Hi! Sorry you get the snippet tonight : hard day with a headache, though I tried to take a little sun too. Thanks for reading and comments... again!
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Levi wasn't sleeping : it was much more entertaining to watch his two favorite humans getting closer they had ever dare to be. To show them his happiness he jumped on the couch between the two of them mearly seconds after their first real kiss had begun.
"Whoa Levi! What are you doing?" laughed Sue thinking he might get jalous if Jack came to take a bigger part in their life. "You'll get your turn, boy!" She assured him stroking his fur.
"Huh, I'm glad Amanda went to bed... Who knows what he could be thinking of us right now?..." He confided grining he thought of which thoughts the dog could have in mind. Almost responding directly to him, he heard the girl's chuckles coming from the bedroom.
"What is it?" Wondered Sue seing him looking at the first door on the right.
"I think Amanda 'heard what Levi thought about us : she just chuckled." He explained. "Although I hope she wont tell Lucy what he said... She would tease us for a LOOONG time!"
A couple of kisses later, Jack heard Lucy coming out of the bedroom so he pulled away making Sue moan a little. Smiling weakly in Lucy's direction he looked at her, beaming of happiness. Lucy gave them a smile complice gaze in return, but didn't dared talk to them : they were so cute blushing as they were... Exchanging 'Goodnights' every one went to bed after Jack leaved them whishing Sue 'good dreams' too.
You can be sure they will... maybe even more than they are since I know you. Have good dreams too, Prince Charming! She thought closing the door behind her love one.
*****
Tomorrow is my last day of work : school vacation are finally here! This story will turn into overdrive...
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QUOTE(any @ Jun 22 2008, 08:16 PM) 
"Huh, I'm glad Amanda went to bed... Who knows what he could be thinking of us right now?..." He confided grining he thought of which thoughts the dog could have in mind. Almost responding directly to him, he heard the girl's chuckles coming from the bedroom.
So much for Levi as a chaperone, now!!! His secret is out! Happy school vacation!! I miss those days . . . !
you're very funny Levi!! Jack and Sue
Tere
Lucky you -- two months off!!! sigh, I remember those days! I'm glad Jack and Sue were obliging enough to entertain Levi! 
kav
kav
Levi, you should let Jack and Sue entertain themselves right now!!! LOL
Joy
Joy
Gee, having Levi around could be pretty dangerous for Jack and Sue 
Hi gang! I'll enjoy my two months off for you! Thanks for the comments and reading!
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The next morning the team was assigned to a new 'unofficial' case : the 'dog's life case'. Lucy and Sue came in with the two team's favorites newest 'detective assistant', title proudly wore by the teens. They had give the collar to Jack so he took it to the FBI's DNA specialist, Steve Harris.
"HE will probably be able to TELL us to which BREED belongs the BLOOD on it and he will also put a CHECK for FINGERPRINTS. Who knows, mayby our thieves aren't as wise as they come..." He said and after he pronounced the last part he signed : THIEF-MAYBE-STUPID-THEM. The expression he had on his face while signing made the girls and adults in the bullpen laugh : if they had to work overtime to help Levi and his furry friends, he would do it with a iota of fun.
Giving task to everyone, Jack took charge of the case perfectly, as always...
Sue is radiating today ; she's so beautiful in the morning sunlight! He thought before heading to the lab downstairs. Stealing a glance at him too, she thought about just the same about him. Running all over the place to avoid their leader's furry if he took them doing nothing, which rarely happen though they prefer to avoid it right away, the co-workers barely remarked the little change that had occured during the night.
When several parks were done for informations seaking, Bobby and Myles had found eight other missing dogs : it really looked like a dog kidnapper was striking all over DC, changing place from time to time.
"What does that Drongo's doing with all those dogs?" Inquired Bobby after lunch break when they started sharing their informations.
Levi who had eat too much for his small stomach because Jack had offered him his sandwich left out, was fast asleep behind Sue's desk, his favorite spot. It had been hard to explain the 'connection' to the team, but everyone if they didn't believed it made as they were, playing along with the others. While Levi's sleep Amanda couldn't heard what he was saying : it was as a "very jumpy soundtrack" for the hearing people. So she din'd paid attention to his whining and whimpering.
Suddenly a strident plaintive bark resounded through the room, startling Amanda and every single person by the way, including Sue who had Lucy's hand on her arm.
'I remember!'
"What happened Levi?" Asked Sue coming closer to him.
Everyone turned to Amanda, waiting for her to interpret.
"He remember something." She translated for them. The dog came in front of her as people took place in front of Sue so she can read their lips. The only problem was there were no lips to read... only thoughts.
*****
See you tomorrow!!!
*****
The next morning the team was assigned to a new 'unofficial' case : the 'dog's life case'. Lucy and Sue came in with the two team's favorites newest 'detective assistant', title proudly wore by the teens. They had give the collar to Jack so he took it to the FBI's DNA specialist, Steve Harris.
"HE will probably be able to TELL us to which BREED belongs the BLOOD on it and he will also put a CHECK for FINGERPRINTS. Who knows, mayby our thieves aren't as wise as they come..." He said and after he pronounced the last part he signed : THIEF-MAYBE-STUPID-THEM. The expression he had on his face while signing made the girls and adults in the bullpen laugh : if they had to work overtime to help Levi and his furry friends, he would do it with a iota of fun.
Giving task to everyone, Jack took charge of the case perfectly, as always...
Sue is radiating today ; she's so beautiful in the morning sunlight! He thought before heading to the lab downstairs. Stealing a glance at him too, she thought about just the same about him. Running all over the place to avoid their leader's furry if he took them doing nothing, which rarely happen though they prefer to avoid it right away, the co-workers barely remarked the little change that had occured during the night.
When several parks were done for informations seaking, Bobby and Myles had found eight other missing dogs : it really looked like a dog kidnapper was striking all over DC, changing place from time to time.
"What does that Drongo's doing with all those dogs?" Inquired Bobby after lunch break when they started sharing their informations.
Levi who had eat too much for his small stomach because Jack had offered him his sandwich left out, was fast asleep behind Sue's desk, his favorite spot. It had been hard to explain the 'connection' to the team, but everyone if they didn't believed it made as they were, playing along with the others. While Levi's sleep Amanda couldn't heard what he was saying : it was as a "very jumpy soundtrack" for the hearing people. So she din'd paid attention to his whining and whimpering.
Suddenly a strident plaintive bark resounded through the room, startling Amanda and every single person by the way, including Sue who had Lucy's hand on her arm.
'I remember!'
