Disclaimer: I do not own Sue Thomas FB Eye; it belongs to Johnson/Johnson, PAX, etc.
Bringing them off the shelf for a little bit and then will put them back in the order I got them.

A/N: This is from Jack’s POV.
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Chapter One

Who would’ve thought that my sweet Abigail would be getting married today.

Abigail was a tiny baby, born one autumn morning where the leaves were turning colors. The leaves on the trees were red, while the grass had sprinkles of yellow and brown on its floor. While I held that tiny little life in my hands, I was overcome with joy and determination. My daughter was going to live.

The doctors told her mother and I that Abigail would never be able to see or hear for the rest of her life. Being born early, her eyes weren’t developed enough to see anything. With steely determination from both of us, we knew Abigail would live a normal life.

By the time Abigail was a teenager, she decided with our full backing, that she was going to have the surgery that would correct her vision.

At fifteen, on a clear autumn day just like the day she was born, Abigail was able to see the red leaves in the trees, the blue in the sky, grass sprinkled with yellow and brown on its floor, for the first time. I looked at Sue and saw tears in her eyes. Our daughter could see.

At 19, Abigail met the love of her life, my best friend’s son and my godchild, Jackson Manning. Bobby and Tara immediately asked Sue and Abigail along with Jackson how to sign in American Sign Language.

As the days went by, I saw her flourish into the woman standing before me today in her white gown that fit her like a glove. Sue and I agreed that we would give her away together, seeing as she was our only daughter.

As the wedding came to a close, I felt Sue’s hand on mine. We knew that we were not losing a daughter but gaining a son as well.

Two years went by, now our beautiful daughter was in trouble.

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Sue and I were in the back yard planting our flowers and vegetable garden when the call came.

Abigail was missing.

Excellent descriptions! Very poignant! Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Tracy

Wonderful beginning... but what happened?

Lindsy

Yikes! NIce family-warm beginning and then -- bam! She's missing?

kav

You have drawn me into this beautiful picture of Jack, Sue and Abigal, then whammy! So many thoughts running rampant in my head. My first thought is she was kidnapped!

But then, could she voluntarily have gone missing because she is unhappy?

Or because...well, I won't say where my errant mind is going now.... I'll just wait for you to unfold this story! Great start!

Lynn

Wow! So many questions to be answered! What a great first post, and I'm SO looking forward to the next one!!

What a wonderful use of the picture and title!! A great beginning - I could see the colored leaves and grass and feel the cool autumn breezes!! And, I can picture this beautiful girl that Jack and Sue created!!!

Abigail is missing?? And, so the journey begins!!!

Joy

Wow! What an amazing start. Can't wait to see what happens next.

D

The autumn picture you draw for us was wonderful and the fact that the first day she could see was a day as colorful as the one she came to life was a good return of things. Perfect!... At least until she was missing... Can't wait to see what happened!

Disclaimer: Please chapter one

A/N: Please keep in mind that what Jack and Sue are doing is in the spring time and part of this story will be in the summer but we will end in the fall. Where the red leaves shine on the trees.

A/N i: Reynolds and O'Neill come from Stargate SG1. I don't own them either.
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Chapter Two

POV of Jackson Manning

“Jackson slow down, what happened?”

I took a deep breath and told my ‘uncle’ what happened. That Abigail was supposed to meet me at the restraunt near Quantico but never showed.

“So, she hasn’t shown up yet?”

“No, you know her, Abigail is punctual. She is like ‘Aunt’ Sue.”

“Yeah, your aunt is on time, to almost everything.”

I nodded even though I knew ‘Uncle’ Jack couldn’t see me, “I know.”

Meanwhile at Quantico

POV of PFC O’Neill

My partner and I had been on duty since 0600 this morning, and was surprised to hear pounding on the guard shack door this late at night. As I opened the door, I saw a wisp of a girl scared and her clothes ripped.

The girl looked right at me, “ Are you okay?”

She shook her head no.

“Did you want me to call someone?”

She nods her head yes.

