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JACKSEYES
Jack is so right...anyone...ANYONE...can be struck down with a debilating medical

condition whether able bodied or not.What we need is a close and supportive network.

He did good in trying to encourage Sue that they are in this together.

Boy he has a way with words which had brought me so close to tears in that

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GinaSue
I don't know what it is, but I seem to be obsessed with cooking . . . not that I've been doing much of it here lately, but I seem to enjoy the idea of JACK cooking . . . IN THE KITCHEN, people . . . I know how you all are . . . batting eyelashes.gif hehe.gif

We're making an about face from the seriousness of the last chapter, and we're bringing the team back in! Hope you enjoy, and thanks SO MUCH for reading, and for commenting!! You're wonderful!

Regina


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Chapter 18

“Jack, when did you become a decent cook? Last time I looked in your refrigerator, all that was in there was molded cheese, a half a container of spoiled milk, and some seriously expired mayonnaise,” Bobby said, putting his last forkful of lasagna in his mouth and rolling his eyes in enjoyment.

"Did you hear that?" Jack asked, turning to Sue. "He doubts me! I get no respect . . ."

"I didn't hear a thing," Sue returned, batting her eyelashes at him laughingly.

“Well . . . I had a good coach,” Jack said, shaking his head and smiling over at Sue. Completely bored with sitting on the couch all day after over two weeks of confinement, she finally convinced him to help her onto a barstool, propping her bad leg on another stool, where she proceeded to “talk” him through the mysteries of making lasagna for the team.

“And I had a good student,” Sue said, winking at Jack as he stood to take plates from her and from those who were finished. “I have to say, though, it was worth it to learn that whole brownie-cutting thing. Next time I need Martha Stewart tips from Jack Hudson, I’ll just have to mess up a knee again.”

Jack groaned and rolled his eyes as he fielded another volley of laughter from his team. She HAD to bring up the brownie thing. “That’s OK. I’ll be ready to start eating YOUR cooking very soon. But, you know, making lasagna isn’t as hard as I always figured it would be. I thought there was some big mystery to it,” Jack said, shrugging his shoulders. He was just a little proud of his success, but wouldn’t admit it for the world. Play it cool, Hudson. If Bobby knew how much fun he was having playing “Mr. Mom,” he would never let him live it down – like he’d never let the brownie thing die, he was sure.

Bobby just sat across the room shaking his head and laughing at the expression on Jack's face. He could read his best mate like a book, and these days it was interesting reading.

“Well, easy or hard, I still say I could get used to this on a regular basis,” Lucy said. “Are you sure you don’t want to just camp here permanently?” Lucy had a wicked glint in her eye as she said it, and arched an eyebrow gracefully as she looked at Jack and Sue sitting so comfortably next to one another. Sue dipped her eyes down, looking anywhere except toward Lucy or Jack.

Jack just looked at Lucy with a smug grin and a wink that told her that her day would come, and it just might not be pretty. As he pointed his finger at her, Lucy just laughed.

“OK, team, if everyone’s finished, let’s get down to work,” D said, seeing the glances that Lucy was throwing toward Jack and Sue, and reading between the lines better than they ever thought he could.

They had let SOG have the remainder of the previous week to do their surveillance, giving Jack and Sue a break on watching security footage, and Sue a chance to get used to maneuvering around the apartment. She was still hesitant about using the crutches, but she was getting better at it, much to Jack’s dismay. The better she got at independent movement, the fewer chances he had to carry her, have her lean on him for support, and basically keep her close to him. He had grown to enjoy that part of her convalescence, and he was going to have to think of other ways to finagle keeping her close by when they returned to work.

“Good idea,” Myles began. “But let me be among the first to say that I think this trend of combining socialization with bullpen meetings could be the start of a new trend in FBI work. Maybe we should start having potluck meals? Maybe we could convince Randy that it would increase productivity!” The sarcastic tone of his voice made the rest of the team laugh, all of them adding to the “new” traditions they could start.

“How about a ‘snap-cup?” Tara asked, giggling and snapping her fingers as Lucy and Sue began to laugh.

“What in the world is THAT?” Jack asked, with a puzzled expression. It sounded familiar, but he couldn’t remember why.

Legally Blonde,” Lucy said, looking at Jack knowingly.

Rolling his eyes and shaking his head, realization dawned on Jack as he remembered being forced to watch the “chick-flick” with Sue and Lucy one evening. Actually, it wasn’t a bad movie, he thought as he shrugged and tilted his head. Chick-flicks weren't such a hardship when you get to watch them with the "chick" of your choice, he thought with a smile.

“Yeah, remember? They started their sorority meetings with everyone putting a positive comment in a ceremonial cup and then reading them aloud?” Tara said, arching an eyebrow and blushing at Bobby, who was shaking his head, laughing at her.

“That’s all we need . . . to start integrating sorority traditions into our meetings,” Myles said with mock weariness.

“Hey, you started it,” Sue said, laughing. As good as it was to have Jack all to herself during the day, having the team there was good, too. It built her confidence just being with them, seeing the respect and love they all had for one another. She was beginning to notice other things, too. Like Bobby and Tara. What about Lucy and Myles? Was being in love, herself, causing her to look at everyone through the eyes of coupledom?

Jack was watching Sue, noticing when she got quiet, and noting the serene smile on her face, and then the glint of speculation. “WHAT’S UP?” he signed, narrowing his eyes at her a bit.

MATCHMAKING,” she signed back, laughing at his rolling eyes.

Jack smiled and shook his head as he settled in beside her, his arm around her shoulders. His hand reached out to pluck at a lock of long, blonde hair, stroking it, tugging at it, and weaving it between his fingers, for a moment letting his imagination take flight. He thought about the afternoon at the park, her hair spread across his chest as they relaxed in the shade of the tree. He thought about the way she looked the evening of the gala she cut short to help with the sniper case. She’d worn her hair down, at his request, even though David was her date. He thought about . . .

“Jack,” Sue whispered, “D’s trying to get your attention. Where were you?” She was looking closely at him, her hazel eyes luminous as she tried to delve into his deep brown eyes.

He smiled at her, and simply said, “I was with you,” enjoying watching the blush rising on her face as she smiled before turning his attention to his supervisor.