"What happened Levi?" Asked Sue coming closer to him.
Everyone turned to Amanda, waiting for her to interpret.
"He remember something." She translated for them. The dog came in front of her as people took place in front of Sue so she can read their lips. The only problem was there were no lips to read... only thoughts.
*****
See you tomorrow!!!
So what Levi remembered?? Can't wait for more!!
Tere
Tere
HI! Levi's memory came back through the noght... so here it is!
*****
'The van they escaped in, I saw it!' He barked wagging his tail happily regarding the progress they would do with that information.
"He saw their van!" Amanda told them excited.
"The van? Which van? Who's?" Blured Myles uncomprehensively.
"Whoa mate! I'm sure nobody catch a word of what you said! I'm sure it wasn't your usual two thousand dollar words because they seemed to short, neither it was well-known sarcasm with the look on your face. So what was it?" Gaining a glance from the Bostonian, the Aussie despite the seriousness of the situation was once again playing his favorite game : 'try to make Myles lose his temper in less than a minute' and he nearly succeed.
"Enough kids!" Ordered Jack seeing Myles' open mouth ready to respond to the teasing. "Who's van was it Levi?" Repeated the leader cutting short the childishness demeanor.
"Whoaf-wh-whoaf! Whoaf-whoaf!" Came Levi's explanation.
"Huh, that's pretty clear to me, don't you think?" Sneered Bobby turning to face Myles one more time.
"Someone took his 'Ha-Ha' pill this morning!" He groused hoping that this would be the tall agent's last comment.
Not paying attention to the 'grown kids' in front of her Amanda continued with Levi statement.
"The two men's he saw dognapping S-U-S-H-I : they put him in a van parked on the corner of 9th and Constitution."
"Right in front of the Department of Justice?!" Signed and spoke back Sue, stunned by the audacity of those men.
"Whoaf!"
"That's it," Agreed Levi through Amanda.
"If they wanna play on OUR playground, we'll have to welcome them the next time they show up...!" Announced Jack in a serious tone, as each person nodded. They didn't like to see Levi's friend been took by force, but now... it was personnal too!
*****
More later!
*****
'The van they escaped in, I saw it!' He barked wagging his tail happily regarding the progress they would do with that information.
"He saw their van!" Amanda told them excited.
"The van? Which van? Who's?" Blured Myles uncomprehensively.
"Whoa mate! I'm sure nobody catch a word of what you said! I'm sure it wasn't your usual two thousand dollar words because they seemed to short, neither it was well-known sarcasm with the look on your face. So what was it?" Gaining a glance from the Bostonian, the Aussie despite the seriousness of the situation was once again playing his favorite game : 'try to make Myles lose his temper in less than a minute' and he nearly succeed.
"Enough kids!" Ordered Jack seeing Myles' open mouth ready to respond to the teasing. "Who's van was it Levi?" Repeated the leader cutting short the childishness demeanor.
"Whoaf-wh-whoaf! Whoaf-whoaf!" Came Levi's explanation.
"Huh, that's pretty clear to me, don't you think?" Sneered Bobby turning to face Myles one more time.
"Someone took his 'Ha-Ha' pill this morning!" He groused hoping that this would be the tall agent's last comment.
Not paying attention to the 'grown kids' in front of her Amanda continued with Levi statement.
"The two men's he saw dognapping S-U-S-H-I : they put him in a van parked on the corner of 9th and Constitution."
"Right in front of the Department of Justice?!" Signed and spoke back Sue, stunned by the audacity of those men.
"Whoaf!"
"That's it," Agreed Levi through Amanda.
"If they wanna play on OUR playground, we'll have to welcome them the next time they show up...!" Announced Jack in a serious tone, as each person nodded. They didn't like to see Levi's friend been took by force, but now... it was personnal too!
*****
More later!
GO TEAM!! Tere
You know, I was really afraid the team would not take this seriously, but apparently Levi has proven himself to be trustworthy enough that they're listening to him! Of course the fact that Levi was the only witness to what happened undercover in Arlington went a long way toward convincing JACK, and Jack CAN be very persuasive! Love the way the team is rallying around!!
Levi remembering the van is going to help the team out a lot!! Parking in front of the Department of Justice?? Jack was hoping they were not very smart???
Joy
Joy
Whooo Hoooooo the team is on the case!!!!! 
Jack and Sue
Jack and Sue
Hi! Thanks for sticking with me : I really appreciate it! Here's the next installment.
*****
"We'll need your help as long as Levi's," announced Jack looking at the two wide eyed girls.
A hole scenario was running through their mind including one where the team needed them, though never in a million years they would have thought it would indeed happen. They thought that all adults were the same and would think they were 'too young and lacked of experience' to do such a thing. So it's with a bright smile on their face that they agreed to follow every order that would be given to them.
"We will do anything you ask!" Confirmed Noemie.
"Without complaining," Added Amanda.
"It's all I'm waiting from you ; you know our job can be really dangerous and I know you don't want to be put away from the action. But we don't know who we are dealing with... so you'll always have to be on guard and relay every litttle bit of information as soon as you get it, understand?" Jack wanted to make things clear with them ; there would always be someone to watch them and come as backup if necessary.
"We will get them Levi," said Amanda rubbing his soft fur.
---
While the team worked out their plan of action, Steve came in the bullpen, a blue file in hand.
"Hi guys! Someone asked me to run some DNA tests this morning?" He questionned grining slightly, which meant that he may brought them good news...
"Nooo! You found something interesting for us, didn't you?" It was more a statement than a question. "Come on mate! Break the news!" The tall Aussie was barely hidding his excitement.
As they came around him, Steve chuckled. "You guys are the best of the FBI, although I am the DNA master!"
"Yeah, that you are, but now about our case, please..." Hurried Myles eager to hear it too.
"Well, if you insist... I will tell you." He really was the kind of guy who liked to have fun ; not laughing at others, but having fun with them. Only it wasn't really the time right now and he saw their patience running tight, so he gave them the report.
"You were right : there was blood on the collar, along with dog's hairs."
"So you know which breed we're talking about?" Wondered Sue, interpreting at the same time for Amanda's benefit.
"Yes, it was a little Yorkshire. The medal clipsed on the collar will help you find the owner too. The inscription is written in the report. But there's more...!"
Still absorbing the effect of the previous news they couldn't believe that there might be more to found out out of a simple collar, only they WERE the best law inforcement of the world AND required the greatest of the lab technician.
"You have a clue on our dognappers?" Hopefully asked Sue mischievious sparkles in her eyes.
"You bet!" He replied as playfully as he was about to complete the last play of a winning game.