I noticed that she started making hand gestures. I also sensed my partner come out of the shack.

“She is signing husband.”

My partner tells me as I’m looking at the girl, “Who is your husband?” I knew my partner PFC Reynolds was watching and helping.

“J-A-C-K-S-O-N…” she stopped and got scared again.

“It’s okay, take your time.”

She took a deep breath and stated over, “J-A-C-K-S-O-N M-A-N-N-I-N-G.”

I heard a gasp behind me. Without taking my eyes off the girl, I ask, “Who is he?’

Then I heard Reynolds speak slowly and calmly, “Is your father B-O-B-B-Y M-A-N-N-I-N-G?”

She shakes her head no, and then signs, “My husbands father.”

I turn my head slightly to see her and to see Reynolds and ask, “Who is he?”

“AD Bobby Manning of the FBI. He comes out once a month to teach the new recruits how to disarm a bomb properly.”

My eyes go wide, “Isn’t he married to the short computer whiz?”

“Yeah”

I turn back to look at the girl before me and the pieces start to fall into place, “Is your name Abigail Hudson Manning?’

Abigail nods her head.

“Oh gosh. O’Neill get her to a secure place, I’m going to call her dad.” Reynolds says in a stricken voice.

Reynolds and I both knew that we would protect her with our lives, nothing or no one was going to touch Abigail Hudson Manning, we would make sure of that.

just caught 2 fantastic chapters so who kidnapped jacks Daughter and bobbys daughter-in-law as boy i kinda fgeel sorry for them I dont think when they get hold of whoever did it cant wait to find out
Lin

The first post was very descriptive: I could almost smell the crip air of the automn and feel the warm love of the family and then...wack!!! Jack and Sue`s daughter is missing...

Then, I read the second post and it gave me hope...

One thing made me smiled: Bobby as AD...sweet
Josy

Wow, I love O'Neil and Reynolds determination and dedication to protect Abigail with their lives. They must know Jack and Bobby and have a great respect for them. I guess they know something about what is going on too.

This is a great start and very very intriguing.

This is going to be a terrific story!! Two posts and I am already totally hooked!!!

Where has Abigail been and what has happened to her?? I'm glad she found someone who knows her family and can help her!!!

Joy

It's great to know that our team has come to the point in their careers that they inspire such loyalty in these young people. It looks as though Abigail is in good hands, now. I hope she's OK, and I hope they find out who has done this to her - and quickly!!

Great story!

I noticed that Bobby is now the AD as well. But what's happened to Abigail? I'm glad they know who she is and can help her.

kav

A/N: This may answer some questions.
Thank you for the reviews!

A/N i: Ranger Gage is the property of Walker Texas Ranger which I don't own. Borrowing him for this story, and will put him back after I am done.
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Chapter Three

Being led by Americas finest, Abigail was relieved. When she first happened onto the guard shack, she didn’t know who to trust. After her conversation with the two men, she knew that they would take care of her.

As they both reached the Commandments office, Abigail felt a chill go down her spine, and she shivered. Even though it was in the middle of spring, there was still a chill in the air, like it was still autumn.

Abigail noticed as she entered the building that PFC O’Neill opened the door for her, she was very glad that chivalry wasn’t dead.

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Jon noticed that she shivered. In his experience with the women in his life, that when a woman shivered it was one of two things. One: Abigail shivered because she was cold or Two: Abigail felt like she was being watched. If he hazard a guess, it was the latter.

When they both walked into the office, they both noticed that no one was there, in fact it was dark, too dark if you asked him. As they both turned on the lights, they noticed former Ranger Francis Gage in a sitting position with a intruder at his feet.

Abigail noticed the man lying on the floor and back tracked into PFC Reynolds who apparently had just finished calling Director Hudson.

O’Neill noticed Abigail’s reaction, and he also knew that she backed into Daniel. Jon turned and looked at former Ranger Gage and Reynolds, “Well, we at least we know who attacked her.”

Hudson House
Washington, D.C.

