Great story...I'm sorry to see it end. Thanks very much for weaving us such a great tale. And you're right, your last post was

- RSL

Tina, sorry, it´s too early for me, so when I can think more coherently I will back

Tere

Wow, what an ending to a marvelous story!

I dunno, Tina . . . that may have needed a TEN BLUSHING SMILEY WARNING! WOW! I've been gone a couple of days, and come back to perfection!

You know, one of the things I love most about your writing is that you weave such funny lines in with even the steamiest scenes, and this one is CERTAINLY no exception! I think one of my favorite lines was . . . . . . because that's how married people ARE. You've got a married Jack and Sue down to perfection.

Another part I really liked was this . . . . . . because that's another thing that's so true to life. The idea of Jack Hudson being caught off guard and BLUSHING is so darn endearing! Wow.

I've loved this story from post one, and look forward to cutting and pasting it onto a Word doc and putting it on my flash drive like I did "Kentucky Rain," so that I can pull it out and enjoy it at the MOST random times. I foresee reading this one over and over again just as much!! Thanks for sharing with us your humor, your command of fuzzies, and your wonderful, wonderful storytelling ability!

And by the way - and I think I probably speak for many of us here - you, along with many others on the board, but with this story more recently, have ruined regular old utilitarian showers for life . . .

Tina, I was and and and and and
... and then Poor Levi !


Wonderful story and so glad you finish it in time

When I saw 'last post' I was wondering if we were having the 'shower scene' this time...

You didn't deceive us!!! WOW!!! What a hot one that was!!!

It was a pure delight to read your story from post one to the end. I'm thankful to have such good writers around here!

Beautifully done!!!

Oh dear...

I knew I shouldn't have read this before I posted on my fic. Now I can't even remember my own name!

A very mushy, gooey, melty post Tina. Jack and Sue are loving married life, I see. And I'm so glad Jack agreed tht SUe could totally redo the bathroom. I think it was well worth it!

Another excellent story from you, missy! It's a shame you don't write more. Think of all the possibilities of writing something like this but in an even greater scale!

Oh dear... I melted myself.

Lisa?... No... Lucy?... No... Lindsy! Ha! That's it!

Lindsy (slithering off to post)

Tina...this was an amazing story!!!!!!



The ending was WOW WOW WOW!!!!!!!

OK! Here I go again , WONDERFUL TINA!!! Excellent story, Great shower scene! and Levi... poor thing!

Thanks for share

Tere

WHOA MAMA!

Kim

Can I mimic you Tina??

THUD

Great finale!!! Cannot ask for better...I'm still red in the face
Josy

Okay, Tina, I did it and you know what I'm talking about. And gee, was this ever worth it! I'm with Marlene

You expect me to go take a
now, to get ready for this evening? But, but, but, but, who wants to go take a shower by themselves after that? I wish, no, not that I had a Jack, I wish I was Sue!

I agree with Regina, I love the touches of very realistic humor you bring to even these inimate moments. However, I do beg to differ with you on one line.... Even though I loved it...there is something so delicious about the word "indecent"...I didn't see anything "indecent" in Sue's fascination there! After all, they are married, so anything goes, right?

And you masterfully gave us what we clamor for in a very delicate, sensitive way! You're writing is amazing!

Now, I'll have to go back and do you know what!

Lynn

Thanks for a super story!
Terie

Oh, Tina.... I've been awol so long , and now this story has ended.

But wow... the last few posts were fantastic, especially that last one

Congratulations on another excellent writing. I've loved every bit from beginning to end.

I've read some fuzzies on this board and some of them yours Tina......but....

that last scene gets to me every time `Oh.....J-a-a-a-a-a-c-k.....`


My heart is racing I'm on cloud nine and drool, thuds everything.