“Now that we’ve gone around the world, how’s about we focus on the case at hand? Tara? An update?” D said, motioning to the lady sitting behind the laptop.

“We’ve had SOG follow up on Kristi and Randall Peters, and Jane Harwell. It seems that Kristi and Randall Peters are having marital problems, as indicated by two visits to a counselor this past week,” Tara shared.

“That could explain why I never knew she was married. Maybe they’ve been separated?” Sue asked.

“They aren’t now, but according to our checks, they have been, off and on, for the last couple of years,” Lucy added.

“Poor Janie,” Sue said, her heart going out to the little girl who couldn’t hear, and who probably felt guilty every time her home turned upside down. Kids just do that, sometimes.

“Yeah. It’s always the kids who suffer, isn’t it?” Tara said, glancing over at Bobby, who kept his head down, deep in thought. Tara wondered why she said that, knowing that Bobby still had some unresolved issues surrounding his own parents’ separation and subsequent desertion by his father.

“Anyway,” D continued, determined to get his team back on track, “we’ve set up a meeting with Jane Harwell at the Hoover Building, and we were wondering if you would be able to come if we set up a meeting with Kristi Peters?”

“Jack?” Sue asked. “After all, you’re the one getting me down the stairs!”

“You’ve got a doctor’s appointment day after tomorrow, downtown,” he said, calculating in his head. “Could we make it for that day, D, before her appointment? It would be easier on Sue if she didn’t have to get out another time.”

“We’ll set it up. What time’s the appointment?” D asked.

“Two,” Jack said, looking at Sue, who was nodding in agreement, a look of excitement on her face.

"A field trip! It'll be good to get out of the apartment for a little while, won't it, Levi?" Sue said, reaching down to scratch the dog's ears.

“Sounds good. Lucy, would you set it up, please?” D said, even as Lucy nodded and made a note on her steno pad.

“How much are we going to tell these two ladies?” Myles asked, distrust of the general public never far below the surface.

“As little as possible. I’m hoping we can just tell them that we’re investigating some curious incidences involving helping dogs and bugging devices, and hopefully they will come forward with more information as we go,” D said. He looked at his team, knowing that it was people like THEM whose lives were on the line here. “These are intelligent women, or they would not be in the positions they are in. I don’t have to tell you that.” D paused and smiled at them, lifting an eyebrow humorously and deciding to lighten up the mood a bit. “Now, if you’d rather, I could always call up the Pentagon, Hart, and the White House and see about looking at all their footage? Your choice?”

Jack raised his hand. “As a Special Agent recently turned temporary Analyst . . .,” Jack began.

"And manservant!" Sue interjected to the delight of the team.

"Yeah . . .," Jack continued, “. . . I say we go with these ladies unless we find we can’t use them. Another couple of days of reviewing footage, and I think I’ll go bonkers . . . not that the company isn’t good,” he said, smiling at the beautiful lady in the crook of his arm.

“Short attention span,” Sue quipped, shrugging her shoulders as the team laughed with her.

“Yeah . . . well,” D said, smiling quietly at the couple.

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audiokim
I love the way Jack and Sue are around each other...growing more comfortable with each passing day!

Kim
suesfan
Regina, I just caught up on your last two posts!! I love Jack and Sue together!! They seem to be very comfortable with the team, even though it hasn't been formally announced that they are a couple yet!! I'm especially loving D's little thoughts as he observes them!!!

I understand why Sue has doubts about the future with Jack, but she shouldn't worry!! Jack isn't anything like Carol's husband!! I never thought Carol's husband cared anything for her - he just wanted the power to control!!!

This case is very interesting!! I can't wait to see what these ladies think about helping out the F.B.I.!!!

I'm really excited about the brownie tip!! I feel like running home and baking brownies so I can try it!!!

Joy
LittleEm
Short attention span... LolLolLolLol.gif I wonder what could possibly be pulling his attention away from the footage... batting eyelashes.gif

Em
Ivory
Gina,
I don't know how I missed your post yesterday, but in any event, that discussion that Jack and Sue had was wonderful. What spoke to me was Jack's unconditional love for Sue You conveyed that beautifully.

Carol's marriage may have been dismal, but one of my favorite episodes is the one with Katie Harmond, the deaf Gallaudet student who was kidnapped. Her parents were a "mixed" marriage, but they seemed to be such a strong, loving couple. I think their marriage really spoke "volumes" to Jack and Sue. Their characters even inspired me to write a story a while back.

Great job. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Cere Cere
LolLolLolLol.gif a funny post Regina, well also with the seriousness of the case, again Jack and Sue ----> wubb.gif

Tere
any
Yesterday's post was very deep... I loved the way Jack was able to give Sue the confidence she needed in his love for her... Amazingly well written!

As for today, You made me smile with their behavior in front of the team. An Jack seems to be almost ready for marriage if he can make lazagna...

I always thought that a guy in a kitchen is kind of sexy... So with JACK!!! blush.gif
Red Shores Lady
Excellent Regina. I loved the way that Jack casually put his arm around Sue and played with her hair. I don't know how she didn't melt on the spot. I know I do whenever my husband plays with my hair...actually I tend to melt when anybody (friends and/or family, I mean of course) plays with my hair (which actually happens a lot since its waist length). Anyway, great post...looking forward to reading more. blowkiss.gif

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kmt123
Just a lovely post! So much humor and wit, all mixed up with a healthy dose of barely concealed romance. Lot's of gems to quote, but this was my favorite...

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“Jack,” Sue whispered, “D’s trying to get your attention. Where were you?” She was looking closely at him, her hazel eyes luminous as she tried to delve into his deep brown eyes.

He smiled at her, and simply said, “I was with you,” enjoying watching the blush rising on her face as she smiled before turning his attention to his supervisor.


Talk about melting...

Tina
Linny27
You wanna know that I thought the cutest part of this post was? When Jack remembered that Sue had a doctor's apartment. For some reason, that jut stuck with me.