The ringing of the phone interrupted his conversation with his wife Sue as well as Bobby and Jackson who had come over after Jackson contacted Jack.

Jack picked up the phone, “Hudson…where are you?….QUANTICO, how did she get there?…we’ll meet you there…” Then Jack hung up the phone. He then turned to look at Bobby, Jackson, and finally his wife, “PFC Reynolds at the guard shack at Quantico. Apparently Abigail pounded on their door for help,” He looked at Bobby and Sue and saw their unanswered question, “I don’t know how she got there. My suggestion would be to pack a bag. All of us will be gone for awhile.”

“Tara, Jackson and I will meet you there,” as an after thought Bobby added, “you might want to call Gibbs, mate.”

Jack nodded, he knew Gibbs and his team would help, and then he and Gibbs would growl at the person who took Abigail in the first place because he knew that if he didn't Jackson would tear the guy from limb to limb. Jack couldn't blame Jackson because that is what he would feel if anything happened to Sue.

Yikes...tell me who's the intruder???
Josy

Abigail's not the only one who have chills! Your story is so captivating!
I'm as hook as a fish can be...!

So Bobby's the AD, and Jack is the DIRECTOR! Whoo-hoo! Wow, they've come up in the world, haven't they? Can't wait to see where the others are on the career ladder.
I'm looking forward to hearing more about this case. Who attacked Abigail, who is the intruder, and is this an internal situation?

Yikes! Now get to Quantico, family! Abigail needs you!

It's good to see that Bobby and Jack are moving up in the FBI! That makes me happy!

Lindsy

And we still don't know who her attacker was...is...and what Ranger Gage is doing there. This is mysterious.

kav

Hi there! 3 chapters and I'm hooked!! Can't wait for more!!

oh boy this is getting scary but who ever did this is going to pay when jack bobby and the team get a nhold of them for doing this to Jacks daughter cant wait to find out more
Lin

You are working so many great people into your story!! So, Jack is Director now, and Bobby is AD!! Very interesting!!!

Now, who is the intruder???

Joy

A/N: See author's note from chapter two or three for the disclaimer of Stargate. NCIS doesn't belong to me they belong to DPB Productions, CBS, etc. Borrowing the team and will put them back when I am done.

A/N i: Now on to better things. I have given you all two chapters this time. RL aka house work, is getting in the way of writing, so tomorrow it will be cleaning and doing laundry . Anyway hope you enjoy!

again for all the reviews. I love them dearly and they make me

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Chapter Four

Quantico

Jon looked at Abigail, “Is this the man who hurt you?”

Abigail shook her head no and signed, “His buddy.”

Jon and Daniel nodded although it was barely noticeable.

Abigail looked over at Ranger Gage and signed, “Thank you.”

Ranger Gage signed back, “Your welcome.”

At just about that time the Hudson’s, Manning’s and the Leland’s entered the office of the Commandment of Quantico and they all noticed that Abigail was singing to the guy sitting on a chair guarding the guy on the floor.

Abigail turned around when Ranger Gage informed her that her parents and husband were here. She immediately went into her husband’s arms. After calming down, she was able to tell Jackson what had happened.

“I was stopped at a red light heading back to the restaurant, we like so much.”

Jackson nodded.

“When two goons decided to get in my car. They drove me to the backside gate of Quantico. They told me to get out. I followed one while the other was behind me. Then all of a sudden I saw a flash of someone out of the corner of my eye. Hearing the scuffle the first goon turned around to try to shoot me, but the stranger came at him with a kick to the wrist where the gun was, and then punched him in the face and the kicked him down. At that point I ran to the nearest guard shack for help.”

“Who is the guy who helped you?”

“He is sitting on the office chair.”

Jackson raised an eyebrow at this. He turned his head to look at the guy. Jackson measured the guy up and down. Six feet, he would hazard to guess, blond hair and blue eyes. He turned back to Abigail and asked, “Who is the one on the floor?”

“The one that was behind me.”

“So the other guy is still out there?”

