmother knew what was going on, and that the rains came right on cue!! I'm going to be sorry to see this story end!
kmt123
Kim, you just keep getting better and better. You weave a spell of love and contenment that makes me quivery - if that's a word - and very jealous. Because everytime I read one of your posts, I want a Jack more and more.

Tina
Cere Cere
exclaim.gif Wonderful!
Now I know why the title hehe.gif chair.gif

clapgirl.gif, but it's almost over!!! sigh.gif

Anyway, beautiful Kim!! biggrin.gif

Tere
Ivory
Breathtakingly beautiful in every way.
Oreolover
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Yeah. Gran and Pops have always said that the good Lord sends the rain to make Roses grow.”

Her lower lip disappeared behind white teeth as she pushed a sack across the counter towards him. “And sometimes…Hudsons.”


Oh my goodness, could that have gotten any sweeter?

Perfect, Kim. Just perfect.
Linny27
QUOTE(Oreolover @ Apr 1 2008, 11:21 PM) *

QUOTE
Yeah. Gran and Pops have always said that the good Lord sends the rain to make Roses grow.”

Her lower lip disappeared behind white teeth as she pushed a sack across the counter towards him. “And sometimes…Hudsons.”


Oh my goodness, could that have gotten any sweeter?

Perfect, Kim. Just perfect.

Not quite sure. I think that's as sweet as it gets... and it's absolutely perfect!

Just wonderful, Kim!
Frwdgranny
Oh, I like Ivory's comment...."breathtakingly beautiful". I'm speechless and in tears, it touches my soul. This story, to me, is like a beautiful romantic poem. It epitomizes my longing to have someone like Jack to love and love me back. I don't want this story to end, Kim...I just want it to go on and on and on and on....

Lynn

marlo29
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“And sometimes…Hudsons.”

I just love it... so beautiful!
lindylou
QUOTE(marlo29 @ Apr 2 2008, 04:55 AM) *

QUOTE
“And sometimes…Hudsons.”

I just love it... so beautiful!



ditto.gif I have to agree with you marlene its trully beautiful cloud9.gif
Lin
suesfan
This is just incredible, Kim!! The rain right on cue once again!! And, what a beautiful way to tell Jack he's going to be a father!!!

I'm with everyone else - I want this to go on and on and on........!!!

Joy
audiokim
Last post, guys. Thank you all so much for reading this little piece.

Jack knew he should really have both hands on the steering wheel as he negotiated the rain slicked road into D.C. But he couldn’t tear his hand or his heart from the blonde by his side. His heart ached as a low moan escaped from lips pressed tightly together. Sue was hurting – and when she hurt, he hurt. Adding to the ache in his soul was the knowledge that he was responsible for this. He couldn’t control the soft smile that tugged at the corners of his lips as he chanced a look at his wife. Despite the slight pallor of the peach skin and the perspiration that beaded on her forehead beneath her bangs, she was the most elegantly creature he had ever laid eyes on. It still awed him that she was his – and that within a matter of hours, she would bring his child into the world. Yes, he was responsible for her current state, but only partially. Sue and the rain bore the rest of the responsibility.

The windshield wipers beat out the same erratic rhythm as his heart when he took yet another curve at a speed somewhat faster than that posted on the white and black sign he’d just blown past. Silently, he thanked God for the vehicular obstacle course at Quantico. Too bad Quantico didn’t teach me everything, he thought as Sue squeezed his hand on a sharp intake of air. Mentally, he cursed Eve for the ordeal his beloved was enduring and the rain for slowing down his progress.

“I didn’t pray for this.” Her voice, strained and barely above a whisper interrupted his thoughts. His eyebrow shot up like a squirrel racing up a tree away from Levi’s snapping teeth as he turned to her. A gentle smile curved her mouth despite the pain shimmering in her hazel eyes. “The rain. I didn’t pray for rain this time, Jack.”

“Better rain than snow and ice,” Jack smiled. He squeezed her hand with gentle reassurance.