Lindsy
GinaSue
So . . . how many of you have tried cutting hot brownies? Hmmm?? It works . . . honest! Finally, here is a post with no food involved . . . sorry, guys! I know how much you were enjoying Jack's cooking . . . hehe.gif

Thanks for reading, and for all your kind words! Lindsy, you'd know that super-organizer team-leader Jack would remember her doctor's appointment, but don't you just know that the rest of the team had to pull their eyebrows off the ceiling several times that evening! winking.gif

Now, let's pay a visit to the bullpen!

Regina


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Chapter 19

“Myles, thank you for finding the wheelchair. I hate those crutches – it’s not so bad at home, but I’m very self-conscious about using them in public, and Jack has to be tired of carrying me around,” Sue said, arching an eyebrow at Jack as he pursed his lips and then grinned mischievously at her.

As soon as Myles looked away, Jack waggled his eyebrows at her and winked. “Yeah, Myles, it’s been a real burden,” he said with an exaggerated sigh.

“I can tell,” Myles said, dryly. “We had this in the storage room, and thought it would be easier for you to get around without wearing yourself – or your manservant – out.”

Arriving at the bullpen, a shout went up when Jack and Sue made their entrance. Levi went immediately to his spot somewhere between Sue’s desk and Jack’s, sniffing around.

“I think he’s looking for his bunny,” Sue said as she tried to maneuver the wheelchair over to her desk to check her email. Jack was doing the same, and everyone had dispersed to their own areas until such time as their interview was scheduled.

“Levi . . . here she is,” Jack said, finding the bunny underneath his desk and throwing it, to the delight of the canine. Unfortunately, Levi wasn’t prepared for the change in his balance because of the plaster cast, and when he made a flying leap to catch bunny, he missed his target and landed sideways. Looking completely embarrassed, he hobbled over to bunny, picked it up, and slunk back to hide behind Sue’s desk.

“Aw, buddy, I’m sorry,” Jack said, chuckling at the woebegone look on Levi’s face. “I should have remembered.”

“He’ll be OK. He’s still getting around better than me, and as long as you don’t start throwing things around for me to catch, we’ll be OK,” Sue said shaking her head as she pursed her lips with good humor.

I’LL TRY TO RESTRAIN MYSELF,” Jack signed, shifting his jaw over as he arched an eyebrow, for Sue’s benefit alone.

DON’T GOT TO ANY TROUBLE ON MY ACCOUNT,” she signed back with a quiet giggle, the double-meaning not lost on Jack, loving the blush that was rising on her face . . . and loving that her thoughts of him was what put it there.

WE’LL DISCUSS THAT LATER,” he signed, his eyes beginning to darken as he smiled over at her, capturing her eyes with his gaze.

They both sat there, Sue lost in the depths of Jack’s eyes, until she saw Jack’s head jerk up, and then saw D approaching them.

“Jack, Sue . . .,” D said, coming into the bullpen, “Kristi Peters just sent word that she’ll be here in 10 minutes. If you’ve got a minute, I need to see you in my office before the interview.”

After secretly watching the little interchange between her matchmaking subjects, Lucy sat over at her desk smiling, wondering if D’s need to see them was about the CASE, or about THEM. As she thought about it, a slight shadow crossed her face as she thought about the dating policy, and about what it would be like for either Jack or Sue to have to leave them. She knew that a problem like that didn’t compare to the things Sue worried about. She couldn’t help but be glad that Sue had brought her doubts and feelings out in the open with both herself and Jack. And she also couldn’t help but be proud of Jackson Samuel Hudson for the stand he made with Sue, convincing her, without a shadow of doubt, that he did indeed love her truly. Sighing happily and sending up a quick prayer of thanks for Sue’s and Jack’s happiness, Lucy went about her work, this time distracted only by the annoyance of yet another report to be handed in to Randy Pitts before 5pm.

*

“What’s up, D?” Jack asked, pushing Sue ahead of him in the wheelchair.

“We’ve got a glitch with Kristi Peters,” he said, frowning. “I just found out from SOG that Randall Peters was arrested last night . . . drug possession. And not just a little bit – a lot. DEA made the arrest.”

Jack pursed his lips and let out a whistle of surprise. Sue closed her eyes for a minute, saying a quick prayer for Kristi and her little girl, Janie. “But Kristi’s still coming?” she asked.

“Yeah. She may be upset. She doesn’t know why she’s been asked to come over here, so she will probably assume it has to do with her husband,” D said, shaking his head in frustration. “We can’t seem to get a break in this, can we?”

“Do you think we should still use her?” Jack asked, unsure of how to proceed, now. “I’m a little leery of mixing it up with the DEA guys.”

“I know. I am, too. She was our best bet for getting in. This has come completely out of the blue,” D said, rubbing the back of his neck in aggravation.

“D . . .,” Jack said, frowning a bit as he hesitated, glancing at Sue, then at Levi, and then at Sue again.

“What is it, Jack?” Sue asked, a small smile on her face as she watched the ideas flit through his mind and across his face. She had an idea what he was thinking, and he was trying desperately to talk himself out of it . . . but it was a good idea . . . a very good idea. “Spill, Hudson,” she said with a smile.

“Got an idea, Jack?” D asked, narrowing his eyes at the agent.

“I hate to even suggest it, Sue, without talking to you first . . .,” he began, his eyes almost begging her to say no.

“I need to get in there, don’t I, Jack?” Sue said with a smile, quirking an eyebrow at him as he exhaled.

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any
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“I hate to even suggest it, Sue, without talking to you first . . .,” he began, his eyes almost begging her to say no.

“I need to get in there, don’t I, Jack?” Sue said with a smile, quirking an eyebrow at him as he exhaled.
They'll go???
I'm not sure what to think about this idea...
Cute part between them once again. They gain in confidence around the team so fast!!!
Ivory
That must have felt so good to Sue to be back at the bull pen. I could just see the idea turning about in Jack's mind and Sue being right in pace with his thinking.
marlo29
I was very happy in fuzzy-work land but you had to throw in danger shakes head.gif
kmt123
Brownies.... yummmmmmm. Haven't had any good ones since I went on a marching band trip to Indy with my sister. A lot of the parents (and aunts) doubled up in rooms to save $$$ and one of the ladies in our room brought the best brownies. We accused her of putting something "extra" in them 'cause we couldn't stop eating...