*****
See you soon!
*****
"We'll need your help as long as Levi's," announced Jack looking at the two wide eyed girls.
A hole scenario was running through their mind including one where the team needed them, though never in a million years they would have thought it would indeed happen. They thought that all adults were the same and would think they were 'too young and lacked of experience' to do such a thing. So it's with a bright smile on their face that they agreed to follow every order that would be given to them.
"We will do anything you ask!" Confirmed Noemie.
"Without complaining," Added Amanda.
"It's all I'm waiting from you ; you know our job can be really dangerous and I know you don't want to be put away from the action. But we don't know who we are dealing with... so you'll always have to be on guard and relay every litttle bit of information as soon as you get it, understand?" Jack wanted to make things clear with them ; there would always be someone to watch them and come as backup if necessary.
"We will get them Levi," said Amanda rubbing his soft fur.
---
While the team worked out their plan of action, Steve came in the bullpen, a blue file in hand.
"Hi guys! Someone asked me to run some DNA tests this morning?" He questionned grining slightly, which meant that he may brought them good news...
"Nooo! You found something interesting for us, didn't you?" It was more a statement than a question. "Come on mate! Break the news!" The tall Aussie was barely hidding his excitement.
As they came around him, Steve chuckled. "You guys are the best of the FBI, although I am the DNA master!"
"Yeah, that you are, but now about our case, please..." Hurried Myles eager to hear it too.
"Well, if you insist... I will tell you." He really was the kind of guy who liked to have fun ; not laughing at others, but having fun with them. Only it wasn't really the time right now and he saw their patience running tight, so he gave them the report.
"You were right : there was blood on the collar, along with dog's hairs."
"So you know which breed we're talking about?" Wondered Sue, interpreting at the same time for Amanda's benefit.
"Yes, it was a little Yorkshire. The medal clipsed on the collar will help you find the owner too. The inscription is written in the report. But there's more...!"
Still absorbing the effect of the previous news they couldn't believe that there might be more to found out out of a simple collar, only they WERE the best law inforcement of the world AND required the greatest of the lab technician.
"You have a clue on our dognappers?" Hopefully asked Sue mischievious sparkles in her eyes.
"You bet!" He replied as playfully as he was about to complete the last play of a winning game.
*****
See you soon!
Oh No! Any's vying for "cliffie queen" status!!
I'm glad Jack is including the girls, and I just hope that the lab guy knows just how important this task is!!
Now. . . about that cliffhanger . . . Any, Any, Any . . . .
I'm glad Jack is including the girls, and I just hope that the lab guy knows just how important this task is!!
Now. . . about that cliffhanger . . . Any, Any, Any . . . .
I like Steve!! He's a real asset to our favorite team!!!
I'm glad Jack made the girls understand that they are important to the case!!!
Joy
I'm glad Jack made the girls understand that they are important to the case!!!
Joy
Hi there! Regina, I don't want to take the title : it belongs to Linny and she earned it a long time ago! As long as I can tear a smile or a little shiver from some of you, I'm glad with it! But thanks!
*****
"Spill! You Tasmanian Devil!" Teasingly insulted Bobby.
Copying his accent, the brown-haired man replied, "You're 'wack' mate! But I'll be a good Drongo and tell you what I found!"
Laughing at his pathetic attempt, Bobby gave him a 'go-ahead-laugh-at-me' look and shook his head.
"Ok. We were able to find some fingerprints on the collar. Our theory is that the little buddy tried to defend himself and struggled hard with the guys and as the man wanted to hold his grip on him he grabbed the collar. Either it was loose or damage, the result stay the same : it brokes, leaving marvelous evidence for us to find... and work on... " He ended a tint of mystery in his voice.
Silence runned all around the office for a moment, while they tried to gather their thoughts together. Trying to make sence in the implication that it may have for them, for the case. Glances were exchanged and thoughts could almost be heard ; Steve had brought them more than the break they needed, he had brought them hope to find the missing dogs and the culprits.
"So... Do we have a match with the database for our 'Mr. dogs stealer'?" Risked Bobby wishing for an affirmative answer, fingers crossed.
Seing the lab tech nodded, he came to take the report from his hand.
"You guys are gonna have to be careful, though ; this isn't any kind of 'dograp' we're talking about here..."
"Any kind of what?" Sue didn't catched the word used, so she couldn't go on with the interpretation for Amanda either.
"D-O-G-N-A-P" Fingerspelled Jack for them. "A dog kidnapping," he hadded for clarification.
"Doctor Malvin Smith." Readed Bobby under the fingerprints stats. "Who's this Drongo? Never heard of him."
"I do Know him." Whispered Tara a shock expression on her face as if she heard about a gost who had been seen in town.
Everyone turned to look at her, some with worried raised eyebrows. Never before had she looked that troubled, not even when she was followed by Crazy Loco.
"You know him, luv? Want to tell us about him?" Bobby came to put a reassuring hand on her shoulder, giving it a gentle squeeze to calm her raising emotions.
*****
I'm SORRY, Regina!!! But I kind of like let you wait a bit...! Like I told before : it's a catching bug!
More later!
*****
"Spill! You Tasmanian Devil!" Teasingly insulted Bobby.
Copying his accent, the brown-haired man replied, "You're 'wack' mate! But I'll be a good Drongo and tell you what I found!"
Laughing at his pathetic attempt, Bobby gave him a 'go-ahead-laugh-at-me' look and shook his head.
"Ok. We were able to find some fingerprints on the collar. Our theory is that the little buddy tried to defend himself and struggled hard with the guys and as the man wanted to hold his grip on him he grabbed the collar. Either it was loose or damage, the result stay the same : it brokes, leaving marvelous evidence for us to find... and work on... " He ended a tint of mystery in his voice.
Silence runned all around the office for a moment, while they tried to gather their thoughts together. Trying to make sence in the implication that it may have for them, for the case. Glances were exchanged and thoughts could almost be heard ; Steve had brought them more than the break they needed, he had brought them hope to find the missing dogs and the culprits.
"So... Do we have a match with the database for our 'Mr. dogs stealer'?" Risked Bobby wishing for an affirmative answer, fingers crossed.
Seing the lab tech nodded, he came to take the report from his hand.
"You guys are gonna have to be careful, though ; this isn't any kind of 'dograp' we're talking about here..."
"Any kind of what?" Sue didn't catched the word used, so she couldn't go on with the interpretation for Amanda either.
"D-O-G-N-A-P" Fingerspelled Jack for them. "A dog kidnapping," he hadded for clarification.