~.~.~.~.~


Why am I the one out in this freak February thunderstorm, Myles groaned as he stepped through the sliding door of the airport terminal. He shook his umbrella gently as he closed it, shivering as the moisture that clung to his coat seemed to seep through the layers to his very core. This was such unusual weather for D.C. in February. Snow, yes. Ice, yes. But a warm, gentle rain, no. But that was what was falling outside and had been since early morning.

But why am I out in it picking up the Roses? The answer was quite simple. The Mannings were still away on their honeymoon. Bobby had been relived that Baby Hudson didn’t make an appearance during the reception, although Tara was going to be highly disappointed that she had missed the main event. Lucy flatly refused to leave her post in the waiting room outside Delivery. With D manning the Bullpen and the grandparents arriving on different flights, he was left to pick up the proud great-grandparents. As he saw the silver haired couple approaching, their smiles lighting up the darkened afternoon sky, he knew he had been given the best job of all.

When he and the Roses arrived at the hospital, Lucy and the proud new parents were cooing over the newest member of the team. Wrapped in a blue blanket, he was snuggled in his mother’s arms, his father beaming down at them both with such love radiating in his tearstained face that the stoic New Englander’s heart melted. Myles ran his hand over his eyes before sniffing softly and gently clearing his throat. It was still unsteady as he spoke. “No offense Jack,” he groused gruffly as he stood by Sue’s bedside, his hand on Jack’s shoulder. “But couldn’t you and Sue have picked a better day for this.”

Jack exchanged an amused look with his grandparents before exchanging a long, loving one with his wife. Slowly, he released her hazel gaze, his eyes drifting downward to the sweet combination of their best parts lying in his mother’s arms. “You have to realize something, Myles,” he began as he eased himself down beside Sue, wrapping his little family in the circle of his arms. His eyes misted as he lifted his gaze to see his grandfather holding his wife of more than fifty years the way he was holding Sue. He opened his mouth to continue, but heard his grandfather’s voice instead.

“When you’re a Rose…” He glanced at his grandchildren and great-grandson, tears catching on his voice as he continued. “Or a Hudson, you know what rain means. It’s the good Lord’s way of making the love we share grow. And little Jackson Raine there is living proof of that.”

Lord knows what to do when love need time for growin’:
(He sends rain for the Roses.)
The Lord sends rain for the Roses…


And the Hudsons.

The End
Kim

Story total without the song 7,572 words
lindylou
outstanding.gif JC_cupidgirl.gif that was wonderful loved his grand parents and his son beautiful from start to finsh fantastic kim JC_cupidgirl.gif perfect10.gif
Lin
kmt123
Once again, perfection.

Jackson Raine. How appropos. And beautiful!

Kim, while you have a million different ways to describe the love our couple find over and over again, I don't have enough to tell how much i love reading them! Wonderful, beautiful job, and thank you for joining the challenge!!

Tina
Anne
I guess all great things have to come to an end. girl_sigh.gif

Kim this story was delightful all the way through and a lesson to be learned. Does Mr. Rose have any influence on getting men to read fanfic hehe.gif It really would be nice.

The ending was so sweet, tender and loving - So Jack and Sue girl_sigh.gif
marlo29

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With D manning the Bullpen and the grandparents arriving on different flights, he was left to pick up the proud great-grandparents. As he saw the silver haired couple approaching, their smiles lighting up the darkened afternoon sky, he knew he had been given the best job of all.

I love that!

Kim, that was wonderful! Flowers.gif
Cere Cere
clapgirl.gif clapgirl.gif BRAVO KIM !! clapgirl.gif clapgirl.gif


I love the name of the baby, Beautiful!! chair.gif

Thanks! blowkiss.gif

Tere
Frwdgranny
I saved this post for last before going offtobed.gif
b/c I knew it would be the perfect sleeping medication, better than any otc...well, I guess I can't really compare b/c I've never taken any otc sleep aids. I digress...that's what sleepiness and this wonderful ending have done...made me incoherent.