Now Jack, what are you suggesting man? You've got Sue all to yourself for just a bit longer and you go and volunteer her for undercover work??? Perhaps Jack could go in too, as her interpreter, like Marley Maitlyn has. After all, Levi isn't up to par right now. But of course if Jack takes Levi's place, that means that someone might try to plant something on Jack...

Ooooh, ooooh-oooooh... can I be the "planter"?? PLEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSE??!!??

Tina
Cere Cere
An interesing turn of events! hmmm.gif

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Tere
audiokim
And the plot thickens!

Kim
GinaSue
Author's note - I was able to actually visit the Raeburn Senate Office Building last summer, while on vacation in DC! We visited a senator from our state, whose office was in that building, and he arranged a tour of the Capitol building, which was WONDERFUL! I highly recommend it!

Thanks for reading! Here's the next part of Sue's field trip! Have a great Saturday night, and Sunday!!

Regina


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Chapter 20

“I can’t believe we’re doing this,” Jack said, shaking his head as he muttered to himself.

Parking the car on First Street, Jack was pushing Sue in the wheelchair Myles had found for them, en route to the Raeburn Senate Office Building, where they were going to try a quick perusal of the security systems in person, rather than on tape.

“Jack, could you stop a minute and come where I can see you,” Sue asked patiently. She knew he wasn’t happy about her taking part in this operation, even if it was, basically, his idea. As soon as she’d guessed what he was thinking, he had started trying to talk her out of it.

Pushing the chair up to a park bench, Jack stopped and sat down in front of her. “YOU OK?” he signed, worried that the day had already been too much for her.

I’M OK,” she signed back, and then tilted her head as she looked at him. She knew he was torn about this.

“Sue, you can still change your mind,” he said, looking at her intently.

“Don’t be silly. It’s a simple operation, in and out, won’t take more than a half-hour,” she said, shrugging. “If we don’t get anything from this, then we’ll just have to reconsider using one of the contacts that we saw in the footage.”

“Sometimes the simplest operations tend to have a mind of their own,” Jack said. When the idea had dawned on him that, even with Sue in a wheelchair, they could, if only briefly, infiltrate the Raeburn Building, Sue had jumped at the chance. It was as if she had read his mind there in D’s office. He was proud of her, and at the same time, scared for her. She always tended to take on things that were going to push her to the limit. Smiling, he realized that that was one of the many things he loved about her – and one of the irritating things that reminded him most of himself and made him worry about her. “You’ve been bored to tears, haven’t you.”

Sue twisted her lips a little and arched an eyebrow at him as a slow smile began to form. Running her finger along the bridge of his nose, she said, “I wouldn’t say that, exactly,” she said, beginning to redden as she thought of the many happy hours she had spend learning about the many ways that Jack Hudson could make her melt into a puddle. There was no part of boring in the way Jack kissed her, in the way he touched her. Just watching him putter around the apartment made her fall in love with him all over again, every day.

“You know what I mean,” Jack said, smiling and guessing what she was thinking as the tops of his ears reddening slightly as he looked around to see if anyone was looking at them. Leaning in to kiss her quickly, but thoroughly, he quickly settled back down on the bench, leaning toward her and taking her hands in his, smiling as he continued his surveillance of the people around them.

“Yeah, I know,” she whispered, smiling at her love. “We’ll get in, get out, get to my doctor’s appointment, and then go home. How does that sound?”

“Sounds like an excellent plan. I just wish we could skip right to the ‘going home’ part,” Jack said, waggling his eyebrows at her just a bit, wishing they were finished already and he could just sweep her away from all this and put her in a place where he could watch over her and protect her. Jack laughed to himself, knowing that the very idea of that attitude would drive her insane. Hearing the laughter in his earpiece, Jack touched his ear and rolled his eyes.

Bobby’s voice came alive in his ear. “Sparky . . . I think I may be hearing the clanking sound of that ball and chain . . .” he said as he laughed loudly, causing Jack to wince.

“Jack, I hope you remember to take that off before you DO decide to go home . . . wait, I shouldn’t have said that . . . could have gotten some interesting tidbits, I have a feeling . . .,” Tara’s voice said into his earpiece.

“What’s funny?” she asked, narrowing her eyes at him.

“We’ve got some, shall we say INTERESTING friends?” he said, tapping at his ear.

Sue laughed with him, glad that they weren’t totally on their own. D would never have sent them out without backup, especially with her in a wheelchair. She had caught a glimpse of the territorial Jack – the one that had staked his claim and bode anyone ill who thought of crossing the boundaries he had set. She was sure he made sure that D saw that glimpse, too.

“What were they saying?” Sue asked, her curiosity getting the better of her.

“You don’t even want to know,” he chuckled, looking into her eyes with a look of almost happiness, and only a hint of the worry she had seen earlier.

“You’re probably right,” Sue said, knowing that now wasn’t the time for deep philosophical discussion. Looking at her watch, she looked up at Jack and said, “If we’re going to make that appointment, we’d better get the show on the road, don’t you think?”

“Yeah. I guess. Let’s get our story straight. You’ve been asked to come to the office of Senator Collins, of Ohio, about a personal matter of his, and I, as your partner, am just along for the ride since you’re somewhat incapacitated,” Jack began.

“Sounds good so far. Do you think Levi will be OK with his part?” Sue asked. She was more worried about this being too much for Levi than herself.

“The Wonderdog? After seeing the recovery he made after his flying leap earlier, I think he’ll be fine. Nobody will be expecting you to sign to him, and when he seems to get nervous around the equipment, nobody will suspect that it’s by design. You’ll be OK, won’t you buddy?” Jack said, looking down at Levi, who had come up and placed his chin on Jack’s knee, planning to get a good ear scratch for his trouble. Levi was rewarded with an excellent ear scratch, chest rub, and pep talk from his favorite male.

“Ready?” Jack asked her, his face settling into the quiet resolve Sue knew so well. “I’d have liked about a week to plan this operation, but since I don’t have that, let’s just get in there and get it over with.”

“I’m ready. Everybody in place?” Sue asked, looking around for the surveillance van. Tara and Bobby were inside the van, having tapped into the live feed at the front entrance of Raeburn.

“Good to go,” Jack said, giving her a quick kiss before rising, turning her wheelchair around, and continuing on their way to the Raeburn Senate Office Building.