"Doctor Malvin Smith." Readed Bobby under the fingerprints stats. "Who's this Drongo? Never heard of him."
"I do Know him." Whispered Tara a shock expression on her face as if she heard about a gost who had been seen in town.
Everyone turned to look at her, some with worried raised eyebrows. Never before had she looked that troubled, not even when she was followed by Crazy Loco.
"You know him, luv? Want to tell us about him?" Bobby came to put a reassuring hand on her shoulder, giving it a gentle squeeze to calm her raising emotions.
*****
QUOTE
Now. . . about that cliffhanger . . . Any, Any, Any . . . .
I'm SORRY, Regina!!! But I kind of like let you wait a bit...! Like I told before : it's a catching bug!
More later!
I can't help but feel somewhat responsible. After all, it was in the early days of your membership that I experimented with cliffhangers as torture devices . . . but there comes a time when we must take responsibility for our own actions! But on a lighter note . . . great post, Any! Sounds like there may be some meat in this story, case-wise!! Keep it coming!
I can't wait to find out who this Dr. Malvin Smith is, and how Tara knows him!!!
Joy
Joy
QUOTE(any @ Jun 26 2008, 08:54 AM)
"Spill! You Tasmanian Devil!" Teasingly insulted Bobby.
Copying his accent, the brown-haired man replied, "You're 'wack' mate! But I'll be a good Drongo and tell you what I found!"
that was so funny!!! On the other way, who is that guy and what Tara has to say?
Tere
Good evening girls! Here's a bit more for tonight. Enjoy!
*****
Tara couldn't keep eye contact with any of them ; somehow she seemed... ashame of something... She couldn't stand it amymore and runned out of the bullpen, Bobby on her heels.
"No," Pleaded Lucy taking him by the elbow. "Let her a few minutes alone, then you'll go."
"But she..." Tried Bobby only to be stopped once again.
"I know you care about her and that that's worrying you to death seing her like this. But she probably have her reasons to react as she did, so let her clear her thoughts before you go, okay?" Lucy, you always read our feelings so good. You're the best. He confessed to himself.
"You're right." He muttered. He hated having to hold his horses that way, but for Tara... he was ready to do so much more... He even had gave his own life for her if needed. The turmoil he felt at that instant made him want to shout with all his heart how much he loved her ; it became harder everyday to keep this inside.
"Lucy, can you run a search on this Doctor Malvin Smith : see who he is, what he does for a living and where we can find him. We need the total."
"You got it, Jack." She brushed her hand on Bobby's shoulder and went to her computer to accomplish her task.
"Sue, can you take the medal's inscription and try to find the owner or whatever information you can with the shelter database and animal services?"
"Do you need help?" Suggested Myles to everyone's surprise.
Frowning, she accepted. "Sure, we will need everyone on this case. I'm afraid it turned out to be much more of a dirty case than we thought." He came behind her and put his hand on the lower of her back to escort her to her desk. Jack looked at them with raised eyebrows ; it wasn't usual for his co-worker to be as gentleman with her. He felt a small dragon spitting fire inside him. What is it? What's happening to me? I can't be JEALOUS from Myles?! Naaa! He tried to push this 'stupid' thought aside, though the damage was done and it stayed in a little corner of his mind, teasing him over and over.
As Bobby stealed glance to Lucy from time to time to see if it was time for him to go for Tara, he jumped on his feet when she nod to him, nearly running down the hall to join her in the conference room they usualy used to have some privacy.
Knocking on the door to let her know he was there, he open the door and look in it. "It's me, luv. Can I come in?" Hearing her sob heentered and closed the door behind him. He will be there for her...
*****
See Regina, no cliffy tonight! See you tomorrow!
*****
Tara couldn't keep eye contact with any of them ; somehow she seemed... ashame of something... She couldn't stand it amymore and runned out of the bullpen, Bobby on her heels.
"No," Pleaded Lucy taking him by the elbow. "Let her a few minutes alone, then you'll go."
"But she..." Tried Bobby only to be stopped once again.
"I know you care about her and that that's worrying you to death seing her like this. But she probably have her reasons to react as she did, so let her clear her thoughts before you go, okay?" Lucy, you always read our feelings so good. You're the best. He confessed to himself.
"You're right." He muttered. He hated having to hold his horses that way, but for Tara... he was ready to do so much more... He even had gave his own life for her if needed. The turmoil he felt at that instant made him want to shout with all his heart how much he loved her ; it became harder everyday to keep this inside.
"Lucy, can you run a search on this Doctor Malvin Smith : see who he is, what he does for a living and where we can find him. We need the total."
"You got it, Jack." She brushed her hand on Bobby's shoulder and went to her computer to accomplish her task.
"Sue, can you take the medal's inscription and try to find the owner or whatever information you can with the shelter database and animal services?"
"Do you need help?" Suggested Myles to everyone's surprise.
Frowning, she accepted. "Sure, we will need everyone on this case. I'm afraid it turned out to be much more of a dirty case than we thought." He came behind her and put his hand on the lower of her back to escort her to her desk. Jack looked at them with raised eyebrows ; it wasn't usual for his co-worker to be as gentleman with her. He felt a small dragon spitting fire inside him. What is it? What's happening to me? I can't be JEALOUS from Myles?! Naaa! He tried to push this 'stupid' thought aside, though the damage was done and it stayed in a little corner of his mind, teasing him over and over.
As Bobby stealed glance to Lucy from time to time to see if it was time for him to go for Tara, he jumped on his feet when she nod to him, nearly running down the hall to join her in the conference room they usualy used to have some privacy.
Knocking on the door to let her know he was there, he open the door and look in it. "It's me, luv. Can I come in?" Hearing her sob heentered and closed the door behind him. He will be there for her...
*****
See Regina, no cliffy tonight! See you tomorrow!
It's good that all the team is helping Levi, although Jack get jealous
Who is this guy??
Tere
Who is this guy??
Tere
I like seeing Myles being nice to Sue!! I'm very interested to see what connection Tara has with this doctor!! I'm glad Bobby is there for her!!!
Joy
Joy
QUOTE(any @ Jun 26 2008, 08:01 PM)
What is it? What's happening to me? I can't be JEALOUS from Myles?! Naaa! He tried to push this 'stupid' thought aside, though the damage was done and it stayed in a little corner of his mind, teasing him over and over.
*****See Regina, no cliffy tonight! See you tomorrow!
I could have SWORN I posted a comment last night, but apparently I didn't!! Sorry! Loved this part . . . Jack jealous of MYLES?? That's a laugh, but then it just shows how sensitive Jack is where Sue is concerned!!
