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Here's a little something that came in my mind. I'm not use to do poetry so be indulgent with me... Hope you will like it... !

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"The Guardian"

Every single night
I'm the guardian of your dreams ;
I'm always ready for a fight
If I hear you scream.
When you fall asleep
I hope it will be peaceful and deep.
Sometimes I even see you smile
But you haven't since a while...

The day might be rainy or sunny
No matter what, I'm the guardian of your body.
My task is to hear for you ;
Be ready to give you the 'cue'.
But lately, everywhere I see clouds
Because he's afraid to say it aloud...

When the evening comes with its darkness,
I'm the guardian of your soul.
You confide to me your worries and your sadness,
But don't mistake : I'm not a fool...
I know deep down inside
That forever he won't hide
Because it hurts him as much as you
To not be able to say 'I love you'...

You said we can't be apart
Because I'm the guardian of your heart.
You used to laugh, though now you cry.
Only he your tears can dry.
Please God, hear my doggy prayer
And tell Jack to come back to her...
Everyone knows that they belongs together
So make them be one, just forever...

A faithful dog who cares for his mistress
And who's telling you his distress...

Levi


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girl_sigh.gif Levi truly loves his mistress, does he...?
GinaSue
girl_sigh.gif Aw, Any, that was beautiful!! girl_sigh.gif

I loved the way you went over the many ways Levi takes care of Sue, and the way he acknowledges Jack's place in her heart without any jealousy whatsoever. Truly lovely. You ARE a poet!!

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Cere Cere
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Wonderful, cute, tenderness! I loved it! clapgirl.gif

Tere
Kav
You got right to the heart of the wonder dog!

kav
suesfan
In his own way, Levi gives Sue comfort!!!

Beautiful, Any!!!

Joy
marlo29
You captured Levi. Very beautiful!

Marlene
kmt123
I'm sooooo late to this, but I'm glad I noticed it! Great Job Any, sure you're not a poet at heart. It's nice to think of Levi praying for Sue and that Jack will get off his duff and tell her he loves her.

Keep it up!!

Tina
Sue&Jack
That has loyalty and love, two of Levi's character traits, written all over it.
Anne
Any, that was beautiful. Levi loves Sue and even prays for her. girl_sigh.gif That's our wonderdog. dogdance.gif
Frwdgranny
Any, what can I say that hasn't already been said. I agree with everyone! That was a truly awesome prayer! praying.gif

You are a poet! Flowers.gif

Lynn

Josy
Beautiful poem Any!!
Levi's thoughts are sweet...
Josy
valleygirl
Bien fait, Any! Levi est tellement gentil et sensible!
AJeff
Beautiful.

Anna
hfce
Sweet. smile.gif



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