AJeff
Mar 26 2008, 07:53 PM
No song has ever been written
Of the love I have for you
I close my eyes
And all my dreams are of you
I still feel the droplets
Slipping between our lips
When you first tenderly kissed me
Under the rain shower of the moonlight mist
You've filled this aching lonely heart
Embrace me, hold me tight
Let's do a dance with this romance
A never ending night
Don't ever say goodbye
I'll fill your heart with love
Stay with me, don't you know by now
You were sent to me from above
You've placed your heart in mine
Filled my loneliness
For me to have and to hold
With your love and tenderness
Memories of the both of us
Rain sprinkled on that special day
Our meeting was but a chance
And you took my breath away
Our "I dos" will be said in loving tones
Together we will grow old and gray
A lifetime of love we will promise
On that very blessed day
That rain shower set our mood
With a perfect touch of our lips
It marked our beginnings of togetherness
And it started with just a kiss
Frwdgranny
Mar 26 2008, 08:00 PM
Oh, what a lovely poem. Thank you for entering it in the challenge. My favorite?
QUOTE
I still feel the droplets
Slipping between our lips
When you first tenderly kissed me
Under the rain shower of the moonlight mist
Beautiful!
Lynn
justme_jp3
Mar 26 2008, 08:06 PM
Oh, that is absolutely beautiful!!! I love romantic poems, and especially loved the imagery with the mist and the rain!
Wonderful job!!!
TinaLynne
Mar 26 2008, 08:12 PM
Incredibly beautiful poem!!! Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
marlo29
Mar 26 2008, 08:15 PM
That was amazing and incredibly beautiful!
QUOTE
still feel the droplets
Slipping between our lips
When you first tenderly kissed me
Under the rain shower of the moonlight mist
And that was my favourite verse as well.
Anna... Thank You!!!
Anne
Mar 26 2008, 09:21 PM
WOW, that was so tender and romantic and beautiful and did I say I love it.

Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent.
chickenpotpie
Mar 26 2008, 09:36 PM
Absolutley wonderful. That was so good. Thanks for sharing!
Paula
tosca
Mar 26 2008, 10:34 PM
Wow.....that was beautifully written with wonderful imagery and prose! Absolutely fantastic job! Thanks for sharing it with us!
Jill
Mar 26 2008, 10:40 PM
Anna, wonderful job with this! Makes me wish rain was the forecast instead of snow!!!
Jill
Kav
Mar 27 2008, 09:56 AM
You are definitely a talented poet -- and I am quite envious. You have managed to capture so much emotion in those words.
QUOTE
No song has ever been written
Of the love I have for you
I close my eyes
And all my dreams are of you
From the very first verse you set the mood and what I really liked was that it's about anyone in love. You did a wonderful job of blending in the rain and the mist -- it's the perfect Spring love poem!
kav
CJX7X
Mar 28 2008, 07:02 PM
Beautiful!
Well done!
x claire x
Oreolover
Mar 28 2008, 08:36 PM
That was so beautiful and romantic. Thank you for sharing it.
suesfan
Mar 30 2008, 11:54 AM
Anna, this is absolutely beautiful!! You've built the way their love has grown from the kiss in the rain on up to their future together!!! Well done!!!
Thanks for sharing your incredible talent with us!!!
Joy
O'seam
Mar 31 2008, 05:26 AM
Hi!
What can I add to these wonderful reviews that hasn't been said before?
Your poem just brightens the rainy misty days we have here in this season...

And by the beautiful, talenting poem you've written here, seems that rain is really inspiring you.
Thanks a lot Anna, for sharing it with us!
O'seam
stargazer33
May 13 2008, 03:20 PM
Simply lovely poem!!!
eclipsse
May 14 2008, 01:55 PM
That was just beautiful - wonderfully moving.
Thank you.
any
May 22 2008, 07:33 PM
Very lovely poem! Simple and romantic as I like them! Good job!
Any
hfce
Feb 19 2011, 01:38 AM
Oh wow that was beautiful.
Hope ~
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