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GinaSue
Hope you enjoy this little glimpse into Levi's thoughts during "The Gambler!" I was afraid that if I didn't go ahead and post this, it would turn into an epic . . . hehe.gif

Thanks for reading!

Regina


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Levi’s Not-So-Excellent Adventure
Levi’s POV during the episode, “The Gambler”

I need a tree. Now.

Oh! There’s one!
It’s tall, and gray, and looks like it has two trunks. Funny roots . . .
Oh what a relief it is . . .
Wait a minute . . . the tree’s jumping up and down . . . and yelling!
Great . . . it wasn’t a tree, it was Myles’ leg.

Something’s wrong with me.

What am I doing here?
I’m closed up in this little room, and I’m getting really antsy.
That strange feeling is coming over me again, and I can’t stop it.
She left me here, with him, and he put me in here and shut the door.
What did I do?

They’re all out to get me.

Gotta get out.
I’m claustrophobic, I can’t breathe.
Is she coming back for me?
Can’t take the chance that she’s left me.
Somebody’s at the door.

Gotta escape!

I’m out!
He never saw me leave.
I’ll run until I feel safe again.
Still have that strange feeling, but now I’m more confused.
Why did she leave me?

Why do I feel this way?

That was a close one!
That car nearly clipped me, and I didn’t even hear it coming.
I guess that’s why she’s kept me around so long.
She can’t hear anything, ever.
I don’t feel so good.

Oh, no . . .

What have I done?
She’s gonna be so mad at me.
I want to go home, but where am I?
I wonder if she’s crying?
If she is, Jack will take care of her. It should be me taking care of her.

I just want to go home.

It’s getting darker
I’ve been wandering around all day, but can’t get my bearings.
I’ve been kicked, yelled at, and had things dropped on me from above.
I did a really stupid thing, running away.
I just want to find her.

Great. Now it’s raining.

At least it’s shelter.
The old warehouse is a little warmer and drier than outside, but not much.
Oh no . . . somebody closed the door on me!
I’m trapped in here, buddy! Help!
What was that?

Why did I run away again? I forget . . .

I can hear her!
She’s out there, but she can’t hear me bark!
Gotta get to her. She’ll get me out.
There’s a window, but it’s way up high.
I can get to it if I climb.

Wonder how someone knew to stack those boxes just right?

I see her!
She’s right below me, telling me to wait, but I can’t.
I want to be with her, now, and I think I can make it.
I got down! I landed in a smelly dumpster, but I’m OK.
She’s crying now . . . really hard . . . and laughing, too.

I thought she’d be mad at me.

Clean is good.
I don’t usually love baths, but that one was great.
She’s even letting me lie on the couch!
She looks really tired, but happy . . . and Jack’s here . . . he looks tired, too.
But she always looks happy when Jack’s here.

I saw Jack hug her earlier, and that made her smile.

So what’s been going on?
I got sick, Lucy took my medicine, Bobby got in trouble . . .
Now things are better.
Jack’s making sure Sue’s OK. He’s watching her closely . . . why’s he sitting way over there?
I’m gonna watch her closely, too, and take good care of her . . . with Jack’s help.

I’m home now, and when she says “Stay,” I’m gonna “Stay!”

I wonder if Jack would do the same?

Hmmmmmm . . . . maybe she should try it . . .

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Cere Cere
Oh Regina, that was absolutely fantastic!!! I like the part when Levi confuses Myles with a tree LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif I can't stop laughing, sorry Myles!! LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif, and the last part wow! seems like Levi has a mision chair.gif

Wonderful!!

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any
Hum, I wonder what kind of tree he thought Myles was...? LolLolLolLol.gif
I like how you picture how Levi was confused : the way he wasn't able to understand what was wrong with him and the fact that he didn't know why she let him aside. Poor Levi... And this last line :
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I’m home now, and when she says “Stay,” I’m gonna “Stay!”

I wonder if Jack would do the same?

Hmmmmmm . . . . maybe she should try it . .

SOOO FUNNY!!! hehe.gif
Great job, Regina!
kmt123
Somebody very wise once said that the world needed more epic poems, ya know... batting eyelashes.gif


But if it simply has to be short, then let it be as sweet as this! Poor Levi! But all's well that ends well. Of course, it could have been even sweeter if only the writers had taken a clue from Levi... I like his idea of how it SHOULD have ended for Jack and Sue!!

Thanks for being our Poet Laureate!

Tina
suesfan
Regina, I don't know how you did it!! You took that wonderful episode and put it into a beautiful form, full of rhythm, laughter and deep feelings!! I simply love it!!!

Thanks for sharing!!!

Joy
Frwdgranny
Regina! You've entered the fray! chair.gif cheerleader.gif chair.gif cheerleader.gif chair.gif cheerleader.gif chair.gif cheerleader.gif

Don't have time to read now. Just arrived in Dallas and I'm sneaking a peek at the internet. Can't stay online though, just enough time to sign up to receive email notices. Be back tomorrow afternoon or evening to read!

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Anne
Oh Regina that was wonderful as well as hysterical. LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif Poor Levi went thru such a traumatic day and it was great to hear his point of view. clapgirl.gif clapgirl.gif
maria2202
Regina...that was awesome!!!!! clapgirl.gif chair.gif
Linny27
Oh, Regina, That was just perfect! The part where Levi thought Myles was a tree was hysterical! Pure genius, you are!

Lindsy
Kav
Hey you snuck this in here when I wasn't looking!!!! What a great idea -- and I think you captured Levi's voice perfectly. You unscrambled his mind and got us thinking in canine. And even though I knew it was from the Gambler, it didn't register when I read
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I need a tree. Now.

Oh! There’s one!
It’s tall, and gray, and looks like it has two trunks. Funny roots . . .
LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif You managed to begin and end your poem with hysterical laughter!!!!
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I’m home now, and when she says “Stay,” I’m gonna “Stay!”

I wonder if Jack would do the same?

Hmmmmmm . . . . maybe she should try it . . .

We can only hope, but Jack hasn't been to Obedience School...maybe Sue could take him -- for lifetime classes!

kav
agrp1
I love this, Sis! I imagine Levi with a "Kibbles and Bits" kind of voice. hehe.gif

Parenthetically, I must thank you for bringing out this bit:

QUOTE(GinaSue @ Jul 1 2008, 01:35 PM) *

Jack’s making sure Sue’s OK. He’s watching her closely . . . why’s he sitting way over there?


Honestly, that scene bugs me so much. Everyone's in casual attire except Jack, who is sitting all by himself in a suit and tie. My dear husband had to endure me pausing it and practically diagramming the scene to figure out where they were all sitting, because I was convinced they had edited Jack in at the last minute. But no, I think Jack was really just sitting all by himself in a suit and tie... hmmm.gif Overanalysis probably runs in the family...

Excellent work!!!

Annie
marlo29
Description of Myles' pants LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif

Great job!

Marlene
Oreolover
Regina, that was a real treat! Maybe Sue should have told Jack to "stay." It might have speeded things along. clapgirl.gif clapgirl.gif clapgirl.gif
LittleEm
clapgirl.gif I loved that! Good old Levi... He should try getting Jack to stay. Jack seems very obedient batting eyelashes.gif

Em
Josy
I just laughed my head's off how Levi confused Myles' pans with trees!!! LolLolLolLol.gif
An awsone post Regina!!!
Josy
AJeff
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Anna
hfce
Cute! JC_cupidgirl.gif



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