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Hi there!

The challenge pictures are so beautiful that I couldn't resist to get it another try...
Only this time it is a MS from 'Hit and Run' episode, when Dan Malone had kidnap Sue.

Hope you'll like it! autumn.gif

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It Happened One Autumn

Jack was looking intently at the map in front of him, his thoughts lost far inside his heart and soul ; thoughts which turned around a blonde analyst who’d been kidnapped earlier that day... because of one of his stupid move—he placed her in Malone’s car to try to protect her. Yeah, what a good angel guardian I make... I put her in more danger than she was... He admonished himself.

Lucy who had tried to catch some sleep had failed miserably, steering her body from the uncomfortable position she’d lay on the bureau issue cloth, she pressed her hand on her painful neck.

When she saw Jack standing steal like a statue, she could felt the guilt he was accusing himself of, knowing the glance too much for having seeing it several times since the time Sue had joined the team. Not that she put herself into dangerous position often, but her stubbornness had gained her some trouble in the past, and the dark-haired agent couldn’t stand the feeling of knowing she could be armed in any possible way.

Overwhelmed by her own turmoil, she couldn’t stay still, not being able to do something useful to help her friends, so she decided that a walk could cool her worries out of her mind. And besides, Levi hadn’t gone since a while so he could use the trip too.

Coming closer to Jack she said, “I’m gonna take Levi for a walk nearby. I’ll leave my phone open if you need me.” Never tearing his eyes from the map he nodded to her statement. Trying to give him the last bit of hope she had, she squeezed his shoulder in a reassuring gesture. “We’ll find her, Jack...” Her simple comment reached his goal when he shadowy smiled at her and pressed her hand with his own. His gaze turned slightly to met hers a brief moment, just enough to share their burden. Clipping the leash on the dog’s collar, she steeled a last glance with the tall agent before heading out of the bullpen.

The night was cold from the autumn frisky wind, bringing noisy chatters to her ears. Walking peacefully into the darkness wasn’t something she usually liked, but tonight things were different—she needed the calmness of her ride and the comforting caress Levi was doing along her legs, walking beside her. Memories of the last years floated through her mind—souvenirs of her rooming with Sue and Levi—some goods... some sad... She didn’t have the strength to stop the tears from falling down her cheeks, nor didn’t want to. Sitting on a close bench, she let them free, asking the canine to join her. Gladly accepting the offer, he was pleased to share his own pain with the woman who’s come second in his doggy life. Laying his head on her laps, he whined his tears while she gently strokes his soft fur.

“You miss her too, uh, Levi?” Raising his eyes to met hers he licked her face once to dry her tears and took back his initiate position. “You know buddy, she wouldn’t lost faith if the situation was reverse... so neither will we... We’re gonna find her... soon...” Her voice was shaky and sound unsure, but the fact to say out loud kind of help them both to believe it. Taking encer in Sue’s believes in God, they closed their eyes to silently pray Him for strength and help.

As if He had heard their claim, a wave of wind start blowing, lightly caressing their features and making them open their eyes to see the beauty of their surroundings. Trees had started to lose their leaves and branches were dancing, swaying with the wind. Lucy had witness lots of autumn nights before, but none of them came closer to the wonders she saw in this instant.

Sue’s right, she thought, God has powerful way to let us know He’s always with us, sharing our pain and joy... Closing her eyes and breathing the fresh scents He offered her, peace and strength rebuilt even stronger than before, she smiled. She knew her friend would come back... she was certain of that.

Standing up after she gave a last rub to Levi, she headed back for the bullpen, ready to plunge in the search again. Lowering her gaze to the dog she stated, “I love autumn night, Levi... do you?” The bark he gave in respond assure her he was too... even more with the one they just shared, reaching the same level of peace and serenity.

Fade out

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Happy autumn everyone!!! autumn.gif
Josy
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As if He had heard their claim, a wave of wind start blowing, lightly caressing their features and making them open their eyes to see the beauty of their surroundings. Trees had started to lose their leaves and branches were dancing, swaying with the wind. Lucy had witness lots of autumn nights before, but none of them came closer to the wonders she saw in this instant.

Sue’s right, she thought, God has powerful way to let us know He’s always with us, sharing our pain and joy...

I love the complete post Any but especially this part... girl_sigh.gif
I love all the hope you showed in that post!
Thaks for sharing autumn.gif
Josy
justme_jp3
Nice job with this one! "Hit and Run" was one of those episodes that left a lot of room for us to explore the emotional side of the plot and you chose a good point to do so!

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Kav
I think Hit and Run has to be one of my favourite episodes and I've wondered more than once about those scenes that should have been there but weren't (darn the show only being one hour!!!) This was a very satisfying addition, any!

kav
GinaSue
That was a beautiful picture of Lucy's anguish over Sue's disappearance, Any. I always thought she looked a little lost during that time, so thanks for giving us a glimpse of her side of the story!

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Cere Cere
JC_cupidgirl.gif So cute and tenderness Any!!

Thanks for sharing and write Lucy's thoughts so well!! autumn.gif

Tere
Frwdgranny
Any that was wonderful. Using the wind to make Lucy aware of the presence of God with her and the reassurance that Sue would be alright was very moving. Thank you for enhancing this episode. blowkiss.gif

Lynn

Trigger
That's awesome any!!

I especially like this part:

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As if He had heard their claim, a wave of wind start blowing, lightly caressing their features and making them open their eyes to see the beauty of their surroundings. Trees had started to lose their leaves and branches were dancing, swaying with the wind. Lucy had witness lots of autumn nights before, but none of them came closer to the wonders she saw in this instant.

Sue’s right, she thought, God has powerful way to let us know He’s always with us, sharing our pain and joy... Closing her eyes and breathing the fresh scents He offered her, peace and strength rebuilt even stronger than before, she smiled. She knew her friend would come back... she was certain of that.


Trigger
suesfan
Any, you touched on a part of this episode that we would have loved to have seen!! We saw Lucy briefly and didn't really get a deeper look into what she was feeling!! You filled that portion of the episode perfectly!!!

Thanks for sharing!!!

Joy
Oreolover
What a great choice for a MS! Touching and thoughtful. Thank you for sharing.
Anne
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As if He had heard their claim, a wave of wind start blowing, lightly caressing their features and making them open their eyes to see the beauty of their surroundings. Trees had started to lose their leaves and branches were dancing, swaying with the wind. Lucy had witness lots of autumn nights before, but none of them came closer to the wonders she saw in this instant.

Sue’s right, she thought, God has powerful way to let us know He’s always with us, sharing our pain and joy...

I love the complete post Any but especially this part...
I love all the hope you showed in that post!
Thaks for sharing
Josy


I totally agree Josy. Thank you Any!! clapgirl.gif
jack fan
Great job, so emotional! crying.gif
Red Shores Lady
I always thought that this episode was wonderful in showing how much the entire team worried about Sue but especially showed just how close Sue and Lucy had gotten. Her happiness at Sue's safe return was very obvious in the show (I just wish that Jack had been more open about his joy at Sue's safe return angry017.gif )

Great job! blowkiss.gif

- RSL write.gif
kw9171
Sweet.
hfce
That was nice. smile.gif



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