Now . . . what's with Tara? Hmmmm?????? You know, that could almost be construed as a CLIFFY!
Looking forward to MORE!!
Hi! You asked who the Doctor was? Here it is... Though some might not like him...
Italics are past events.
*****
Coming closer to her, he tookher into his embrace and let her cry in his chest. When the sobs seems to had slow down, he looked at the frail woman him his arms and as much as he wanted to take all her pain for himself, he knew she had to let it out at her own pace.
"I'm sorry, Bobby..."
"There's nothing to be sorry for, hun." He place his hand under her chin and made her to look at him. The distress she felt ached his heart.
Sighting she brushed her tears away and breathed deep breaths. "We got to go back : I have some things I need to explain."
---
It had been hard for her to confide what happenned so long ago ; it was as passing through it again... But they didn't juged her : they were a team, a family... and they were there to support each other no matter what.
"We went to university together. At one point, we were close... very close... He was studying sciences, but I found out that what he was working on wasn't... moral. he was brilliant and he knew it. Since his parents were rich he thought he was above the law and started to do whatever pleased him. So I broke up with him... instead of accepting his proposal..." Tara stopped breathing heavily to try to contain her tears.
"What kind of work was he into?" Asked Jack.
"Research... pharmaceutical research... on animals." She ended sadness breaking her voice. Gasp of disgust came out of lungs and jaws dropped at the implication that this could have for the case.
Discussion the case in hand, they were running on a plan.
"He's very powerful and careless, so we got to stop him fast." Tara's tone turned serious and firm ; she was strong and always had stood up for the right values.
"Tara, if you want to..." Proposed D.
"NO! I'm okay and I know him better than anybody here. You'll need me."
"Alright," he respond sensing she wouldn't back up ; she needed to do it.
"Here's his file, Jack." Lucy gave it to him.
"Okay people! So here's how we're gonna take them down..."
Once the plan was fully exposed, everyone gattered their things to leave : operation 'Dog's life' was in motion.
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More later!
Italics are past events.
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Coming closer to her, he tookher into his embrace and let her cry in his chest. When the sobs seems to had slow down, he looked at the frail woman him his arms and as much as he wanted to take all her pain for himself, he knew she had to let it out at her own pace.
"I'm sorry, Bobby..."
"There's nothing to be sorry for, hun." He place his hand under her chin and made her to look at him. The distress she felt ached his heart.
Sighting she brushed her tears away and breathed deep breaths. "We got to go back : I have some things I need to explain."
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It had been hard for her to confide what happenned so long ago ; it was as passing through it again... But they didn't juged her : they were a team, a family... and they were there to support each other no matter what.
"We went to university together. At one point, we were close... very close... He was studying sciences, but I found out that what he was working on wasn't... moral. he was brilliant and he knew it. Since his parents were rich he thought he was above the law and started to do whatever pleased him. So I broke up with him... instead of accepting his proposal..." Tara stopped breathing heavily to try to contain her tears.
"What kind of work was he into?" Asked Jack.
"Research... pharmaceutical research... on animals." She ended sadness breaking her voice. Gasp of disgust came out of lungs and jaws dropped at the implication that this could have for the case.
Discussion the case in hand, they were running on a plan.
"He's very powerful and careless, so we got to stop him fast." Tara's tone turned serious and firm ; she was strong and always had stood up for the right values.
"Tara, if you want to..." Proposed D.
"NO! I'm okay and I know him better than anybody here. You'll need me."
"Alright," he respond sensing she wouldn't back up ; she needed to do it.
"Here's his file, Jack." Lucy gave it to him.
"Okay people! So here's how we're gonna take them down..."
Once the plan was fully exposed, everyone gattered their things to leave : operation 'Dog's life' was in motion.
*****
More later!
So THAT'S where the title comes in! This is great, Any!! And not really a cliffie in sight . . . !!
Oooohhhhhhhhh!!!
Tere
Tere
Any...this is awesome you are building a gret case and helping to distract me from my woes...thank you!!!!
GO team GO!!!!!!
GO team GO!!!!!!
Hi again! As I won't be able to post tomorrow, I thought I might do it tonight. We are nearing the end, though not right now : a few more posts to go to explain everything... Thanks (again... I feel like a broken record, but it's really appreciated!) for reading and comments.
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With the van's description gave by Levi along with the surveillance tape from the front camera of the Department of Justice building they were able to find it : it belong to 'Dip Of Grace Pharmatics', which belongs to...
"Good answer : Doctor Malvin Smith himself!" Frowning when she saw the light blue letters that ornate the building, Tara yelled, "How rude! That's enough to make me wanna be sick!"
"What is it, luv?"
"Huh, look at the letters : D.O.G.! Is it a joke or are they laughing at us?"
---
Amanda, Noemie and Levi were walking in the park, ready in case the 'Doctor' or one of his man went to 'dog chase' again. Myles and Jack were posted in strategic point near them, always keeping them in sight. Bobby and Tara were in front of the building, waiting for any appearance of the guess of honor. Sue, Lucy and D were in the surveillance van coordinating all the others.
"Huh-huh, I think our Mr. Boss is greating us with his presence... He's heading your way with the van, but he's not alone : we have 200 pounds of muscles and no brain beside him." Announced Bobby over his headset. "We're following them."
"Be careful : don't let him see you, Crash." Stated Jack a bit nervous.
"We can't afford to lose him either!" He pointed out.
After what seems an eternity, Bobby finally comfirmed they were pulling over near the park. The chase indeed begun.
"Ready girls?" D asked Noemie through her earpiece who translated the question to Amanda and Levi. With an affirmative respond, the plan could go on. The girls started to throw Levi's ball for him to catch. The dog knew his part : he would run after it while the girls would turn around and start signing. Jack and Myles will be ready as soon as they took Levi, others in back up to follow them if they failled, though it wasn't even an option.
Levi came to give the ball twice ; at the third throw, he didn't came back.
"Move, Move!" Yelled Jack to his team.
Levi struggled a bit for the men's benefit, though he knew he couldn't be too hard on them : the team was there to take care of them in the right way. As much as he wanted to bit their butts, he wouldn't jeopardize all their efforts. Only he couldn't resist to intimidate his attackers : just a few barks and a bit of teeth showing...
Startled by the shouts coming from each side, the beef that worked for Malvin Smith send a right punch in Jack stomach after he dropped Levi's collar. Falling to his knees under the impact, Jack lost his breath but wasn't ready to give up yet. With an unbelievable strength he propelled himself in the man's feet, sending him to the ground. Coming from behind, Bobby took care of him and handcuffed him while Myles runned after Smith. Barely able to keep his pace, he was releived to see the blue van coming right to cut the man's runaway.