Love the name....Jackson Raine Hudson....oh, that is such a romantic name...he's going to grow up just like his daddy jack.gif

Love the way Jack loves Sue.
Love the way Sue loves Jack.
Love a warm, gentle rain.
Love the wise grandparents, now great-grandparents, Rose.
Love that all the grandparents and especially great-grandparents came for the joyous event.
Love that Myles teared up.
Love the way you touch my heart.
Love the way you make me cry with happiness.
Love the way you write the characters so real.
Love the way you make me feel when I read.

I just plain Love the way you write...it is so uplifting. Thank you Kim for your precious, beautiful words. Besides poetry, they are like a symphony to my ears. blowkiss.gif
I am sad this is over, but it is a timeless romantic story of love that I shall enjoying reading forever. For that I thank you.gif Flowers.gif

Lynn

GinaSue
Kim, everyone has said it already, but this story really was perfection. Every post made you feel better than the last, the descriptions were beautiful, and the feelings this story evoked will make it a story that I, for one, will probably read again and again. Thank you so much for sharing your gift of writing with us!!

thank you.gif
Linny27
You know, I've always loved Spring rains before, but now I love them even more.

Jackson Raine... oh, I hope that child never asks how he got his middle name...hehe.gif But, it's still very appropriate and oh, so sweet.

I loved every moment of this Kim... Thank you for not adding any angst, by the way.

Loved it!
Kav
angry017.gif Not the reaction you were expecting? batting eyelashes.gif It's because I'm so dismayed that it's over. I'm running out of adjectives to describe what your stories do to me! This one was exquisite and immensely satisfying to read.

kav
Ivory
Not only was this heartwarming, but to me it was a wonderful tribute to what marriage can be. When the new great-grandparents held each other that spoke of going the distance. When Jack realized as a newlywed how easy it could be to take their love for granted, that made is seem real. There was great closure to the story for me when I read the last comments by Jack's Pops, and learned the name of the baby. Thanks, Kim, for a wonderful story.
BarbaraManatee
QUOTE
Love the way Jack loves Sue.
Love the way Sue loves Jack.
Love a warm, gentle rain.
Love the wise grandparents, now great-grandparents, Rose.
Love that all the grandparents and especially great-grandparents came for the joyous event.
Love that Myles teared up.
Love the way you touch my heart.
Love the way you make me cry with happiness.
Love the way you write the characters so real.
Love the way you make me feel when I read.


Ditto to Anne!! blowkiss.gif
suesfan
".....the sweet combination of their best parts" - I just love that!! Jackson Raine Hudson - it sounds romantic and handsome - with his name and his looks girls will be swooning all over the place!!!

I also loved the way the Roses immediately uplifted Myles just by being there!! He once again has shown what an old softie he is!!!

Kim, from beginning to end this story is amazing!! You had me in tears once again, but that's okay, they are happy tears!!!

Thanks for joining the challenge and sharing your incredible talent with us once again!!!

Joy
Josy
Wow Kim..it was absolutely amazing!!!
Love just flow all over the words...
It was absolutely perfect!! blowkiss.gif
Thanks Kim
Josy
Smiler
OMG! that was shere beauty audiokim. Absolute writing perfection. Loved it!

I'd write something more sensible but i'm off to bed now since it 1am where i am!
sue&jacktlf
clapping.gif That was absolutely beautiful, perfect, wonderful and just the best piece of fluff. It was even better than easterchild.gif . clapgirl.gif clapgirl.gif
yannick in my heart
i loved it...absolutly loved it...it was great...just pure fluff and sweetness.
eclipsse
One word:

Perfect!

Loved it - warm, wonderful, and heartstoppingly romantic...

Thank you! exclaim.gif
stargazer33
An Awesome story! wub.gif
Oreolover
Kim, as I'm checking through the Spring Challenge entries, I realize I didn't comment on the end of yours. I must have printed it and read it.

This was just a beautiful story. I love how you wove the story in and I love the tendernes you are able to capture between Sue and Jack. hifive.gif
hfce
That was beautiful. girl_sigh.gif




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