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audiokim
I just love this! Though I do hope this simple operation remains simple.

Kim
Ivory
QUOTE
Smiling, he realized that that was one of the many things he loved about her – and one of the irritating things that reminded him most of himself and made him worry about her.
I thought this was a great line.

I hope they are not going to need their backup. Leave it to Bobby to razz Jack, but it was good that he warned Jack that his mike was on.
the maggler
wow fuzzy, silly, serious, and cooking tips too wow thats one amazing story. I love it so far. I read it all that way through that last post before commenting so i could get the jist of the story. yay. LOVE IT!!
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magz
kmt123
DITTO to Kim about hoping this stays simple. We don't want any stand-offs or shoot-outs or lock-downs or any other hyphenated word I can't remember!! In, out, off to the doctor (yuck) and home by five. Make that four. Afterall, Jack needs time to prepare dinner. Can we have brownies again?

Tina
Cere Cere
They can do it!!!! cheerleader.gif cheerleader.gif

Tere
Linny27
Oh let's just hope things go to plan... and if they don't, I'm coming after you Regina!

Lindsy
Kav
Phew -- how did I miss all those posts? I thought I was completely update yesterday but obviously I neglected some of my challenge reads. I love the way you write Jack and Sue together -- it's the right blend of sizzle and spice and humour. And they're so easy going with the rest of the team and their friends are taking it in stride. It's just the way I imagined it would be. And now Sue's getting an adventure (as if having Jack as a manservant wasn't enough of an adventure! Be still my heart!!) I hope their plan goes well.

kav
GinaSue
Maybe today we'll actually go IN the Raeburn Building! hehe.gif

Thanks for sticking with me, for reading, and for your comments! Hope you're all having a great Sunday!

Regina


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Chapter 21

Once Kristi Peters realized that her summons to the Hoover Building had nothing to do with her soon-to-be ex-husband, she had relaxed and became most cooperative. Apparently she had suspected his drug problem for some time, and had tried, for the sake of Janie, to make it work. When she realized that the problem was bigger than just drug USE, as indicated by the evidence that the DEA had shared with her, she knew that life without a father in her life might be better for her child than life with a drug dealer, con-man, and arms-sale negotiator. His arrest re-opened the case involving insider trading, which should add more time in a federal prison to his sentence. She prayed for him, she hoped the best for him and loved him as the father of her child, but she realized, almost too late, that only God could change this man. Not even Randall himself could change completely without God’s help, and he had to want it to happen.

In searching the harness of Lizzy, Kristi’s Chocolate Lab hearing dog, they found a tiny, flat chip attached with double-sided tape underneath. If surveillance cameras had not captured on video the guard tampering with the dog’s harness, and if no one had watched the footage, no one would have suspected a thing.

Kristi was appalled and a little sickened at the very idea of a bugging device being smuggled into Senator Whitson’s office. Being deaf, she had been privy to many conversations containing classified information that she simply didn’t watch, so didn’t read. Unfortunately, the bugging device was sending those conversations somewhere. Now the trick was to find out where.

*

Making their way to the entrance to the Raeburn building, Jack and Sue saw Kristi waiting near the entrance with Lizzy. Sue signed “READY?” to her, and Kristi returned with a sharp nod of her head and turned to enter ahead of them.

As they continued into the door a couple of people behind Kristi, Jack stood patiently behind Sue’s wheelchair as if it were his only job that day. Kristi was going through the metal detector, Lizzy having been taken around to the side as they had seen in the footage.

When Sue got to the line, the guard asked if she could go through without the chair, to which she replied, “Yes,” and proceeded to attempt going through with a cane as the other guard rolled the chair around the side as Jack remained in line, hanging on to Levi’s leash.

“Excuse me,” Jack said, approaching the guard, looking closely at her name tag, “Linda . . . um . . . we work in another federal building, and Levi here always has to go through the metal detector just like people do. Is there a reason that the other dog didn’t go through?”

“I’m sorry, sir, but we just do as we’re told,” the female guard told him. Why did people always seem to think that they could ask questions?

“I’m sure you do, but it is curious, don’t you think? Who is in charge of security in this building?” he asked.

“Federal Protective Services, a division of the Department of Homeland Security,” she said dryly, “just like in your building.” She was starting to get a disgruntled look on her face. “I would think you guys would know that. You’re FBI, aren’t you?”

“How’d you know?” Jack asked, smiling.

“Saw the badge on the dog, and saw the tag on the wheelchair,” she said wiltingly. Nobody was going to accuse her of letting the least bit of information by on HER watch.

“Hey! Just curious,” Jack said. “I’m sure your supervisor knows what a great security officer he’s got in you.”

“I hope SHE does,” the officer replied, looking at Jack as if she would like to wipe the floor with him for ASSUMING she had a male supervisor.

“Hey, no offense, just doing my job, and security has always held a fascination for me. Thought about getting into that when I retire,” he said, trying to smooth things over.

Sue was on the other side of the metal detector, returned to her wheelchair, trying to keep a straight face in the light of Jack’s reddening countenance. Kristi and Lizzy were still in the room, waiting for her purse and bag to go through the x-ray machine, and Jack looked at Sue with a wink and a discreet sign of NOW, and Sue gave her sign to Levi.

Levi began to bark, going around the metal detector toward the other guard, behaving as if he were going for Lizzy. When the other guard tried to restrain Levi, Sue called his name, Levi looked at her, and she gave him the sign for ATTACK, in which he bared his teeth at the guard. Immediately after that, Sue called out for him to “Sit, Stay, Levi,” and he was perfectly calm.

In the ensuing confusion, Jack watched closely as the other guard, situated totally out of the line of sight of the guard with which Jack had been carrying on the conversation, as he grabbed at Levi’s collar. Looking at Sue, he nodded, and Sue called out, “Levi, come here,” to which Levi complied with alacrity and trotted over to his mistress before the guard could place anything on his collar.

A Pen Cam in Jack’s jacket pocket had recorded the entire incident, including a much clearer picture of the guard’s face than the security footage had been. In his hear, Jack heard Tara’s voice saying “We’ve got it, Jack. You and Sue walk through the building for a few minutes, and then exit through a different door. Maybe you could visit the cafeteria or the gift shop?”