"Great timing, Tara! Where have you got your driver's licence?" He teased the small woman once he had found his breath.
"Why do you ask? You don't like my driving?" She replied with a grin.
Seing Jack laying on his side made her worse fears pass through Sue's mind.
"Jack! Jack!" Knelling in front of him she saw his eyes shot. Oh no! God please! Let him be all right!
Felling a hand on her shoulder she turned to face Bobby. "He'll be okay, he just took a nice shot in the stomach. Took his breath away for a second." He tried to comfort her.
Groaning he opened his eyes, which made him think for a moment he might be in heaven : his beautiful angel was there for him, concern all over her sliky face.
"Hi sweetheart!" He mumbled under the pain each breath he made brought.
Putting a finger on his lips to silence him, she stroke his hair lightly with her other hand. "Sssshhh... It's gonna be okay Jack : I'm here with you, now... and I won't go anywhere."
As Levi came near his mistress, he couldn't hide his happiness : his two favorite humans were FINALLY where they belong, with one another.
'Huh... It was about time!'
Amanda could have sworn she saw him grining while this thought passed through his mind.
*****
More soon! Have a nice weekend!
*****
With the van's description gave by Levi along with the surveillance tape from the front camera of the Department of Justice building they were able to find it : it belong to 'Dip Of Grace Pharmatics', which belongs to...
"Good answer : Doctor Malvin Smith himself!" Frowning when she saw the light blue letters that ornate the building, Tara yelled, "How rude! That's enough to make me wanna be sick!"
"What is it, luv?"
"Huh, look at the letters : D.O.G.! Is it a joke or are they laughing at us?"
---
Amanda, Noemie and Levi were walking in the park, ready in case the 'Doctor' or one of his man went to 'dog chase' again. Myles and Jack were posted in strategic point near them, always keeping them in sight. Bobby and Tara were in front of the building, waiting for any appearance of the guess of honor. Sue, Lucy and D were in the surveillance van coordinating all the others.
"Huh-huh, I think our Mr. Boss is greating us with his presence... He's heading your way with the van, but he's not alone : we have 200 pounds of muscles and no brain beside him." Announced Bobby over his headset. "We're following them."
"Be careful : don't let him see you, Crash." Stated Jack a bit nervous.
"We can't afford to lose him either!" He pointed out.
After what seems an eternity, Bobby finally comfirmed they were pulling over near the park. The chase indeed begun.
"Ready girls?" D asked Noemie through her earpiece who translated the question to Amanda and Levi. With an affirmative respond, the plan could go on. The girls started to throw Levi's ball for him to catch. The dog knew his part : he would run after it while the girls would turn around and start signing. Jack and Myles will be ready as soon as they took Levi, others in back up to follow them if they failled, though it wasn't even an option.
Levi came to give the ball twice ; at the third throw, he didn't came back.
"Move, Move!" Yelled Jack to his team.
Levi struggled a bit for the men's benefit, though he knew he couldn't be too hard on them : the team was there to take care of them in the right way. As much as he wanted to bit their butts, he wouldn't jeopardize all their efforts. Only he couldn't resist to intimidate his attackers : just a few barks and a bit of teeth showing...
Startled by the shouts coming from each side, the beef that worked for Malvin Smith send a right punch in Jack stomach after he dropped Levi's collar. Falling to his knees under the impact, Jack lost his breath but wasn't ready to give up yet. With an unbelievable strength he propelled himself in the man's feet, sending him to the ground. Coming from behind, Bobby took care of him and handcuffed him while Myles runned after Smith. Barely able to keep his pace, he was releived to see the blue van coming right to cut the man's runaway.
"Great timing, Tara! Where have you got your driver's licence?" He teased the small woman once he had found his breath.
"Why do you ask? You don't like my driving?" She replied with a grin.
Seing Jack laying on his side made her worse fears pass through Sue's mind.
"Jack! Jack!" Knelling in front of him she saw his eyes shot. Oh no! God please! Let him be all right!
Felling a hand on her shoulder she turned to face Bobby. "He'll be okay, he just took a nice shot in the stomach. Took his breath away for a second." He tried to comfort her.
Groaning he opened his eyes, which made him think for a moment he might be in heaven : his beautiful angel was there for him, concern all over her sliky face.
"Hi sweetheart!" He mumbled under the pain each breath he made brought.
Putting a finger on his lips to silence him, she stroke his hair lightly with her other hand. "Sssshhh... It's gonna be okay Jack : I'm here with you, now... and I won't go anywhere."
As Levi came near his mistress, he couldn't hide his happiness : his two favorite humans were FINALLY where they belong, with one another.
'Huh... It was about time!'
Amanda could have sworn she saw him grining while this thought passed through his mind.
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More soon! Have a nice weekend!
QUOTE(any @ Jun 27 2008, 09:50 PM)
As Levi came near his mistress, he couldn't hide his happiness : his two favorite humans were FINALLY where they belong, with one another.
'Huh... It was about time!'
'Huh... It was about time!'
I'm glad they got the bad guy, and I'm glad Jack nearly spilled the beans by calling her "sweetheart!" Levi's work is almost done, as far as Jack and Sue are concerned!Good dog, Levi!
Have a great weekend, Any! Look forward to more story when you get back to us!
Well that's one way to tell someone you care Way to go Levi!!!!! Now lock them up and throw away the key!!!!
Way to go Levi!!!!! Now lock them up and throw away the key!!!!
wow!!! they caught the bad guys 
, and you give us a little fuzzies!!!
Have a nice weekend too!!!
Tere
, and you give us a little fuzzies!!! Have a nice weekend too!!!
Tere
Yes! The team has them!!!! Good idea to have Levi act as bait...though you made me nervous. Now hopefully they are going to find the other dogs are all still alive...right?! 
kav
Hi! Levi's work is not done...yet! Here it goes!
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"See, I told you I was okay," said Jack after a quick check up by the medical care, holding Sue's hand, officially to comfort her, though he did enjoyed the touch of her skin more than he could admit. He was craving for her and he could tell by now that she had at least similar feelings toward him.
"I just wanted to be sure that none of your body parts was hurt." Gasping as she realized she had actually vocalized her last thought, she blushed deeply. Note to self : ALWAYS THINK THINGS FIRST BEFORE I SAY THEM LOUD! Particularly around Sparky!
