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AJeff
No song has ever been written
Of the love I have for you
I close my eyes
And all my dreams are of you

I still feel the droplets
Slipping between our lips
When you first tenderly kissed me
Under the rain shower of the moonlight mist

You've filled this aching lonely heart
Embrace me, hold me tight
Let's do a dance with this romance
A never ending night

Don't ever say goodbye
I'll fill your heart with love
Stay with me, don't you know by now
You were sent to me from above

You've placed your heart in mine
Filled my loneliness
For me to have and to hold
With your love and tenderness

Memories of the both of us
Rain sprinkled on that special day
Our meeting was but a chance
And you took my breath away

Our "I dos" will be said in loving tones
Together we will grow old and gray
A lifetime of love we will promise
On that very blessed day

That rain shower set our mood
With a perfect touch of our lips
It marked our beginnings of togetherness
And it started with just a kiss
Frwdgranny
Oh, what a lovely poem. Thank you for entering it in the challenge. My favorite?

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I still feel the droplets
Slipping between our lips
When you first tenderly kissed me
Under the rain shower of the moonlight mist
Beautiful! kissing.gif

Lynn

justme_jp3
Oh, that is absolutely beautiful!!! I love romantic poems, and especially loved the imagery with the mist and the rain!

Wonderful job!!!
TinaLynne
Incredibly beautiful poem!!! Thanks for sharing your talent with us! clapgirl.gif
marlo29
That was amazing and incredibly beautiful! melting.gif melting.gif melting.gif

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still feel the droplets
Slipping between our lips
When you first tenderly kissed me
Under the rain shower of the moonlight mist


And that was my favourite verse as well.


Anna... Thank You!!! Flowers.gif
Anne
WOW, that was so tender and romantic and beautiful and did I say I love it. girl_sigh.gif clapgirl.gif Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent.
chickenpotpie
Absolutley wonderful. That was so good. Thanks for sharing!

Paula
tosca
Wow.....that was beautifully written with wonderful imagery and prose! Absolutely fantastic job! Thanks for sharing it with us!
Jill
Anna, wonderful job with this! Makes me wish rain was the forecast instead of snow!!!

Jill
Kav
You are definitely a talented poet -- and I am quite envious. You have managed to capture so much emotion in those words.

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No song has ever been written
Of the love I have for you
I close my eyes
And all my dreams are of you
From the very first verse you set the mood and what I really liked was that it's about anyone in love. You did a wonderful job of blending in the rain and the mist -- it's the perfect Spring love poem!

kav
CJX7X
Beautiful!

Well done! clapping.gif

x claire x
Oreolover
That was so beautiful and romantic. Thank you for sharing it.
suesfan
Anna, this is absolutely beautiful!! You've built the way their love has grown from the kiss in the rain on up to their future together!!! Well done!!!

Thanks for sharing your incredible talent with us!!!

Joy
O'seam
Hi!

What can I add to these wonderful reviews that hasn't been said before? write.gif

Your poem just brightens the rainy misty days we have here in this season... snoozer_11.gif And by the beautiful, talenting poem you've written here, seems that rain is really inspiring you. JC_cupidgirl.gif

Thanks a lot Anna, for sharing it with us! Flowers.gif

O'seam wub2.gif

stargazer33
Simply lovely poem!!! outstanding.gif
eclipsse
That was just beautiful - wonderfully moving. girl_sigh.gif

Thank you. thank you.gif
any
Very lovely poem! Simple and romantic as I like them! Good job! clapgirl.gif

Any
hfce
Oh wow that was beautiful. JC_cupidgirl.gif


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