“Like that’ll happen,” Jack said under his breath as he made his way to Sue and the wheelchair. “Sorry for all the confusion, Linda. I’m sure you’ll be glad for us to get out of your hair,” he chuckled.

“Have a nice day, sir,” Linda said professionally, but a trifle sarcastically.

“Oh, I plan on it,” Jack said, winking at the lady and chuckling as he saw Sue’s eyes roll as she watched the security guards countenance change from savvy federal employee to a feminine puddle with a badge, her mouth hanging open as Jack walked away with a definite spring in his step.

The disgruntled security guard hadn’t counted on that wink. She wasn’t blind, after all, to just how good-looking this guy was, but on the other hand, around there, good-looking guys were a dime a dozen. The wink, however, just might make up for how irritating his questions were . . .

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Cere Cere
hehe.gif I think that was funny, the plan went well and the guard got a wink, altough she didn´t like much of it giggle.gif
Can´t wait for more! exclaim.gif
Tere
suesfan
Regina, I really got behind, but I'm all caught up now!!!

I love the teasing back and forth between Jack and Sue, and the gazing into each other's eyes!! Poor Levi - trying to leap for his bunny as always forgetting he's a little incapacitated right now!!!

So, Kristi's husband does turn out to be a real jerk, into everything he can find illegal!! She and her daughter will be 100% better off without him!! I'm glad she was willing to help them, at least with this one little scenario!!!

Now, if they can get out of the building unscathed, they will have made some progress!! A much better picture of the guard, and filming an attempt to put a bug on Levi!! I've always loved that little trick that Sue taught him, showing his teeth and snarling!! If I didn't know better, I'd be very afraid of our Levi!!!

I knew that guard, Linda, was all talk!! One wink and she is right there with all of us in puddleland!!!

Joy
Ivory
Kristy Peters seems to have a heart and faith like Sue's. Sue and Jack did indeed make it into the building like they planned, now I just hope the exit is as smooth.
audiokim
That was great!

Kim
marlo29
It seems to have work just the way they had planned hifive.gif
any
So right to the next exit and ... well they still have an appointment to the doctor, but the rest of the day is free, isn't it? winking.gif
kmt123
You know, I've written female characters that were immune to Jack's charms too, but I always had trouble believing one could actually exist! They must have had a BAD experience with a good looking guy to be that unaffected. But this security guard proved that you can only stay unaffected for so long. The wink will get them every time...

As for the other guard - the one that's been placing bugs on the dog collars - I think he's in for some interrogation time... very soon! Jack and Bobby? D and Myles? Good cop, bad cop? We shall see.

Tina (who managed to respond to a post without using the "b" word. I'd explain, but then I'd have to use it... hehe.gif )
Linny27
Everything's gone to plan so far. Let's just hope that they make it out of the building without any problems.

Lindsy
GinaSue
Happy Monday, everyone! Hope you had a great weekend! I've thought of another feature for the Jack action-figure . . . "winking action!" hehe.gif

BTW . . . I'm proud of you, Tina . . . batting eyelashes.gif . . . no brownies in sight this time . . . See, I can say it. I'm totally committed to all things chocolate, including brownies and chocolate-brown eyes! Good thing my husband has them, too! blush.gif . . . the eyes, not the brownies . . .

Thanks for reading!

Regina


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Chapter 22

“Well, well, well. If THAT isn’t interesting,” Myles said, his tweezers pulling a device off the wheelchair that had carried Sue to the Raeburn building. Levi had avoided being bugged because of the distraction he helped to instigate, but the wheelchair had not been ignored.

“Does this mean that we have to check every wheelchair that goes in the building, as well?” Tara asked, her eyes as big as saucers at the very idea.

“I think it means that we need to put SOG on the guard that put the device on the chair and tried to put one on Levi. That’s our best bet,” he said, shaking his head as he looked at the tiny device now ensconced in a Plexiglas case.

“This has to be bigger than just Raeburn, don’t you think?” Bobby asked. The wheelchair angle was puzzling . . . almost as puzzling as bugging service dogs.

“Hey! What’s the good word from the doctor?” Lucy asked as Jack came in helping a slowly moving Sue. They had left Levi in the bullpen with Lucy. The morning’s activities had worn him out, and Sue didn’t want Jack to have to deal with TWO incapacitated blondes.

“I’ve been given a suspended sentence,” Sue said, laughing as Jack shook his head and smiled. The cast was gone, replaced by a sturdy brace, which made maneuvering much easier. Her ankle was now free, and she was allowed to put some weight on the leg, as long as she rested it more than she walked on it. “I’ll still need my manservant, though,” she said, her lips forming a little fake pout as her eyes twinkled.

“Now isn’t that just too bad,” Lucy replied, arching an eyebrow and smiling at the couple. Apparently they had come all the way through the Hoover Building with their arms around one another’s waists.

“Yeah . . . it’s a tough job, but somebody has to do it,” Jack laughed, settling Sue into her rolling chair, keeping a hand on her shoulder.

“Another couple of weeks, and he said that if I’m a good girl, he might upgrade me to a flexible brace and full mobility – as long as I don’t try to outrun any bad guys,” Sue said. Her smiling face told them all that as much as she enjoyed the attention she was getting from the situation, she’d be glad to get back to normal . . . or as normal as she and Jack could be. They were experiencing a “new” normal, and it was one that they were both enjoying to the hilt.

“What’s new with the case?” Jack asked, noting that the wheelchair was still in the room.

“Well . . .,” D said as he held up the Plexiglas box that contained the bugging device. “This little bugger was found under the seat of the wheelchair Sue was riding in. We picked up on it right away, so I don’t think anything’s been compromised.”

“You know, guys. This is starting to remind me of a computer virus,” Tara said, an idea obviously forming in her head.

“How’s that, luv?” Bobby asked. The wheels were turning in Tara’s head, and he wanted to go along for the ride. She was at her best when the cases were just a big skewed, and this one seemed to be.

“OK,” she began. “When an email virus hits, does it just stay in the address book of the person sending the infected email? Of course not! It goes to their address book, and in turn to everyone in the address books of THOSE people who receive the email, and on, and on, and on . . . It’s a vicious cycle, and very hard to track down.” Tara was warming to her subject – and anything to do with computers, or that could be compared to computers, was her subject.