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Waiting with their friends near the surveillance van, Tara was slightly away from the others.
"You okay, luv? You seemed far away in your thoughts." Bobby was worried about Tara state of mind after she realized how her hold 'fiancé' had turned out.
"How can someone be that evil, especially with innocent animals?..." Demanded Tara, tears in her deep brown pools.
"Hey honey! You can't blame yourself for this drongo's acts : he's the one that decided to turn bad! And with what you told us earlier, he did that choice BEFORE he proposed. I can only thank God that you were--and still ar--a wise enough woman to reject him, then and now." Hearing his confession made her thought she would melt right away ; in her wildest dreams she had thought that maybe... Staring into each other's gaze, they were lost in time.
Levi as a good dog as he was couldn't stand it anymore : they were as bad as Sue and Jack. So with his usual enthousiasm he came behind Tara who was facing Bobby. In one calculated swing, the canine runned into Tara, pushing her right into the tall man's arms.
'See, that's way better!' The dog thought comtemplating his work proudly.
Taken aback by their sudden change of position, Bobby enrolled his arms around the little agent, thanful for the 'divine's' intervention.
"Huh... Sorry... Levi...pushed me... and I... huh..." Mumbled Tara not able to mutter a meaningful sentence under the intensity of his look on her. Not wanting to quit the security of his arms yet, she didn't tried to back away, which gave him the confidence he needed to pursue his task. Close in each others arms, he felt her heart pounding away in her chest against his.
"Thank you buddy." He leaned in, lowered his head down and brushed his lips against hers, sending shivers through her entire body.
'Mayby I should open a matchmaking agency with Lucy : 'Beauty and the beast' ... Sounds good!' Laughed Levi to himself, followed by a teenage's one. Turning his head to look who had respond to his joke, he saw Amanda glancing at him smiling from ear to ear. 'Huh... should be careful what I think around her!' She chuckled one more shacking her head.
*****
I heard some of you like fuzzies...
More to come!
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"See, I told you I was okay," said Jack after a quick check up by the medical care, holding Sue's hand, officially to comfort her, though he did enjoyed the touch of her skin more than he could admit. He was craving for her and he could tell by now that she had at least similar feelings toward him.
"I just wanted to be sure that none of your body parts was hurt." Gasping as she realized she had actually vocalized her last thought, she blushed deeply. Note to self : ALWAYS THINK THINGS FIRST BEFORE I SAY THEM LOUD! Particularly around Sparky!
---
Waiting with their friends near the surveillance van, Tara was slightly away from the others.
"You okay, luv? You seemed far away in your thoughts." Bobby was worried about Tara state of mind after she realized how her hold 'fiancé' had turned out.
"How can someone be that evil, especially with innocent animals?..." Demanded Tara, tears in her deep brown pools.
"Hey honey! You can't blame yourself for this drongo's acts : he's the one that decided to turn bad! And with what you told us earlier, he did that choice BEFORE he proposed. I can only thank God that you were--and still ar--a wise enough woman to reject him, then and now." Hearing his confession made her thought she would melt right away ; in her wildest dreams she had thought that maybe... Staring into each other's gaze, they were lost in time.
Levi as a good dog as he was couldn't stand it anymore : they were as bad as Sue and Jack. So with his usual enthousiasm he came behind Tara who was facing Bobby. In one calculated swing, the canine runned into Tara, pushing her right into the tall man's arms.
'See, that's way better!' The dog thought comtemplating his work proudly.
Taken aback by their sudden change of position, Bobby enrolled his arms around the little agent, thanful for the 'divine's' intervention.
"Huh... Sorry... Levi...pushed me... and I... huh..." Mumbled Tara not able to mutter a meaningful sentence under the intensity of his look on her. Not wanting to quit the security of his arms yet, she didn't tried to back away, which gave him the confidence he needed to pursue his task. Close in each others arms, he felt her heart pounding away in her chest against his.
"Thank you buddy." He leaned in, lowered his head down and brushed his lips against hers, sending shivers through her entire body.
'Mayby I should open a matchmaking agency with Lucy : 'Beauty and the beast' ... Sounds good!' Laughed Levi to himself, followed by a teenage's one. Turning his head to look who had respond to his joke, he saw Amanda glancing at him smiling from ear to ear. 'Huh... should be careful what I think around her!' She chuckled one more shacking her head.
*****
I heard some of you like fuzzies...
More to come!
Sounds like Levi and Sue have a similar problem . . . they both tend to "speak" before realizing that other people can hear them! Very nice fuzzies between Bobby and Tara . . . although you KNOW I'm partial to Jack and Sue fuzzies . . . !! Have I mentioned that
? QUOTE
'See, that's way better!' The dog thought comtemplating his work proudly.
If only Levi had taken that initiative with Jack and Sue years ago!!!! QUOTE
'Mayby I should open a matchmaking agency with Lucy : 'Beauty and the beast' ... Sounds good!' Laughed Levi to himself
He might just have something there, though.kav
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'Mayby I should open a matchmaking agency with Lucy : 'Beauty and the beast'
Hi there! This story is coming to its end... Thank you so much for the support, reading and comments! I really enjoyed writing this and I hope it made you smile a bit.
*****
As the day comes to an end, the team proud of their achievement talked about the previous events.
"You should have seen this, Jack ; it was so sad! All those poor dogs with devastated looks in their puppy eyes... At least the Animal Service's will that good care of them from now on and will try to find all their families and bring them back home." Sadly explained Bobby who just came back from the 'Dip of Grace Pharmatics' labs.
"Yeah... Lots of them were almost starving to death! It was enough to disgust me from all those medical agencies who pretend to be working for the 'sake of human being'! Who do they think they are fooling?!" Commented Myles in a rather animated tone.
"Wow Myles! Who would have thought you were the 'aminal protective kind of guy'!" teased Tara gaining a reproachful glaze from the Bostonian.
"You all seems to have a hard time believing that under my though appearence hides a soft and caring..."
"MYLES!" Bobby, Jack and D called at the same time, which made the girls chuckled and Levi to bark.
"Thank you, Buddy! At least I see someone appreciate my effort to bring a little happiness in this world!" Complained Myles rubbing Levi's fur in a thankful gesture, making him bark some more. "What did he said?" He questioned turning to face Amanda.
"He's glad you all found out his friends and that they will be able to run safe in the parks again. And... he's also glad he didn't had to 'dig up' to deep to find out your 'human side'..." She finished laughing at the comment along with the others.
Giving Levi a 'not-you-too' look, he stated, "Hum... mayby I should tell your mistress here not to let you play with Koala Boy too much : he's got a bad influence on you." Whining Levi led down on the floor and feigning being hurt, hide his face under his paws.