“Yeah,” Abigail shuddered and Jackson noticed.

“You ok,” Jackson signed to Abigail.

Abigail shook her head no, “You know Gibbs has always told us kids to always go with our gut?”

“Yeah.”

“When O’Neill and I walked to the Commandments office, I felt like I was being watched.”

Jackson shuddered, if anything happened to Abigail his grief would be enormous.


Chapter Five

NCIS Headquarters
Washington D.C.

The phone ringing on his desk was driving him to distraction. He was glad for the distraction, even though he was a straight shooter when it came to facts, politicians didn’t and that ‘s what drove him nuts. He was glad in the inside that all the teams were able to come to him with a problem, he would either tell them like it was or to go with your gut with something /someone was in Abby’s words ‘hinky”. Which brought him back to his phone and answered it so it wouldn’t drive him more nuts.

“Gibbs”

“We found Abigail”

“Where?”

“At Quantico”

“How?”

“She trekked the sand and obstacle course to get to the guard shack.”

“I’ll send DiNozzo”

“Have him bring his wife too.”

“Will do”

“Thanks, Semper Fi” Then the phone clicked off.

Gibbs walked out of his office and along the catwalk, which was above each and every office.

“DiNozzo!”

Tony looked up to the catwalk, “Yeah boss.”

“Gear up, meet Hudson at Quantico and take Sam with you.”

Tony raised his eyebrows at his former boss and now director, and then looked back at his team. “You heard him, let’s go.”

As Gibbs watched Tony’s team leave, he noticed that everyone was edgy and Gibbs gut was not liking it one bit. He will be glad and so would everyone else when it would be September again. Where the leaves were red on the trees, a blanket of green grass with brown and yellow leaves on it, like toys on a baby blanket.

Gibbs knew today was going to be a long day and then with a sigh turned back to his office

With so many very qualified people helping they should catch this guy quickly!!!

Joy

I really hope they catch this guy and soon
Lin

And was Abigail a target or was she just picked randomly?

kav

I wondered that too
Josy

WOW!!!! Scottie this story is amamzing...your descriptions make me feel like I am right there with them.

I can't wait for more!!!!

Using Abigail to tie all the different characters from various shows together was a great idea. I, too, am wondering if she was picked by accident or on purpose. If Jackson is anything like his dad and namesake, he must be frustrated and furious.

A/N: Okay for all of you who are wondering about the first guy we getting there. Remember investigations take time *smirk*. Anyway, thank you all for the reveiws!


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Chapter Six

As the NCIS team entered the Commandments office, after being detained by a newbie PFC guard at the guard shack, they noticed that the victim was talking to her husband. Director Hudson and his wife were talking to a blond agent, who the NCIS agents knew really well when they came out to train . AD Manning was comforting his wife, who was in tears after hearing Abigail's story.

At that exact moment Sue and Gage saw DiNozzo and his agents who were standing around watching everyone. Being the first to act, Sue walked up to Tony. “Agent DiNozzo”

Tony nodded, “I think you know everyone except Agent Lee.”

Sue nodded to the girl, then looked back at Tony, “I am glad that you brought Sam, she will be able to help us find this guy.” Sue shuddered, most things didn’t get to her but having her only daughter almost attacked gave her shivers down her spine.

Ziva walked up to Tony, and gave him a piece of paper with eyewitness account of what happened, “She was lucky Tony. Gage got there in the nick of time. I have trained with him on numerous occasions on different days of the week from our normal training day and I have come to the conclusion that he is very efficient in defending himself.”

Almost unnoticed by Tony and Ziva, Gage had walked up to the two, “ I had a good teacher.”

With his words Tony and Ziva jumped. Gage grinned, like he was enjoying himself, “Ziva I thought I have taught you to be aware of your surroundings better, hmmm, more practice. Walker will be pleased that he has a new student to teach when he comes out in the fall.”

Ziva just rolled her eyes, then turned back to Tony, “Myles has the statement from this,” pointing at Gage, “big lug. I am going to go help Sam track this jerk.”