“But we have an edge,” D said, nodding his head as he started to catch on to what she was saying. “We know of two “address books” that the bugs have been sent to – service dogs and wheelchairs.”

“And we can use those two avenues to work our way back to where it’s starting,” Tara said, a satisfied look on her face. “Just like a computer virus can be stopped, but only by hacking into the code enough to get back to the original sender.”

“I’m glad it’s not really a computer virus, because if it were, Tara would be on her own!” Bobby said, leaning forward as he thought about what could be done to stop this infiltration into their federal buildings.

“As fascinating as this is, I think it’s time to get Sue and Levi home,” Jack said. He was starting to notice little lines of fatigue on Sue’s face now that she had sat down for a few minutes. “Keep us posted?”

“Sure thing, Jack. We may have some more footage to watch, if SOG doesn’t come up with anything on the guard. I’ll let you know. Take care of her, Jack. We need you both back,” D said, smiling as he watched Jack carefully help Sue up and out of the desk chair, putting his arm comfortably around her waist.

“Need the chair?” Myles asked, an eyebrow raised in question as well as amusement at the sight before him.

“Na . . . we’ve about got this down, now. I’ll prop her up in the elevator to rest my back for the trip to the car,” he said, winking at Sue as she lifted an eyebrow somewhat imperiously with that ‘just you wait’ gleam in her eyes.

“’Bye guys,” Sue said, fluttering a hand to them as they made their way out of the bullpen.

Jack tightened his hold on her as they entered the elevator, alone. Sure enough, Jack leaned her up against the wall when they entered.

“Well, Hudson, maybe we should have brought that chair in here for you, if your back is bothering you,” Sue said, leaning comfortably against the paneled wall of the elevator as Jack walked over to the control panel. Watching him with a secret smile as he looked back at her from the panel, he turned to look at the numbers, and carefully, between floors, pulled the STOP button, halting the elevator.

“I think I’ll make it,” he said as he slowly made his way to her, pressing his body along hers as she reached up to weave her fingers through the hair at the base of his skull. “I wasn’t sure if I was going to make it much longer being in that bullpen, though, not able to do this,” he said, bending to kiss her neck below her ear, working his way around to her lips, but not before she gasped with impatience. “Did I ever tell you about my bullpen fantasy?”

“Don’t tell me, Jack. I don’t know if I could stand being in a meeting with you and the whole team without totally zoning out . . .,” Sue said, desperately wanting him to kiss her lips. “Did I tell you about my conference room fantasy?”

Jack’s head shot up as he considered her words. With a faraway look in his eyes, he began to smile – a slow, dreamy smile. “You know . . . if we put my bullpen fantasy in a room that has a lock on it . . .”

“Jack!” she said with a nervous giggle, slapping him playfully on the chest as his lips landed skillfully on hers.

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Kav
LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif Jack is certainly getting the hang of being a manservant. And you have a very unique and intriguing case here, Regina. Can't wait for more. (like maybe a mini enactment of the conference room or bullpen fantasy in the elevator?) blush.gif biggrin.gif

kav
Cere Cere
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Tere
audiokim
Wow, I wish my elevator trips were more like that.

Kim
suesfan
As soon as Jack said he was going to prop Sue up in the elevator, I knew what he had in mind!! Be still my heart!!!

Regina, you certainly know how to put the "m" in mystery!! Now we have to worry about wheelchairs too!! I can't wait to see where you are taking us!!!

Joy
Red Shores Lady
Just caught up on the last three posts...

First, girl_sigh.gif
Second, girl_sigh.gif
Third girl_sigh.gif girl_sigh.gif

Now on to the case portion...wondering why the guard is bugging service dogs and wheelchairs. What's his motive? hmmm.gif

Great job, Regina.

- RSL write.gif

Ivory
Jack does seem to be enjoying himself, indeed. Sue has had a banner day with the good doctor's report and now being alone in the elevator being kissed by her love. Tara really shone here when she presented her theory about the case.
LittleEm
Ooo - and bullpen/conference room fantasy... batting eyelashes.gif Yes please!!!!

Em
kmt123
QUOTE(Kav @ Aug 4 2008, 08:49 AM) *

Can't wait for more. (like maybe a mini enactment of the conference room or bullpen fantasy in the elevator?) blush.gif biggrin.gif

kav

Amen. And don't forget a full-blown enactment actually in the bullpen and (notice I did NOT say "or") conference rooms!!

And may I be so lucky as to be 'propped up' by a Jack!!

As for the case, you've got me stumped. Don't pat yourself on the back too hard though, 'cause stumped is a natural state of being for me! biggrin.gif I get WHY wheelchairs and service dogs, but I don't have a clue who gave the order or what they're trying to find out. Good thing I only watch shows about the FBI instead of working for them!

QUOTE
“Jack!” she said with a nervous giggle, slapping him playfully on the chest as his lips landed skillfully on hers.

See? Told you Jack had "skills".

Tina
GinaSue
Yes . . . Jack does have skills, doesn't he . . . and they're not all in the kitchen . . . batting eyelashes.gif An enactment of a bullpen OR conference room fantasy? Hmmm . . . have to think on that one . . .

I realized, today, that it's now August . . . the 4th . . . which means I have 12 days to finish this story . . . and I'm still not finished with it. I could use that as an excuse to post again tonight, or I could just tell you that I just simply couldn't resist posting this one!

Thanks for reading, and hope you enjoy!!

Regina


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Chapter 23

“Hey, D, what’s up?” Jack said into his cell phone as he finished putting dishes away in the kitchen. Sue was showering, and Jack was trying desperately to keep busy so that he didn’t think of her, in the next room, in the shower. This time, he had called D for an update, rather than have D interrupt at an inopportune time, later. At least he HOPED there would be an inopportune time to BE interrupted, later . . .

On the way out the day of Sue’s doctor’s appointment and their mini-infiltration of the Raeburn Building, Jack had been tuned in to Sue, and tuned out of all outside sound, movement, and thought a little longer than had been the case in previous forays into the most private place in the Hoover Building - the elevator.