And the worst thing is I'm off to work in this state...YOUR fault, but thank you

Gosh darn, I missed the finale but I'm still


[quote]She gave him a head rub as they moved into the living room, turning off lights and checking the lock on the front door. She made it a point to peek out the curtain toward Mrs. Breathitt’s house. The elderly woman lived all alone and Sue had taken it on herself to keep an eye out for her in between visits by her daughter who lived across town. Seeing that the house was dark except for the small light in the upstairs window, she smiled and headed toward the stairs. Mrs. Breathitt had devised the signal as a way to let her know all was well, flipping the switch on only after she climbed into bed for the night. Now that the neighborhood was tucked in, Sue could concentrate on her own bedtime preparations.[/quote] I don't know why, but I loved this little extra detail -- so Sue, but it also conveys how settled they are in their home, how content she is as part of a couple now. It's just a feel good paragraph -- especially since I know that Jack is concentrating on betime preparations as well.

[quote] he lay there bare-chested, and as far as she could tell, with only a sheet, that dipped dangerously low, covering his hips and legs? [/quote] THUD!!![/size


[quote]Jack quirked a brow and threw the sheet aside, bolting after her and catching up just a few feet from the bed. Scooping her up and enduring her squeal of surprise, he carried her into the tiled room that had become a favorite destination at the end of a long day fighting crime. [/quote] And what would a kmt123 story be without a shower scene, hmmmm?


[quote]“I had my heart set on a long, relaxing shower to work out some of the kinks from doing all that planting. Mind telling me why, exactly, I should give that up?”

“So, you’re feeling kinky, hmmm? “ Jack caught his lower lip between his teeth and spiked his brows upward at the prospects that presented. “All the more reason to let me join you, I could help take care of a few of those for you.”[/quote] [size=5]THUD!!! THUD!!! Teasing Jack intent on celebrating their one month anniversary!!!!


[quote]She giggled as he blew a strand of it from his mouth after attempting to kiss her neck, advancing toward the bed all the while. When he stopped abruptly and scowled at the bed, she turned to see what could possibly put that look on his face after their bathroom interlude.

Levi lay square in the center of the king size bed, stretched from pillow to foot with the sheet Jack had discarded tangled around his back legs. [/quote] Can't blame a dog for trying.

[quote] One of the hardest things to adjust to since Jack had brought them to this nice, new doghouse, was knowing when she needed him at night - and sometimes even during the day - and when he would get an “Oh no… Levi!”

Deciding tonight it would be the latter, he tried to tune out the noise; only lifting his head once when Sue called out…

“Oh… J-a-a-a-a-a-c-k!”[/quote] What an awesome ending. But I'm terribly sorry to see it finished...surely you have something up your sleeve for us?

kav

Wow that was great. Jack is so sweet! That last seen was amazing!

I love you Tina!!! That story was amazing! Can't wait for your next one!

Em

Tina, to end your story with a shower scene is truly "Tina"!! I love it!!!

I agree, that was a wonderful last post!! I love that Sue was checking over the little flower plants she had put in that afternoon!! And, checking on the neighbor before she went to bed is just what Sue would do!! She sounds very happy and content!! Who wouldn't be?? Jack, waiting for her in their bedroom, wearing a sheet, ready to celebrate their one-month anniversary!! Be still my heart!!!

Absolutely perfect from the first word, Tina!! Thank you so much for sharing once again!!!

Joy

Tina I was so far behind on all these stories after my trip to NY, I decided to print the rest of this out last night for my bedtime reading. It was so wonderful....until SIMON!!!! I was all set to come after you for bringing Simon back, until you so nicely got rid of him. Poor Sue, but I agree with Jack, he was asking for it.

Anyway, needless to say, you have redeemed yourself with this wonderful ending. I loved the dinner and when they discussed getting married etc. And then Jack's creative Anniv celebration.

Has anyone figured out how to clone Jack yet? I definitely want my own Jack, just like this one.

Levi is tooooo funny. It's a good thing for Jack and Sue that he's catching on to people lovers language

Thank you for a wonderful story
I love it.

Kammy

Glad jack didn't get into trouble cuz of Jessica and that Simon didn't win. Glad levi is ok. Lol him trying to sneak into the big bed and jack scolding him. Yay jack and sue are married

That was amazing. and funny.



Hope ~