Tony nodded. He had to admire both women, both were strong in their own right. Sam with her military special ops training along with Lucy’s husband Teal’c as her tracking instructor; Ziva had her training from Mossad, along with a Texas Ranger who got his training from a Native American Texas Ranger. ‘Yup, this fall was going to be pretty interesting.’ Tony thought as he walked over to Myles to get the copy of his notes from earlier.

After getting the notes from Myles, he walked over to Agent Lee, “Lee, I need you to go with McGee. Photograph the area where Abigail was found after Sam and Ziva have given you the okay.”

“On it Boss.”

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A/N: I know this is short. I am still working on it. RL comes first. Anyway, need to p/u my son from school in about an hour, so I'll see you all later.

Debbie

OK, I don't know all the players, but I'm enjoying the story, and I zoned in on THIS piece of information immediately! Lucy married TEAL'C!!! HOW COOL IS THAT!

fantastic but they really need to find this guy before he trys again on Abigail but was she the one he was after or was she in the wrong place at the time cant wait to find out
Lin

Lucy married to Teal'c, and you've even mentioned Walker!! This is great!!!

Joy

I know Joy - I can't wait for the next post!

Sam

Keeps getting better and better!!!!!

For sure, Abigail is well surrounded....with a team like this, the investigation will be interesting...
Josy

Lucy and Teal'c-- now, there's a match I've never thought of.

A/N: This will answer one question and will leave you with more.

Thanks for the reviews

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Chapter Seven

As Tony’s team left, Sue decided to find a quiet office to pray. As she walked into the empty office and turned on the light, she noticed the pictures on the wall of war heroes from long ago. Sue went over to the couch that was against the long wall and knelt down beside it and started to sign her prayer.

“Dear Lord, please protect Tony’s team as they search for the man who abducted my little girl. Be with Sam and Ziva as they track down who is eluding us. Also ask that you keep Jack, Bobby, and Jackson in perfect piece that their minds will be on you during this time, may they be calm in their decision making. I ask this all Your name, I pray Amen.”
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While Sue went into the office, PFC Jon O’Neill noticed something while he was standing on the porch of the Commandments office. He recognized the guy that was heading straight for Ziva and Sam. He let out a whistle that only him and Sam would know, even if he was the clone of the ‘Old Man’ he still knew how to let someone know that they were danger.

Sam heard the whistle and grabbed Ziva’s arm and motioned for her to stay put. Then with enough hand motions let Ziva know that the guy was coming toward them. They both stepped out of his line of sight and waited. They didn’t have to wait long, Sam and Ziva tackled him to the ground once he was in view. Once he was down Sam recognized him too, one of Senator Kinsey’s lackeys.

“Who are you ?” Ziva asked in a ticked off tone.

The guy was quiet especially in front of Sam.

“I don’t think he will tell us Ziva, he works for Senator Kinsey.”

Ziva looked right at Sam, “You wanna bet, yes?’

Sam and Ziva looked at each other, they both understood each other. Sam gave a ‘go ahead motion.’

Ziva stepped up to him and very slowly withdrew her knife from her belt and watched the guy go from arrogant to scared like a rabbit in seconds.

“Get her away from me!” The lackey said.

“Nope.” Sam knew she was starting to sound like her husband and General O’Neill but she was having too much fun watching him squirm because Ziva was a woman who he was afraid of.

“Now, you will tell me what you are doing kidnapping the Director of the FBI’s daughter, yes?’ Ziva asked in a straight faced but people who knew her, knew that she was ticked off.

“He wants her as his ‘wife.”

“Over my dead body!” a voice said from the edge of the clearing who heard the whole thing. Once the voice and the body came into view the lackey knew he was in trouble.

“I called the ‘Old Man’, he will be here in about 5 minutes. Then said to take the guy up to the Commandments office and that he would fill everyone in. Apparently he has some knew info.”