Apparently, unbeknownst to Jack, if the STOP button is pulled, manually, on an elevator for more than five minutes, an alarm starts to go off that can only be turned off by a maintenance worker with a key, and only when they get to the ground floor. Fearing a hostage situation when contact could not be made with the inhabitants of the elevator, not only maintenance was called out, but also SWAT. Jack was aware of the alarm only when he heard the ding of the elevator doors open after the manual override was utilized to bring the elevator to the ground floor. To say Sue was embarrassed was an understatement.

“You’ll pay for that, Hudson,” she’d said, red-faced, as they exited the building.

And he had . . . and still was. She’d been slightly miffed at him ever since, and that was nearly two days ago. And it was the weekend. Just thinking about two days of Sue being pleasant but cool made him groan in frustration. Lucy thought it was just too funny, and had to stifle a laugh and leave the room every time she came across Jack with that little woebegone look on his face. Sue could stand having her feelings hurt, she could stand being found to be wrong about something, but she absolutely HATED to be embarrassed. It was the one thing that took her the longest to get over. She didn’t get mad often, but when she did, it was expressed with quiet torture . . .

“How’s it going, Jack?” D asked, chuckling quietly as Jack paused to look at Lucy, who had come into the room dressed for church.

“Yeah, well, it’s been better,” Jack answered.

“You had to know you wouldn’t get by with the elevator thing forever, Hudson. Talk about being busted,” D said, his chuckle turning into a full-blown laugh.

“Very funny. Now if we could get back to the business at hand? I know you’re not in the office on a Sunday morning for no good reason, because Donna would have your hide if she thought you were trying to ditch church with a flimsy excuse. These women have us right where they want us,” Jack said with a sigh and a slightly disgusted tone in his voice.

“You’re right, they do, and there’s no place that I, for one, would rather be,” D said softly. Jack could almost hear the smile in his voice. “And something tells me you feel the same way. Am I right?”

“Yeah. I’m learning . . . I’m learning the HARD way, but I’m learning. Unfortunately I forgot on Friday that the one thing Sue can’t stand is to be embarrassed. I’ve paid for that all weekend,” he said.

“We know. Lucy’s kept us informed,” D said, the laughter returning.

Jack threw Lucy a dirty look and shook his head as she dropped her spoon in her cereal bowl with a clatter to cover her mouth when she began to laugh loudly.

“Figures,” Jack said as he walked into the living room, out of sight of prying eyes. “Hate to change the subject – again – but what’s up? Why are you at work on a Sunday morning?”

“Got the report from SOG on the security guard. Agent Franklin called me last night and said he thought I might want to follow up on it ASAP. Tara had already ID’d him as Robert Simpkins. Background check didn’t raise any red flags . . . which makes sense because if Homeland Security’s his boss, they see more things as red flags than even we do,” D said.

“So . . . what’s so interesting about Simpkins?” Jack asked, even more curious about the unassuming man, now.

“Seems that Simpkins dropped out of sight yesterday. SOG followed him to work – he was supposed to work the afternoon shift – and when his shift was over, he didn’t come out. They sent someone in to check him out, found that he’d clocked out at the regular time, and gone to his car, which was parked in the parking garage,” D continued.

“Let me guess . . . they found him,” Jack said, sucking in his breath at this new twist.

“You got it,” D confirmed. “Shot. Point blank in the head with a silencer. Found him sitting in the driver’s seat without his seatbelt on. Whoever did it had to have been waiting for him in his car, or very close by.”

“Any signs of a struggle?” Jack asked, looking up as Sue hobbled into the room on her crutches and lowered herself to the couch.

“No, which makes me think that either he really didn’t see his assailant, or that he wasn’t afraid of whoever it was. Could have been either somebody he knew or his contact in the operation. Looking at his background, he could have even been convinced that he was doing something legit,” D said, sighing at the loss of life of what was probably a good man.

“This just gets crazier and crazier, doesn’t it?” Jack asked. “Do you need me to come in?”

“Na . . . but if you could, tell Lucy I could really use her help this afternoon. No need for her to miss church, though. I’ll be here all day,” he said. The burden of being supervisor was his, after all. No reason to bring everybody in until he had a direction for them to go.

“I’ll tell her. Might be worth it to get her out of the house for the afternoon,” Jack growled, to D’s delight.

“Gotcha. Maybe with a little time alone you can start mending those fences?” D laughed.

“From your mouth to God’s ears,” Jack said, almost desperately. Sue was looking at him with a very curious expression on her face, a small frown appearing when Jack looked at her with a semi-lecherous look in his eye.

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audiokim
Uh-oh, Jack's in the doghouse. I hope he can get out of it!

Kim
any
Jack shakes head.gif you still have a lot to learn... But I think it'll be the last time you'll play with the elevator hehe.gif

So the guard was shot hmmm.gif
Wonder where you'll lead us now, Regina.
kmt123
angry017.gif Re-g-i-i-i-i-i-i-i-i-n-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a! Now that you've let Jack embarrass Sue like that, she'll never consent to the bullpen AND conference room seductionS!! angry017.gif Are you trying to make me come down there and, and... and... stare really angrily at you while you write??? Do you really want that??? It could severely endanger any ability of mine to complete my own story (in twelve days?????!!!). And just so you know, when the challange police come looking for me, I'm going to be hiding out in your garage or some such. That way, when the police cars (you should see them - really cute, painted pink, with RomanceFanFiction written in white script across the doors and pink lights flashing on top.) come for me it'll be YOUR house everyone associates with such an embarrassing incident!

And you killed off the guard!!! Now Jack will never get the chance to get all macho while they interrogate him! shakes head.gif shakes head.gif shakes head.gif This is just not going the way I envisioned missy. Not at all.

Which is why I like it so much. (But if you can still see your way clear to having Jack convince Sue that she's needed in the conference room... I think there might be chocolate in it for you... chocolate.gif )

Tina
Cere Cere
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Tere
sue&jacktlf
Not only maintenance, but SWAT also! No wonder Sue is so embarrassed. LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif LolLolLolLol.gif

Jack you might want to consult with Levi on how to extricate yourself from the doghouse.

No guard to question, what will the team do now?
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