Entering the bullpen and hearing laughters, Amanda's father wondered what could have been so funny to entertain them so much, secretely hoping that the cause wasn't Amanda.
"Patrick! You're already here!" Stated Sue greeting him with a hug. The little 'jalousy beast' inside Jack rose his head to watch the exchange. He's just a friend of hers... Calm down! He adminished himself.
"I hope Amanda didn't gave you guys any trouble? I know she can be a handful sometimes..." Asked the man worriedly glancing at his dauther. Not sure of what to say, she looked at Sue for help.
"Huh, no! They did behave themselves pretty well! In fact, they took good care of Levi and help us understand him a bit..." She blinked at her teen friend who send back a bright smile of gratitude ; her dad wouldn't have understood the story if they had tried to explain. It was way beyong the odds!
Exchanging their numbers and e-mail, Amanda and Noemie had to say goodbye. Promissing to stay in contact and to see each other when possible, they were thanking God to have meet each other.
"Seems like your 'Dog days of summer' are over!" Smiled Noemie.
"Thank to you... I'll miss you, and I won't ever forget those two days! How could I?!"
Patrick couldn't hide his embarassement : something definitely HAD happen, but what? Understanding he wouldn't have answers to his questions, he decided to let it go ; if something REALLY serious had occured, Sue would have told him, right?...
Hiding their grins, the team members said their goodbyes and suggested that both of them come to visit them more often : things were really fun around those teenagers! Espeacially when that particular girl who could talk with their wonderdog was around!
FIN
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See you in another story!
I really enjoyed writing this and I hope it made you smile a bit. *****
As the day comes to an end, the team proud of their achievement talked about the previous events.
"You should have seen this, Jack ; it was so sad! All those poor dogs with devastated looks in their puppy eyes... At least the Animal Service's will that good care of them from now on and will try to find all their families and bring them back home." Sadly explained Bobby who just came back from the 'Dip of Grace Pharmatics' labs.
"Yeah... Lots of them were almost starving to death! It was enough to disgust me from all those medical agencies who pretend to be working for the 'sake of human being'! Who do they think they are fooling?!" Commented Myles in a rather animated tone.
"Wow Myles! Who would have thought you were the 'aminal protective kind of guy'!" teased Tara gaining a reproachful glaze from the Bostonian.
"You all seems to have a hard time believing that under my though appearence hides a soft and caring..."
"MYLES!" Bobby, Jack and D called at the same time, which made the girls chuckled and Levi to bark.
"Thank you, Buddy! At least I see someone appreciate my effort to bring a little happiness in this world!" Complained Myles rubbing Levi's fur in a thankful gesture, making him bark some more. "What did he said?" He questioned turning to face Amanda.
"He's glad you all found out his friends and that they will be able to run safe in the parks again. And... he's also glad he didn't had to 'dig up' to deep to find out your 'human side'..." She finished laughing at the comment along with the others.
Giving Levi a 'not-you-too' look, he stated, "Hum... mayby I should tell your mistress here not to let you play with Koala Boy too much : he's got a bad influence on you." Whining Levi led down on the floor and feigning being hurt, hide his face under his paws.
Entering the bullpen and hearing laughters, Amanda's father wondered what could have been so funny to entertain them so much, secretely hoping that the cause wasn't Amanda.
"Patrick! You're already here!" Stated Sue greeting him with a hug. The little 'jalousy beast' inside Jack rose his head to watch the exchange. He's just a friend of hers... Calm down! He adminished himself.
"I hope Amanda didn't gave you guys any trouble? I know she can be a handful sometimes..." Asked the man worriedly glancing at his dauther. Not sure of what to say, she looked at Sue for help.
"Huh, no! They did behave themselves pretty well! In fact, they took good care of Levi and help us understand him a bit..." She blinked at her teen friend who send back a bright smile of gratitude ; her dad wouldn't have understood the story if they had tried to explain. It was way beyong the odds!
Exchanging their numbers and e-mail, Amanda and Noemie had to say goodbye. Promissing to stay in contact and to see each other when possible, they were thanking God to have meet each other.
"Seems like your 'Dog days of summer' are over!" Smiled Noemie.
"Thank to you... I'll miss you, and I won't ever forget those two days! How could I?!"
Patrick couldn't hide his embarassement : something definitely HAD happen, but what? Understanding he wouldn't have answers to his questions, he decided to let it go ; if something REALLY serious had occured, Sue would have told him, right?...
Hiding their grins, the team members said their goodbyes and suggested that both of them come to visit them more often : things were really fun around those teenagers! Espeacially when that particular girl who could talk with their wonderdog was around!
FIN
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9522 words
See you in another story!
wow! 2 posts, and the last ones 
Excellent story Any! hope 'read' you soon
Tere
Excellent story Any! hope 'read' you soon
Tere
That was awesome Any!!!!!
I love the way you ended your story! Definitely leaves it open for MORE stories featuring Levi, Amanda, and Noemie! What a great way to expand on those characters!
You're a great writer, Any. I'm looking forward to more stories from you!!
You had me worried there for a minute, Any, but everything turned out okay!! I'm sad for Tara that she had to know this doctor and had even dated him, but in the end she was able to help the team catch him!!!
Levi and Lucy should open a matchmaking business!! No one would stand a chance against them!! Levi did good - both Jack and Sue, and Bobby and Tara!! Not bad for a few days' work, is it???
Wonderful story, Any!! A great case, and I really enjoyed knowing exactly what Levi was saying!! Thanks for sharing!!!
Joy
Levi and Lucy should open a matchmaking business!! No one would stand a chance against them!! Levi did good - both Jack and Sue, and Bobby and Tara!! Not bad for a few days' work, is it???
Wonderful story, Any!! A great case, and I really enjoyed knowing exactly what Levi was saying!! Thanks for sharing!!!
Joy
Yes, I found it very satisfying to actually know what was on Levi's mind all through the story for once. You did a great job conveying his inner most thoughts...er...at least, Amanda did.
kav
kav
What a fun story. Levi, it's so nice to know your thoughts. 
Thank you any!
Thank you any!
Amanda and Levi This was great, Ani. Thank you! 
This was great, Ani. Thank you!
Any, I really enjoyed your story!!!
Levi's thoughts were so funny and happy to see those dogs safe and sounds.
Thanks for sharing ;0)
Josy
Levi's thoughts were so funny and happy to see those dogs safe and sounds.
Thanks for sharing ;0)
Josy
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