Sam and Ziva nodded, who then grabbed the lackeys arms and dragged him to the Commandments office.

such a twist but who would want such a evil person oh boy i think jack and bobby are about to murder him for even thinking such a thing cant wait to find out
Lin

OK . . . WHO wants Abigail for his wife?

Well, he certainly picked the wrong woman to want, didn't he?

Very, very interesting!! Who is the person coming into the clearing?? I'm guessing either Jack or Jackson!!!

Joy

Euh...as a wife????
Josy

A/N: This will answer your questions and will leave you with warm fuzzy's at the end (of this chapter.)

Thanks for the reviews!


Chapter Eight

Jack, Bobby and Jackson were emotionally fuming. If any body could tell, they could almost see them as steam engines turning red and steam coming out of their ears. All three were ready to pound a punching bag, but not the actual bag itself, more like human flesh. They knew that it wasn’t right but that was what their first thought was when dealing with the guys who had abducted their daughter, daughter-in-law and wife.

Just as Jack, Bobby and Jackson were ready to head out the door to help with the search, Sam and Ziva walked in with a man between them. They watched as the two women put him in a chair and hogtied him to it. Everyone in the room watched Sam and Ziva as they walked over to Myles, who Ziva gave a hug and a kiss to.

After the kiss Myles asks, “Who is our interloper?”

“A hired gun for Senator Kinsey.”

Myles looked over at his team mates and sighed, “This is going to be a rough day.”

“Nope, it won’t,” said a voice from the doorway. “Kinsey has been arrested in the kidnapping of Abigail Manning.”

“General O’Neill,” Myles said to the man as Jack walked into the Commandments office.

Hudson turned to O’Neill and asked, “What do you mean?”

“Jon, who is outside by the way giving an update to the NCIS team, is my nephew.” At that precise moment he heard a snort, which he promptly ignored. “ I had Daniel, Teal’c and Butterfly do a survalliance on Kinsey to see what he was up to. Due to Sue teaching Butterfly how to read lips, we got Kinsey outside of his townhouse in DC, explaining to these two,” pointing at the two goons who were in the room, “that he needed Abigail Hudson Manning for his bride, which in turn made his eye glow for signifigance. We were able to confront Kinsey in his own home, when he slipped and mouthed ” O’Neill tilted his head like he was thinking, “ ‘Gomez and Murch better have gotten my queen or they will suffer’ blah, blah.” Then tilted his head back the way it was, “We were able to subdue him on the spot with no fuss.”

“You used the Zat gun on him didn’t you?” Jon asked.

“Yeah I did,” O’Neill said with a wide smirk on his face. “Not so messy.”

Jon just shook his head.

Jack, Bobby and Jackson were deflated but were glad that they could put the two goons in the room behind bars for kidnapping their precious girl.

The NCIS team came in, Tony went over to Sam and gave her a peck on the cheek, with smiles on their faces. Tony and Sam both knew that Abigail had something to tell Jackson, and they both knew their ears were going to hurt when the announcement was made.

Sue saw that everyone was back and that General Jack O’Neill was in the room with her family. She walked up to him and gave him a hug, “General it is nice to see you again. I thank you for taking care of the guy who orchestrated in kidnapping my daughter.”

Jack gave her a small smile, “You are most welcome, Mrs. Hudson.”

Turning to look at Sam and Tony, Sue asked, “What are you two so happy about?”

Tony and Sam both turned beat red, “We had planned on telling my boss first.”

Sue took out her blackberry phone and handed it to Tony, “Call him, that way he can cool off before he sees you.” Sue was well aware of the head slap that Tony would receive when he walked into work but she was hoping that Jen would calm him down before that happened.

oh boy at least they have 2 of them hope they go to jail for a very long time cant wait to find out more
Lin

It appears General O'Neill has the whole situation under control!!!

I wonder what Abigail has to tell Jackson!!!

Joy

As if you had any doubt that our FIRST Jack WOULDN'T have everything under control?

This one has me puzzled . . . as well as the head slap . . . what would THAT be for?

Continue, please?!!